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A PHB Special: the Ongoing Story Creation

Slanted Fish

8mil ongoing story creation
In celebration of this Poptropica Help Blog recently reaching 8 million hits (thanks everyone!), we’re going to do something fun! In the comments section, ANYONE is welcome to join in as we weave an ongoing story, a Poptropica fan-fiction of sorts, told in second-person narrative. It begins here…

“Um, hello. I’m here to register for something called, uh, ‘Poptropica’?” Amidst the realm of blue vines in front of you, a crate, small and wooden, bounces out, shaking blue dust and spitting out a question of your gender. You stare incredulously before you finally manage to respond. “I’m a boy,” you tell the little box, and then it erupts a circle of numbers in individual bubbles as it asks you the next question. This is a very strange sign-up process, you think to yourself, as you decide to tell the box etched with a curious question mark that you are 9 years old.

“Your name is Jumpy Jumper. When you are ready, hop into the blimp and travel to any island.” You ponder the map for a while, but decide none of the islands suit you. “There’s got to be something better…” you mutter to yourself. Just then, you see it. Out of the corner of your eye, there’s another island, shrouded in mystery by layers of smog and unidentifiable smells. Island X.

“But no one’s ever been there before,” the voice warns, the voice of the box that had guided your creation earlier. “Jumpy Jumper, JJ, you can’t… how did that even get on the map anyway? It’s not safe… please no… JJ!!” But it’s too late. You’re gone.

What happens next? Will JJ survive the unknown dangers of the mysterious Island X? What is the island’s secret, its true name, the people, the villain(s), the setting? You and your fellow PHB readers get to decide what items he collects and uses, other places he visits, and the adventures that await…

RULES: Make sure it follows what others have written before you, makes sense, and if you wish to add a comment that is not part of the story itself, use parentheses, for example: (I think we should…) Your comment can be as long or short as you like and you are definitely welcome to contribute as many times as you like. Be creative!

Where will these words take us? Continue the story in the comments!

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Hello! I'm Slanted Fish, the editor-in-chief and creator of the Poptropica Help Blog (PHB). I'm a writer, Hong Kong native, and Christ follower. My Poptropica username is slantedfish 🐠 Don't forget to be awesome!

1,887 thoughts on “A PHB Special: the Ongoing Story Creation”

  1. You look inside the crate. You see lot of food inside. You take out the food. Then you see some thing strange inside. It’s a horn! You blow into it, and it makes a ram’s sound.
    You awkwardly put it away. You see other things which one would need to survive. You look up and you realize the ram is gone! You turn around and see that the ram has golden fleece. “Okaii..” you say to your self. You start thinking about life on Poptropica now.
    You walk to the edge of the island and think about jumping into Poptropica.
    You hear a rustle of leaves, then a roar and then a thump.
    You look around, and you see the ram is a golden horse!
    You blow into the horn once again, and it makes no sound at all. The golden horse is wearing some armor, and you think why a horse is wearing armor. You see a sword along with some bow and arrows, and you see some armor for yourself.
    You realize time went on very fast, and you look into the pond.
    You didn’t change! You’re still nine! (Ten, to be exact. remember that in one of the chapters it was his birthday? huh?)
    You see a figure on the apple tree.
    He drops onto the ground. “I’m Poppus Tropicana.” he says.

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  2. He transforms into the box that gave you birth! “Uh…Miss Tropicana,what do you need?” “I think you discovered the horn too early.But you got a sneak peek of what will happen in ten years.Except the Zlatos will still be a ram.He is only enchanted a bit.But JJ,now is too early.I will erase your memory for now.Goodbye,JJ.My food and supplies shall last you till then.”

    When you wake up,you have no memory of what happened,and Zlatos is back to normal.So you look around in the box and see that there are a few materials for you to survive with.You can even build a house for you and Zlatos!So,you start to work,ready to build on your new home-for ten years.

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  3. You look at the crate. You forget something about it, you know it. You look inside and see the horn again. You blow it and the ram comes. You somehow know to hop on his back and you tumble down to Poptropica. The ram dies, but he leaves his golden fleece behind. You pick it up and put it on a tree. The tree grows and grows. It turns into a pine tree. You turn around and see a barn. You walk over and what you see is very weird. It’s a white horse, but where it’s neck should be is a man’s torso.
    “Percy Jackson. You have returned the fleece and restores Thalia’s tree. We all thank you,” the man-horse says.
    (Yes, I know in the book, Clarissa brings back the Golden Fleece, but I changed it a little so it would make sense that the mist makes JJ Percy. Or maybe JJ is really Percy Jackson, son of Posiden. I don’t know. You have to leave him in Camp Half-Blood and this can’t be a dream.)

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      4. (*Glares with an colder glare than Luke and Kronos combined* fine. Fair trade. In my defense, I’ve been reading Hunger Games and Heroes of Olympus and watching Thinknoodles, so I haven’t read the original Percy Jackson series in a while. I was close, so be quiet Spiteful Camel)

  4. (continued from young)
    So you stay in camp half blood for the next few days.
    You begin to miss your friends on poptropica.
    But you do make some new friends.
    But still you wonder what’s going on in poptropica.

    meanwhile back in poptropica.
    Super was whipping Clean who was now a slave.
    “Ouch! that hurts!” Clean said.
    Super chuckles.
    “Get back to work slave!” Super said.
    Clean goes back to work.
    “If only jj were here” Clean said.
    E.vile was in his throne room smiling evilly.
    (to be continued)

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  5. 10 Years later,when you are singing a silly campfire song along with your friends,you see that something else seems to be reforming near Thalia’s tree!You see that Zlato (can anyone PLEASE remember his name?)has reformed,along with his golden fleece (don’t worry,the original one is still near her tree) !He comes and picks you up,and flies up into the air!

    He lands near Popular’s fortress.Enemies gasp and run towards you.But Zlato becomes enchanted! He regenerates whenever he takes a fatal blow,his headbutts are disorienting and temporarily stun them.In no time,they are defeated.Meanwhile,back in Red Raccoon’s Super Secret Lair…

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  6. A few minions rush to RR. “What?”,asks RR. “Sir,Jumpy Jumper has returned with an enchanted ram!” “He must have come from Camp Half Blood!You must capture him!” “Sir,the ram has already stunned us.How-” RR removes his Red Panda mask and shows his true face.His minions gasp.He puts the mask back on.”If you don’t want to see this again,get him!” “Yes,sir.” The minions rush back to you and Zlato.

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  7. (continued from strange)
    They start attacking.
    but Zlato once again stuns them.
    and again they are defeated.
    “Is that all you got?” You say.
    Just then a big blast hits you and Zlato.
    You and him fell on the ground.
    You look up to see Super with the weapon.
    “Hello brother” Super said.
    “Super something is different about you” You say.
    Super was wearing a black outfit.
    “Oh E.vile gave me this to wear now your coming with me and your little goat friend too” Super said.
    (to be continued)

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  9. (Continued from strange)
    “Hello Jumper long time no see” E.vile said.
    “What have you done with the tribe leaders?” You say.
    “Oh don’t worry I haven’t done anything to them yet and you will be joining them” E.vile said.
    “Super lock him up and his goat friend in the cell that the tribe leaders are in” E.vile said.
    “Yes, Father” Super said.
    So Super leads You and Zlato to the tribe leaders cell and locks you and Zlato in it and leaves.
    “Jumper!” Clean said.
    “Clean!” You say.
    You and Clean hug.
    “We all thought you were dead! Where have you’ve been? And who’s the goat?” Clean said.
    You explain everything.
    Clean stood speechless.
    “Clean what happened while I was gone?” You say.
    Clean sighs.
    Clean begins with “It started when me and the other tribe leaders were captured and you disappeared-
    (to be continued)

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  10. Than the door busts open. Five demigods and a wild goat man (I know what they’re called, it’s from JJ’s point of view and he doesn’t know what they are…) are standing there. E. Vile growls.
    “Jason Grace, Piper McLean, Frank Zhang, Leo Valdaz, Hazel (I don’t know her last name), and Coach. Where’s poor Percy Jackson and Annabeth Chase?” he taunts.
    Leo’s face pales. “They fell into the Underworld. We’ll help them after we save Poptropica. I’m not sure how we’re related, but, um, I don’t know…”
    “Without you powerful demigod, you can’t do much,” Little says. Then another demigod comes.
    “Maybe not, but we have another son of the Big Three. Meet Nico, son of Hades,” Hazel smirks.
    They battle it out. The outcome is surprising, but not as surprising as the fact that the goat man used a bat and yelled “KILL!!!”.

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    1. (You’re using the Heroes of Olympus arc?? Then surely you realize that things will get gory…and that they have more important things to deal with – like the freaking earth god Gaea??

      Also, you’ve never defined the link or relationship Poptropica has to Percy Jackson’s world. That would be immensely helpful…)

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      4. (OMG, my friends say I’m a total dork for being so obsessed with Greek mythology (I go to a Christian school so…) but I’m all like, I like it and the teachers don’t care. Even the english teacher put the Percy Jackson series on our recommended reading list so I was all like humph. I know, I’m rambling and this isn’t like me and this is prob spamming (SORRY SF AND PHB STAFF!!!) but whatever!)

      5. (I can’t wait either!! I’m spending the next 30 days reading the entire PJ Series and the HoO series again behore HoH comes out!!!)

  12. You battle it out. You’re about to lose when something happens. The ground starts shaking. the fortress crumbles. A figure of a sleeping woman appears.
    “I am Gaia. I am the REAL Mother Nature, and now I will make you all my slaves!!” she says.
    Then the demigods and goat man appear for real. The flying ship takes forever to get there, but it does. They defeat Gaia.
    “Take the black clad people too! But spare my sister! I want to change her back to good,” you say. They defeat E. Vile and leave to close the Doors of Death in the House of Hades. You know for a fact that this is not a dream. You change Super back to good and…..

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    1. (If it was that easy to defeat Gaea, why haven’t they done so already??? Didn’t the novels talk about “titans and gods unite” or something to defeat Gaea’s sons, or something like that?

      BTW, I’m sorry if my comments are annoying. I mean no offense, it’s just that it makes it that much harder to get a handle on the story and where it’s going when they’re so many plotholes…
      And it’s especially not helpful when I’m compiling a revised edition of the OSC as a side project.)

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  13. Popular sneaks behind and tries to make Super bad. However,Zlato notices and stuns him. Popular finds it hard to balance with his broken leg,so he falls and faints.Red Raccoon comes and takes E.Vile and him and flee. Suddenly,you look around to see a mind-controlled Strange leading mind-controlled mannequins to you. You now know that they are undefeatable,so you flee too.

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  14. Then you flash back to the time you and clean were getting archery lessons from Young and Red (before you knew they were your sisters). It floods you with hope and power. You see that Piper also dropped her horn of plenty (but she has a spare for some reason so she still has one somehow….). You turn and spray the dummies with Diet Pepsi (FOR YOU BACCHUS!). It ruins them and Strange becomes un-mind controlled. He collapses and turns back into Sticky and flees for some Strange reason.

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      1. (Yeah. He saved the day (again), though he could have made killing the Big F (Stage name not a bad word) a bit more of a show (Oh, gods. I’m sounding like the twins now. *Runs screaming in terror* OK, I’m controlling myself now and that was unlike me. I’m back)

  16. “Why?” you ask.
    “Um, you’ll have to see yourself,” Sticky says. He keeps looking at you like you’ll disappear any second now. You go to a tribe leader meeting and are shocked by what you see.

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  19. (Continued from strange)
    “Well you see E.vile took over and he made us his slaves and he put Strange under mind control and he held us captive and well it’s been that way for ten years!” Clean said.
    You stood speechless.
    “So what do we do now?” Super said.
    You shrug.
    “Wait a minute I almost forgot while I was evil I found this” Super said.
    Super gets out a scroll.
    It read: …….
    (To be continued)

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  20. “Mister CN,

    I have an excellent idea.You are a minor villain.But you can use your old thieving suit,’The Red Raccoon’ to be anonymous and work for E.Vile by making him robots.If you want to threaten his minions if they disobey,show them your true face.People faint at the sight of it.No one will ever recognize you at this rate!

    Remember the good old times,back before you made CNC?The time you impersonated Zeus and pretended that HE was a villain?Now everyone’s against him!And you affected a lot of villain’s history-you did what you did with Zeus to that Silva,CJ’s Science Teacher,you put evil thoughts into Gretchen Grimlock,Black Widow,Dr.Hare,and oh so much more!

    Please reply.

    -Bendy Hero aka Joe Bucko.”

    “Well,that certainly gives out a lot of information.So Red Raccoon’s a minor villain,but he has a huge role in Poptropica’s villains!Who could he possibly be?And that explains why the old fortune teller fainted,she saw his true face.But what could CNC stand for?”,you ask.
    “Well,that’s a mighty lot of questions.” You turn around and see Red Raccoon.

    “CNC,has finally reached you,like Athena said.And what does it stand for?” “Just answer that already!Enough with the suspense!”,Super shouts.”Sigh,fine,little girl.” “I’m NOT a little girl!”,Super shouts again.”Fine,fine.I’ll get along with it,young lady.CNC is the abbreviated form of my company,which is interestingly named-”

    He takes out his mask,and everyone gasps. “Cumulo Nimbus’s Clouds.” Everyone stays quiet,except you.”Nice plan my uncle gave you ,Dr.Cumulo Nimus,villain in the Blimp Minigame,Zeus’s copycat,The Red Raccoon,the Abbreviated Ex-Art Art Thief.”,you say quietly.

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  22. (continued from strange)
    “Well were out of hare come on guys you can spend the night at my place” Clean said.
    “Wait a second I’m not finished with you yet!” Red raccoon said.
    But you and your friends ignore him and walk away.
    Yell go to Clean’s place.
    Soon night fell.
    “Good night Super” You say.
    “Good night Jumper” Super said.
    You fell asleep and have a dream.
    In the dream You see Two police officers outside Clean’s cabin. But when you look closely you see that It’s Director D and the briny brad in disguise!
    You and Super come out of the cabin.
    “Jumpy jumper your under arrest” Director D said in a police like accent.
    They start taking you away.
    But Then Super shouts “Wait!
    “Take me instead it’s my fault for whatever it is your arresting him for” Super said.
    You could not believe she was sacrificing herself for you.
    “Deal” Brainy brad says in a police like accent.
    “Super no!” You say.
    “When your family is in danger you will do whatever it takes to save them even if it means death” Super said.
    Super hugs you.
    “I love you bro” Super said.
    “I love you too sis” You say.
    Briny brad and Director D take her away.
    You start crying.
    You wake up.
    (to be continued)

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  23. You look around and the dream becomes a reality. Then Young Flame walks out of the woods. She looks a little better than she did when you last saw her.
    “Um. They have all of the family except me, you, and Lucky,” she says, but her hand flies to her mouth.
    “Who’s Lucky? And they got Red? Mighty? I thought Mighty was being protected my Mews!!!” you say.
    “Yes, they somehow bypasses Mews. I don’t know where Red Rock was hiding, but I know they’ve got her,” Young Flame says sadly.
    “WHAT!!!” you shout. Then you realize she left one question unanswered. “Who’s Lucky?” you ask quietly.
    Young hangs her head. “Lucky Snowball is our older brother,” she mutters.
    “What! And you felt the need to keep this from me!!!! How many children did Mom have?” you say and count them. Super, you, Red, Mighty, Young, and Lucky equals 6. Wow.
    “JJ, I’m sorry,” Young pleads.
    “No, Young. I’m sorry. I’m sorry I ever trusted you. If you keep the fact I have a brother that I need to protect, than I’m not sure if I can trust you!” you say. You don’t feel as angry as you feel let down.
    “JJ-” Young pleads and looks at you.
    “Forget it. I have people to save,” and with that, you march off.
    (THIS IS NOT A DREAM! MAKE THIS REAL! To Be Cont.

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  24. Then you tell Super what happened in your dream. “Oh,you just had a nightmare,JJ.What we really have to worry about is E.Vile,Popular,and Cumulo Nimbus.” “Speaking of the latter…”,another voice says. You look around and see Cumulo holding Hopper,whom you haven’t seen since you came in the temple.

    “Anyone moves,and he’ll feel my thunderbolts.” “You sent us that tornado when we were trying to reach Thinknoodles earlier!”,you suddenly recall. “Quite marvellous,wasn’t it?”,Nimbus says.”Now,I’m taking him hostage to my fortress.No one move.” And a gigantic air balloon comes and he jumps into it with Hopper,and sails away.”We’ve got to rescue him!”,you say.

    So you jump in your blimp and follow them.

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  25. (continued from strange)
    You reach the fortress.
    But it’s surrounded by Cumulo’s minions.
    “JJ I’ll get them to chase me meanwhile you rescue Hopper” Super said.
    “Super no it’s too-” You say.
    But Super goes up to the minions.
    “Hey freaks come and get me!” Super said.
    Super runs away.
    The minions chase after her.
    You go inside the fortress.
    (to be continued)

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  26. You go into the ship and find Cumulo holding Hopper and a person you guess must be Lucky Snowball,your brother. “Let them go,Dr.Nincompoop.” “Never!I,Dr.Cumulo Nimbus have finally captured these two and I won’t let them go!You’ll feel my thunder if you don’t leave now!” “You pretended to be Zeus whenever I saw you as him.RJ is actually working for you!”,you say.

    Cumulo looks frustrated,then he thinks. “Of course,of course.Why didn’t I think of it before?The boy still hasn’t the weapon….AHA!RJ!” RJ hops out of nowhere.”Sir,we have found Super Grape outside the fortress.” “Ah,yes.Now,take Jumper here,along with Hopper and Snowball too to the dungeons.” You meet Super in the dungeons.For some reason,Zlato is also there.

    “JJ!Hopper!There you are.But who’s this boy?” You tell her about what Young told you. Super gasps.She turns to Lucky.”Why didn’t Young tell us about you earlier?And is anyone else in the family?” His eyes gleam. “Yes,there are two more children.One is my twin sister,Rough Lion,or as she likes to call herself,Nameless Undefined.Currently she is elsewhere in Spy Island.”

    “But who’s the second one?!”,you ask.”It is the twin of Mighty Tornado,”,he says,with a desire to show who it is.”Little Hopper.” Everyone except Zlato gasps. “That means you’re my brother!”,you say.”And Clean’s my cousin!’ There is a short silence. “Are you sure that’s it?Eight siblings in all?” “Well,no actually.Our mother had ten siblings,but I’m not sure who they were.”

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    2. (Little Hopper can’t be one of the children!?
      EDIT: never mind. Mistook Hopper for Jumper and thought E. Vile gave birth to himself…*shudder*)

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  27. (continued from strange)
    “Guys can we just focus on finding a way out of hare?” Hopper said.
    You notice Super is feeling the well.
    “Super what are you doing?” You say.
    “Feeling for a secret passage” Super said.
    You shake your head.
    “Super that’s ridiculous” You say.
    Then Super touches a stone and it fells out.
    The wall opens.
    “Well I stand corrected” You say.
    “Come on let’s see where it leads” Hopper said.
    (to be continued)

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  28. (Continued from myself)
    Yell walk down the secret passage.
    It takes yell out of the fortress.
    “Glad were out of there ” Hopper said.
    “Let’s go back to Clean’s place” You say.
    So yell go back to Clean’s place but E.vile is standing in front of the door.
    “What do you want?” You say.
    “I want to talk to your sister alone” E.vile said.
    So you go inside the house.

    Meanwhile outside
    “Why can’t you just leave us alone?” Super said.
    “Now Super I just came to give you an offer join me!” E.vile said.
    “Why should I join you?” Super said.
    “Oh super don’t you remember that earlier hopper wished you away he never even apologized” E.vile said.
    Super stood frozen.
    “Think about it Super” E.vile said.
    E.vile leaves.
    (to be continued)

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  29. You enter the passage along with Hopper,Zlato,Super and Lucky.But when you come out,you know you’ve gone from the frying pan into the fire,because you know where you are.At the Batfang’s castle in Vampire’s Curse Island.You hear a low murmur,”Ah,there you are,my old friends.” You look around and see Bruce Batfang! “Uh-hmm…what a lovely surprise for us.Jumpy Jumper,your siblings and a goat.”

    “Uh….Zlato’s actually a ram.” “WHATEVER! I DON’T CARE!” “Uh….then what,Mr.Batfang?” “The point is,I want revenge! Revenge for you stealing Vampire blood from me!My bats and my assistant will kill you all,then Bathilda and I shall feast on your delicious,delicious blood.”He turns around. “Igor!Where are you!We have some guests for dinner here!” “How tasty will they be,master?”,a voice comes.

    “Never you mind!”,Bruce snaps. “Get my bats and kill these fools here.” A hunchback with a horrible smell comes. He goes towards Zlato and runs his finger through him. “Mmm…goat meat….how tasty would he be-OW!” You realize that Zlato has bit Igor! Igor slouches,and suddenly,his legs,arms and face seem to get hairy. Horns seem to grow on him.Bruce wails.

    “Igor,what has that foolish goat done to you!You’re turning into-” “What on earth is that!”,Hopper shouts. Now Igor had the torso and hands of a human,but the rest looks just like a ram! “He’s a were-ram!What have you done to him,you fools?!” You try hard not to laugh.A were-ram? Then Bruce snaps his fingers and Zlato is thrown across the room.You gasp and run to him and check his pulse.He seems okay,but a little too damaged.

    Suddenly,you hear bleat that seems to weaken you-and it’s not from Zlato.Igor the were-ram seems to get and bleat.While it weakens you,it seems to strengthen him. He picks your sibling,one by one,and throws them down. “Now…who shall we feast on?” He looks towards you. Bruce nods.Igor charges towards you his fist in midair motion,his horns ready to rupture,and by now Zlato and your siblings are too weak to help you.

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  30. (Continued from Sticky/Strange) Clean suddenly throws his glasses at Igor! “YOOWW!!” he screams with broken glass stuck right in his heart. Bruce yells, “You id- Ooh! Blood! Yum!” then he starts feasting on Igor. While he’s doing that, you all escape. While in the blimp, you ask Clean, “Are you going to be okay without glasses?” “Oh, don’t worry, that was just my old pair.” Clean says, then he pulls out a pair of dark blue glasses. Suddenly, you find he fortress of CNN. (To be Continued)

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  31. You enter the fortress and come into the main place. You come in and see a lot of news reporters. There is a camera crew focusing on a man who’s holding some notes. He starts to say,”Welcome to CNN,we are back with some more news about the Bert Goldberg conspiracy…” “Oh no!”,you groan. “This isn’t CNC,Cumulo Nimbus’s lair,this is CNN,the news channel!” (And yeah,Clean,I know what you really meant,I just had to put this x3 )

    You all groan and get back to the blimp.There you see Bathilda Batfang waiting with a bandaged Igor! “ah,there they are,Igor!”,she says,her eyes gleaming with fury. “Get them!” Igor charges,his fists ready to batter,and horns ready to rupture.Clean throws his glasses again at his chest,and Igor groans.You all run into the blimp and take off,but not before hearing Bathilda shout,”Regenerate,Igor,regenerate!”

    While flying,you hear a weakening bleat that gets stronger by the moment.But the thing which bleats isn’t weakened,it’s bleat is weakening you instead. “Clean,we’ve got to get you some glasses from Strange’s shop.” “Okay.”,he says. You stop at Strange’s shop. When you get there,he says,”Ah,JJ!What do you want” “I need some glasses for Clean,please.” “Okay then.Now,where are they…?”

    You suddenly realize that Zlato is missing. “Er…Super,please purchase the glasses for me,will you?” And you jump in the blimp and head over to where Igor and Bathilda are.

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  32. (Continued from strange)
    You find Zlato.
    “Not so fast” Bathilda said,
    Zalto stuns Igor and Bathilda.
    They fell uncounius.
    You go back to strange’s shop but it’s a mess and Super and strange are missing!

    Meanwhile in E.vile’s top secret lair.
    “Let us go!” Strange said.
    Guards hold Strange and Super.
    E.vile comes in with a ray,
    “What is that?” Strange said.
    “It’s my evil ray one blast and you’ll turn evil” E.vile said.
    E.vile shoots them with the ray.
    E.vile gives strange the ray.
    “Now find Jumper and shoot him with it” E.vile said.
    (to be continued)

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  33. (This story has gotten super repetitive lately, Super gets kidnapped by E. Vile, he tells her to defeat Jumpy, she turns good, then all over again.)

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  34. Suddenly,Strange trips and hits all the mind-controlling equipment E.Vile has,and un-mindcontrols him and Super! Strange simply teleports away,but forgets Super on the way.E.Vile’s robots crowd her and imprison her. “No!No!NO!You’re not getting away with this!”,she shouts,but no one hears her.

    Meanwhile,you look through Strange’s shop.Suddenly you find Clean and your siblings tied up!When you untie them,Hopper says,”E.Vile’s robots invaded the place and took Strange and Super!” “Not all,though,”,a familiar voice says.You look behind and see Strange! Her simply looks behind and gasps. “Oh,no,they broke all my glasses!”

    Clean groans. “Well,no glasses for me for now.”

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  35. (Continued from strange)
    “Uh Strange where’s Super?” You say.
    “Oh no! I left her back at E.vile’s lair!” Strange said.
    “What! come on we got to rescue her!” You say.
    So Yell teleport to E.vile’s lair.
    You find Super in a cage.
    “Super are you alright?” You say.
    “Yeah Popular has the key you need to find a way to get it from him” Super said.
    (to be continued)

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  36. You get the find Popular. You’re about to free Super when E. Vile stops you. Long story short, you fight him and get trapped in a cage. Then the walls burst open. Lucky, Young, Red, Mighty, and three other kids come in.
    “Lucky! You’ve come to save us! Wait. Who are those three kids?” you ask.
    “You know how I said you had unknown siblings? Well, here they are,” Lucky says.
    There’s a boy with blonde hair and blue eyes. He’s wearing a simple grey t-shirt and jeans and his neat/messy hair is covered with a cap. He introduces himself as White Dragon. There’s also a girl with wavy brown hair and sharp green eyes. She’s wearing her hair in a ponytail and she has on a blue and white dress with blue leggings. She topped it off with silver bangles on her wrist, a gold locket and matching gold headband. She introduced herself as Fearless Shadow. The last sibling was hiding in the shadows. You can’t see her very well, and she doesn’t introduce herself. Another long story short, they fight, they free you, and your huge family flees to a Charlie and the Chocolate Island.

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  37. Suddenly,a wind blows you away from the island!You try to control it,but the blimp explodes and you fall unconscious.When you wake up,you are on an abandoned island,with no one else.You guess that your siblings and Zlato must have landed on another island.And what’s more,you think,Strange and Clean seem to have disappeared!You see a small hut southwest.By the signs of it,it seems abandoned.

    You realize you may have to spend your time gathering materials for your new hut.You look inside.There seem to be some food there,a bed,a chair and table,some water containers,a locked casket on top of an empty cupboard,and a wine barrel.It still seems pretty empty,though.It seems as if the person who lived here died about a month ago.You wonder what to do next.

    Meanwhile,in another uninhabited island,your siblings and Zlato wake up.They look around.There seems no sign of anything. “Look!”,White shouts. They look and see the remains of the blimp. “We should go and get some survival things which made it through the crash!” They all swim towards it,and with all their might,they manage to take out most of the things which made it.

    They come back to shore and see the materials. “Hmm…”,Fearless Shadow says,”There’s food and water for us,a cloth a few pieces of furniture and…this?” She pulls out a book. She gasps. “This is mom’s super secret other journal!” Everyone gasps.Zlato bleats. They all look into the book.They scroll through most of it. Suddenly,the unnamed girl looks grim. “You may want to see this.” “What is it?”,Lucky asks. Young takes it and reads.It says…

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  38. (continued from strange)
    September 15th 1999
    dear journal today I sneaked into a witch’s garden I was trying to get some cabbage because I was broke and I know the witch would not share it because she was selfish.
    However it was a decision that I now regret.
    I got caught and the witch got angry.
    The witch said that on the 15th of September of 2013 She would turn one of my kids evil.
    She didn’t say witch one but she said it would be the one who was pure of heart that she would turn evil.
    But I don’t know what pure of heart means.
    She also said that the only way to brake the spell was to have the oldest kid dunk them in water.
    After reading your siblings gasp.
    “Wait I hared that pure of heart means one who is heroic and risks there life’s for others are any of us like that?” Super said.
    They think for a minute and then gasp.
    “Come on we got to find jumper!” Hopper said.

    Meanwhile you wonder what to do.
    Then suddenly a witch appears!
    “Who are you?” You say.
    “My name is Marline and a long time ago I told your mother I would turn the kid who was pure of heart evil but I didn’t say that I would also make them my servant and clearly you must be the one who’s pure of heart” Marline said.
    Marline points her finger at you.
    “Rain of darkness! Ravens of black! Make him evil and my servant!” Marline said.
    You fall under her spell.
    “Command, mistress?” You say.
    (To be continued)

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  40. She suddenly realizes that it HAS happened! “I wish we could rescue him.”,she thinks.She and her siblings are in distress.Meanwhile,Marline replies,”Fetch me these ingredients.I need these for my potions.” She gives you a list.

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  41. Suddenly,something in your mind malfunctions,and you tear the list. Marline scowls. “Disobey me,will you,minion?Then die!” She puts a spell on you. “Now,grimness of the graveyard and seagull of the sea,vaporize this person for me!” Suddenly,she vaporizes into dust. “Jumpy Jumper,”a new voice says.

    You look behind and see Poppus Tropicana! The unnamed girl sibling of yours comes out of nowhere and dunks you in water,then disappears. “I’m sorry that I couldn’t let your siblings be with you,but…well,it is as fate decided it to be.That is all I will say about that.Now,about what happened just now.”,PT says.

    “Meaning?” “The way you resisted Marline. You just have obtained the greatest thing a hero can have.A Heroism Aura.You are now invulnerable to fire,poison,mind-control,and chilliness.Use this weapon well for my test,Jumpy.” “Test?What test?” “This island is a test,JJ.Do not worry,your siblings and Zlato are fine.I provided them shelter.

    This is the island of survival ,JJ. I have put quite a dangerous island here.If you were in a similar situation after this,you would be quite prepared. So,JJ,stay here on this island for a month.Show me how you survive.There is lush beauty and basic things on this island.Yes,I admit it. But,in the night,the dangerous creatures come out of their caves.

    You will have to defend yourself against them until you put defending machines.Aftet a month.I will come and take you to your siblings and Zlato,and open the box for you.Till then,goodbye,JJ.”,and she disappears.So you think of a way of survivng.

    (Okay guys,please do as instructed.For the next 30 days,JJ will survive here till PT comes and picks him up. Till then,the next few parts will be describing how he survives on the island and defends himself,and possibly comes across a few interesting finds.Thank you very much.Oh,and Strange asks if you could put a cameo for a minor character.

    -SC.)

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  42. Meanwhile, back where your sibling are…..
    Young Flame is worried. She’s scared, and to be honest, a little freaked out. That unnamed sibling of hers isn’t talking. Like, at all. She just sits there, reading some book. One night, when everyone else is asleep, Young is keeping watch and the sibling (S for short) is reading. She catches Young staring at her.
    “I’m sorry. Am I freaking you out? At my house, mother used to tell me to ‘interact with more people’ and ‘stop creeping people out'”, she said using air quotes. She had a normal voice, but it was very forgettable. Young studied her face very hard. She looked away and right away she realized that she couldn’t remember a single feature. Not her hair color, nor skin color. She couldn’t even remember what clothes she was wearing! Young turned back. She decided that S was something she had always wanted to be. A chameleon. Not the lizard. A chameleon is someone with forgettable features that can easily get lost in a crowd, or an empty place. They blend into shadows better than the shadows!
    “Um, what’s that book your reading?” Young asked.
    S looked at her book and hugged it to her chest. “My name is Bronze Comet,” she said like she was trying to change the subject.
    “I know, but I want to know what book your reading,” Young pressed, even though she didn’t know.
    Reluctantly, Bronze Comet turned her book and showed the cover. Young gasped. It was a book she knew well. The cover read….

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  43. It was PopTopics- Mythology! “Wow!” Bronze nodded. “It’s just that…you know…”,her voice faltered.”What?” “The gods….not just the Olympians,Young.They are….well,immortal.” “So?” “Well….this reminds me of heroes.” “What about them?” “They keep….dieing,trying to save the world.And villains…they are more powerful.Every dead hero so far,I think,has been killed by a villain.Will…JJ…”,he voice faltered again.

    Young patted her. “There,there,Bronze.I’m sure they are only myths.” Bronze closed the book,lay down,and looked into the stars. “I hope so…” She closed her eyes,and soon Young did the same.

    (This reminds me so much of Lion King!)

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  45. Meanwhile, back with JJ-
    You realize that you are in Minecraft. You made yourself a diamond sword but you are close to being exploded by Creepers and shot by skeletons. A skeleton come up on a spider and [ulls back to bow for the final shot…

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  46. It misses.You take the arrow and pierce in the spider’s eyes. It hisses and it runs all over the place and falls off. You suddenly portal out of Minecraft (And now,let’s concentrate on JJ’s island of survival.Please,no teleporting elsewhere) and land in the cottage.You start and look for materials to help hold down your house before night.

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  48. You start to sleep,then you hear a thudding noise.You see a vulture tapping on your window.And outside,there is a pack of them.Suddenly,you have a brainwave.You take a cup,fill it with wine from the barrel,and throw it outside. The vultures smell it,and drink it,until they become drunk and fall asleep.You also go to bed.

    The next morning.You wake up and decide to explore.You put on an explorer outfit that Strange gave you,and start to explore the island.

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  49. (Continued from strange)
    You explore for a while and find a cave.
    You remember that Poppus Tropicana said something about creatures being in the caves.
    You wonder what kind of creatures cloud be in them.
    So you go into the cave.
    (to be continued)

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  50. You hear snoring as you go deep into the cave.You see skulls and skeletons of dead humans and animals around.A sign stays above saying,”DO NOT ENTER:Lion inside is heavily dangerous and almost invulnerable.It is the ___ lion.” You can’t see what tpe it says there.But you enter anyway. There you see the most ferocious looking lion ever seen on earth.

    It’s nose suddenly sniffs,and it wakes up.Suddenly the sign lights up as bit more and you realize you shouldn’t have gone in.

    This is the cave of the Nemean lion.

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  52. The Nemean Lion comes closer towards you.You start to slowly back away.Then you start to run. The lion chases after you,not wanting to give up pursuit. You take a bow and shoot and arrow at it’s thigh,but it seems to be immune. It suddenly roars ferociously,a roar that sends a chill up your spine.You look and see a a wooden arrow.It’s hanging upon a tree.

    You go in it’s direction,nearly petrified with fright,as if Medusa gazed into you.You see a palace in ruins. You enter it. It seems as if there might be something important here.You only have to get rid of the ferocious feline behind you.Only problem-it seems immune to everything. You run into the darkness of the ruined palace,hoping to hide somewhere.

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  54. Or you hope that would happen,but the lion seems to be immune in every body part. It sees you in the distance. It runs towards you.You regret even going to the cave. It pounces on you and starts to tear off your flesh,when you kick it it in the stomach. The lion moves back slightly,but you have only minorly hurt it. It roars angrily and chases you.

    You run up some stairs,and accidentally trip. The lion comes towards you,but suddenly it stops and sniffs the air. It seems as if it feels as if there is an even more evil presence in the room. It suddenly whimpers and runs back down the stairs. You wonder what that was about,but you start to explore the palace.

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  55. A girl comes out. She looks like a ragamuffin (Look it up).
    “Please. Help me. That lion. He keeps trying to kill me. I’m only just defending myself. Kill him for me and bring me back his skin,” she says with puppy dog eyes.
    You nod and run out. You find the lion just outside the house. You use your cornucopia that you got earlier to conjure raw meat for the lion. While he’s distracted, you cut off one of his claws. When he turns to you, he opens his mouth to bite. Before he gets a chance, you stab him in the mouth. He disintegrates. All that’s left is his skin and the claw. You run back to the girl and give her your spoils of war.
    “Thank you, JJ. By the way, my name is Icy Comet,” she says.
    “Wait. How do you know my name?” you ask.

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  56. (Continued from young)
    “Oh everyone has pretty much hared of you see you later” Icy said.
    Icy leaves.
    You go back to your hut.
    You look in your backpack and find Young’s journal!.
    How did that get in there? You wonder.
    You open the journal it reads:
    (To be continued)

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  57. Dear Journal,

    The ground started shaking this evening. I was sure it was just an earthquake, so when the girls started to wake up, I just made them lie down again. I waited for it to pass, but it didn’t. I looked up and saw…

    A girl?

    “Um, hi,” I said. “Who are you?”

    “Oh, I’m sorry. My name is Icy Comet. I stumbled on this island. I was just roaming, hoping to find someone. I’m just so lonely and I needed someone to be with. Can I join your little group?” the girl asked with an innocent smile. Her smile was a little too phony, but I decided to put that aside.

    “Um. Well, we are having a hard time coping. We can’t find a lot of food and water,” I replied.

    “Oh, I’m great in the wild. I know all the little secrets!’ Icy said.

    “Great! You’re in! These are my sisters, Red Rock and Mighty Tornado,” I said, pointing to them. “I have first watch. You get some rest.”

    “Ok. Thanks!” she said with an icy smile that I didn’t think of until now.

    Icy Comet??You suddenly remember that you’ve seen the girl before-at Hopper’s cabin,untying you.She was actually evil. And the same one-at the palace…you hear a rustling in the bushes,and look around,but there’s no one there.You start to feel paranoid.

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  58. Then you black out. When you come to, you are in a dark room. There’s food (though not much), dirty water, and a calendar. You look at the date circled and realize it’s been a month. You wait and finally fall asleep you have a dream that you can tell is in real time. You see Poppus Tropicana talking to someone. You look closer and realize it’s the unnamed sibling (remember, JJ never heard her name, so he doesn’t know).
    “I’m sorry! I looked everywhere for him. I’m really worried! I thought he would be able to overcome Icy,” PT says.
    “The girl’s name is ICY! I don’t know if you know, but ice FREEZES everything in it’s path when the power is in the wrong hands. I’ve been in the girl’s path before and I just barely escaped. I could sense some sort of deep power in her, like someone had given her a gift over ice. I don’t know. i just know that Young met her and things didn’t end well for either of them, I met her and I’m still traumatized, and now JJ’s meeting her. I don’t want to think of the possible outcome,” S said half shouting with more than a little stress in her voice. You wonder why she’s so protective over you. You’ve never seen her before in you life (besides when JJ saw her with E. Vile).
    “Why are you so protecive of him?” PT asks.
    That’s when you get your answer.

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  59. But you don’t get to hear it,because you wake up suddenly. “Wake up,Young Fool.” You see Icy Comet. “My master,the owner of the palace you hid in,wants to see you.” “Where are we?” “In his home.” “The palace?” “No,his true home.” You don’t get more information out of her,so you follow.She takes you to her master’s room.

    A smirk comes and a figure appears.He wears a turban on his head,and where is legs should be,there is mist.The necklace he wears seems to possess a burning power,and in his four hands there are golden swords. You realize who he is. “You’re…you’re…a genie!” He smirks. “That I am,Young and foolish one.I found Icy here seeking a path of greater evil,and I gave her that.”

    “The power of controlling Ice.” His eyes lower. “How do you know that?” “I had a dream.” “Oh.” “Anyway,you were trespassing on my wonderful palace without permission.Not only that,Icy has met you before.” “What about the other Icy Comet?” “Oh,she?She’s still exploring that island,for all I care.And now,I shall punish you.” “Wait,wait,who are you?”

    He seems to sneer. “I am the king of genies.” “Your name?” “I am the great Shaitan. I shall provide freedom to all genies by making the foolish humankind work for us,instead of them asking us for some silly wishes of their own desires in their small,small brain. And now,fool,look into my necklace bead.. Icy is holding you tight. Do not try to escape,otherwise you shall be killed.”

    So you look into the immolating eye-beam of Shaitan’s necklace,and suddenly,in the very home (or is it a genie lamp?) of Shaitan,a Fortune Reversal occurs.

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  60. (Continued from young)
    “I’m worried that something bad is goona happen to him” S said.
    “That’s ridicules why would something bad happen to jj?” Pt. asks.
    Then Super comes in the dream.
    “Guys I just had a dream that jj was captured by Icy comet!”-Super said.
    “Say what?” Pt. asks.
    “I’ve been having a lot of dreams lately in one of them I found out that Icy comet is working for E.vile!” Super said.
    “This is bad you got to take us that island JJ cloud be in trouble” S said.
    You wake up.
    (To be continued)

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  61. The next day, you just wait for something to happen. Nothing does. The next night, you have another dream. You see S again, but she seems to know that you’re there. You explain that you saw what happened the last night via dream. She understands,
    “JJ, can we talk?” she asks after you’re done talking.
    “Sure but first, I want to ask you something. Last night, you never really answered PT. Why are you so protective of me?” you ask.
    “JJ, really-” she starts.
    “No. Tell me!” you interrupt, your voice rising.
    “Fine, but promise you won’t tell anyone. Especially Icy,” S says urgently.
    “Tell me!” you plead.
    “JJ, promise!” S pleads, half shouting half crying.
    “Fine, I promise.”
    “Thank you. A long time ago I met up with Icy. She told me that she had the power over ice. She could tell that I could control just about anything else. She said we could make a good team. She said we could work together to fight E. Vile. I was stupid. I din’t see the signs. Looking back, I can tell she was lying. I see the E on her forearm, but back then, I was ignorant. We did everything together. We were like sisters. Finally, I told her about my mom. Our mom. Her face darkened and she said I had to come with her. She led me to dad. He had a bone to pick with me because on Mom. Icy betrayed me because of my mother and my powers. I can tell you have the same powers. I don’t want her betraying you, or E. Vile will become all powerful,” S said sadly.
    “Wow,” you mutter.
    “JJ, I have something I want to tell you,” she says. She opens her mouth to start talking when something happens. She starts shrieking. Blood spatters where her face used to be. You wake up.
    Icy walks in.
    “I’ve heard what you did to my sister,” you growl despite what S said.
    “Oh, Bronze Comet finally came clean with her brother, did she? Dad’s not going to be happy,” Icy says coldly.
    “Dad. Who’s your dad?”
    “Little Jumper?”
    “WHAT!” you shriek?
    “Surprise, JJ! I’m your sister!”

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  62. “How many siblings can a woman have?!” “Oh,who knows?She had,what,twenty? Anyway,my master wants to see you.My other master,whose palace you invaded.” “Your what?!You betrayed-” “Treachery.Get used to it.” She takes you to her master’s room.

    A smirk comes and a figure appears.He wears a turban on his head,and where is legs should be,there is mist.The necklace he wears seems to possess a burning power,and in his four hands there are golden swords. You realize who he is. “You’re…you’re…a genie!” He smirks. “That I am,Young and foolish one.I found Icy here seeking a path of greater evil,and I gave her that.”

    “The power of controlling Ice.” His eyes lower. “How do you know that?” “I had a dream.” “Oh.” “Anyway,you were trespassing on my wonderful palace without permission.Not only that,Icy has met you before.” “What about the other Icy Comet?” “Oh,she?She’s still exploring that island,for all I care.And now,I shall punish you.” “Wait,wait,who are you?”

    He seems to sneer. “I am the king of genies.” “Your name?” “I am the great Shaitan. I shall provide freedom to all genies by making the foolish humankind work for us,instead of them asking us for some silly wishes of their own desires in their small,small brain. And now,fool,look into my necklace bead.. Icy is holding you tight. Do not try to escape,otherwise you shall be killed.”

    So you look into the immolating eye-beam of Shaitan’s necklace,and suddenly,in the very home (or is it a genie lamp?) of Shaitan,a Fortune Reversal occurs.

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  63. Then you wake up after your horrible nightmare. You look at you Ongoing Story book. You read Young Flame’s last entry (besides the one she’s typing now) and think it;s interesting how accurate it is. Then it happens in real life.
    “Surprise, JJ! I’m your sister!”
    (Strange, please let go of the genie thing-a-majig, please. It’s confusing me.)

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  64. Before you can do anything,a portal sucks you up! You wake up in an island,which seems like nothing you have ever seen before.It’s not in idea mode,that is for sure. Suddenly,a voice from near the shore shouts, “Hey,you there! Who are you and why are you here?!” “Uh…I’m Jumpy Jumper…and I washed up here on this-”

    “Ha!Washed up indeed! You aren’t on the shore!” A Poptropican comes up from near a structure. You can’t exactly describe him,so you draw a picture of him to yourself. (http://poptropicanawesomeness.files.wordpress.com/2013/09/chiefoftheislandshaggycrown.jpg for you guys). He suddenly looks at you in a curious way. “You said your name was Jumpy Jumper?”

    “Uh,yes sir.” “Then come with me. My name’s Shaggy Crown. Call me SC for short.” “Uh,yes sir.” His initials seem familiar. Where have you heard it last,you can’t remember. “Come with me.” “Yes,Mr.Crown.” He takes you to a small house. “This is my home. Neat,eh?” “Uh,yes sir. Are we in Poptropica sir?Poptropica,the online internet game?”

    “Yes and no.” “Uh…” “Yes,you are in Poptropica.No,we aren’t in the online internet game.” “Then…” “We are in Poptropica:Forgotten Islands-the iOS app.” “iOS? But I was playing-” “Ah,that explains it,then. You see,there is an ancient race of Poptropicans. They are the Mabaya.They detest us modern mainland Poptropicans.” Shaggy takes a casket.

    “In this casket,Jumpy,are the six ancient artifacts. The Mabaya claim to own them. Some people have managed to get them somehow. They are the ones archaeologists try to track. Some of them are tribal chieftains,some are mayors of minor towns,and some artifacts are buried with nature in her brightest forms. I have managed to track these and store them here.”

    “So,the Mabaya are angry with me. They claim to own the artifacts. I am going to sell these to the museum,far away,where they truly belong two days later. But Mzimuni,the leader of the Mabaya,has an excellent plan. She plans to bring you young fellows to me or nearby islands,using her rift powers. The Mabaya can easily sniff modern Poptropicans,so they can track me down.

    “You wouldn’t believe how many fellows I had to take away to some other island so that Mzimuni wouldn’t get me.” “Uh,huh.”,you say. You look around. Something seems familiar about Shaggy Crown,and his personality. He seems to have recognized you by your name. You wonder what to do. “So now what?”

    “Well,for starters,JJ,I have good news for you.” “What?” “That you do not have to worry about me. This is only me,JJ,in my Poptropica:Forgotten Islands account. I am different looking here,but I can temporarily show you my true form.” Then for a moment you see a different person in Shaggy’s face-someone with lighter glasses,a green jacket,lighter skin,orangish hair,and a pair of scissors instead of a spear.

    Then you see Shaggy Crown. “So,no worries now,eh,JJ?”,he says. “No,I don’t think I’m going to have too much suspicion about you,Strange.”

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  65. (Continued from Strange)
    “Well I do admit this place is nice but I have to get out of hare Isn’t there a way out of hare?” You say.
    “Not that I can think of right now but you can stay in my home until I figure out how to send you back” Shaggy said.
    So you go into his house.
    You get out photos of your siblings.
    Then you look at Super’s photo then suddenly the photo started to glow!
    “Strange you might want to see this!” You see.
    Shaggy comes in.
    “What is it?” Shaggy said.
    “Why is the photo glowing like that?” You say.
    (To be continued)

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  66. Suddenly the photo burns! “What was that?!” “I have no idea myself,JJ.” SC says. You sit on a wooden chair,not knowing what to do. “Anyway,Shaggy/Strange,how did you escape E.Vile in his super secret lair along with Clean?” Hie frowns. “We didn’t.” “Then how are you here?!” “This is in another gaming platform,JJ.I am free here-for now.”

    Suddenly the door opens,revealing 2 identical girl Poptropicans. “Ah,here they are.”,Shaggy/Strange says. He turns to you. “My friends,the twins,Blue Tooth and Angry Bird. I knew they would come as soon as I found you.” He turns to the twins. “He’s here. I’ll leave you to him.” He gets up and walks away. The twins approach you.

    “Well,hello,JJ. It’s been quite some time.”,one says. “Yes. Glad to see you again.”,the other says. “Had some candy lately?” “Blue!”,says the one you think is Angry Bird. “What?”,Blue Tooth asks. “Nothing,”,Angry sighs. “The point is,JJ,that the Mabaya have traced you here. They’ll be arriving shortly.” “We have to rescue you from them.” Suddenly they join together for a moment,forming one Poptropican.

    “Aunt Slanted Fish?!” “Yes,JJ,it’s us.I mean me. I have a lot of trouble keeping track of 2 of my iOS accounts.” Then she forms back into Blue Tooth and Angry Bird “Well,you see JJ,I have learnt something important.It’s about Super.You see-” Suddenly an ancient,rustic voice shouts, “Come out there,fools!I have finally captured you! I have the house surrounded,so give me that casket!”

    Shaggy/Strange suddenly comes. “It’s Mzimuni! She herself is leading the Mabaya! The casket! She wants the artifacts! Run! Hurry to the blimp!” He rushes outside a back door,with you and the twins/Fishy following. He runs into a blimp,and takes hold of a navigation wheel. “Hurry!” You see Poptropicans with dark skins dressed in leopard skin and holding spears dash towards you.

    You guess those are the Mabaya. Mzimuni is easy to spot. She is the only one with any hair at all.She wears a mysterious brown cloak. She also wears lipstick. But this is no time for appearances,so your run to Shaggy’s blimp. But the blimp is lifting,and you aren’t in it! The twins look at you with despair,while Shaggy is navigating the blimp southwest.

    You try and catch hold of the blimp,but you fail. The Mabaya hold you. Mzimuni comes. “Where are the artifacts?”,she growls. “In the blimp,”you confidentially say. “You’re the only one captured,and the artifacts are with them?Ugh.I pay my minions far more than they deserve.” But then she smiles. “But never mind. I have plans with you,at least.”

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  67. You touch the picture, and your finger starts glowing! You try to wipe it of on a handkerchief, but even that starts glowing!
    “Oh, dear..” Shaggy says.
    (SC, if you don’t talk like this, I’m sorry.)

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  69. (Continued from strange)
    The Mabaya take you to their lair.
    They put you in a cage.
    You wonder what Slanted fish was about to say about Super.
    I hope she’s alright You thought.
    You set down not knowing what to do.
    (To be continued)

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  70. A Mabaya comes and throws a bowl of food near your cage.You take it and eat it.Meanwhile,back in the island that your siblings and Zlato are in…

    Poppus Tropicana appears! “Have a lead yet,Poppy?”,asks White Dragon. “Yes,I do.” Suddenly the siblings stand up. Zlato bleats. “I have been able to sense his presence on an island far away.” “Where is it?!” “You can’t reach it.” “What do you mean?Of course we can!” “Then you must have an iOS device.” There is silence. No one has one.But back at E.Vile’s lair…

    Clean and Strange are imprisoned in separate cages. “Strange,”,Clean sighs,”do you have to keep playing on that iOS of yours all the time,with that account of yours,Shaggy Crown?” “Look,Clean.I have news.” He narrates about the fact that he has found you to about the visit from Slanted Fish’s accounts,to the attack by the Mabaya. “What?Really?”

    “Really.We have reached one of the Flotsam Islands.Mayor Eastman and I know each other.He is sure to offer us protection there from the Mabaya. Till then…oh look,I have a mail today!” And he stops talking.Clean sighs and continues to look out of his cage.But while they are distracted with their own things,they barely noticed they are being overheard by Bionic Hopper…

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  72. (Continued from strange)
    Bionic goes over to E.vile.
    “Sir I have interesting news” Bionic said.
    Bionic whispers what her overheard.
    E.vile smiles.
    “At the right moment snatch that IOS from strange” E.vile said.

    Meanwhile You think of some ways to escape.
    You decide to rest.
    You fall asleep.
    When you wake up the cage is open.
    Someone must have unlocked it when I was asleep you think.
    You see a note.
    You pick it up.
    It reads: Enjoy your freedom – The Avenger.
    You decide to make a run for it.
    (To be continued)

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  73. (Continued from myself)
    You run out of the Mabaya lair.
    But the Mabaya chase you.
    Just when you were about to get caught again a rope is thrown to you.
    You climb it and enter a blimp.
    You see a figure.
    “Greetings JJ I’m the Avenger” Avenger said.
    “How do you know my name?” You say.
    “I’ve been reading that ongoing story thing now just sit tight and I’ll take you to strange” Avenger said.
    So the avenger takes you to strange.
    “Who are you really?” You say.
    “My identity is a secret” Avenger said.
    The Avenger leaves.
    Shaggy comes to you just as he is about to you for some reason he freezes.
    (To be continued)

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  75. But then you realize that you are just seeing things.You ask Shaggy,”Where is my aunt?” “Oh,she’s in my blimp.Come,I’ll take you there.” Shaggy takes to to his blimp.”They’re in that room over there-you know,the place with those costumes.You can talk to them there. I’ll be steering the blimp to my home till then.Have a good time.Call me if you need anything.” So you go into the room where Blue Tooth and Angry Bird are.

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  76. Meanwhile,in E.Vile’s fortress,Bionic comes closer to Strange and Clean’s cages. He comes to Strange. “Give me that iPad of yours there buddy!” “You’ll have to take it from me first,”,says Strange,who’s reading his mail. Clean knows that nothing,absolutely nothing can stop Strange from checking his mail,but he keeps quiet.

    Bionic tries to take away the iPad,but it’s as if Strange’s hands are part of the iPad herself! (yes,my iPad is a she) He gets angry,and he launches his weapon (the boxing glove on a string from the chest),but right then Strange puts his iPad down (he finished reading his mail) and holds his boxing glove. Bionic tries to pull himself back from him,but Strange is holding it too tight.

    Clean gets a idea. He takes a knife from his inventory and throws it and the string,which cuts it. Bionic falls back suddenly and explodes. Strange looks into Bionic’s boxing glove,and uses it to open the cage. He then opens Clean’s. “I’ll go to my shop in Zomberry now,and deal with a few costumers,along with using my iOS to find out more about Mzimuni’s plans,while you,Clean,look around here and try to find something interesting.”

    Strange disappears.

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    1. (Anyone can 🙂 just make sure you check your grammar and try and stick to the story 🙂 I hope you like it!)

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      5. (I meant “wha?” Not what. I’m a bit of a grammar geek too 😐 if you’ve ever seen Opposite Day or hung out with my bud billy you’d understand… But I don’t think you have so “what”?)

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  79. (anyway this is mine:)
    however, Bionic regenerates as Strange leaves, and Clean yells.
    Clean is left in a cold, dark room with no air. or windows, while the door is locked.
    But when he almost dies, the Avenger arrives and and escapes with Clean.
    “Who are you?” he asks.
    the Avenger sighs. “I cannot hide it anymore….”
    “I AM THE BIONIC. I live two lives, and when a friend of JJ or JJ himself is in danger, I save him or her and transform.”
    But a light flashes and the Avenger disappears.
    (hope you liked it!)

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      1. (IKR! Please stay with us. Noone has continued posting after they’ve started except me, SC (all of them), and Super. I don’t know what’s happened to Clean…)

  80. Clean wonders what that was all about. Suddenly Bionic Hopper shouts from behind,”There you are! How’d you escape!” Clean immediately runs. However,a big voice booms like a loudspeaker:

    “Robots,Clean Shark has escaped! Look out for this Mews Reporter!”

    This is obviously Bionic’s voice. But Clean manages to escape,and he sees a bottle with a letter in it. He takes it and hops into a blimp.Meanwhile,in Strange’s shop,Wild Monster comes. “Hi,Wild Monster? What can I do for you? Is it something the Pop Squad wants?” “Yes and no.” He whispers something to Strange. Strange replies…

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  81. Meanwhile, back where JJ the siblings are…
    “Ugh! Is there any way we can get off this island!!!!” Bronze Comet shouts.
    Everyone else is just sitting around. White Dragon looks like he wants to say something to Young Flame, but he just can’t bring himself to.
    “Doesn’t anyone else want to save JJ?” BC shouts.
    Everyone looks at her like she’s crazy.
    “Fine. I’ll save him myself. You are just a bunch of loons,” she shouts and stomps off.
    Finally, White walks over to Young.
    “Young, I’m sorry for what I did. That was years ago! I mean, come on. You’re mom had just died! You were stranded on an island! What else could I’ve done!” he says.
    “White, I know we really liked each other. I trusted you, though, and you broke that trust. We’ve already been over this. I’m sorry,” Young replies, her eyes filling with tears.
    “Young-”
    “No, White. I already told you, it’s over,” she says and turns to everyone else. “JJ needs my help. You guys can can come with or stay here.”
    No one moves. Young Flame shrugs and sprints after Bronze.
    Later, after what seemed like hours of searching, Young and Bronze think they see something. They walk up, and get trapped!
    “HELP! HELP! HELP! HELP!” they shout, but it’s too late. No one can hear them.

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    1. (Hey Young? Can you tell me which comment I would have to start from to understand everyone that’s currently in the story? I read some of the first few, but I started getting SUPER confused… Actually, I know that you’re at school, so can anyone please tell me?

      ~~Nameless UnDEFiNed)

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      2. Mine still aren’t moderating 😦 ugh… I put a lot if work into the italics too. Thoughts and such

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  83. (continued from young)
    meanwhile Strange replies “Are you sure?” Wild nods.
    “Okay if your sure” Strange said.
    Strange gets a package and gives it to wild.
    Wild leaves.

    Meanwhile You talk to blue and angry.
    “Wait remember what you were about to tell me about Super?” You say.
    “Oh yeah you see she started glowing and then she vanished! I have no idea what happened to her but I have a feeling that it was bad” Blue said.
    “Well I hope you can find her” You say.
    (To be continued)

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  84. Young wakes up in a cage in E. Vile’s lair. But the watchman is asleep and Young gets the key from his pocket. She creeps out, and frees Bronze.
    But the Bronze she freed was E. Vile’s minion in disguise! She screams, but the Avenger saves her again. He also frees JJ and the others and brings them to Clean and Strange.
    Meanwhile, Bronze was in the torture chamber, all tied up.
    There were only two things in there, a whip and a diary.
    She grasped for the diary, ’till her chains broke.
    She got the diary and there it said:
    Bronze-Strength
    Young-Fire
    JJ-Speed
    Strange-Earth
    Clean-Air
    Others-Water (Ice, Flood, Rain, dew, etc.)
    Bronze was amazed. They had powers! She quickly escaped and informed the others.
    But this was only E. Vile’s bait, who made the chains light.
    Back in his lair, he’s working out on a secret plan…

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      18. (Clean is wondering why Strange is doing this stuff when Clean hates Tornadoes and didn’t really do any of this.)

      20. (So? I still hate Tornadoes. I’m a Hurricane person! LOL XD)

      21. (LOL I thought of you as more of an Avalanche person… �Will you help me out with my OSC? I’m trying, but no one has contributed yet… My blog is through my link name) ~~Nameless Sent from iCloud

      22. (Yeah, I actually am. I was just joking about the Hurricane thing… I kind of have a short temper if I’m provoked enough. Avalanche expected sometime tomorrow. Ha ha.)

  85. But Bronze is also smart, and discovered E. Vile’s bait.
    She comes to him while he’s asleep, and grabs a jar of magic water that’ll make her and the others have powers.
    But she discovers they REALLY have powers.
    The next day…
    They all team up and wait outside the minions’ door.
    The minions come out, all ready to fight.
    The Poptropicans yell, “E.VILE, YOU’RE DOWN!!!”
    But you, JJ, faces a minion with the power of robbing powers. But you have thought of a plan how to keep all your powers safe. But it doesn’t work out, and your power is stolen…
    You go unconscious.

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  86. But the other Poptropicans manage to face the robbing Poptropican and pin him down. Strange covers him in dirt. Suddenly,Young notices something,”Strange….I have two questions to ask you.” “Number one-do you know where JJ was?” Strange tells about the adventure in his iOS. “Oh.And a portal put him back here?” “Right,I guess.”

    “Number two.Where is the Pop Squad?” “Oh,that. Sorry I can’t tell you that,Young.They swore me to secrecy.It’s confidential.” Suddenly Zlato bleats angrily. “Look!”,someone says. “They’re getting away!” Young looks around. E.Vile,Popular,Cumulo Nimbus in his Red Panda Suit and 5 of E.Vile’s robots seem to be escaping! And they seem to-

    “They have JJ hostage!Along with a girl!Hey,wait a minute,that’s Super Grape,no?” Suddenly the Poptropicans,along with Young run. “And look there!”,Bronze shouts! A hunchback is running towards them in a different direction! He seems to have really good speed,and his legs and face seem strange! It’s as if they’re horns or something!” But Young knows who it is.

    It’s Igor.

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      1. (Even though I want to give the minor characters a chance,like Big Bubbles,Sneaky Cheetah (oh wait,he’s dead) and Friendly Turtle. We barely saw Quick Whale and Thirsty Lightning!)

      3. (Quick Whale-She was sent by Young Flame in one of Super’s posts,

        Thirsty Lightning- Clean’s Friend way back early in the story,who made slight appearances.

        This is what I mean.)

  87. (Continued from strange)
    Young and the other poptropican’s jump before Igor runs into them.
    Igor runs into a brink wall!
    “Come on we got to rescue JJ and Super!” Young said.

    Meanwhile in E.vile’s secret lair.
    Popular throws you and Super into separate cages.
    Popular leaves.
    “So where have you been?” Super said.
    “I’ve been in the IOS poptropica lost islands game” You say.
    “Your kidding! what was it like?” Super said.
    “Well let’s see I was captured by the Mabaya, and I met a guy who calls himself the Avenger” You say.
    “That sounds cool but who’s this Avenger guy?” Super said.
    “He comes whenever me or my friends are in trouble” You say.
    Super smiles.
    ‘You think he’ll come and save us?” Super said.
    You shrug.
    “Guess well just have to wait and see” You say.
    (to be continued)

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  88. Meanwhile,Igor suddenly wakes up,and sees the brick wall. It has collapsed,but he fell unconscious because it sapped most of his strength. He continues through the wall and on and on. He soon comes to E.Vile’s lair and recognizes it.Unfortunately,he notices two other people in the distance so he hurries.

    Meanwhile,at E.Vile’s lair,you and Super get restless. Suddenly Super shouts,”Look there!” You look and see three old enemies: Igor,A Mabaya who is somehow in your online Poptropica,and the BAD agent that escaped with Director D that night you wanted to get a necklace for the scientist with the obsidian dust,all heading towards you.

    Suddenly your cages are unlocked. You look and see the Avenger. “Come,there’s no time!” You grab his hand and run out of the cage along with Super “Who are you anyway?” “It’s a secret,JJ.Now come along.” He turns and runs into a familiar shape. “Ah,there you are,”,Igor says. “Hey! My boss wants that guy!”,shouts the BAD agent.

    “Fools,”the Mabaya says,”this idiotic juvenile recently escaped our lair at the Wild Islands.My mistress wants him now.This mysterious person helped.” The BAD agent and Igor look towards the Avenger. “Who are you,now,pal?”, the BAD agent asks. “It’s a secret,”,the Avenger replies,his voice sounding familiarly female now.

    “That voice…it is familiar to me.”,Igor says. “I agree with you,goat person. I know I have heard it somewhere too.” “Yeah,it seems awfully close to a female,too.” You wonder how these villains,barely associated with each other,suddenly notice the familiarity in the Avenger’s voice. “Well,I think we should remove that cloak on him-or her.”,Igor says. The BAD agent removes it immediately. You shudder at what you see.

    The avenger is Icy Comet.

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  90. Young Flame walks forward with hatred in her eyes, and flames spread around Icy Comet. Young turns around to see you, but just then? Icy Comet walks through the flames and tackles her.
    (You don’t have to use this if you don’t want… I’m still pretty new to this…

    ~~Nameless UnDEFiNed)

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      1. Oh… I think I commented mine before yours O_O DANG IT! I hate slow comments 👿 😈 😦 😥

      3. (You’re AWESOMESAUCE 😀 THANK YOU SCx1,000,000,000!!!!)

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      5. (Sorry, I just saw it. I didn’t know… That’s my first addition to the story ever)

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  91. “Aren’t you one of those people who was in my master’s castle?”,Igor says. “Yes,”she says. “Now move,or I’ll burn you!” The Mabaya resists and jumps on to Young. He suddenly turns into ashes. “Now,”Young says to Igor and the BAD agent,”Keep your distance.” Igor snorts. “But we don’t actually have to touch you,eh,girl?” He suddenly pulls out a spectral blade and throws it at Young.

    Young winces,but the spectral blade suddenly burns! Igor immediately turns back and runs.The BAD agent does the same. “Now,what happened-hey,wait a minute,where’s Icy?” “She must have escaped during the chaos!” “Oh well.Anyway,what happened,Super?” Super explains everything. Young blinks. “Icy was the avenger,yet she froze you two when I came?” “Seems like it.”

    So you all get out of E.Vile’s lair without being seen. Suddenly,you hear a bleat. Zlatos! The golden ram seems to snort to someone. You look closely and see that it is bleating to Justin,Red Ice’s dog! Zlatos seems to bleat angrily,and Justin growls. “Are they having a fight?”,Young asks.The animals suddenly notice you. They seem to want you to ride on them to somewhere.

    “Me and Super will ride Justin,while you,JJ,shall ride the ram.” You agree and jump on the ram while Super and Young jump on Justin. They suddenly seem to zoom,and in no time you three are in a familiar place,indeed,but you have no idea why the animals took you here.

    Why would they take you to the Monster Carnival graveyard?

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    1. (Can I continue the next one? I have an idea if you haven’t already started yours… ??~~Nameless UnDEFiNed)

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    2. (Also,can you tell me… When we say “You” in the story, as if we’re telling it to someone that has amnesia… Who are we saying it to? in a way… You should know what I mean! I think? Grr ~~Nameless UnDEFiNed)

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  92. The gravyard has a small amount of light given from the oh-so-dark moon. You get off of Zlatos (I don’t know if that’s its name or not O_O I don’t understand all of the story as well as everyone else… ), and walk straight. You don’t look at the others, you walk alone.

    “Hey, where are you going!?” Young asks gently, as she begins to walk up behind you. “Hold back, give him some space…” Says JJ. You hear the footsteps recede and keep walking until you reach the grave… The one you’d seen so long ago… Then, Icy Comet’s boot kicks some dirt off of the grave. (HOW RUDE!!) You don’t look up at her, you simply stare at the stone / stones broken apart.

    (Okay, I’m not sure who the grave should belong to… But, if we could keep that part a mystery for a tiny bit, I’d REALLY appreciate it. Hope this is good! ~~Nameless )

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      1. ( IKR?! Was my graveyard entry bad? I mean, did it leave the story you guys had going?)

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  93. ( Continued from Nameless UnDEFiNed )
    Things begin to freeze over. Stones all around you, the dead grass about two feet away from you. You hear all of your friends struggling, and ice cracking. Ice covers everything except a small circle around you, and you yourself. Icy Comet cackles like the wiked witch and pulls an ice dagger out of her coat pocket. “I knew I should’ve broken your ice when I had the chance… Tsk tsk tsk… Looks like I’ll have to test it first.” She hasn’t taken her eyes away from the ice dagger, and she throws it.

    You don’t duck, you simply stand there, praying it isn’t doing what you think. You turn around to see IC walking over in the direction she through the dagger. Zlatos is missing. **Maybe he got away ** You think. She picks it up, and throws it beside you. Breaking a tombstone about 4 yards away, into nothing but ice. You look over to see your friends, all frozen where they stood. IC pokes Young Flame and a crack appears in YF’s frozen state. You don’t have much aim, but you dive, grab the ice dagger and let IC feel her own wrath.

    You hear the dagger land, but you don’t see Icy Comet, and the dagger is missing. You run over and think of everything that’s happening, and then your thoughts switch to how to unfreeze Young Flame so she can unfreeze the others. You look around, and Zlatos comes from behind a dark tree. He taps his head into Young, over and over. “No Zlatos! Stop! You’ll destroy her! Stop!”. Zlatos keeps going and I hear a giant crack amongst Young Flame’s ice. You turn away, fearing what the ram has done, but when you look again, Young Flame is standing there, as normal as ever. Fire appears on her hands, and then the others ice melts away.

    They stand there shivering, and you begin to contemplate, knowing it will be on everyone’s mind soon. **Why did Zlatos and Justin bring us here? Why did they lead us into a trap? Why did they betray us? **

    ( ~~Nameless Hope you like it! )

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  94. Suddenly,Zlatos and Justin come,but they act normal. “Wait,”,you say,”Don’t tell me they were mind-controlled!” “Yes,Jumpy Jumper,they were,by me.” You look behind and see a showed figure with wings holding a scythe in midair flying. “Who are you?Why did you made them bring us here?!” The mysterious figure chuckles darkly.

    “I am Grim.R. Call me Mr.Grim.I was forced by Queen Cobra so long ago to suck your souls to your graves.” “That was you?!” “Believe me,it was not my own will,”,he says sadly. “She made me do it.Hades is a similar case.” “He stole Poseidon’s trident from Clean!” “That was so he could return that to his venerable brother only.She how he is overestimated to be evil.I am,too.”

    “Some call me by my lesser known form,Thanatos.But in my Grim form,they form speculations about me.You may have heard of me before.” “Grim…”,Young mutters.”Grim.R.” Her face suddenly lights up,frightened! “You…you’re Grim Reaper!” “Ah,see there?Your sister has heard of me,JJ. They think I kill people because-well,you know the whole thing,don’t you?”

    “Yes?” “Ah,good,then.But I only kill away people by swiping them off my list of people-to-kill-“-he takes out a long scroll-“-with my poison quill-“-he also takes out a quill with poison instead of ink-“-because it is scheduled for them to die.Death is inevitable,so why prolong your death day?”,I ask myself. “So what’s the whole point,Grim?” “I’ll tell you if you promise not to scream or try to escape.”

    You all swear on the river Styx that they will not scream,escape,or do anything foolish.”Good,good. So here is why I brought you you here. One of you is scheduled to die today.” “Whom? You mean me,Young,or Super?”,you ask. “Ah,if I tell you,I hope you will not try to protect her.” (So JJ is not going to die) “Okay,then.”

    “The person among you three who is scheduled to be killed-and I unfortunately have to kill now is…”

    (To Be Continued!)

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    1. (Dude! Mine is still in moderation!! I asked you to hold off, mine continued from the graveyard scene)

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      1. (Sorry, I just saw that mine had FINALLY modereated… I didn’t goet notified of it via e-mail though… Sorry SC)

    2. (I just wroter ANOTHER part, and it’s in moderation again… SW said if I used eoms it would, but I didn’t use any… It’s continued from you. Don’t worry though, I didn’t say who it was that’s supposed to die. 😉 ~~Nameless)

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      1. (Every time I comment on my reall account on THIS page… It sits in moderation for 24 hours. It stink because I’m trying really hard to contribute to the story, and I’m tired of asking people to wait for my next part to moderate.)

    1. (You didn’t carry on from my graveyard scene even after I told you my next part was in moderation, did you 😦 ?)

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  96. (Continued from Strange)

    He stops… He looks baffeled… His posioned ink (In hand) falls to his side. You notice about 10 other people hiding behind larger tombstones. **They aren’t hidden very well… Young?** You walk forward slowly. “Thanotos? You mind controlled Justin and Zlatos to bring us here?” You ask, putting the current puzzle together. “Why yes. Have I not already explained this young Poptropican?” “It’s just that… Did anyone tell you that here would be the place that Poptropican would die?” “Of course, I can’t think of everything you know!” “Well, Thanotos? You just got tricked.”

    He stands there, dumbfounded by what you’ve said. “You let the Poptropican you came to kill live until her real time, and we’ll help you get away. Because these guys aren’t letting YOU go”. He turns, only to see a dozen B.A.D. agents coming towards you all, pulling out their weapons. “Haha, dear little Poptropican… You see, you can’t kill death! Hah! Why would I make a deal with you to live, when they can’t kill me!? HAH!” Thanotos begins to crack up, meanwhile the B.A.D. agents are coming closer. You turn around, and jump on Zlatos. The others follow your lead and jump on Justin, Young with you on Zlatos. “Tanny controlled their minds once, you REALLY want him to, again? While we’re ON THEM!?!??!” Young shouts into your ear as you all make your getaway. “Tanny?” “Thanotos! Whatever!” “We have to get away! Find some way to keep one of you alive! Something that not even death can penetrate…”

    You ride on, but turn Zlatos in another direction… Back to the graveyard. “What are you doing, JJ??!??” Young screams to make sure you can hear her. “We;re going to make a deal with the devil”
    (To be coninued) (~~Nameless UnDEFiNed)

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  97. (Continued from strange)
    “Young Flame” Grim reaper said. (Sorry Young but it had to be you I don’t wanna die and well nether do you, So no hard feelings right?)
    Grim reaper checks something off his list.
    Young dies.
    “Well that will be all, You have a good day” Grim reaper said.
    Grim leaves.
    You start crying.
    “I’m sorry JJ” Super said.
    “Super just go I need some time alone” You say.
    “Okay” Super said.
    So Super leaves.
    (to be continued)

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    1. (Wait! I finished writing mine! It’s been in moderation for like ten minutes! Mine was continued from Strange, and it won’t make any sense! Everytime I use my WordPress account it sits in moderation all day, and night!)

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      2. No one listens to the one who spent two hours writing her next addition. And since SG killed you off… Mine isn’t even going to make sense O_O I told everyone BEFORE he commented it that mine was in mod. :,( Great.

  98. (Continued from Strange)

    He stops… He looks baffeled… His posioned ink (In hand) falls to his side. You notice about 10 other people hiding behind larger tombstones. **They aren’t hidden very well… Young?** You walk forward slowly. “Thanotos? You mind controlled Justin and Zlatos to bring us here?” You ask, putting the current puzzle together. “Why yes. Have I not already explained this young Poptropican?” “It’s just that… Did anyone tell you that here would be the place that Poptropican would die?” “Of course, I can’t think of everything you know!” “Well, Thanotos? You just got tricked.”

    He stands there, dumbfounded by what you’ve said. “You let the Poptropican you came to kill live until her real time, and we’ll help you get away. Because these guys aren’t letting YOU go”. He turns, only to see a dozen B.A.D. agents coming towards you all, pulling out their weapons. “Haha, dear little Poptropican… You see, you can’t kill death! Hah! Why would I make a deal with you to live, when they can’t kill me!? HAH!” Thanotos begins to crack up, meanwhile the B.A.D. agents are coming closer. You turn around, and jump on Zlatos. The others follow your lead and jump on Justin, Young with you on Zlatos. “Tanny controlled their minds once, you REALLY want him to, again? While we’re ON THEM!?!??!” Young shouts into your ear as you all make your getaway. “Tanny?” “Thanotos! Whatever!” “We have to get away! Find some way to keep one of you alive! Something that not even death can penetrate…”

    You ride on, but turn Zlatos in another direction… Back to the graveyard. “What are you doing, JJ??!??” Young screams to make sure you can hear her. “We;re going to make a deal with the devil”
    (To be coninued) (~~Nameless UnDEFiNed)

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    1. (This was supposed to be about 4 entries ago. Please don’t pay attention)

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  100. (Continued from strange)
    Clean.
    “I’ve been meaning to tell you that I found a latter in a bottle” Clean said.
    Clean gives you the bottle.
    You open it and get the letter out.
    A crystal was taped to the letter.
    The letter read:
    (to be continued)

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