In celebration of this Poptropica Help Blog recently reaching 8 million hits (thanks everyone!), we’re going to do something fun! In the comments section, ANYONE is welcome to join in as we weave an ongoing story, a Poptropica fan-fiction of sorts, told in second-person narrative. It begins here…
“Um, hello. I’m here to register for something called, uh, ‘Poptropica’?” Amidst the realm of blue vines in front of you, a crate, small and wooden, bounces out, shaking blue dust and spitting out a question of your gender. You stare incredulously before you finally manage to respond. “I’m a boy,” you tell the little box, and then it erupts a circle of numbers in individual bubbles as it asks you the next question. This is a very strange sign-up process, you think to yourself, as you decide to tell the box etched with a curious question mark that you are 9 years old.
“Your name is Jumpy Jumper. When you are ready, hop into the blimp and travel to any island.” You ponder the map for a while, but decide none of the islands suit you. “There’s got to be something better…” you mutter to yourself. Just then, you see it. Out of the corner of your eye, there’s another island, shrouded in mystery by layers of smog and unidentifiable smells. Island X.
“But no one’s ever been there before,” the voice warns, the voice of the box that had guided your creation earlier. “Jumpy Jumper, JJ, you can’t… how did that even get on the map anyway? It’s not safe… please no… JJ!!” But it’s too late. You’re gone.
What happens next? Will JJ survive the unknown dangers of the mysterious Island X? What is the island’s secret, its true name, the people, the villain(s), the setting? You and your fellow PHB readers get to decide what items he collects and uses, other places he visits, and the adventures that await…
RULES: Make sure it follows what others have written before you, makes sense, and if you wish to add a comment that is not part of the story itself, use parentheses, for example: (I think we should…) Your comment can be as long or short as you like and you are definitely welcome to contribute as many times as you like. Be creative!
Where will these words take us? Continue the story in the comments!
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(Continued from Super Grape, about to read a letter)
The letter read:
**If you can manage to bring this crystal to the Underworld without the sligtest crack, it may be traded for your friend’s life. This must be done by Hallow’s Eve, when the Underworld is strongest. Hurry though, the closer we get to Hallow’s Eve, the more dangerous it gets. Young deserves this, hurry Poptropicans. Hurry JJ.**
(To be continued) (~~Nameless UnDEFiNed
(Continued from me)
“When did you find this?” You ask Clean, but he only stands there breathing deeply. “When did you find this!?” You turn around and throw the bottle with the note in hand. “I… I found it a few months ago… Right after the last time Young died. Since she came back…. I thought… I thought it was a trick.” Clean confesses, tears gathering in his eyes. “Then why do you still have it!?” “Because… I… I was going to sell the crystal once we got back to Night Watch Island…”
You stand there, and then walk to Justin… He has a “Saddlebag” of sorts lying across his back. You put the note and the crystal in a pocket. And climb on. “Pack up. We need to get to the Underworld now.” “So, to Mythology?” Clean asks, tears leaving his eyes and giving off a sense of hope. “No,” You tell him, “We need to get there faster. We’re going to Back Lot.” “I thought that… That entrence was closed.” “Well, we’re about to find out.” Clean and Super get on Zlatos and you head for Back Lot Island.
(Please make sure they get to Back Lot if you continue this… I have a big plan O_O ~~Nameless UnDEFiNed)
You go to Back Lot. Red Rock is waiting there. She has a crystal in her hands that looks just like yours. She pulls out a note it looks just like yours! She turns around, her face streaked with tears.
“You guys! I found this note! I’m trying to get to the Underworld to save YF!” she says.
“Um, wow. We got the same thing! Wow. Double the chance to get Young!” Clean shouts.
“Or, it could be a trap,” you say slowly.
“Why would it be a trap? They sent us a note telling us exactly how to get Young back,” he says not getting it.
“Or, they could’ve made it up to trick us in coming here!” you say starting to get annoyed.
“You mean, I won’t get my sister back?” Red says, starting to cry again.
“No, no. We’ll get her back!” you say.
“AHA! I knew it was real!” Clean exclaims.
“No! it’s a trap! I mean, it will work. I mean-” you stutter but are saved by the bell. There is a sound of a bell. But then cages fall on you and a shadowy figure.
“I see you fell for my trap!” they say. You can’t tell whether they’re a boy or a girl.
“Dang it!” RR says.
“I knew it!” Clean declares at the same time.
“Hey, guys! I found this note with a crystal! It says-oh!” Mighty says.
“All the better. I get all three! Plus JJ and Clean!” the figure says.
(Yes! I love it!!!)
~~Nameless
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The mysterious figure takes away the bottle. “Yes,I have them now! Young Flame shall never be fre-AAAAAHHHHHHHhHHH!” Suddenly,he glows in the dark. You look away and when the glowing stops,you look back and all there is are the bottles and a pile of ashes. “This kill him?!” “How?”,Super asks.Suddenly Clean takes a shovel and digs out of the cage.You follow him.
You end out of the cage and take the bottles. “Wait,look there!” You see Mighty Tornado’s bottle with a crystal being played with by a vicious rottweiler! It growls. “Now how are we supposed to get it now on Hallow’s Eve?”,you say.
(BTW,I have an idea.Let’s actually continue this storyline till October 31st.)
Suddenly a boy comes. “Oi! Victor! There you are! Come over here,boy!” Victor,the rottweiler rushes to him forgeting the bottle. “Sorry about that. Victor’s usually like that. Did he hurt you?”,the boy asks.”Er,not too much.Thanks for calling him though.” “You’re welcome,bye!” And he and Victor walk off. You take Mighty’s bottle and give it to her,and walk out.
“Now,where was the underworld entrance again?” There is silence,till Clean says,”I think it was in a stereo shop…?” Suddenly you see Super! She also holds the same bottle! “JJ! I got a bottle which-” “I know,I know,Supper (What?Grapes are tasty,you know,). We got it too.” “Okay,then.” “So where is the underworld entrance again?”
Super seems to think and look around. “Perhaps,”,she suddenly whispers,”,it is where that person over there is going to.” You look where she is pointing.You see a showed figure with wings holding a scythe in midair flying.However,no one notices him. “It’s Mr.Grim!”,you suddenly say. “Who?”,RR,MT,and CS ask. You explain everything in detail that happened in the graveyard.
“And now,if we follow him,”you say,”,we might find Back Lot’s underworld entrance!” So you all try to follow Mr.Grim without being seen.Finally,you see him enter what may be the entrance to sunless realm. He is entering…
The back lot Hollywood sign? “Why would it be there?!” Clean asks. “I knew it!” “Clean, stop shouting!” “Okay, okay geez”. You see some sort of door in the 1st “L”. Red rock begins to walk towards it, eager to get young back. “RR! Wait.
“Why? You see the entrance. We have to go in. Come on.” “It could be a trap to get us all killed? Then how would we save your sister??” RR holds back, and we begin our game plan of the underworld. How we’re going to use the crystals to change what happened at the graveyard. We’re gonna go back in time to the graveyard and keep him from killing young.
(~~Nameless
Sent from my iPhone; please let this happen?! If you continue, please?)
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(Why did you reply to me?)
I didn’t mean to sorry. It’s my cell, it’s been messing up my comments lately)
~~Nameless
Sent from my iPhone
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You use the crystals to back in time.But it is too late. Grim has already crossed out Young’s name from the list. He seems to leave the graveyard.You follow him. After some time,he stops and looks around. “You may all come out now.” You don’t know how he knows you are here,but you all come out. “Mr.Grim-” “I know what you are here for.I guessed as much you would be here.”
“You do.” “Yes.You want your sister back. And unfortunately,I cannot bring her alive again?” “Why not?!” “Because I didn’t actually kill her.” “You didn’t?! She’s still alive?” “At the moment,yes.” “But then why did you pretend to kill her?” “You see,I had orders to fake Young’s death in the underworld.She is very important in your quest,you see.” “To?” “I cannot reveal what.”
“Why not?!” “It is confidential.If you really want the news,go talk to the Pop Squad.They may not tell you about their package acquired from your fashioned friend Strange Cat,but…ah,I must not reveal too much. So anyway,I faked it with my substitute quill,of fake poison.Now I shall snap you back in your present time in Back Lot. There you may come and wake up Young in the graveyard.”
“Okay then.” “Just beware….of the creatures of the night. Vampires,especially.” He snaps his fingers,and you’re back in Back Lot. You all use the crystals to teleport to the graveyard.And wake up Young. She wakes up and for the next 2 minutes and 4 seconds,there is a drama scene in the home of the dead.
Then you all tell Young what happened. “Hmm….JJ,I think we should go question the Pop Squad. I wonder what exactly they acquired from Strange,and what was so confidential. And Grim said at the end,’Just beware….of the creatures of the night. Vampires,especially.’ Was he referring to-” Suddenly there is a loud bleat. “Master.He’s on to us!”
You all look behind and see Igor! Bruce Batfang suddenly emerges. “Bats! We must acquire these people. I must acquire their blood.” Bats suddenly fly towards you from all directions,Suddenly Zlatos and Justin come! “Hurry!”,you say. “Young,Red,and Mighty,you go on Justin. Me,Super and Clean will go on Zlatos. We’ve got to reach the Pop Squad HQ! Don’t let the bats catch up,or we’re doomed!”
So you all jump on Justin and Zlatos and they’re off. But will you escape the bats,or will you fall under the Batfangs’ mouth?
(To Be Continued!)
(Thank you for bringing me back to life!!!!)
(You’re welcome.)
(Wait a minute,I never brought you back to life! You weren’t dead in the first place!)
(You did, because before you said I was alive, I was dead…)
(I think we’re forgetting two things-
1.JJ’s Heroism Aura-This was granted to him by Poppus Tropicana when JJ was resisting Marline the witch on PT’s survival island.It makes him invulnerable to fire,poison,mind-control,and chilliness.Yet Icy Comet has frozen him once after this.
2.Icy Comet’s attitude towards JJ and the other Icy Comet-She was the Avenger-yet she froze JJ after she was unveiled and also in the graveyard. If she attacked him so much,then why has she saved him before? And whatever happened to the Icy Comet (PHB staff member) so long ago,freeing JJ from the evil Icy? She said that she wanted to explore the island and ran off,but what happened to her after that?
~SC1,2,3,4,5,7,and -2.)
(Oops,forgot one more thing-
3.The casket in PT’s Island of Survival-In the cabin at PT’s Survival Island,a locked casket on top of an empty cupboard was there.When PT granted him the Heroism Aura, one of the things she said was,”After a month.I will come and take you to your siblings and Zlato,and open the box for you.” Now JJ is back,but PT hasn’t got any contact with him.What is in the mysterious casket?)
(And one last thing-
Does E.Vile still have the Ultimate Weapon and Shield? Where are they,then?He could have used them to Whomp,Crush,Vanquish,Destroy,Decimate,Obliterate and Annihilate every Poptropican who were fighting him!)
(1. What’s PT? 2. I didn’t know Icy had an attitude, I just started LOL 3. Is IC’s attitude like a tennager attitude? 4. I have no idea what you’re talking about in 1 and 3. or your 4th… And, I didn’t have IC freeze JJ O_O And I didn’t know he was invulnerable)
(1.Poppus Tropicana,or the ‘Curious Sign-Up Box’,as Young Flame puts it.To understand this,read a little back into the story.
2,That is not what I meant.
3.Read back a Little.
4.Read way way back to understand.
Oh, and a last thing. Zlatos was originally called Zlato. What happened?
(I can never remember.)
YOU YOURSELF SAID SO. THIS LETTER.
JJ,
Poppus Tropicana the Box here.I saved you from Super for a reason.Conditions are too harsh back on Poptropica,and no one can reach you here. The tribe leaders are captured,and all of them are important people.E.Vile has officially taken over.
You must survive on your own here.This is all I can send you.For 10 Years,you should survive on this sky island until the time is ripe.I know you are impatient,but trust me,when you come back after ten years,you will see what I mean.
The ram on this island is important.When you need it most,it will come to you with a special upgrade.It’s fleece will be golden.It can heavily headbutt people with a disorienting stun,and can regenerate itself.It’s name is Zlato,by the way.
Take care,and survive.
Poppus Tropicana.
P.S.You might want to see the crate a little bit more.
(Lol,no one can remember names,so it doesn’t matter.I once mistook YF as ‘Incredible Flame.’ She mistook Clarisse as Clarrisa.Super mistook YOU for Fast FLAME.Zlato is really its official name though.)
OMG, YOU GOT ANGRYY
(No,the Lol proves that.However,you,my friend,is the one overreacting to me.)
and, I thought Fast Flame was someone else. Sorry. 😆
(Haha. I never said you were overreacting, and I never asked you to prove that you were not angry. 🙂 )
You’re riding faster than Zlatos can run… O_O Why? Then you look back, the Bats are gaining. You reach your hand into the saddle bag, and you find the bottle. **But I threw that out into the graveyard… What the?** No matter as to how it got there, it’s there. You pick it up and throw it at some of the bats. They retreat, but you continue to run. You’re approaching Spy Island, and the Headquaters as well. So close, passing Time Tangled and-
“AAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!” Young screams and you turn so fast you could catch whiplash. You try to turn Zlatos around, but he continues to go forward. You don’t see Young anymore, and you do one of the craziest things yet.
You jump.
(To be continued… And SC! I was going to make it where I could write in my part of the story that was scratched out because it had gotten stuck in moderation
anyone feel like going back in time?) (~~Nameless)
(Sorry,I don’t know what you mean.)
[conteued from massive hammer} the mysteruios girl defeats all the villans but jj fights back. then comical bird comes in and helps. bang! the walls burst open and a figre comes in. “who are you ?” says comical bird. ” i am poptropicasosship455″. ” i completed three islands and then i found that no other island suts me”. “then i found this island and the curious sign-up box told me to go there and help you”.
[ somebody please contenue]
(poptropicasosship455, .actually Massive Hammer’s post is stuck at the bottom and is not the current story. it is not supposed to be here. just skip it and proceed to super grape’s recent April 28 post.)
sorry.
( but can you help me do it?)
The bats carry you over to the Batfang’s castle in Vampire’s Curse.
Meanwhile,Justin and Mighty have managed to avoided the bats,but Red and Young have been captured! They reach the headquarters of the Pop Squad. A trap door suddenly opens beneath them,and they fall into it! The trapdoor immediately closes shut as the Pop Squad HQ’s door opens. “Hello,anyone?”,asks Silver Wolf,who opened the door.”That was Mighty Tornado.I swear I saw her!”,Smart Gamer says. “You must have been dreaming,Gamer.”,Cuddly Flame says.
Suddenly Clean and Super come riding on Zlatos.”What happened?”,Clean asks,looking droopy. “I thought I heard Mighty knocking at the door,but when I opened it,no one was there.”,Smart Gamer says. “Why are YOU so droopy,now?”,Cuddly Flame asks. “JJ jumped off Zlatos to the bats.We don’t know why.And can you tell us what was the package you acquired from Strange?” “Wait,wait,wait here,Clean Shark.”
“What?’,Super asks.”What bats?And how do you know about the secret package?”,Silver Wolf says. “Maybe we should discuss it inside.” So they go in.Clean and Super tell their tales while the Pop Squad listen to it. “Very interesting.”,Comical Bird,the leader,speaks for the first time.
“So maybe we CAN tell you about the package from Strange.”,Wild Monster says,and suddenly picks up a package and opens it. Inside is Super’s necklace! “My necklace!”,shouts Super,realizing that she hadn’t had it on for quite a while. “You see,not too long ago,you accidentally dropped this at Strange’s shop.Strange fortunately noticed it and stored it,waiting for the right moment to return it to you.”
“What’s wrong,Super?”,Clean suddenly says. Everyone notices suddenly that Super is at a loss for words. “I….I-I promised…..JJ-J that I-I wo-would never take this necklace off.” She suddenly bursts into tears. “There,there,Super.”,Clean says,tapping Super’s back gently.Even Zlatos is gently nuzzling her. “So,anyway,speaking of JJ”,Clean Shadow says,eager to change the subject,”Didn’t you say he and Young were kidnapped by vampire bats?”
Clean nods.”Well,I think we can save them.” Clean Shadow goes for a minute and comes back with a crossbow with something familiar on it. “It’s the vampire cure!” ” Exactly.We are going rid of the Batfangs and their Cultist-Igor,I assume his name was-of their eternal curse!”
(continued from Strange)
Super puts her necklace back on.
“Let’s do this thing!” Super said.
Meanwhile at the Batfang’s castle
Bruce puts you in a cage.
“I’ll be back I’m going to get my drinking straw” Bruce said.
Bruce leaves for a minute and then comes back.
Sunndenly your friends burst though the door.
“Hey vampire freak! prepare to get slayed!” Clean said.
“Igor get them!” Bruce said.
(To be continued)
(continued from myself)
“Wait a minute I just remembered I still have the weapon” Super said.
Super gets the weapon out.
Super shoots Igor with it freezing him.
“You had it this whole time!” Clean said.
“Sorry I guess I forgot” Super said.
“Never mind that Super you get JJ out of that cage meanwhile well deal with the vampire” Wild said.
(To be continued)
Super frees you while the Pop Squad chase Bruce. You and Super follow them after she frees you. Bruce gets outside the castle and turns into a bat (is this Bruce or Popular?lol) and flies up.Cuddly looks up. “He’s out of sight,but I think he’s bite us if we move outside.” Suddenly you hear a cry from the courtyard. You all rush there. You see Silver Wolf,lying on the ground.
“What happened?!” “A female…one…came…bit…me..” Bathilda,you think.You immediately take a bottle of vampire’s blood. “Drink this!” She drinks it. “Ah,thanks JJ.I’m much better now.Wait,she’s right behind you!” You immediately move just before Bathilda bites you. She hisses furiously. “Cure her!” Gamer howls. Someone’s crossbow triggers and the cure hits her. “No! I’m cured! AHHHHHHHHHHHhhhhhhhhh……” She slowly seems to disappear.
“Vampire Mistress,cured!”, Silver Wolf shouts. Suddenly a shriek come. “That’s….Popular? What’s he doing here?” You all rush to the main hall,and you see Popular being held by Igor. “I do not care if you unfroze me! I know what you want! It is not here! You shall never have it!” Popular manages to stagger onto his feet,turn into his bat form,and flies away.
“What was that all about?” “I don’t know,but one thing is clear.Igor may be more important than we thought.” Suddenly,Igor looks towards you. “You all! You may not survive here!” He stomps his hoof in fury,takes out his spectral blade,and charges.
You’re hit, but you discover you can heal yourself.
You charge at it, but he goes invisible, and you scream in fear.
A poisonous liquid enters your mouth. It has an antidote, but you do not know what it is.
You black out, and cloners are sent to clone you. Different lookalikes of you scatter.
You have amnesia, curiously looking at the world. E. Vile rises. He persuades you to be evil.
to be cont.
(Actually, his healing power is deactivated.)
(Continued from poptropicalover)
You go to Popular’s lair were you start rebuilding your dads robots.
When sunndenly someone burst through the wall!
It was Super with the weapon.
Super grabs you and runs off.
Super takes you to Dr.lange.
“Hmm looks like a case of amnesia how did you find him?” Dr.lange said.
“Well you see I sort of witnessed everything that happened and saw him go with E.vile to Popular’s lair” Super explained.
“So what are we going to do?” Super asks.
“Hmm the only way to restore his memory is for you to go inside his mind and find what’s containing his memories” Dr.lange said.
Super gets in the dream machine and is teleported inside your mind.
Dr.lange turn to her follow members,
“Make sure he does not leave until Super has completed her mission” Dr.lange said.
(to be continued)
(Wait. He was mind controlled?)
(nope. um just brainwashed cos he’s got amnesia. just saw this post so i just commented. peace sign!)
But after a while, Super sleeps, and a crate lands on the ground. you had amnesia so you forgot it was the Poppus Tropicana (slanted fish, please edit this if i’m wrong with the name!)
A letter is released, and the crate disappears. You read:
‘Jumpy Jumper,
you have to restore your memories and find the antidote in 24 hours, or else you will be permanently gone. I cannot tell you how to do it or else I will be the one who will be gone forever. JJ, please cure yourself!’
But midnight comes, and it was almost morning. The crate looks at you with deep sorrow, and chooses to sacrifice himself. He restores your memory and cures you. But after you’re cured, he disappears forever. He leaves you his Ultimate Power, which is the heart. It will help you to control anyone’s mind.
You cry all night, but suddenly a roar shook the ground.
(to be cont.)
The others are captured by an enormous cyborg while E.Vile holds your hand fiercely. He gets ready to hit you, but a mysterious, pretty, curly brown haired girl with blue pearly eyes and a cape saves you and the others.
‘Vanessa! My goodness, little daughter, why be with your evil stepbrother!’ He says.
The girl shakes her head. She yells, ‘You killed my good father and my mother! You made me feel like i was ignored! My adoptive mother was good, but she left me also! I have realized your evil ways!’E. vile is carried far away by her powerful voice. (looks so hilarious as i see him being thrown away. haha.)
she turns to you. ‘Big Hero is only my adoptive mother.’ she whispers.
You nod. However, a blue-haired, hetochromia eyed girl with silver lashes, equally pretty, nears you. ‘I’m Vaness. Her sister.’
You instantly like them, but Young Flame, still loving you even if she’s your sister, works on a secret plan to undo the family DNA between you and her using E. Vile’s Wish Machine.
(to be continued.)
(Continued from poptropicalover)
You and the others go to Hooper’s cabin.
Super wakes up from her long nap.
“Hi JJ who are those two girls?” Super said.
“This is Vanessa and Vaness” You say.
“Hi I’m Super Grape” Super said.
“Nice to meet you” Vanessa said.
Super notices that Young was acting weird.
“JJ I think we need to keep an eye on Young” Super said.
(To be continued)
Super hides behind the door as Young is curled up on the sofa. Super is fooled and thinks she’s only sick.
As Super leaves, Young puts a piece of wet cloth on the dummy, while she escapes to JJ’s room. She sees in his diary that he cannot choose between Vanessa or Vaness. He also writes that Young is not his type anymore.
Young cries and lifts up her golden sword, but the two girls come to the rescue. V1(Vanessa’s good secret agent name) holds a shiny black sword, while V2(Vaness’s good secret agent name) holds a diamond one.
They point it at Young, but JJ comes to the rescue, his feelings coming again to Young. But he is hospitalized, and paralyzed, but Young’s life depended on a single thing:her DNA with JJ. If their family ties are broken, Young will never survive.
But the Wish Machine churns and makes Young’s wish about not becoming JJ’s sister come true…
(to be cont.)
(oops, I forgot the 2nd person thingy. Slanted Fish, do you mind to fix it up? I could make a new comment again for you)
(anyway, continuation)
they are sunk into a big black hole, while you end up in a hexagon room, with five rooms on each corner and one extra room on the floor.
ROOM1- A beady, dizzying curtain door with an odd drawing on it.
ROOM2- A plain white door with green ivy draped on it.
ROOM3- A mysterious mirror door.
ROOM4- The middle door, is blank except for a small hole with an eye peeking out.
ROOM5- A futuristic door, automatic.
ROOM6- A dark black door with hints of scarlet surrounding it, and sounds of dogs barking.
ROOM ON THE FLOOR- A door on the floor saying “YOU WILL NEVER SURVIVE” scribbled in blood.
You choose the…
(to be cont.)
You take a deep sigh,boldly opening the seventh door.
Sweat was dripping from your face, your hazel eyes gazing at the door, frightened.
You decisively force it open, jumping in swiftly, with the door slamming behind you.
A spine-chilling laugh from an invisible source greets you. You shove your sword out of your pocket, ready to pick up the source’s location.
“You have been warned.” The mysterious, cold but familiar voice tells you. It’s a girl. Not Young Flame, but is one of your friends.
She walks out from the shadows, and takes her sword out. She slashes your chest with it, and you drop down, your face dripping with blood.
Your sight blurs, but you finally remember who it it. She’s only one. You figure it out all. E. Vile is not the real mastermind.
It is Vanessa, adoptive daughter of E. Vile, real mastermind. You have found some evidence lately that she really is the real one, but you cannot talk nor stand.
All you did was close your eyes and black out, maybe surviving, maybe dying.
(actually I made some backstory. I’ll reveal it soon!) (to be cont.)
(P.S. am i talking to anybody or am i the only one online?)
(Flashback) (it’s a backstory!)
You once saw a diary of E. Vile, and it had showed that E.Vile was a good man, only killed by Vanessa, his adoptive daughter, before you were even born because Vanessa was an old woman in disguise,E.Vile’s aunt who didn’t like his mother.
But E.Vile was rescued by Vaness, Vanessa’s secret twin and cloned him. She used the clone to rule Poptropica. The real E.Vile today is actually Vanessa and Vaness’s self-made clone cyborg, designed like a human who can only be destroyed by saving the real E. Vile from the torture stake, right on October 15.
And that was today. You lie on the floor gasping for breath, while Vanessa shows you the almost dead body of the real E.Vile.
But hope rises.
Your heart power is released and surrounds E.Vile. He goes strong.
But you now learn that the heart power is only released when the one using the power is dying.
…
(to be cont.) (Hey, actually, it’s such a dramatic tearjerker scene in my imagination. Can’t help it! but pleeaase find a way to make JJ live without being too repetitve or removing the drama. Pleasssee. 😀 )
meanwhile, the others are saved from the black hole and argue and think that young flame did it. young flame is now cured, because she destroyed the wish machine. but everyone doesn’t know what’s happening to you.
Young Flame shouts, “WHY ALWAYS ME!?!?!?” and shoots out fire balls accidentally at strange.
Strange is furious and fires dirtballs, sand waves, and big rock tornadoes at Young. Clean tries to stop them by making huge wind cyclones, while the others get new arguments and create floods.
The tribes also fight, and it became a huge problem all over Poptropica. All of JJ’s friends are imprisoned, then that’s only when they realize that they’re wrong and that you’re in danger. They help each other to escape and they save you just in time.
But you were taken to the hospital while V1 and V2 were already dead.
But you are still in a coma for 150 years…
and it’s now year 2266.
You wake up, while all of your friends are super old but everything goes back to normal after you all enter a time machine.
But everything has changed unexpectedly in a good way.
the real E.Vile is now ruling over Poptropica!
but sooner or later, YOU will have a very serious problem…
you will be falsely blamed as a traitor.
(to be cont. anyone, please..)
(lol actually the “elements fight” was from strange’s and young’s comments on the endless fire vs. earth cycle. haha.) 😦 (am i even talking to someone?)
(You’re talking to me. I was busy for a while, so that’s why I haven’t been on. And, lol)
(Continued from Poptropicalover)
All of you go back to Hopper’s cabin.
Super comes in crying.
“What’s wrong?” Strange said.
“It’s terrible my necklace was stolen! and I know who took it!” Super said.
Super bounces on you.
“Give it back JJ!” Super shouts.
“What? why would I want with your necklace?” You say.
“Oh don’t play dumb I saw you take it!” Super shouts
“I don’t know what your talking about” You say.
Super reaches into your pocket and gets out her necklace!
“What! I sewer I have no idea how that got in there!” You say.
“Traitor! you stole it when I wasn’t looking, and you were planning to sale it to the red raccoon!” Super said.
The cops come in.
“Jumpy jumper your under arrest!” the cops said.
The cops take you away.
Super rubs the necklace
“My precious!” Super said.
(to be continued)
(Remember,there is no reason to call Dr.Cumulo Nimbus ‘Red Raccoon’ anymore,now that he is exposed.)
You go back to the scene of the fight. There is one body that lies there. (No, I don’t know why it didn’t decay yet). You go over and look at the face. It’s Bronze Comet! You remember in your dreams how much she longed to save you, even though you barely knew her. You never found out why she so longed to save you, you just know she isn’t with you anymore. You look over and see two doors. Each door has something wonderful in it. One has the choice to bring Bronze back to life, but with a terrible price. The other has something almost better, but it also has a price. You try to find out what each thing is before you choose which door. The things you come up with are…
But you can’t think of it properly,so you choose the second door. There is a genie lamp.You rub it,and a Jinn comes out. He says,”What is your wish?” You wish that everything would go back to normal,and E.Vile becomes good again,and Bronze coming back,and so on. “You will have to pay a price for that,Jumper.”,he says. You say that you will give anything for that to happen.
“Very well,”,the Jinn says,”,for you wish to come true,you will have to give me your head,Jumper.”
You stutter,not knowing what to do. How can you give your life to this genie,even if it means saving your friends? Then you realize that there is a loophole in this-the Jinn only asked for you head. You immediately know what to do.
(Continued from strange)
You give the genie a fake dummy head and hide your real head behind your back.
The genie grants your wish.
You teleport to strange’s shop.
You put your head back on.
You see that Super is in the shop.
Super whispers something into Strange’s ear.
Strange gives her a box.
Super leaves.
“What did she ask for?” You say.
“Your not going to believe this but she asked for a…..
(To be continued)
“She asked for a knife,JJ,what could that mean?” You think a bit. Then you hit on the truth,and run to Super.
(Continued from Strange)
“Super stop!, what do you think your doing?” You say.
“What has to be done” Super replies.
Super opens the package and gets out the knife.
“I’m tired of this E.vile thing and I’m going to put an end to it!” Super said.
Super pushes you out of the way.
But you stand in her way.
“Super it’s okay E.vile is good now so drop the knife” You say.
“What do you mean?” Super said.
You explain everything.
Super drops the knife.
“Let’s go get a smoothie” You say.
(To be continued)
So you two go to Early Poptropica and there in the Soda Pop Shop you seem to see a guy hiding in the shadows. Whenever you come to him,he disappears. You two have a smoothie and go out.There,a Poptropican comes. He seems to be gaping at something in his. “Amazing! Autological!Astonishing!” “Uh…sir…what are you gaping at?”
“Ah,young man. I am a historian,and I got this at an auction.Behold! A lost page of the Necronominon!” “Uh….a Necro-what?” “This is a page of the Necronomicon! A page of the so-called fictional grimoire appearing in the stories by horror writer H. P. Lovecraft and his followers!” “If it’s a fictional horror book,then how-” “I do not know how,but I got it in an auction that I was invited to in a secret area!”
“Oh.Uh,what does it say?” “Lovecraft created an account of the Old Ones,things rumoured to have lived before man,and even how to summon them!” “Summon?” “I do not believe in witchcraft,but unfortunately,some evil ones do. Necromancers are rumoured to be hiding in the city! And for your information,Necromancers have control to the mysteries of death,though few believe in them.”
Suddenly the place seems to turn darker. “What the-” “Do not utter a word,old man. Hand us the page.” You look and see two figures dressed in dark robes,holding a knife that bears a resemblance to the spectral blade Igor tried to kill Young with once,and wearing a skull. “Ne-Nec-Necro-Necromancers!”,Super whispers hoarsely. “Indeed.”,the other one says.”Do you really think we were foolish legends?
“Now give us the page.We must resummon the Old Ones!” “Never!”,the historian shouts. “So be it.”,the first one says. His voice seems familiar. They seem to concentrate,and suddenly skeletons sprout! “That page shall be ours!”,shouts the other Necromancer. You see suddenly that the bones of the skeleton are rattling. Suddenly you grab out one of his bones on the legs,and he falls down,as his bones separate.
The two Necromancers growl angrily. One of them runs towards the historians and tries to grab the page,but he only tears half of it. Suddenly everything turns black,and when it’s bright again,the Necromancers are gone. “Scandalous! It’s witchcraft!”,shouts the historian,and faints. You call the hospital and they take him there. You notice something is wrong with Super.You ask her what’s wrong.
“JJ,for just a moment,I could see their faces.” “Who were they?” “One….one was the shadowy guy back in the Soda Pop Shop…and….JJ,the second one was Igor!” You gasp and your bones shiver. You look behind yourself,as if the were-ram-necromancer-vampire-cultist is still there.
(continued from strange)
“Wait they only toke half of the page” Super said.
“Your right let’s go to the hospital” You say.
You and Super go to the hospital.
“How’s he doing?” You say.
“He’s doing fine ,you can see him” The doctor said.
You go into the historians room.
The historian gives you the other half of the paper.
“Take it to Doris, he’s a friend of mine he lives on game-” was all the historian said before he blocked out again.
You look behind you and see the shadow guy from the soda pop.
“Run!” Super said.
(To be continued)
You make it to the blimp just before the shadowy necromancer reaches you,and you fly. “But where do we go? The historian said that Doris lives on game-and then he blacked out.” “JJ,isn’t it obvious? He wanted to say- Game Show Island!” “Oh,you’re right.” So you fly there,and since Holmes is good now,all the robots are too,and everything is normal again.
You ask someone,” Does a Mr.Doris live around this place?” “There are 3 different Dorises. One lives on a cottage up in the hills. One lives around here in the apartments. Don’t know what he does,but very noisy sometimes. And the last one is the owner of the Club Boveau Riche over there. Don’t know where he lives,but he’s very quiet.”
“Thank you.” You turn to Super. “Which one of these do you think would be the right Doris?” “The best bet is probably…”
(Continued from strange)
“The one who lives in the apartment” Super said.
So you and Super go to the apartment place.
“Excuse me what room is Doris in?” You ask.
“Room 66” The Clark said.
So you go to room 66.
You knock on the door.
A guy answers it.
“Your historian friend sent us” You say.
“Oh yes Sidney, why didn’t you say so? Come in” Doris said.
You go into the room.
(To be continued)
Meanwhile,real far away,in another island…
“Any good news,Bruce?” “Why do you ask this?” “Because you must,else you shall die.” “What do you mean–hey,put down that gun!”
(continued from strange)
The guy holding the gun grins.
“That was a warning” the guy said.
Meanwhile on Game show island.
“So why have you come to see me?” Doris said.
“Well you see Sidney told us to give you this” you say.
You give him the other half of the turn up page.
Doris looks at it for a minute,
“Well this talks about the Necronominon” Doris said.
“”Any idea why he told us to give it to you?” Super asked.
(To be continued)
“No,sorry.” But back in a hidden place at Vampire’s Curse…
(Continued from Strange)
Igor and the shadowy guy had kidnapped the historian for questioning.
“Alright where did those two kids you saw go ?” Igor said.
“I won’t tell you and there’s no way your going to make me” Sidney said.
The shadowy guy gets out a gun.
“Tell us or you die!” The shadowy guy said.
“Alright! they went to game show island to see a friend of mine he lives in room 66 at the apartment place!” Sidney said.
They let the historian go.
Meanwhile You and Super say goodbye but just as your about to leave the lights deem.
“Oh great not again!” Super said.
Igor and The shadowy guy appear.
“Give us that pice of paper you have!” Igor said to Doris.
Super quickly gets the paper.
“You’ll have to catch us first!” Super said.
You and Super start running.
(To be continued)
But back below the Pop Squad HQ,Mighty and Justin have been held prisoners for days by a mysterious figure. Justin is in a separate room,but he has secretly escaped when no one was watching. No one knows that though. Mighty unfortunately is in a worse situation. Her room is covered surrounded by lava. Occasionally a trap door opens above her and and drops her some food. She doesn’t know why she is being held.
Her room only has the lava,a spoon for her to eat her food with,a bed,and a miniature bathroom. But she soon found out a way to escape. It was very easy.
But back at Game Show, you and Super hold on to the blimp. However,the page falls.Super fortunately manages to tear just one letter out of the page,before the shadowy guy gets in and hides it. The shadowy guy looks at the page. “One letter! *%&@(%&^(#*! (Necromancer swear words best not used) It isn’t fair! For the most important part too@ It must have blown away!”
But you and Super jump into the blimp and fly off. “What was the letter,Super?” Super takes out the word. “Q.” “Great. That makes it even harder.”
(Continued from strange)
“So what do we do now?” Super said.
You shrug.
“We cloud go to this Halloween party I was invited to” Super said.
Super shows you the invitation.
“Okay but well have to get costumes” You say.
So you go to Strange’s shop.
You get a vampire costume.
Super gets a witch costume.
“So where exactly is this party Super?” You say.
“It’s on-
(To be continued)
cloud?
Something- or someone comes and grabs Super.
“No!!” you shout.
You run after the mysterious figure, but your vampire cape gets caught on a branch.
“Good that I have clothes under my costume.” you mutter. You rip of the costume and look at your clothes. “Heh.” you run after the figure, but it’s gone. But you hear Super’s voice faraway to the west. You run that way.
(Continued from fast fire)
You come across an abandoned building.
You go inside.
You saw that Super was talking to the mysterious figure who was in a clock.
“Just who the heck are you?” Super asked.
The mysterious figure pulls down their hood to reveal Popular!
Super looked in shock.
“Wait a second I thought you worked for E.vile!” Super said.
“I did but somehow he turned good and I quit I work for someone else now” Popular explains.
“Who?” Super asked.
“That’s one secret I’ll never tell!” Popular said.
“Not so fast!” You say.
“Uh, JJ I was hoping you would show up” Popular says with a grin.
“Why?” “So that I can kill you!” A trapdoor opens beneath you and you fall in it.
“YOLO!” you say, and start hitting Popular with an old, rusty rod near his feet.
“YAAGH!” Popular says. He takes out a blaster and shoots at you, but another person electrifies him. “I shot first!” the person says.
(This guy is NOT associated with me, or Starwars. He’s just a Starwars fanatic, who I hope, will become an Important character.)
“Helloo!” he says. “Sneaky Paw at your service!”
“What do you want?” Super asks.
“Well, some gratitude. I did save you there” he replies as .he electrifies Popular again.
“Well, Thank You.” you say.
“You’re welcome. Can I come with you?” he asks.
“Why, yes.” you and Super say.
(continued from fast flame)
“So Super you were saying about that Halloween party?” You ask.
“Oh yeah I was just about to say that it was on ghost story island” Super said.
“Great but I lost my costume” You say.
“You can broow my vampire costume” Sneaky said.
You put the vampire costume on.
Sneaky gets a werewolf costume on.
You, Super and Sneaky go to ghost story island.
You go into the common room.
“JJ, Super so glad you cloud make it, nice costumes by the way” Clean said.
“Let’s get this party started!” Strange said.
(To be continued)
(who’s fast flame?)
(Sorry about that It’s just flame and fire is kind of the same thing so sorry)
(Eh, issokay.) =)
(Continued from myself)
You and Super are having a good time when sunndenly the lights go out!
A moment later the lights come back on.
Everyone was gone.
Igor and the shadow guy appear.
“Great you two again” You say.
The shadow guy grabs Super.
Igor mutters something.
The lights go out again.
When they come back on Everyone was back.
But Igor and the shadow guy were gone along with Super.
(To be continued)
Meanwhile,back at the abandoned building,Popular wakes up. A mysterious shadow comes. “Master…” “Why did you fail me,Popular? I asked you to a simple thing-kill Jumper and Grape.” “Sneaky Paw was there,master.” “Him? Not him again!He’s foiled my plans once too much!” “What about Mighty Tornado and the dog,master?” “The dog unfortunately has escaped. Tornado however is still there.I checked before I left.”
However,back in Mighty’s cell. She has already escaped by…
(LOL,1234th Comment is now made!)
(What has happened to Young,Poptropicalover,Nameless Undefined,and Clean?)
(I don’t know, and sorry.)
(Sorry, you guys started writing stuff that I didn’t understand so I thought better if I don’t mess up the story…)
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(What didn’t you understand?)
(Read Sorry Guys to see why I’ve been absent)
(*random guy reads the words ‘Sorry Guys’*
Guy:What do you mean,sorry guys! That’s it? No reason?!
You really should’ve given them the link. Not everyone knows about PAWesomeness,you know.)
(True, true, Link= http://poptropicanawesomeness.wordpress.com/2013/10/26/sorry-guys/ )
“Go, get Sneaky Paw, and this time, do NOT fail!” the mysterious master 😆 says.
“Yes, master.” Popular replies.
(back at the disturbed party..)
“Who was that?” Sneaky says. “And where is Super?
“Igor and.. the ‘Shadowy Guy’, you say.
“Who’s Igor? and the Shadowy Guy?”
“Here, take this book.” you say, and toss the Ongoing Story Book to him.
“Okay. But what do we do now?”
“We could save Super.”
“But why did they want her?”
“Wait.. She had the paper!” you exclaim. “They wanted the paper, not her!”
“Wait.” Sneaky flips through the book. “Ah, I see.”
Just a second later, Popular bursts in!
“GIVE ME SNEAKY-”
“You know you won’t get him, Popular.” you say.
“My electrobolt!” Sneaky suddenly exclaims.
Popular smirks.
“You’re all coming with me. All of you.” he says, taking out the blaster.
“Save it ,Popular.” Strange says. “Never underestimate the power of JJ.”
You wham Popular on the side of his head (ouch!) and pin him to the ground.
(Continued from fast fire)
You switch popular off because he’s part robot.
“Come on we need to rescue super” You say.
“But we don’t know where they took her” Strange said.
“Guys super is writing right now” Sneaky said.
You look and see he’s right.
Meanwhile at vampire’s curse….
Igor throws Super into a cage.
Igor had the last letter in his hand.
“My friends will come for me and then you’ll be sorry!” Super said.
(To be continued)
The shadowy figure that Popular works for comes and switches him on again. “Go to Vampire’s Curse. I have a task for you there.” They teleport to Vampire’s Curse. “Ah,there you are,friend”,Igor says. “I have gotten the last letter. It’s Q! And this is your new…” He frowns when he sees Popular. “I thought you had a better taste of assistants than HIM,friend!”
“Oh,he will be useful for us,brother,you will see.” Suddenly you all burst in. “Give us Super back!”
(So yeah,the guy who Popular works for now is that shadowy necromancer. And he and Igor are brothers.)
(Continued from Strange)
“Ah! I told you they would come your going to get your bad guy butts kicked!” Super says smiling.
“Don’t be so sure about that Grape” The shadow figure says grinning.
The shadow figure turns to Popular.
“Popular destroy them!” The shadow figure said.
“Yes, master” Popular said.
(To be continued)
Meanwhile at E.Vile’s mansion…
A cloaked girl sneaks inside, hiding from E.Vile. She grabs a gold necklace, which is E.Vile’s necklace of powers.
Once outside, she removes her cloak, revealing her to be…
Big Hero’s youngest daughter of all, Prickly Starfish.
She has to get that necklace to control E.Vile’s powers and make him evil again,to destroy the mysterious cape master, who is her father and Big Hero’s other husband. She has rebelled against her father because he divorced Big Hero. Prickly, though, has to make E.Vile bad forever because if he becomes good again, the cape will regenerate, who is actually Bionic/Avenger/cape.
Meanwhile, she first has to save JJ and his friends, which she succeeds in. Next, they all go to Poptropolis, which is the location of E.Vile.
She makes E.Vile evil, then they scamper away to Prickly’s house. They all sleep there. JJ and Prickly fall in love.
“JJ, take care of this necklace for me. I can only live up to one year.” Prickly cries.
“Why?” JJ asks.
“My disease is terrible. This is my last day. At exactly 12:00, I will disappear forever. Good bye, JJ.”(let’s pretend it’s already december 31.) She hugs JJ, then it becomes 12. “Goodbye,” Prickly disappears.
JJ cries so much, then looks at the golden necklace. “I love you, Prickly…”
(How many sisters does JJ has to fall in love with? )
(Also,you commit a common fallacy. You are supposed to write in 2nd person,and in JJ’s perspective.)
(hey, what about this!? maybe one of us can make this story for the Dream Island Contest and include everyone in it! um, is it a good idea? if yes, i just recommend the one who should submit it is Slanted Fish, IF IT’S POSSIBLE…well, just a suggestion…*feels awkward and clumsy.*)
(Slanted Fish: I’m not eligible for the Dream Island contest, but another contributor to the story can submit it if they want!)
(Hey,don’t look at me either! You’re best bet is Young Flame here!)
(Hm, i’m not in the US or Columbia, so who?? *thinks hard, then lightbulb lights up.* Is young flame living in one of those countries!? *excited* i decided to stay, actually. minor comp. issues.)
(Too late, but I wasn’t eligible either. Sorry.)
(I just realized the irony.
No one has actually said anything about the actual ‘Island X’ in a long time. But here’s my part.)
Back at Vampire’s Curse,Prickly has beaten Popular and Igor and the shadowy guy. The shadowy guy wakes up and wakes Igor and Popular up. “This has gone too far! Enough with Sneaky Paw and silly random heroines from nowhere! We are going to take this like real necromancers,Igor!” “Brother,do you mean-” “Yes,we are going to summon legions of the undead!”
“An undead army,master?”,Popular says,still feeling a little woozy. “Yes! Generals,foot soldiers,sergeants,archers,pyromancers (one who can control fire.example:Young Flame),brutes (big guys with big weapons),spear-men,imperial captains,all from the dead!” Igor gives out a shrill cry. There,legions of the undead are there,some zombies,some skeletons.
“Legions!”,the shadowy guy shouts.”We have a command before you. This is your duty after death!” “Duty after death,”,the army moan together. “Your command,”,shouts Igor,”Is to give us blood!” The blood of Jumpy Jumper! Do not fail us,else you shall fall back into the Underworld. If you succeed,we shall give you life!” The army cheers,and they go out to find you.
(Brutes?) 😆 (FAT BRUTES) 😆
(continued from strange)
Meanwhile You and your friends go to Super’s house.
You all decide to rest for a few minutes.
But before you can fell asleep you hear Super talking in her sleep.
You wake her up.
“Their coming, JJ we need to get out of hare” Super says.
“Who’s coming?” You ask.
Suddenly the undead army bursts in.
Super gives you the weapon.
You get ready to fight the undead army.
(To be continued)
(gosh, it’s a suuperrr great story! i’d love to join it!!! here’s mine! =)
Meanwhile, Vanessa stares at Blue Octopus. “How does he know you?”
Blue Octopus lies, saying:”He only knows me because I battled with him before!”
Vanessa is convinced, while Blue winks at you without V looking.
Vanessa was about to slash you with a sword, but she trips and rolls down the hill. The others surrender.
Blue is left while the others run away. “Are you ok?’ he asks you, and takes you to his house.
“yeah..” you ask him, “what are you here for, exactly?”
he swallows. “I’m here as a secret agent for you, a spy for e.vile. but i secretly turned traitor on him.” he mutters.
Then you sleep there (because your house is wrecked, of course.) , but you feel being dragged away, then you open your eyes.
everyone in the room is arguing, then they see you.
Prickly jumps in front of you. “I thought you were kind and good!” She furiously slapped you. “But you would actually..” She breaks down. “Blue Octopus…Blue…”
You’re puzzled. “What about him?”
She looks at you in intense fury, and shows Blue’s cape dripping with blood.
You gasp. “Where is he?”
She cries angrily. “In e.vile’s lair! and your fingerprints are on this cape! He’s really injured, he’s tortured there!”
“I didn’t do it!” You exclaim.
Everyone looks at you like you’re lying a big lie. But only one is looking at you like you’re the kindest person on earth, and knows who hurt Blue.. But you don’t know him.
He goes beside you in front of them. He’s very familiar, smoking a pipe, slightly forty-five years old, and acts eccentric. Suddenly it hits you.
Sherllacck Halmmes, the famous detective.
(well, in case it’s not allowed, i changed Sherlock’s name. hope you liked my part!)
(No offense,but your post has a lot of mistakes,and it raises a question who you’re continuing from.One,I don’t remember a Blue Octopus in this story. Two,Vanessa and Vaness are dead.And three,who are the others?
Please understand the story a little bit more and then continue. It’s hard not to make mistakes,but you can proof read a few posts before actually posting it. And please tell who you’re continuing from.)
(sorry about that. i stand corrected. sorry if i made some readers here confused. i apologize and promise to understand it more. sorry!)
You freeze an archer and destroy him. You freeze a foot soldier,but then a pyromancer comes. He unfreezes the soldier. Flames surround you. However you realize something. You have the Heroism Aura. You are invulnerable to fire,poison,mind-control,and chilliness.So you simply jump out of the flames. The flames surround your body,but it doesn’t burn.
However,Super doesn’t know about this and when she sees you she screams and faints, You immediately take her to the bed and put her there,then you go back. The archers start to barrage you constantly. However you seem to be slightly armoured,along with the immunities. So you shoot them with the weapon and they all fall. You continue fighting,and soon only you and a pyromancer remain.
You realize you have to destroy him. Then you get an idea and freeze him. He perishes too.Then the two necromancers arrive. “Ah,JJ. Finished slaughtering the army of the dead?” “Everyone else in the battlefield.” “Not everyone. You haven’t met the captain of the army yet,have you?” He waves his hand. Suddenly a figure appears. He seems very misty,you can only see his eyes. His body,however,seems to be wrapped in something.
Then you hit on the truth. “Ah,figured it out,JJ?”,Igor says. “Oh,yes,you’re right,of course.”,the shadowy guy says. “The Mummy Returns.”
(Continued from strange)
Not panicking you fight the mummy for what seems like hours.
Finally you defeat the mummy.
You frezz Igor and Popular.
But the shadowy guy runs off.
Super wakes up.
“I see your still wearing that necklace” You say.
Super smiles.
“Let’s get out of hare before something else happens” Super said.
(To be continued)
Somehow, you guys get separated. While you are trying to find Super, you hear a voice that you think is hers. It leads you into a cave. You find a girl, but its not Super. She’s trapped and you free her.
“Thank you. My name is Rough Lion, but most people call me Nameless Undefined. And you must be…”
“JJ,” you reply. You can’t take your eyes off of her, but you don’t know weather you like her or hate her.
Meanwhile, back with Super…..
“Young, Red, Mighty what are you doing here?” Super asks.
“We came to save you. JJ told us that you were in trouble,” Mighty says (BTW, when she was introduced, she was 9, now she’s 13. Do the math).
“But I don’t need saving!!!” Super complains. Just as she says that, a splash potion a poison splashes on her. She falls to the ground. She’s not dead yet, but she’s close.
“No!!” Mighty screams. She runs to Super and chants in some weird language. Super sits up, but Mighty falls to the ground, lifeless.
“NO!” the three remaining girls scream together.
Super starts to recreate the chant, but her two sisters shove her out of the way. They say the chant, but instead of revivng the girl, they recieve the same fate. They all die. Super just cries.
(I have a reason for killing myself. Just react as you normally would, and I’ll see what happens)
(continued from young flame)
You are led by Rough Lion to a secret place, and she asks you some questions.
“Who are your parents?” Rough Lion asks.
“E.Vile and Big Hero.” You grudgingly answer.
Rough Lion is puzzled. “E.Vile!?” You nod.
“Gosh, are you really a hero or not? Actually I remember just yesterday, I heard the bad JJ, son of E.Vile, came to attack my fellow neighbors. I survived. He looks exactly like you.” She remarks.
Your jaw drops. “Clone…” you mumble.
“Clone? You’re cloned?” Rough asks. But she’s way suspicious. “That’s most villains’ excuses..” She shows a golden sword. “From the evil JJ, a golden sword. And a long lost necklace of mine…” She shows the GOLDEN NECKLACE!
“That’s Prickly Starfish’s necklace!” You grab it.
“I knew it! You’re a robber!” She gasps.
You shout, “I’ve had ENOUGH!” You break the necklace into pieces. “From now on, I’ll destroy this!”
She gasps, breaking down. “That’s my mother’s necklace…Big Hero’s necklace..”
“I DONT CARE!!!” you accidentally yells. He gasps, but then police suddenly chase you as soon as you get out.
(to be cont.)
(Woah woah woah… Everyone knows that rough lion is dead… She doesn’t exist anymore… She’s just a character in apt……. What the heck¿)
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(cont. from ThePoptropicaFanficStoryteller)
But because of your power of speed, you hide safely in the bushes, and taking your cape off, putting it in the opposite way to mislead the police.
After a few minutes, you slowly run away to the forest.
Suddenly something hits you. Prickly gave that necklace to you, but you lost it and it’s with e.vile. So how did Rough get it?
Then you notice a paper in your pocket. It read:
“Dearest Daughter,
I shall be waiting for you outside the gate, but make sure you are in a red cloak, and put this note away. I’ll give you something very important to me, a golden necklace. Rough Lion, take care of it. Please, never allow Prickly Starfish, Young Flame, or Jumpy Jumper to have it.
Your mom Big Hero”
You gasp in horror. Just then, the police surround you…
(to be cont.)
The police take you to jail. However,you have an idea,and you take out your Ongoing Story book,you flip through the pages and suddenly see a part of the story.
“JJ!Hopper!There you are.But who’s this boy?” You tell her about what Young told you. Super gasps.She turns to Lucky.”Why didn’t Young tell us about you earlier?And is anyone else in the family?” His eyes gleam. “Yes,there are two more children.One is my twin sister,Rough Lion,or as she likes to call herself,Nameless Undefined.Currently she is elsewhere in Spy Island.”
You gasp and start writing for help telling what happened along the way.
Meanwhile,in Hopper’s cabin,Hopper takes out his Ongoing Story book to see what he’s missed. Then he sees what you’re writing,and gasps. He goes out and informs the others.
(Continued from Strange)
Hopper tells everyone including Super what happened.
”So let me get this straight someone made an evil clone of JJ?” Super said.
Hopper nods.
“The plan is to capture the evil clone and prove JJ innocent” Hopper said.
“How are we going to catch this evil clone?” Strange said.
“Simple bait” Hopper said.
Everyone looks at Super.
“Why is everyone looking at me?” Super said.
Meanwhile You make another mark on the prison wall.
You wonder how your friends are doing.
(To be continued)
(I’ll continue in a minute, I just want everyone to know that Rough Lion / Nameless UnDEFiNed, she can control some dead… Kinda like Nico in book three of Precy Jackson, but a little more confident looking…)
You fell asleep, though you don’t know how long you’ve been out. This, causing your marks on the wall to mean nothing, as far as time goes. You walk aruond your prison for a moment, in the tiny space you have. Out of nowhere, a skeleton breaks your door down, and then it collapses, disappearing into the ground.
A gothic girl walks up, and she just stands there looking at you for a minute until you reailze you’re drooling. **GIANT THUD!** She grabs your arm and you try to keep up as you run away. You begin to look behind you to see why you’re running so fast, but the girl knows what you’re thinking. “Don’t look back! If you do, it’s hopeless. You’ll be too scared to keep moving, and then we’ll both be stuck down here,” she says. After a few minutes, you and this girl slow down.
You hear a bleat, none other than Zlato’s. Then you see him running towards you. The girl stops, and stands there, again just looking at you until you realize: you’ve yet to let go of her hand… You let go, and see some of your friends. “I have to go. Look, tell them it was ‘The Extraction’ from the Rejection Squad… They’ll know what you mean, and remember to look out for bones and ice soon.” The girl runs away, her Silver Star Necklace flailing and getting tangled in her hair. Super hugs you, and you just continue to stare into the distance, in the direction of the girl, wondering who she was…
(BTW I’m continued from Super… Sorry, I forgot to include that part…)
So you go back to Super’s house.
Meanwhile,back at the now evil E.Vile’s lair…
Dr.Cumulonimbus welcomes E.Vile back. “So,Nimbo,what happened while I was away.?” “Sir,when you were good,Popular left and joined someone else.”
(Continued from Strange)
“Well let’s go look for him then and see if we can convince him to come back” E.vile said.
“Yes, sir” Dr. Cumulonimbus said.
They go looking for Popular.
Meanwhile You and Super were looking at your photo album.
Clean comes in with ice cream in his left hand.
“JJ I got good news and bad news” Clean said.
“What’s the good news?” You ask.
“I got free ice cream!” Clean said.
“Okay then what’s the bad news?” You ask.
“Well it took a while but I have confirmed the rumor that E.vile is back!” Clean said.
You stare in disbelief.
Strange comes in and says “Dun! Dun! Dun!” and then disappears.
(To be continued)
(Continued from myself)
Meanwhile E.vile and Dr . Cumulonimbus find Popular and unfreeze him.
The shadow figure appears.
“Hold it he works for me now” The shadow figure said.
E.vile brings Bionic out.
“How about a trade?” E.vile said.
The shadow figure looks at bionic for a minute.
“Deal” The Shadow figure said.
They trade.
“Now Popular destroy Jumper and Grape” E.vile said.
“Yes, master” Popular said.
(To be continued)
You hear a thud on the door. Then another thud. And another. You open the door, and who should it be, but Popular himself!
“NOW you’re going to die.” he says.
Super comes out and sees Popular.
“Yipe.” she says.
You suddenly hear a huge yell and then a WHAM. Popular is on the floor, knocked out.
“What?” you say.
“Haha, what do you think would happen if a rock hit you at high speed?” Strange jumps from the roof.
“You would die?”
“Exactly.”
“So Popular’s dead?”
“Well, no. Not exactly. But he has to go to a hospital.” Clean appears.
“Oh, so we should take him to the hospital, right?” Super sympathetically says.
“Eh- no.” Sneaky Paw says.
“Why n-” “E.Vile is evil now and Popular works for him and Hopper is with the Necromancer!” Sneaky, Strange and Clean exclaim.
“WHAT?!” you shout.
“I don’t think we SHOULD take Popular now.” Super says.
“How about we tie him up?” Strange suggests.
“With this nylon rope?” Clean holds up a rope.
“With these chains.” you smirk.
“Wow. Popular is not going anywhere with that blaster NOT in his belt.” Sneaky removes the weapon (not THE ULTIMATE WEAPON, the BLASTER.) from the belt and keeps it on a shelf.
Meanwhile, at E.Vile’s lair…
I think the ultimate weapon needs an upgrade!
“I hope Popular is doing good.”,E.Vile says. “Else I would have traded Bionic Hopper (actually the robot version of Little Hopper,not really him) for nothing.” But back in Game Show Island…
(Lol,the way everyone’s treating Popular now,it’s as if they’ve forgotten that he’s my cousin (and I don’t mean just in the story).)
(Can you explain to me my poptropican’s character?)
~~Nameless
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(Er,sorry? She hasn’t had enough character development yet for her yet.)
(Okay, thanks for letting me know she’s at least knew 😀 )
(Okay. Anyway,my part is out now!)
(um, she has a bit. she’s Big Hero’s second youngest daughter, and the gold necklace is given to her, but is destroyed.I think she will probably get some spotlight soon.)
( oh… I dk who big hero is tho)
~~Nameless
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(Big Hero is YF’S RR’S MT’S JJ’S LS’, and, like, 20 other kid’s mother. She’s an account of mine, but I forgot the password O_O)
JJ’s mom. and mother of young, super, lucky snowball, rough lion, prickly starfish..lots more.
(How cab my Poptropican be the mother plenty if you listed her amongst the children?)
~~Nameless
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(And just so everyone knows, CS didn’t use my e-mail. She’s using an old email address of mine for her account, and I forgot that it was still on my cell, I accidentally replied from that. CS didn’t takemy phone either )
(Continued from strange)
The shadowy necromancer along with Igor and Bionic tape the pieces of the page together.
“Now brother let’s say the spell to summon the old ones” The shadow figure said.
But just as their about to say the spell Sidney the historian bursts in.
“Stop! I won’t let you get away with this!” Sidney said,
“Bionic seize him!” The shadow figure said.
“Yes, master” Bionic said.
(To be continued)
“OH MY GOD, SIDNEY IS TRYING TO STOP THE NECROMANCERS FROM SUMMONING THE OLD ONES!” Clean suddenly exclaims. “How do you know?” Strange says. “Come ON, I have the power of wind!” Clean replies. “So what?” “LET’S JUST GO AND HELP SIDNEY!”
“Wait.” you say. “How do you guys know SIDNEY?”
“The Ongoing Story book.” Strange says. “Oh, then I understand.”
“Can we go?” Super says uneasily. “Yes, since I found my Electro bolt.” Sneaky say.
“Let’s go. yeah.”
(I have a comment in moderation,so please don’t continue yet.”
(Are you SURE you have a comment in moderation? I’m waiting.)
(Yes. I’ll repost it if it doesn’t come.)
(Okay. I’ll wait. This is worse than waiting for Thinknoodles’ livestream. No offense.)
(Can you repost it now, Strange Cat?)
(The first part of the comment is released,but the second is in moderation. Please wait.)
(OMG guys the comment came! U can continue now.)
(How old is JJ? He was nine. Then his birthday came. He was 10. Then on the sky island where he discovered Zlato, he was 20. (10+10=20) Then he was in a coma for 150 years. He was 160. Then he went through the time machine. Now how old is he?)
(I think he’s back to 10 now.)
(YESOMGHE’S20YAY!)
(??)
(lol. i meant 10.)
You all go to Game Show Island and to where the Necromancers are. “Stop right there!” “Bionic,take care of the nuisance! We don’t have time for this!” Bionic comes,but you shoot him and he explodes. But then Igor is also starting to say the spell,but Sneaky electrocutes him. “Master! Help us succumb this petty nuisance!”,the shadowy guy shouts to the sky.
You snort. “Who’s your master,shadowy guy? Grim Reaper?” “Of course,I am,JJ. I control them. They have the power to rise up the dead,but they have to take my permission,won’t they?” “Grim? What is this?”,Super asks. “Ah,I would love to see the Old Ones rise again-” “Stop this!”,shouts Clean. “You trickster! You fraud!” “Clean,what-” “JJ,don’t you understand?”
“Understand what?” Clean sighs.
(um, who were talking to each other? JJ and Clean? and was Clean saying “Understand what?” and sighed after saying it? Or was JJ saying that and Clean sighed after he talked? sorry if i can’t understand!)
(Second one.)
(BTW here’s the second part:)
“Okay,Thanatos is pretty decent,since he’s the god of peaceful death. Anubis is okay. But Grim-Grim is different. The foreboding specter knows no compassion,no pity,no hope. He swallows souls for supper,and drinks despair for dinner. He’s tricked you,JJ. Everything he said in the graveyard were lies. And since he is death itself,in it’s worst form,he is immune to everything-”
“And now,”,Grim finishes,”I shall dispose of you. His scythe seems to glow,and with a piercing scream,he heads towards you.
(ohhh. thanks!)
(so you mean clean sighed after talking?)
(It’s like this. Jumpy-Understand what? Clean- *Sighs*
“Okay,Thanatos is pretty decent,since he’s the god of peaceful death.But Grim is different. The foreboding specter knows no compassion,no pity,no hope.He’s tricked you,JJ. Everything he said in the graveyard were lies. And since he is death itself,in it’s worst form,he is immune to everything-” “And now,”,Grim finishes,”I shall dispose of you.”
His scythe seems to glow,and with a piercing scream,he flies towards you.
(continued from strange)
You get hit and fall to the ground.
But then Super chants a spell and you get up unharmed.
You freeze the shadowy Necromancer with the weapon.
“Alright what’s it going to take for you to leave us alone?” You say.
“That necklace your wearing give it to me” Grim says to Super.
“What! never I promised JJ that I would never take it off” Super said.
“You don’t understand you see that’s my necklace I lost it years ago” Grim said.
Super gives Grim the necklace.
“Bye for now” Grim said.
Grim disappears.
Super gets the page from Igor.
You all go back to Super’s house but E.vile is there!
“Hello Jumper” E.vile says with a grin.
“(Gulp) Hello father” You say.
(To be continued)
(Thank you for taking a part of my survey. Young and Mighty are now gone forever)
(Sorry?)
(No, it’s fine. I just wanted to see if they really played a big role in the story. Or if anyone cared about them. I’m just glad they became a known character)
(No, I have an idea. An AWESOME idea. Wait. You wait.)
(I’m waiting…)
(We’re still waiting…)
(Continued from myself)
“What are you doing hare?” Strange said.
“Simple I’m hare to destroy you” E.vile said.
“That is it!” Super shouts.
Super gets a knife out.
Super jumps onto E.vile.
Super is about to strike when Dr.Cumulonimbus shows up and grabs her.
E.vile gets up.
“Foolish girl how dare you try to do that?” E.vile said.
E.vile get the knife and is about to stab Super when sunndenly….
(To be continued)
(Where is Rough?? Can I like, make her show up and save Super? Or is Rough somewhere certain that would keep her from being here??)
(You have to decide it. We don’t know much about that either. If we knew,we’d mention it.)
(Okay, just making sure before I say she’s there in case she’s somewhere else I didn’t know about, beause I din’t want to mess up the story)
Suddenly something hits you on the head and you black out. When you wake up,you’re on Strange’s ship. Strange is sitting next to you. “Wha-what happened? Where am I?” “You’re on my ship,JJ.Come,let us go get some fresh air.” You go out. “So,what happened to Super?” “Oh,that. You see,JJ-” “Ship ahead,captain!”,you hear the navigator shout.
Strange looks towards the direction of the ship. It has the Jolly Roger symbol. “Pirates! Attack!” However the ship turns towards you and crashes into the Phoenix Warbird. The cabin boy looks towards the captain of the pirates. “It’s him! It’s the dreaded pirate Jean-Luc the Vengeful!” Suddenly the captain jumps on to the ship. However the cannoneer shoots gracefully to Jean-Luc’s ship and it sinks.
Strange smiles. “Well,Jean-Luc,you’re trapped now. ” “Not yet,ye fool.Not yet.” He takes out a sword and holds it out. “Ye want some of this?Get it!” “Well,unfortunately,I’m tired now. Fortunately,I have a new swashbuckler. His name is Jumpy Jumper.He’ll take care of ye.”
Suddenly someone throws you a sword. You take it and battle JL till he’s nearly defeated. However,he starts one of the cannons and the cannonball falls into the ship,where it starts to sink. JL smirks,”I ain’t defeated yet,mateys!” And he jumps overboard. “Navigator! I see an island that way! Steer there!” The navigator manages to steer there and just before the ship sinks.
The crew manages to get out of the ship and taking everything inside it to the island. “So now what?”,you ask.
(Continued from Strange)
“Guess we should take shelter” Strange said.
“Wait Strange what about Super?” You say.
“Well the good news is Clean was able to knock the knife out of E.vile’s hand and save her, The bad news is we kind of lost her and we don’t know where she is” Strange said.
You sigh and help Strange and his crew make a shelter.
Afterword’s you lie down on the sand and fall asleep.
(To be continued)
When you wake up,you see that Strange and his crew are busy,so you explore the island.Soon you come across a marvelous spot,palm trees surrounding it,and a good view of the ocean. Suddenly you hear a squeal. You look behind and see a wild boar,with tusks and those ring thingies on it’s nose. You decide that the boar is not friendly.
But you also somehow manage to see the strength in it,the strength to trample you down without even trying. You realize that it is none other than the href=”http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Calydonian_Boar”>
Calydonian Boar .
(Hmm,didn’t work,so just copy and paste the link and look it up,or just click here: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Calydonian_Boar)
You run into a cave.There you see an inscription in the walls of it.
ຈະເປີດນ້ໍາຂອງໄວຫນຸ່ມ, ຫມູແມ່ນຈະຕ້ອງຖືກທໍາລາຍ.
‘To open the river of youth,the pig must be destroyed.’,you translate. That means you have to kill the Calydonian boar,you think.But what is the river of youth. But the familiar squeal is heard,as the boar wanders into the caves.
(Yay! 1337 comments! Hacker speak for elite you know 😛 )
(Continued from strange)
You get out an ax and get ready to take the pig down.
The pig charges at you but you jump.
After a few minutes you are able to catch the pig and kill it.
A mirror comes from the sky.
You pick it up , the tag on it reads: You have defeated the boar pig take this magic mirror as your reward, it will show you anything you wish to see.
Then a river appears a sign did too it read: lake of youth.
(To be continued)
continued from super)
You look at the river thinking how to get across,just then someone on a boat swam to you.
Hi,im hyper dragon!..at your service!
you look at her,a blonde girl with a bow and arrow looking at you,you fall in love with her.
So are you coming?? she asked.
Yes im coming.. you say ,looking at her smile while jumping in the boat.
So..I heard you killed the boar. she said looking at the river.
Yes…wait! how do you know?? you ask her.
Oh,well…i was watching you….she said with a smile.
Umm ok,where are we going?? you ask her
We are close to counterfiet…maybe we can stay and rest there and then head to early poptropica..she said.
You and her arrive at the island and walk to the nearest hotel.
Room for 2 please. you say
You take the keys and you both walk into the room…
The next day you wake up and yawn,getting of the bed.
Where’s hyper!?!
You hear a scream outside…its hyper!!
You look out the window to see black widow!!
BLACK WIDOW!!You shout.
You run out and chase after her,but she steals a car and drives away!!
No!!!!!! Hyper!!!
you run inside and take her bow and arrows and run back outside
Hmmm… you look around
There it is!! rent a car!
you run fast and rent a car
Hyper here i come!!
you drive to see widow driving fast with hyper knocking the window
You take the bow and arrows and aim at the tyres.
After you shoot all of the tyres you run to the car.
Ok give me the girl. you aim at her.
Ok ok ok!!! have her.. she runs off
thank you for saving me!! she smiled
lets go… you give her the bow and arrows
You run into your boat and set sail for early poptropica..safely….until you see a speeding boat after you.
black widow!!! you both scream.
haha you think i just ran off afraid!?! she said laughing.. you ruin everything,now you pay!!!!! she takes a gun.
run hyper!! ill take care of this!you shout
aww how sweet..black widow smiles..now..any last words??no? ok ! and she shoots.
no!!!!shouted hyper!!
you close your eyes standing still.
(please continue)
(Well i decided to continue from myself)
You open your eyes,why am i not dead??
you look,black widows gone?
you look on the floor.Oh no!! hyper!
what happened :
while you closed your eyes,hyper decided to shield you,and .. to make a long story short…she died…
a tear shed from your face..no hyper.
Then a voice said, hey i never got to know your name..
hyper!!your alive!!!!
you jumped in joy.
you hug her tight.Oh how i missed you!!. but how did you survive,you looked at her stomach.
I dont know. but it still hurts..
you put a bandage on her stomach,its gonna be ok,you smile
and what was the question?,oh yeah! im jumpy jumper,jj for short
we reached early poptropica ,she smiled
we have a big story to tell,you said smiling
but our adventure never ends ,she said
you walk out,holding her hand
a crowd cheered and sang songs.
put your hands up !!someone from the crowd shouted
who is it NOW?? you asked.
Dr hare !
(continue please
(Lol I like the new guy. It’s just like Super but with longer parts.)
Suddenly you hear a lot of fighting noises. You open your eyes and see Strange and his crew fighting with Black Widow. The cannoneer throws her gun away,but she jumps into the water and swims off. You look and see Strange’s Phoenix Warbird nearby,as good as new. You ask how he got it back. “Well,JJ,it’s a long story,but first tell me yours.” He turns to HD,then gasps.
“Hyper! What are you doing here?! You’re supposed to be at your mother’s-” “I’m tired of being there,Strange. I wanted to explore-” “Wait,how do you two know each other?” “Obviously,she’s my cousin,as well as Popular’s.” For a second at the word Popular he glares at Hyper. Then he looks at you. “She was born 6 years after me,really. But what were you doing,JJ?”
You explain everything. He gasps. “The river of youth! You found it,JJ!” Suddenly Hyper gapes. “That was THE river I rescued you on? Good Grief!” “Whoa,whoa,whoa,you know about the river too?” Strange sighs. “When we were younger,me,Hyper and Popular-” Again he glares at her. Seriously,what is it with Hyper with Popular? “Discussed about it. It was a myth at the time-”
Suddenly you hear explosions. You black out suddenly.
(Alright,small mistake. Let’s pretend I said Dr.Hare instead of Black Widow.)
(What happened to my characters? I’m not trying to be rude…but have they died? It’s okay if you forgot them, though. :-))
(Justin was last seen escaping a shadowy necromancer. As for Red Ice,Quiet Shell and the other one,they just seem to be one of those forgotten minor characters for now. )
(Thanks. I really mean it. And the other one is Shiny Wolf, thank you very much. :-))
(Hopeople?)
(Continued from Strange)
You wake up in a building Strange is there along with his crew.
“What happened?” You ask.
“Pirates attacked’ Strange replies.
Then you remember something.
“I forgot to tell you that I also found a magic mirror’ You say.
You take the mirror out.
“What does it do?” Strange asks.
“It shows you anything you want to see” You said.
“We need to make sure it works go ahead and test it out” Strange said.
“I would like to see where my sister Super is” You say.
An image appears on the mirror the image showed…
(To be continued)
Super in a tent .
suddenly hd comes out of no where.
show me that mirror!!! she shouts.
you give it to her.She gasps.
whats wrong?? you and strange ask.
take a closer look at what’s behind super!!
E.VILE !!!!!!!!
Well im not surprised, you say.
We have to save Super!! hd said
Get up JJ !!shouts strange
Ok ok im coming!!!! you shout back taking your gun.
When will you give me some rest ? you whisper to yourself.
Where’s the car keys?? asks strange.
I thought you had them.you say,confused
Hd,do you have the car keys?? you ask.
No,i thought you had them,your car,your keys.she says looking at you like your crazy.
Thats not helping!! you shout running to your room.
Ofcourse its not , she laughs.
I found them!! shouts strange from another room
What are we waiting for?? lets go!! you say running to the car.
Strange starts the car…
Well,were low on fuel.strange says.
everyone look at you.
Ok ok ok!! ill get some fuel!you say looking at hd’s face.
Lets go! you shout getting in the car after filling it up.
You drive to the blimp..and all of you get on it.
Soon you arrive at island X
This looks creepy. Hd says looking at spiderwebs.
But cool!! you say.
Guys i think were lost!We better find shelter. strange says while looking side by side.
Theres a good cave!! Hd points at a good dry cave.
Good job hyper! you look at her.
I hope there are no animals hiding inside.strange whispers to the others.
Did you hear that!?! squeeked Hd .
Whats that!! shouted strange pointing at a huge dragon-like creature with huge golden wings,gliding to the cave.
Hide!! you shout running away.
Hmm looks friendly.Hyper looks and says.
Here ill show you.she says as she pets it.
See??
Maybe he can help us! strange said smiling.
OFCOURSE!Hp said climbing up.
Grab my hand,JJ!
Ok ok ok,you say climbing up.
This is fun!! you say.
(To be continued)
(Continued from happy poptropican)
The rest of your friends get on the winged creature.
“Mr. winged creature could you give us a ride please?” You ask.
The creature nods and glides into the air.
“Hey I can see one of my shops from hare” Strange said.
“Hey there’s the tent” You say pointing to it on the ground.
“Mr. creature could you take us down there please?” You ask.
The creature nods and lands near the tent.
“Alright now let’s rescue Super” You say.
You get off the creature and go into the tent.
You see E.vile holding super and he had a knife.
“No one move or the Grape gets it” E.vile says.
“JJ help!” Super said.
“Let her go! what do you want?” You say.
(To be continued)
“First of all, she’s not a grape,” you say. “Second, in a dream no one has ever known about, I was told that all who have been forgotten will come to reality!” Suddenly, all the people you forgot about rush to your side. They are all ready, armed for battle. “Now, does anyone have some last words?” one forgotten person (call the forgotten people Hopeople) says.
One of the Hopeople was Red Rock.
“Red, you’re a Hoperson?” you ask.
“Yes. Nobody cares about me. The only person who even writes about me is Young Flame!” she replies harshly.
“No, Red! I’m sure other people have written about you!” you say and grab your book. For the last 50 posts, nobody mentions Red rock. But you do see that Young Flame and Mighty Tornado have died, and you didn’t even know about it.
“Super! Why didn’t you tell me!” you cry.
“I-“ Super starts.
“Hey! The battle has been prolonged long enough! BEGIN!” one of your enemies shout.
The battle rages on. All seems well. Hyper is doing extremely well for a new girl. Her skills with a bow were almost as good at Young’s. Then, the sword appears. It’s aimed toword your heart.
“NOOOOOOO!” Red shouts in the really deep, slow voice that you see when there’s a dramatic moment like this on T.V. She runs in slo-mo, dives in slo-mo, and takes the slice in slo-mo, just like you see in T.V. She looks up at you.
“JJ, this is what I wanted. Nobody cares about me anymore. Nobody except you. That’s why I saved you. Don’t try to change what happened,” Red Rock says softly. Then she closes her eyes and takes one last breath.
You want to collapse. Yo want to run and cry, but you channel you grief into anger. You defeat all your enemies in two seconds. Then you turn on Super.
“Now, why did you keep the deaths of my sisters from me?” JJ asked bitterly.
Sorry. Forgot about 3rd person for the last sentence)
(I mean second person)
(Continued from young)
“I didn’t tell you because I didn’t want you to be sad, You see what happened was someone poised me and then Young said some sort of chant, and then she fall to the ground and well they died trying to save her” Super explains.
You stare in disbelief.
“She risked her life for me JJ, and as long as we live I promise we will avenge them” Super said.
You hug Super.
“I love you sis” You say.
“I love you too bro” Super said.
“Aw now isn’t that sweet” Came a familiar voice.
You look to see…….
(To be continued)
You turn to see Young Flame! “Young!” you and Super hug Young Fame. “Not ONLY me!” she says happily. MIGHTY comes from behind her! “MIGHTY!” you all hug. “But, who said- ‘Aw, now isn’t that sweet?’? you and Super ask. “I don’t know.” Strange mutters in the corner. “What happened, Strange?” Mighty asks. “Clean. Is. Missing.”
“Aw, man.” “Wait. POPPUS TROPICANA!” you scream. “Yes, JJ. It’s me.” Poppus Tropicana says. “Wow. I’m guessing you, um, uh, eh, what do you say for that word-ed Young and Mighty?” Sneaky, who was VERY-VERY-VERY-VERY quite. “Yes, I revived Young and Mighty.” “Strange.” “What? Strange looks up to see Clean! “WOW! This is amazing.” Strange says. “Everything’s happy now.” you say. “I wanted to give you all rest.” PT smiles.
“For how many days?” you ask. “A week.” Tropicana says. “A WEEK?!” “Yes.” “YES!” you all scream. “May peace be with all of you.”– Fast Fire
(Here are other Hopeople we’ve forgotten that you can add, but I don’t know if they’re dead, ill, or whatever:
Popular, Clean, Strange, Sneaky Paw, Rough Lion, Prickly Starfish, Slanted Fish, Shiny Wolf, Quiet Shell, Red Ice, and Justin.
Hope this helps! ;-))
(Strange is more of a secondary character,and also include Big Bubbles and Friendly Turtle.)
(And Beefy Owl. At least you kept Red Rock dead)
(Continued from fast fire)
“Good I could use a break from fighting villains” You say.
“So now what?” Strange said.
“I have an idea let’s play hide and seek JJ can be it” Super said.
“Alright I’ll count and you guys hide ready?” You ask.
Everyone nods.
You close your eyes and start counting.
“One, two, three, four, five, six, seven, eight, nine, ten” you count.
You open your eyes and everyone is gone.
“Ready or not hare I come” You say.
You start looking.
(To be continued)