In celebration of this Poptropica Help Blog recently reaching 8 million hits (thanks everyone!), we’re going to do something fun! In the comments section, ANYONE is welcome to join in as we weave an ongoing story, a Poptropica fan-fiction of sorts, told in second-person narrative. It begins here…
“Um, hello. I’m here to register for something called, uh, ‘Poptropica’?” Amidst the realm of blue vines in front of you, a crate, small and wooden, bounces out, shaking blue dust and spitting out a question of your gender. You stare incredulously before you finally manage to respond. “I’m a boy,” you tell the little box, and then it erupts a circle of numbers in individual bubbles as it asks you the next question. This is a very strange sign-up process, you think to yourself, as you decide to tell the box etched with a curious question mark that you are 9 years old.
“Your name is Jumpy Jumper. When you are ready, hop into the blimp and travel to any island.” You ponder the map for a while, but decide none of the islands suit you. “There’s got to be something better…” you mutter to yourself. Just then, you see it. Out of the corner of your eye, there’s another island, shrouded in mystery by layers of smog and unidentifiable smells. Island X.
“But no one’s ever been there before,” the voice warns, the voice of the box that had guided your creation earlier. “Jumpy Jumper, JJ, you can’t… how did that even get on the map anyway? It’s not safe… please no… JJ!!” But it’s too late. You’re gone.
What happens next? Will JJ survive the unknown dangers of the mysterious Island X? What is the island’s secret, its true name, the people, the villain(s), the setting? You and your fellow PHB readers get to decide what items he collects and uses, other places he visits, and the adventures that await…
RULES: Make sure it follows what others have written before you, makes sense, and if you wish to add a comment that is not part of the story itself, use parentheses, for example: (I think we should…) Your comment can be as long or short as you like and you are definitely welcome to contribute as many times as you like. Be creative!
Where will these words take us? Continue the story in the comments!
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(Cont. from Clean) “Oh no!”,shouts Clean. “It’s her! The Black Widow!The White Widow! The Twilight Tarantula! The Art Approaching Arachnid! The-” “Okay,we get the idea!”,shouts Red Lizard. Then,suddenly a giant Black Widow appears. “Not another transformation!”,shouts Bendy Pear.
“Yes,fools,it is I,The Black Widow! I am unstoppable! Beware,you should not let the White Widow escape! You also should not let the Sand Spider escape. Oh,and also,you should not let the Twilight Tarantula escape. And let’s not forget about not letting the Creepy Crawly Canvas Criminal escape,and also-”
Some Time Later-
“But,most importantly,you should not let the Thief with a Thousand Names escape.” “Boy,I’m glad that’s over”,says Super Grape. “Now let’s fight!”,shouts the Evil Eight-Legger.
Suddenly,the entire Pop Squad jumps out of nowhere. “Let’s do this.” they say.
(I bet she said all 1,000 names! Hee, hee. Why didn’t she just say that in the beginning? :-D)
(It’s just like her not to miss a single one,Cyborg/Clean.)
(Continued from me) “Just one minute,everyone!”,shouts Bendy. Everyone stares at him. “Whaddaya want,kid?” “I saw Binary Bard there,when Sticky Robot summoned him with everyone else.” “Yes,what about it?” “He was transformed into good,with very other villain like you. How did he,along with everyone else turn bad again?”
(Holy plot twist! Back to good from bad,or vice versa! What is the answer to Bendy Pear? Find out in…the next episode of Island X)
(We now are back to your regular programme,The Many Splendored Zephyr by Carson Willis,first time in television!)
(continued from sticky clown)
“I bet zeus had something to do with that” you said.
“ahem guys I could use a little help hare” said super grape.,
super had her sword out and was fighting the black widow with it.,
“eat my sword black widow” said super grape.,
super aims the sword at black widow’s feet.,
super jumps into the air and throws the sword.,
but the sword hits the ground.,
“ha! you missed!” said black widow.,
“you don’t scare me you eight legged thing” said super grape.
(to be continued anyone can take it)
(Continued from Super Grape) “Yes,foolish child ,you cannot withstand the Sand Spider!” She spits poison at Super Grape and she falls unconscious. “Pop Squad! ATTACK!”,shouts Comical Bird. Silver Wolf,Clean Shadow,Wild Monster,Smart Gamer,and Cuddly Flame run towards The Art Approaching Arachnid,but she spits poison at them too! But,you freeze her just in time. But then,she still continues to spit poison everywhere! You ,Clean,and Hopper jump into the water. “We’ll have to save everyone else soon!”,shouts Hopper. But the Evil Eight-Legger shoots poison into the water. “Poison-infected water!” The poison touches Clean,and he falls unconscious,sinking. “Clean!”,you shout.
“No…time…Monster…Carnival…there!”,shouts Hopper. You both swim there. “Look!”,shouts Hopper. You see a cave there. It has an inscription on it. You are going closely to it when you see Sticky. You shout to him but he can’t hear you. He gazes at the inscription. He suddenly goes in the cave. (To be Continued.)
(Continued from me) You and Hopper go to the cave. The inscription reads-
ກະລຸນາໃສ່, ຈິດວິນຍານ, ສໍາລັບການທົດສອບທີ່ແຂງ.
ເມື່ອໃດທີ່ທ່ານຈະໄດ້ຮັບໃນ, ຫວັງວ່າສໍາລັບການທີ່ດີທີ່ສຸດ.
ຫນຶ່ງຂອງຊ້າງນັ້ນຖືພົວພັນຊຶ່ງຂອງທ່ານ,
ໂອ້ຍ, ຈັບຂອງນາງກ່ອນທີ່ຈະໄວມັນຊ້າເກີນໄປ.
ໃນເວລາທີ່ປະຕູສູງເຖີງຢ່າງເຕັມສ່ວນ,
ລະວັງການແຍ່ງລູກບໍ່ດີໃຫຍ່.
ເມື່ອທ່ານໄດ້ຢ່າງເຕັມສ່ວນທໍາລາຍສັດເດຍລະສານການ,
ກະລຸນາໃສ່ປະຕູສໍາລັບການຊື່ນຊົມຍິ່ງໃຫຍ່ໄດ້.
ແຕ່ວ່າ … ລະວັງສິ່ງທີ່ທ່ານສົງໃສວ່າຫນ້ອຍທີ່ສຸດ.
You suddenly realize that it is in the ancient language of the Chosen One. You read it. (To Be Continued.)
(I think it’s called the Lao language.
kaluna sai chid vinnyan soalabkan thodsob thiaekhng meuodai thithan chadaihab nai vangva soalabkan thi dithisud nungkhong sang nan thu phuaphan sung khongthan ony chab khongnang konthicha vai man sakoenpai naiuaela thi patu sung thoeng yangtem suan lavang kan aenyng luk bodi hainy meu thandai yangtem suan thoalai sad dia la san kan kaluna sai patu soalabkan sunsom nyinghainy dai aetva lavang singthithan songsaiva nonythisud
(Lol yeah,thx to google translate for this.Coincedence,too,I was going to make the next one with it.)
(No, there is another coincidence. I have friends from Lao.)
Are you sure it’s Lao? Sounds like Laos to me.
(Continued from me)
“Enter, soul, for a hard test.
Once you get in, hoping for the best.
One of the elephants is your fate,
Oh, catch her before it is too late.
When the door rises fully,
Beware of the big bad bully.
When you fully destroy the beast,
Enter the door for a great feast.
But … be careful what you suspect the least.”
“Well,I guess…we should go in.”,says Hopper.
(Yes! 175th comment!)
(continued from sticky)
“wait look!” you said.,
super gets up and walks to the water.,
super takes a deep breath and dives into the water.,
“what is she doing?” said hopper.,
then a few seconds later super comes back up with clean in her arms and swims to you and hopper.,
“stand back clean can you hear me?” said super grape.,
clean wakes up.,
“you saved my life” said clean.
“now let’s go in that cave onward” said super grape.,
so yell enter the cave.
(to be continued anyone can take it)
(Continued from Super) “But…how did you…Black Widow…poison”you stutter. “Oh,that was an act,JJ. Now here’s what happens to people who manage to reach some sort of ground after being poisoned and fainting. They get hypnotized.” “But why?”
“The Thief with a Thousand Names needs her own minions,JJ. They will obey her every command,and will have spider-like reflexes. Oh,and did I mention the purple swirly eyes? That’s the only way to identify a spider minion. The only way to prevent hypnotism is to save them before they reach a ground,which is how I saved Clean. Now,let’s enter the cave.”
(continued from sticky)
“hey it’s dark” you said.,
“it’s a cave jj of course it’s dark luckily I have a flashlight” said super grape.,
super gets out her flashlight.,
“hey look thares a woman in our path” said clean.,
“hello did a guy come trough hare?” you said.,
“as a matter of fact yes I’ll let you pass if you can pass my test” said the woman.,
“sure how hard can it be?,what kind of test is it?” said super grape.
(to be continued anyone can take it)
(Continued from Super Grape) She looks at you. “Okay,Chosen One.Go into my pen. One of the elephants is your fate,oh,catch her before it’s too late! And you must remember,the door in the cellar,is out of your boundaries,even if you want to go there to wash your laundry.” She lets you into the pen,but takes away your weapon. “I’ll give you this when you’re done.” You look at the elephants. All of them look peaceful,except one,who is starting to charge towards you. She also has purple,swirling eyes.
(Continued from me) “Oh no!” shouts Super. She tries to jump in but is blocked by a force field. “Tsk,tsk,no cheating,Grape.”,says the woman. Then you do something essential for living.
You breathe. (2 b cont)
(continued from sticky)
super takes the weapon from the woman.,
“let me in there or I’ll use this” super said.,
“alright” said the woman.,
the woman lets super in and takes the weapon from her.,
“hey!.,elephant over hare!” super said.
the elephant turned around and started charging towered super.,
“super watch out” you say.,
“relax I know what I’m doing” super said.,
there was a rope next to super.,
super waited and pulled the rope.,
a cage fell on the elephant.
(to be continued anyone can take it)
(Continued from Super) Or at least you wish that happens,for the elephant is charging closer,and Super wouldn’t dare cheat. You run towards the gate,protected by an invisible wall (video game logic,you think). You jump near it and hold on to it. When the elephant comes closer,you jump from the wall onto it. The elephant gets enraged and tries to shake you off,tripping in the process,onto another elephant.
The other elephant gets enraged,and as you jump off,it charges into the spider minion elephant,defeating it,and turning it into a spider. “Well,done,”says the woman. “Chosen One,you may now proceed.” As you go into the next chamber,the door closes. “I wonder,what was in the door in the cellar?”,asks Hopper. “Never mind now,”says Clean. “Look!” You see a pair of purple swirling eyes,which is looking out of an opening door.
Suddenly,a cold voice whispers,”When the door rises,fully,beware of the big bad bully.” “Great,”mutters Super,”Our next test. (To be continued.)
(This fan fic is AMAZING! Say, hypothetically speaking, would be able to be re-written into a short novel, once it’s done (hypothetically speaking)?)
(Ahh wordpress. Being derpy is REALLY spicing up this story.
/sarcasm (sort of) )
(he he.)
(Alright,this story is not going anywhere at this rate. I mean,the only ones who’re adding anymore are me and Grape. Now Clean’s gone too. This is not good. WHY ISN’T THIS POST STICKIED,Fishy?!)
Slanted Fish: It’s being promoted in the sidebar, and now I’ve added it to the Cool Stuff page/tab as well. 🙂
(Thx,Fishy. 🙂 )
(Sorry, I’ve been busy lately. Just had my birthday, then my Friend party, then my family party, then I’ve been hooked on Cuusoo, and yeah. Sorry guys. I’m back now. Continued from Sticky…) You know you have no choice but to face the monster. It’s eyes are quite small. Suddenly a huge roar comes from the TYRANNASAURUS REX! Clean knows your doomed, so he watches Monsters, Inc on his tablet to keep it cool. He sees the scene where Randall appears and his face lights up. “JJ, you completed Spy Island, right? You have your backpack, right?” Clean shouts. “Yeah? What about it?” you scream as the T- Rex chases you. “Put on the Camoflauge Suit! The T- Rex won’t see you and then you can destroy it with Poiseidon’s Trident!” You do as Clean tells you, and then you destroy the… Mechanical Dinosaur!? You look at the Elephant and it’s a robot too. You look at the lady, “Who are you!?” She turns into the familiar face you saw earlier. “I, Black Widow, will destroy the Chosen One, and become ruler of ALL OF POPTROPICA!!!” You zap her with the trident, and she drops your Ultimate Weapon as she falls to her doom. “Guess- Beep, boop- Who’s B-back?” “Oh great, Sticky says. Dr. Cy- Bunny. (To be Continued…)
(Uh..error,Clean,after they enter the next room,the elephant chamber’s door. CLOSES.)
(But it opens when JJ defeats both of the robots. Der…)
(The elephant is also in another room.)
(Also,how’s Sticky there?)
(Continued from Clean) Suddenly,where the Metal T-Rex was,is Dr.Hare! “Now,that Widow,may have hidden the real lady and pretended to be her (fool,you whisper) but I shall not be as easy.Behold,the big bad bully! Oh,and by the way,Black Widow may be done for,but her minions,and her spirits are still there.” Suddenly,something that looks like a giant lion rises. “Oh No!”,shouts Hopper,”It’s..it’s…the Manticore!” The giant lion,now revealing itself,has a human face,and a scorpion tail having- “Black Widow’s poison!”,shouts Super Grape. The Manticore smirks and shoots poison at Grape,who faints. “Super,you there?”,you asks. She murmurs distinctively,”All…hail…Black Widow.”,and disappears. (To be continued)
(continued from clean)
“great first we had to deal with black widow and now this” clean said.,
Dr.hare looks at super.,
“and you!, you messed up my plan well now your going to pay in fact all of you are going to pay” dr.hare said.
“yeah right Mr. cyber bunny you in what army?” super said.,
“oh yes I’m so glad you asked that super oh minions!” dr.hare said.,
just then bunny minions came in and joined dr.hare.,
“really super did you have to ask that?” you say.,
“what?, I thought it would be cleaver to say I didn’t think he would really have a army” super said.
(to be continued)
(Continued from Super) “Wha- super -you were just poisoned!” “But-‘ “That was ju7st a dummy of mine. I’m the real one.” Suddenly the manticore shoots poison at super,and she faints,gets up and says clearly,”All hail Black Widow.”,and teleports. He shoots poison at everyone else and they do the same thing as Super.
“Oh,Chosen One,”says suddenly the voice of the box,”This is a mini-boss fight. Your friends won’t be able to help you because of…*cough* *cough* video game logic.” Each mini-boss has a unique set of attacks in a certain pattern,and you will have to avoid them and,at the same time,figure out how to defeat them.
Each mini-boss will have to be hit 3 times to defeat it. Try attacking it when it attacking you without moving,or when it temporarily stops attacking.That’s all.Now,attack!” (To be continued)
“Oh,and also,destroy the bunny drone’s ears while you’re at it. Dr.Hare will make them fight against you and guard the Manticore.”
(OMG guys,I know,this is the 200th comment!Here’s to 200 more!)
(And the 200th comment was made on the same day of the post’s 3 month anniversary!WOOHOO!)
The mysterious girl pulls an arrow from her bag, and shoots. She misses! She asks you, “Do you have an extra arrow?” You hand her a mysterious glowing green arrow. The girl takes something from her bag, whispering to you, “It’s a sleeping potion.” She dips the arrow in the potion, takes aim, and hits E.Vile, Captain Crawfish, Black Widow, and Dr. Hare. The villains fall to the floor, in a deep sleep. She hops on her Hydra, and pulls you up. “What is your name?” you ask. “I’m Red Ice.” She tugs on her hair. It turned out to be a wig! Her yellow hair flies behind her. “I was told to be the Chosen One’s sidekick. And, by the way, my hydra’s name is Matt.” Matt licks you. “He likes you!” giggles Red Ice. But neither one of you is paying attention, and you soon run into Holmes! The evil robot cackles, “You are too young to defeat me!” Suddenly, a blue boy runs over with a sword. “I’m Quiet Shell, Red Ice’s cousin.” He says to you. He dashes over, takes aim, and…
(To be continued. And by the way, Red Ice is almost nine, and Quiet Shell is 10.)
(Oops. My comment is supposed to be after Massive Hammer’s.)
(Did you read Slanted Fish’s note there?)
(Sorry. 😳 )
(To all of you-you can ignore the Holmes part.)
(And-oh, I get it. IGNORE MY COMMENT!)
(Continued from me) You now enter the mini-boss fight. The whole room is covered by an invisible wall and ceiling and hare minions are all over the place,with the manticore in the middle. He shoots poison at you. You avoid it for ten minutes. He gets angry. Suddenly all the minions run towards you. You try to smack them all with your weapon,avoiding the poison at the same time. You nearly miss one time.
He suddenly roars, creating a shockwave which you dodge successfully . There,you hit him with your weapon while he’s distracted.
2 hits later. After several defeated minions and poison spots avoided,you defeat the manticore. It’s scorpion tail comes off,and it falls and dies. “Curse you,Jumper!”,shouts Dr.Hare,and uses his missiles to escape again. Suddenly,another secret door opens. You enter. There it is-the great feast. With all of your friends,spider minion or not,somehow there,waving to you as if nothing happened. All is well.
But-you must beware of what you suspect least.
(Continued from me) After chatting with everyone,you find out things.
Sticky actually used the door in the cellar in the first room,and that was an elevator to here (You got angry with yourself with that) and the real lady was trapped there. He also reminds you to speak with his navigator soon.
The spider-minions have accidentally cured themselves by falling into water,which was the poison’s only cure.
And by speaking with an excited Comical Bird,you actually find out that three famous Poptropicans are coming here..
“Look,they’re coming!And here’s the first one.”,she says.”It’s…Hippie Harry?”A lot of people rush to him,including Sticky,shouting,”Hippie Man!” You realize that these are Reality TV fanatics.
“The second one’s here,”says Wild Monster,”And its…..OMG OMG OMLG (Oh my lucky goat!) ! IT’S THINKNOODLES!” An even bigger crowd approaches,everyone asking for his autograph,consisting 97% of the crowd.
“And the final one’s here,’,absorbs Clean. “And it’s…Slanted Fish,owner of the Poptropica Help Blog!” And this time everyone,including you,rush towards her.
“Hey everyone!”,she shouts. I’ve got something for you all!” And she pulls out a laptop. “This is the PHB’s Ongoing Story Creation. You see,in it,ANYONE can join in about an adventure story.” “What’s it about?”,you ask.”Well,I’ll narrate it.” And she narrates. And by the end of it you realize that they’re writing about YOUR adventures.
“Wait,if someone is writing about it,will they be able to control this?” You ask. “Yes.Very.” You suddenly realize the last line of the inscription. “Gulp…is anyone…writing about me right now?”
“Yes,it’s…” Suddenly,words fall down. They say ‘To Be Continued.’ Argh,I hate having to wait,you think.
Suddenly,words fall down immediately. They say ‘Continued by Me’ “Wow,that quick.” “And it’s Sticky Clown who’s writing right now!” Everyone looks at Sticky. “Wow,I can control-he he-mwahahahah-uh,anything,right? Well,that’s good. Suddenly…everyone’s…dress…changes…into…what…Sticky…would…say…good..of.”
Suddenly,everyone’s dress changes into what Sticky would say good of. “Well,that’s better”,he says. “Then…Sticky..Robot…appears.”
Then Sticky Robot appears. “What am I doing here? Never mind,I think I’m here to cause havoc.” “Right,”Sticky says.”And then I’ve got to stop Super Grape saving JJ all the time.That’s annoying.And I’ve got to stop her from getting away.” “I’ll do that.” And Sticky Robot hits Super on the Head,ties her tightly with measuring tape,and take’s away her inventory.
“And..what was that robot spawner called? Oh yes…”
Suddenly an E.Viletotron 1000 appears and starts spawning Sticky mini-bots (smaller versions of Sticky Robot) You try and hit it with your weapon,but it is blocked by an invisible wall. “Phew,I’m glad I added that. Okay,JJ,this is a combat arena. You’re supposed to fight as much possible until the spawner’s destroyed,which I’ll determine. Now,everyone ready to see the arena?!” “YES!” “Then START!” *ding ding ding*
(To Be Continued. Hope you liked all the references. 😛 )
(continued from sticky)
“nooooo! don’t hurt him” super said.,
sticky robot places a cloth around super’s mouth.,
“sticky what about super?” you say.,
“she’ll be fine now focus destory the robots and then hit the machine nine times” sticky said.,
so you destory the robots and hit the machine nine times and it blows up.,
you go to sticky robot.,
“release super grape” you say.
(to be continued anyone can take it)
(Ummm, that was a little weird)
(Hi I’m new. Hope you like my new addition. (Cont. from Super Grape)
Suddenly, Super Grape is released from her bonds. You keep fighting. When all hope seems lost, the earth begins to shake. A girl appears rising slowly from the ground. The battle stops and everyone stops and stares at her.
‘She is even more beautiful then Incredible Bubbles!’ You think, but you quickly shake that thought from your mind promising you will come back to it after the battle.
“I am Young Flame. The Curious Sign-Up Box sent me to guide the Chosen One on his quest. My friend, Beefy Owl also wishes to become a part of your journey.”
A girl rises up next to Young Flame and the battle begins again. Beefy Owl takes out a pure gold sword and uses it like it nobody’s business. Young Flame takes out a silver sword and displays greater skills than her friend. The spawner looks tired. You think one more strike will do the trick. You start to rise the Ultimate Weapon, but Young Flames stops you.
“No. If you miss, you could ruin everything and become hostage to Black Widow and her minions. Let me do it. I risk myself,” she says, her voice as cold as ice.
Young Flame takes her sword and rises it…..
(Sorry, I love writing and I don’t know when to stop. Tell what happens to Young Flame and her friend, Beefy Owl (another account of mine). Tell what reward JJ and the group gets if Young Flame hits the spawner. Tell what happens if she doesn’t. Again sorry if this comment is too long.)
(To Be Cont.)
(Ugh, I’m gonna hate the wait. How do you stand it?!?!?!)
(Sorry. I just joined PHB. I can’t stop posting. But BTW, Thanks Slanted Fish for posting this on the side bar. I would have never found it and would have missed out. BTW, could you do another one of those summaries. This story is getting a little confusing again. Sorry again!)
(I?Stand it? Who said I did?)
Strange, you are hilarious!
(Of course I am!)
(No offense,but I spotted two mistakes here long ago.One,the spawner was already destroyed in the previous post,and two,Incredible Bubbles can’t be counted as part of the story because she continued from Massive Hammer,and,besides,no one continued from her!)
(continued from young flame)
young flame strikes the spawner it explodes.,
“hey look capes and hares a note” you say.,
the note read: take these capes as your reward.,
you and the gang put the capes on.,
“uh guys aren’t we forgeting something?” super said.
(to be continued anyone can take it)
No, I created an ongoing story.
(You aren’t supposed to make your own, you’re supposed to continue THE ongoing story…)
~~Nameless
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“What is it,Super?” “We didn’t destroy Sticky Robot!” But Sticky CLOWN shouts,”Do not worry,I got rid of him!” “Oh.good.” “Anyway,’shouts Hopper,let us continue the feast!” “Good,I’m hungry!”,says Young Flame!
(To be continued.Sorry for making it so short.By the way,Young Flame,I am glad to have you here. you are one of the few good writers I have seen so far.I welcome you to a lot set of stories!)
(Thanks for making me feel welcome! 🙂 )
(You’re welcome.)
(Cont. from Super Grape)
You sit in between Young Flame and Silver Wolf and dig into the turkey legs sitting in front of you. Everyone else is laughing and having a good time, but you and Young Flame.
“So, how many islands have you completed?” you ask.
“I just joined but I’ve completed about 6 islands. I was working on the Charlie Brown one when the Curious Sign-Up Box came to me and sent me here. How about you?”
“Part of my training included completing all the islands so….”
“Lucky! I’m still trying to get past the pumpkin part of the Charlie Brown one. I’m such a dork!”
You both laugh.
‘Talking with Young Flame is so easy! Maybe even easier than with my own friends!’ you think.
Young Flame pulls out a silver bow and arrow and says, “Hey, maybe I could use this to shoot the pumpkin over the obstacles!”
You laugh and start to say that the pumpkin would just break when you hear a crash. Young Flame points her bow, loaded with a sparkling silver arrow. Beefy Owl and Super Grape point gold swords. You reach for your ultimate weapon when a hand grabs it away from you.
“Stop. No one move or I will use this!” a deep, cold voice exclaims.
You hear someone else speaking the language of the Chosen One-
ກະລຸນາໃສ່, ຈິດວິນຍານ, ສໍາລັບການທົດສອບທີ່ແຂງ.
ເມື່ອໃດທີ່ທ່ານຈະໄດ້ຮັບໃນ, ຫວັງວ່າສໍາລັບການທີ່ດີທີ່ສຸດ.
You translate it to say
“The Chosen One cannot be harmed by first strike of the Ultimate Weapon. Try and fight him.”
You turn around. You feel the Weapon hit you and the world goes black.
(Sorry….Too long. To be Continued)
(Actually,I think JJ should have translated it to say ““Enter, soul, for a hard test.Once you get in, hoping for the best.” which is part of the cave inscription. Feeling bad,Jumpy?)
(Can we start another ongoiing story? This one is so much fun! I want another one!)
(Me too! How about all of the people on the staff and all the bloggers having adventures?)
(Cont. from me)
You wake up, groggy to a blurry world of random shapes and colors. You shake your head, trying to make sense of your surroundings. You look around and see all your friends bound. You try to find something to cut them free when you discover yourself to be bound as well. Young Flame is trying to get her sword and Super Grape is trying to strap herself into her jetpack to fly away. Silver Wolf is simply trying to escape and work from there. You look up and see a big, bulky package fly down from the sky. A note falls from the package and you can just read the words. It says-
JJ,
Congrats on your victory. Here are the weapons you will need to destroy your biggest. They contain special powers that will only work on the first strike, but they will be extra sharp after the power drains. Good luck and be careful!
-The Curious Sign-Up Box
You see a pair of eyes appear in the shadows.
‘I wonder why you see the eyes and only the eyes in the Poptropician shadows,’ you think.
“Well, well, well. I see the great ‘Chosen One’ has awoken. I am your humble servant, NOT. What can I get you? A poisened steak? A crown of thorns? Death? Hahaha. I didn’t think so,” a voice said, the cruel joking eyes staring into your very soul. “Look at the great one. All tied up and helpless. Look at the supposed hero who is supposed to save this island. Well not anymore! I am the ruler now!”
You inch slowly tword the parcel and unwrap it slowly. You take your sword and cut yourself free. You start to do the same to your friends, but something hits you in the back of the head and you crumple to the ground. You are half-conscious and feel yourself being loaded into something. You feel the vehicle make a sharp turn and the last thing you think before you black out is ‘I’m going to be banged up. I hope Young Flame will still like me!’
( 😉 To be continued my someone else. And this is me trying to make a SHORT entry! lol)
(Ha,bet you didn’t even SEE the length of the one where I introduced myself!)
(I just saw it! lol! that’s bigger than all of my comments combined! lol. i remember looking at that and going ugh! do i really have to read this! and i love reading.)
(oh. srry. that prob was mean….. ;( )
(No,it wasn’t. 🙂 )
(Continued from Young Flame) “Ah,I see.Want someone to rescue you,yes? Like the not-so super grape and the incredible flower? Ah,I see.Always want that to happen,right? Relying on your friends.” “AS if! I’ll do it without ANYONE HELPING! YOU’LL SEE!” “With me having the weapon? I don’t think so,Jumper…’
(I guess JJ woke up)
(Which is what I wanted to do. Sticky also mentioned that Super saving JJ was getting annoying.)
(Cont. From Strange Cat, BTW thx for being nice 2 me!! 🙂 )
You try to come up with a witty comeback, but you feel as if someone vacuumed the knowledge out of your brain. You want to respond, but your mouth feels drier than dust. You feel something you’ve never felt before; helplessness.
( To Be Cont.)
(YES!!!)
(BTW I don’t need to sound lame, but my two usernames are BellaLucy101 and Puppylover50416 plz add me!)
(Can you blog about this again? Only me, Strange Cat, and occasionally Super Grape is posting.)
(BTW I was talking to Slanted Fish)
Slanted Fish: (Sorry, there’s a lot happening so summarizing it will be kind of complicated.)
(Thanks anyway. I love this! Do another blog on it! Get more people to post! And can we start a new one?!?)
(I think one’s enough for now, and I’ve mentioned this Ongoing Story in my latest post, so hopefully this will get more attention.)
(Sorry. I prob sound rude and overly hyper. I’ll stick to storytelling! Again, sorry! 😀 )
(Cont. From Myself)
You realize that you’ve never seen this who villain is.
“Step into the light where we can see you!” you shout.
The villain steps out, and you see that he is actually a girl! Not Black Widow, but someone you have never seen.
“Who are you?” you venture?
“I am the Queen Cobra. I was the villain for the Monster Carnival island, until Zues destroyed. When is first fell, I would have welcomed you so that I could wreak havoc ion the island, but i found a way to move from island to island and secretly wreak things there. They would blame that on the local villains and I would get away scot-free!”
You look at her, stunned, but find the voice to say, “Like what?”
“Oh, darling, would you think I would lie to you? Remember the astroid the helped the villains escape in Super Powers Island? Well I made that astroid here and sent it there. And I want to keep having my fun, so I will make sure you don’t mess things up for me! I can’t be tied to one island! It will be to little for me!”
You try to ask Young Flame or Super Grape to untie you but you see that they are still trying to wake up.
“Oh, your friends aren’t going to be wake up anytime soon!” Queen Cobra says.
(dunDuNDUNNNNN! What will happen next? Find out in the next installment of ISLAND X!)
(i still post 2 much. but i found SO many mistakes in this piece of work. Sorry! Try to understand it please! 😦 )
Suddenly, the Nøkken from Twisted Thicket Island comes and snarles hideously the Queen Cobra.
“AAAHHH!!!” she screams. “That is my one fear. I hate those nøkkens!”
You realize that this is your one chance to escape while she is distracted. You go around the corner, but apparently Queen Cobra saw you escaping. With anger etched in her face, she causes the virus from Virus Hunter Island to infect you.
“Wow!” you think. “This is a problem I can’t solve. If only somebody could save me for once, instead of me saving them.”
(oh man i post WAY too much!)
(No, you’re fine! I love catching up on this! Haven’t been here for a while. So many great installments! Keep the great comments up! 🙂 Again, great job!)
( -_-) Continued…And then suddenly she drops a potion accidentally which brings you back to life. “Aha! King Cobra! Give me the weapon or (you seize a poison of poison) I’ll have to use this!” She gulps. Suddenly,Doctor Hare comes! “You forget me,Jumper? Ha!” And he snatches the weapon from the King Cobra. “Don’t worry,mistress,I’ll kill him now once and for all!”
And if can’t get worse,Bionic Hopper arrives too! “Bionic,take him to our lair.” And he seizes you and jumps so high and far you get seasickness. He finally lands at the lair. “He we arGH!” You realize his foot (or,is it feet,no,it’s a string!) is on water. Remembering his weakness,you push him into the water. “Argh! It’s time to use my weapon!” And his chest opens and a boxing glove on a string punches you. You start to fainting,not helping it as you hear someone come and Bionic scream with pain.
(To Be Continued..250th Comment!)
(Potion of poison,my bad.)
(Ha! Don’t feel bad. Want me to tell you a joke?)
(No, seriously. Anyone?)
(I’ll hear a joke.)
(Why did the squirrel fall out of the tree?)
(Listen, I’ll answer this on Off-Topica. over and out. LOL 🙂 😀 🙂
(Here we are,and start to faint. SO MANY MISTAKES AAAAGGGGH!)
(Continued from Squeezy Rider,btw.)
(Um…guys?I think my post is officially the next Massive Hammer’s post thingamajig.)
(I was wondering that. Let’s hope that there’s no more GlitchPress comments…)
(I agree. For a couple days, mine was. But then it fixed. Yours might too!)
(I hope not. But it isn’t that important. But I wonder if Fishy will do another summary thing. It’s been quite a while since the last one.)
(I already asked her. She said too much happened. And why not?)
(If you go to my blog, {You can click on my name and it will take you there} and then you go to The Adventures of Clean Shark, and I started an Ongoing Story thing for that! I hope you like it!)
(I like it but it was kinda confusing. I mean the 1st three comments weren’t even story related)
You might want to open a poptropican roleplay on your blog. Have everyone use their own poptropica character, create a profile for themselves, and play as that character. It would be pretty fun.
Anyone is welcome to use this idea by the way. I really don’t care. You don’t have to credit, just don’t say other people can’t use it, ok? Have fun!
(cool!
-massive crab leader of mss (missing spy station))
(The simplest one EVER: JJ in trouble and so are is friends. LOL)
When you wake up from your faint, you see a lavender person shooting an angry look at Bionic. You try to look closer, and you see the person is holding something…but what? A sword? A laser? You look very closely, and see the person is holding a wrench. You then back up, slowly, slowly, until you bump into something. The person whirls around to look at you. Two others turn and face her. “What is it, Icy?” asks a blue boy. A hot pink girl looks curiously at you. Confidently, she raises her sword…at you! “Who goes there?” she says in a confident, sassy voice. The dark blue boy join in. He growls at you, to make business. “Hold on,” says the lavender girl in a squeaky, girly voice.
Later, you are riding on a ginormous (ha!) dog. “Good boy, Justin.” says the lavender girl, who happens to own the dog. Then she climbs to the back, where there is a carriage with you, the blue boy, and the hot pink girl. “Hi-” you start to say, but the lavender girl interrupts. “Hi!” she squeaks. “See the hot pink girl? She’s Shiny Wolf. She’s 8. And the dark blue boy?” But jokingly, Shiny Wolf teases, “How about blue blob?” “Okay, see the blue blob?” continues the lavender girl. “He’s Quiet Shell. He’s completed all the islands. He’s 7. And me?” She gives you a hand to shake. “I’m Red Ice. I am 9.” “So am I!” you say, but Red Ice (isn’t it funny RED Ice is lavender? LOL) seems to ignore you. She says,”We are all part of the organization SSP. Or,” she whispers, “the Secret Services for Poptropica. All are welcome, if you keep it a secret! Shhh!” “Can I join?” you ask “Sure!” she says cheerfully. “Now, who are you?” “I-” you begin, but a loud THUMP interrupts. Everyone screams. “I think we better run!” you cry.
(Please continue…)
(PLEASE continue?)
(Noone can see it. It’s below the place people look. Try adding on down here, not replying to anyone’s comment.)
(Hooray,everything’s back to normal!)
(Continued from….me!) You suddenly start to dream. You come into some sort of vision. You see the navigator of Sticky’s ship shouting at you. “It was so important,you made me wait so long,and now it’s gone!” “I didn’t mean to-” “Quiet! Postponing everything like that! And you!” ,she shouts to everyone else,”You were on here with all the time you had,and you ignored me! WHY,why did you-” Suddenly,everything seems to disappear.
You appear in something else,which you recognize as a memory. A boy and girl come and sit down on a bench in a park. The boy says,”Fearless,I am going to get a job at PEAS!” You suddenly realize that the girl is Fearless Shark,Clean’s sister. The boy also sounds familiar… “Oh,that’s great! It’s going to be fun!” “Thank you,Fearless. The Poptropical Explorer’s Anti-Evil Society’s favourite vegetable is Peas! Did you know that?!”
You teleport yet again,to what seems like a vision of the present. You see Super Grape being untied by a cloaked figure. “Zack,this can’t be! You cannot pretend to be Quick Flame anymore!” Your stomach does a somersault and other acrobatic features. Quick Flame was Zack?!” “Oh,shush,Super,I have not been able to reveal my identity since Sprocket (aka Spike) attacked JJ and made him steal the statue!” Your stomach’s acrobatic features are getting better and better. Sprocket made him steal the statue…but…but…
“JJ!JJ!Wake up!”
(To Be continued.)
(Who’s Quick Flame?)
(The cloaked figure with the floating robot whom JJ interrogated along with the others at Super Villain.)
(Strange Cat, why did you ignore my post? It was right there!)
(Well,you replied from me,and since it was a Massive Hammer’s post thingamajig,the next part was already long writtem.)
(Huh?)
(It was NOT a Massive Hammer post thingamajig!)
(Well…)
(…I’ll put those guys on my post by the recent posts!)
(And…here’s the next episode,or installment,call it whatever you want…of Island X-A PHB Special:Ongoing Story Creation blabbity blabbity blah blah blah! 😀 )
You wake up. You see Clean,Sticky,Young Flame,and everyone else. Your stomach finally stops being a circus boy. “What happened,Clean?”
“I came just in time. Me and Sticky were the only ones to escape besides the 3 celebrities. We managed to catch on with the latest parts and managed to free everyone-Young Flame came out of nowhere,saying Spike ran off and helped -and destroyed Bionic.
We came just as you fainted. We also managed to capture the villains at the lair,excluding the defeated ones,E.Vile -Oh,and by the way,we found out that Zeus was away elsewhere around all the times when E.Vile attacked,so he cannot be E.Vile himself-Dr.Hare and King Cobra.
Never mind us,what about you?!”
You tell them about the first and second dreams,but not the third,especially wanting Quick Flame to keep his secrets private.
Clean twitches at the first one. “Oh,she did rage when it vanished today,lucky you were there only in the dream.Won’t say what it was.” “We did see many lobsters moving into the lake,though-“says Silver Wolf. “Which means Captain Crawfish is once more undefeated!”,you say. “Yes, pity.”
As for the second one,Clean and Sticky smile at some long forgotten joke. “That boy was none other than me!”,said Clean. “You see,me and Fearless were talking about my new job,Purple Grape and Curious Flame- “She was my mother!”shout both Super and Young at once.”Ah,yes,they were chatterboxes at school.Best of friends,they were.Anyway,they were murmuring that they were not seeking any more employment,giggling.”
“If I had listened to them,I wouldn’t have met none other than Sticky!” Everyone gasps. “He was interviewing you?!” “He could have,but Grape and Flame were right. They had no vacancy.”
There’s a lot of giggling . “But isn’t he a fashionista tailor by now?”,asks Silver. “Oh,he only founded his now-famous company after he resigned!”
Suddenly,you hear a scream from the woods. “Help! Help! I didn’t do it! I never!Oh,where’s my Horse? Where is it,you goons?”
(What is happening at the woods?Will JJ find out more to his dreams and visions? Will the Queen Cobra take over?After the comment introducing me,is this the longest post I’ve ever made? Find out in the next episode,or installment,call it whatever you want…of Island X-A PHB Special:Ongoing Story Creation blabbity blabbity blah blah blah! 😀 )
(And…here’s the next episode,or installment,call it whatever you want…of Island X-A PHB Special:Ongoing Story Creation blah blah blah! 😀 )
You wake up. You see Clean,Sticky,Young Flame,and everyone else. Your stomach finally stops being a circus boy. “What happened,Clean?”
“I came just in time. Me and Sticky were the only ones to escape besides the 3 celebrities. We managed to catch on with the latest parts and managed to free everyone-Young Flame came out of nowhere,saying Spike ran off and helped -and destroyed Bionic.
We came just as you fainted. We also managed to capture the villains at the lair,excluding the defeated ones,E.Vile -Oh,and by the way,we found out that Zeus was away elsewhere around all the times when E.Vile attacked,so he cannot be E.Vile himself-Dr.Hare and King Cobra.
Never mind us,what about you?!”
You tell them about the first and second dreams,but not the third,especially wanting Quick Flame to keep his secrets private.
Clean twitches at the first one. “Oh,she did rage when it vanished today,lucky you were there only in the dream.Won’t say what it was.”
“We did see many lobsters moving into the lake,though-”says Silver Wolf. “Which means Captain Crawfish is once more undefeated!”,you say. “Yes, pity.”
As for the second one,Clean and Sticky smile at some long forgotten joke. “That boy was none other than me!”,said Clean. “You see,me and Fearless were talking about my new job,Purple Grape and Curious Flame- “She was my mother!”shout both Super and Young at once.
”Ah,yes,they were chatterboxes at school.Best of friends,they were.Anyway,they were murmuring that they were not seeking any more employment,giggling.” “If I had listened to them,I wouldn’t have met none other than Sticky!” Everyone gasps. “He was interviewing you?!”
“He could have,but Grape and Flame were right. They had no vacancy.”There’s a lot of giggling . “But isn’t he a fashionista tailor by now?”,asks Silver. “Oh,he only founded his now-famous company after he resigned!”
Suddenly,you hear a scream from the woods. “Help! Help! I didn’t do it! I never!Oh,where’s my Horse? Where is it,you goons?”
(What is happening at the woods?Will JJ find out more to his dreams and visions? Will the Queen Cobra take over?After the comment introducing me,is this the longest post I’ve ever made? Find out in the next episode,or installment,call it whatever you want…of Island X-
A PHB Special:Ongoing Story Creation blah blah blah! 😀 )
(Island X-A PHB Special:Ongoing Story Creation blabbity blah blah blah? LOL)
(Continued from Strange Cat/Sticky Clown) “You know, Clean, I thought you were a news reporter?” you say. “Oh, yeah, the PEAS thing… I actually worked with Sticky at PEAS before I became a news reporter.” Clean said. “Or should he say a MEWS Reporter? Hah!” Sticky said. “Don’t push it, weirdo.” Clean said angrily. “But yeah, it was always my DREAM to be part of PEAS. In fact, almost all young Poptropicans want to be part of PEAS. But a lot just wind up working at the little shops and stuff. Some people just go and help out others just because they want to. Same with PEAS, only we are permitted to do a lot more dangerous tasks. I quit because I was overwhelmed with the tasks. There’s a lot more to Poptropica than helping with the Islands. And so I’m a news reporter, from the best News company, owned by Harold Mews!” “I see.” you say. “Mew.” you heard. “What’s with the cat?” Clean says. “Oh, that’s my cat. He likes to eat mechanical mice.” Sticky answered. “Wow, a Strange Cat and a Weirdo.” Clean said. “More like Strange Cat, Weirdo.” you say. “Finally! I found you guys! Hopper found the Queen Cobra, and he’s fighting her now! We gotta go!” Big Bubbles said. While everybody was going, Sticky thought to himself, “Strange Cat, Weirdo… I like that.” (To be Continued)
(Yeah….I like that. Also,I’m merging my comment with yours ,so let’s pretend that part with Clean’s version of the tale is omitted,but jokes aren’t.Sorry,Clean!)
(That name really suits you, you know that?)
(But it should be changed to Strange Cat, the Weird COMMENT CRUSHER!!!! AHHH!)
(What? What comment did she crush?)
(Sticky Clown is a guy…)
(Oh. KK)
(*crushes comments*)
(Continued from me and Clean) “Hey,guys!” Hopper suddenly pops out from nowhere. “She escaped because of Dr.Hare.Anyway,what’s that cry from the woods?We must investigate it!” You all run into the woods,except Sticky,who’s deep in thought.
You follow the sound to a spooky place in the middle of the woods.There is a sign that reads,”Monster Carnival Graveyard.Enter at your own risk,mortals.” “Should we?”,asks Big Bubbles.”We must.”,says Beefy Owl. “Look!”,shouts Wild Monster. “What?”,asks Comical Bird,Cuddly Flame,and Clean Shadow at once.”I think he means him.”,says Silver Wolf.
You see a cloaked figure moving away to a grave.It puts a bouquet of flowers on a grave,and walks off.”Look!”,shrieks Clean. There are a set of graves,each of them bearing names. “Here lies…Hip Hop?!How did he die? And here’s Goth Girl!And here’s….Oh my goat,guys,see the one with the flowers!” You run towards the grave.It reads,”Here lies- (Who is on the grave?To be continued!)
(BTW I’m still Young Flame. I’m trying to get my posts to show.)
JumpyJumper! The grave says Jumpy Jumper! Your friends gasp and you fall to your knees.
(What happens next? Why is JJ’s name on that grave? Check back soon to find out. Now back to our regularly scheduled programme, Brainacs!)
(I wrote this in the PM. I don’t wake up at midnight!!!!!!!!!!!)
(Continued from Beefy Owl) You see your soul move into the grave,and suddenly pass out.No…you can’t die…you can’t….everything goes black. (To be continued)
(Continued from Strange Cat) “JJ!” Clean screams. “Sticky, can you do that one thing you did when Hopper struck JJ?” Clean asked. “I think I-” Sticky was saying, until his spirit went into the ground and then a grave came to life and read: “Here lies Sticky Clown, a foolish Poptropican who died. Oh Clown, who will watch your Costume Shop? – Queen Cobra” “Gulp, I have to get out of here!” Clean said. He grabbed Sticky’s and your backpacks and ran out of the graveyard. He looked in JJ’s backpack and found the Ultimate Weapon and the Ultimate Shield, and found the Magic Wand Sticky once used in Monster Carnival, and a Tape Measure that Sticky sometimes used as a whip when he and Clean worked at PEAS. Sticky was always a fashonista. When Clean got to the Graveyard, he came face to face with the Queen Cobra… (To Be Continued)
(Cont. from Strange Cat)
Your soul sees all your friends trying to wake you. The language of the Chosen One appeared in the sky over your body. You realize that none of your friends can understand. You laugh as you watch your friends trying to make sense of the strange symbols. You stand straight like you are about to dive off a diving board. Just as you are about to dive into Silver Wolf, you feel the pull of the grave. Quickly you dive into her.
Silver Wolf shivers and says, “Man. It sure got cold all of a sudden. Like ghost!”
Then she starts to read the symbols.
“Wait. Are you reading the strange symbols?” Comical Bird asks.
“Yes. And it’s the language of the Chosen One,” Silver Wolf replies.
“Repeat the translation,” Beefy Owl says.
Silver Wolf opens her mouth and says…..
(What does the message say? To be cont.)
(I thought of my idea before he posted. It took a while to load.)
(I could say the same thing, Young Flame. ._.)
(What does that mean?)
(You can choose mine or Clean’s. You can use this next addition or not. Just specify.)
Just as Silver Wolf started to talk, your soul is sucked out of her.
“Oh no! JJ left me,” Silver Wolf cried. (Sorry Clean! I really liked your addition. BTW, Clean Shark wrote this next part!) “JJ!” Clean screams. “Sticky, can you do that one thing you did when Hopper struck JJ?” Clean asked. “I think I-” Sticky was saying, until his spirit went into the ground and then a grave came to life and read: “Here lies Sticky Clown, a foolish Poptropican who died. Oh Clown, who will watch your Costume Shop? – Queen Cobra” “Gulp, I have to get out of here!” Clean said. He grabbed Sticky’s and your backpacks and ran out of the graveyard. He looked in JJ’s backpack and found the Ultimate Weapon and the Ultimate Shield, and found the Magic Wand Sticky once used in Monster Carnival, and a Tape Measure that Sticky sometimes used as a whip when he and Clean worked at PEAS. Sticky was always a fashonista. When Clean got to the Graveyard, he came face to face with the Queen Cobra… (To Be Continued)
(This story is getting really weird!)
(Continued from Young Flame and me) “Oh, Sharky Boy, I have something for you!” Queen Cobra said sinisterly, as she held up Silver Wolf’s body. “NO! But, I do have something for YOU!” Clean said as he blasted Queen Cobra with the Ultimate Weapon. “Ahh!!” The Queen Cobra said. “Not so menacing now, are you Garden Snake?” Clean mocked. “Sssnake? I am the QUEEN COBRA! And now, your life ends, Clean Shark.” Queen Cobra hissed as she turned into an 80 foot long Cobra! “Gulp. Now what do I do? Aha! I know!” Clean said. He grabbed the Bolt and the Ultimate Weapon, and charged for Queen Cobra’s stomach. He used the bolt and cut some of it open, electrocuting the Queen and then he blasted it with the Ultimate Weapon. “No! No, no, no, NOO!!!” Queen Cobra shouted, and then, Clean blasted her Stomach with the Ultimate weapon again, and she exploded, and that was the last of Queen Cobra. Suddenly, all the graves vanished, and Hip Hop, Goth Girl, you, Sticky, and Silver Wolf came back to life. “You guys are alive!” Clean shouted. “Hey, where’s Queen Cobra?” Hip Hop asked. “I cut her stomach open, also, she turned into a giant Cobra, I blasted her with the Ultimate Weapon twice, and she went boom. Also, JJ, here’s your backpack and the Ultimate Weapon and Shield. Sticky, here’s your backpack, magic wand, and tape measure.” Clean said. “Wow! That must’ve been scary! And I know scary.” Goth Girl said. “No kidding.” Silver Wolf said. “She’s right.” Sticky said. “Yup.” you say. “Well, we got Black Widow done, Binary Bard is gone, and the Queen Cobra is gone. “Now all we need is to see if Captain Crawfish is dead or not, we need to destroy Dr. Hare, defeat E. Vile and his army, and… keep Zeus from doing anything bad for a while.” Clean said. (To be continued… P.S, is this one of my longest comments for the story yet?)
(Yes, but it’s OK. Cont. from Clean Shark)
“Wow. That’s a lot. What should we do next?” you ask.
All of a sudden, a parcel descends from the sky. You open in and it contains a ray gun, like to freeze ray from Despicable Me 2. There is a note attached to it.
ກະລຸນາໃສ່, ຈິດວິນຍານ, ສໍາລັບການທົດສອບທີ່ແຂງ.
ເມື່ອໃດທີ່ທ່ານຈະໄດ້ຮັບໃນ, ຫວັງວ່າສໍາລັບການທີ່ດີທີ່ສຸດ.
The Sacred Language of the Chosen One! You translate it to read-
“Zap yourselves and you will be made invincible
And hurry! Someone is coming very soon!”
You tell your friends and zap them one by one. When Young Flame reaches to zap you, her arm snaps back to her side. The same thing happens to all you other friends. You quickly throw away the gun and it explodes in a very ominous pink cloud. You see a spaceship descending from space. A rabbit spaceship.
“Doctor Hare is coming! Quick, hide! I will fight him!” you shout, but when you look back at your friends, you see the laying on the ground, stiff as a board.
“I knew this was a bad idea!” Clean Shark said before his jaw clamped shut.
“I’d tell you to shut up if you had a choice,” you say while rolling your friends out of harms way.
When you look back, you see Dr. Hare staring at you.
“Haha. I tricked you Not-So-Chosen-One! I learned your not-so-secret language and sent you my newest invention, an immobilizing ray!”
Dr. Hare walks over to your friends and puts a familiar hat on them, the enslaving PINK BUNNY EARS!!! Your friends stand up, the hats seem to counteract with the ray, and you see their eyes are the trademark purple swirling eyes that show that they now only listen to Dr. Hare.
“MWAHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA! Minions! ATTACK!!!!!”
You friends move towards you like a pack of zombies. You know you can’t hurt them, but you can’t ignore them either! Not with those shiny foot-long knives Dr. Hare gave them!!!!
(To Be Cont!!!!)
(Continued from Young Flame) Dr. Hare leaves you to face the Bunny Drones, and he watches in the sky. You have to think of something. Quick! “Ah! I know!” you say, remembering when Hopper stopped your head from flinging back to your body. You find a rock, and you tackle Sticky Bunny Drone and use the rock, but Sticky’s body gets up, and his head bops back up. “Um, aha!” you say, you zap everybody with the Ultimate Weapon after you set it to stun, and you lurched for your backpack. You grabbed the Jetpack from Early Poptropica, grab the Ultimate Weapon, set it to destroy, and flew up to face Dr. Hare. “Ah, Jumpy Jumper, you survived…” Dr. Hare said. You didn’t hesitate and zapped him with the Ultimate Weapon. His heart was still beating, but his Ankle Rockets malfunctioned, causing him to fly all over the place, and then he crashed into the ground, and he exploded. All that was left of him were his goggles and a bionic foot. Because Dr. Hare was done for, the hats turned off, and the stiffness went away from your friends. “Well, no more bunny boy. Wait, NOW where will we get are Cuusoo rewards?” Silver Wolf said. Everyone cracked up, but then a sword came right in front of everybody, and you saw Captain Crawfish, but, his clothes were ripped and wet, and he was covered in scars. “Ye all are doomed. Arr, hah, hah, hah!!” (To be Continued…)
(Cont. from Clean Shark)
“Don’t worry guys. He might have more experience, but we have extra luck on our sides!” you exclaim.
“How?” asks Smart Gamer.
“Dr. Hare left behind a bionic foot. You know that a rabbit’s foot is good luck, and a super rabbit = a super foot = super luck,” you explain.
You have a particular hatred for Captain Crawfish. You despise him more than all the other villains. You set the Weapon to Super Stun. You stun Crawfish and he falls. You set the weapon to Destroy and are about to strike when you notice a particular dustiness in the air. You turn and see a giant crab next to Queen Cobra.
“Holy Crab!” you shout.
“And Cobra!” says Comical Bird.
“Oh I’m sorry. Where are my manner? Allow me to introduce my friend, King Crab. He wants revenge to almost destroying me. He found a reviver, that brought me back to life and now he will destroy you.
You don’t know what to do. You have a giant crab and cobra in front of you and a giant pain behind you.
(To Be Cont.)
(Wow, I forgot about Lucky Rabbit’s foot! Nice job!)
(Thanks. That a really big coincidence!!)
(It is! LOL)
(IKR!I thought you did it on purpose!)
(BTW sorry i that was mean! ☺)
(No, you weren’t mean! It is quite funny. 🙂 I have to come up with a good edition. Hey, what was with bringing back Queen Cobra? She went boom!)
(to keep the story ongoing. it would make it interesting)
And then you die
(Make your Poptropican die! Leave poor JJ alone! He’s only 10!)
(Yeah. Don’t be so insensitive! JJ has already died like 5 times and he’s only nine! Be nice!)
(Actually, ten. Remember? He had a birthday when the story was starting up. He’s 10.)
(And then the electricity goes off so that you can’t post this anymore.)
(Yay! 300 Comments!!!! Cont. from Whatever)
King Crab says he didn’t have all his fun so he takes the reviver out and shoots you with it. (Stop making JJ die! This is and ONGOING STORY!) You turn and you see Captain Crawfish advancing with a wicked blade in his hand. The double C’s are advancing. They don’t have any human weapons, but King Crab’s claws are REALLY sharp and you heard Queen Cobra if feeling extra toxic today.
(To Be Cont.)
(SLANTED FISH: What do you think of our ongoing story? Isn’t it AWESOME!?!?!?!?)
(Slanted Fish: Yup, nice work!)
(Continued from Young Flame) You take out Dr. Hare’s foot, and take out your Ultimate Weapon, set it to Destroy, and then you jump right above King Crab and Queen Cobra, and you use Dr. Hare’s foot to fry King Crab and use the Ultimate Weapon on the Queen Cobra. Then you use the Ultimate Weapon on King Crab and he explodes, and Queen Cobra explodes, too. You may have finished the Crab and the Cobra, but now, you have to face Captain Crawfish… “Arr, I’ll cut off ye head and make it my Fireplace decoration!” “You can’t chop it off, not a single Poptropican has a neck!” you say. (To be Continued… Sorry for making this so short!)
(Continued from me) Right when Captain Crawfish draws his sword, a Poptropican swoops in using a vine and kicks Captain Crawfish, sending his sword straight to the ocean. You grab Crawfish, use your jetpack, and you drop him into the ocean, and he sinks, still unconscious. You come back to land and ask, “Who are you?” you ask the blonde haired boy, he had jeans, with a black belt and gold buckle, the same shirt as Clean Shark, a black jacket, and he was wearing a red headband. “I’m Friendly Turtle.” he says. “I just got finished signing up, I wanted to go to a place called 24 Carrot, but I must’ve gone the wrong way, I’m in a place called Monster Carnival! Not much of a Carnival, don’t see very many Monsters, either.” Turtle continued. “But I know a bad guy when I see one, and the way that guy was holding that sword at you, I knew he was no good.” “I see. So, you accidentally came here instead of 24 Carrot? I saw this on the map. It was called Island X when I came, I didn’t exactly see the sign. Came here and found some PopNuts. It was a trap. They were actually jelly PopNuts! I was hoping they were Chocolate!” you say. “Say, how did you all get here?” Turtle asked the others. “My blimp was popped, I swam here thinking I was heading to 24 Carrot.” Clean said. “I just need to put a Costume Shop anywhere. I put one on the Plane that E. Vile invaded, those Robots got some cool costumes.” Sticky said. “I was exploring and found an Island, and I thought it was just some abandoned Island, but I fell out of my blimp and it floated away.” Silver Wolf replied. “I was going to run the place, but I lost it to Zeus, got it back, lost it to Zeus, and got lost in the woods, and he made me fall to the dark side, but JJ here redeemed me.” Hopper said. “Queen Cobra kidnapped us and took our spirits out.” Hip Hop and Goth Girl said. (To be Continued…)
( *planet)
(what about a planet?)
(From Clean Shark. PS: I like Friendly Turtle! 🙂 )
“So, now that we know each other, what do we do next?” asks Friendly Turtle.
You stand, exasperated at this huge adventure you and your friends have had, and now this newcomer has more boldness than all the rest of you. “Well, woud you like to join our expedition?”
“Sure!” FT (Friend Turtle abbreviated) happily replies. “What can I help you with?”
You and your friends warn him of differnt dangers that lurk on the island. However, you hear a frightening and yet familiar sound. Then you see it… the Nøkken! It is so spooky how it can appear and disappear, but you always see it’s bloody-red pawprints, almost glowing foreboding warnings.
But wait; it doesn’t seem to be as hostile as it usually is. Is that a smile around it’s lips, instead of an evil menace…?
(To be continued, unless someone wants to continue for me.)
(Cont. from Clean)
Friendly Turtle looks at Young Flame and Beefy Owl.
“And you?” he asks.
“Beefy Owl and I were sent here by the Curious Sign-Up Box,” Young Flame replies. “I wanted to bring my sister, Red Lizard, but the Curious Sign-Up Box said to ask you. I see you are doing fine, so I can transport her here wenever we need her.”
Clean Shark sees something laying on the beach and goes to pick it up.
“No, don’t! It’s probably another trap!” shouts Beefy Owl.
Clean tries to stop, but his head flies off and hits a giant red button. His head flies back to his body with a giant red welt on it and passes out. The earth shakes and the ray on the beach explodes. Somehow you realize that only Clean can repair it. A message flies down and says,
“The worst thing has happened here,
All villians are revived, far and near.
Not all of them are Poptropica born,
But they will give you a reason to mourn.”
“Uh oh. That doesn’t sound good,” says Friendly Turtle.
You run to Clean to see if he can help, but you feel his pulse slowing.
“Red Lizard know medicine, let me call her!” shouts Young Flame.
She runs off to summon her sister. You look back at Clean and see that he has almost stopped breathing. He must have hit his head really hard! You see green ooze on his head wound which is now bleeding.
“That is acid. Deadly acid,” Beefy Owl said gravly.
(Sorry Clean. We needed some drama. To be Cont.)
(JJ dying 6 times is already enough drama! Clean Shark sacrificed himself to save JJ from dying permenently! Why not kill Sticky Clown?)
(Hey! Just for that,if you come alive,I’ll kill you again!Btw,is Red Lizard somehow the same Red Lizard some parts ago who was supposed to be Sticky’s wife?)
(Did I say Sticky Clown? I meant Bobo Clown! Sorry, still used to saying Sticky Clown, plus I wrote that on my tablet. That thing is crazy when it comes to typing.)
(No. I hav a person named Red Lizard. I have to double check.)
(No! It’s Red Rock. Sorry for the confusion!)
(And there wasn’t really any drama around JJ’s deaths except for that one time. We want to make it interesting!)
(Which one? When E. Vile struck JJ, or when Queen Cobra took JJ’s spirit out of him?)
(When Queen Cobra took JJ’s spirit out of him.)
(I say both when E. Vile killed JJ and when Queen Cobra took his spirit out of him.)
(Continued from Young Flame) Red Rock finally got there, but when she finally cleaned up all the acid and blood, Clean was already dead. “Um, does anyone know how to revive someone?” Red Rock asked, worried that it was too late. “I do! If I know anything about electricity, it’s an important part of life! Now stand back!” Hopper said, and with that, there was a whole dome of electricity surrounding him and Clean. Suddenly, Clean’s body jumped back up and his eyes opened. Hopper stopped the electricity. “Oy, why’s everything spinning around?” Clean said. Then he fainted. “I’m okay!” he said. Sticky drew his sword, wanting revenge on Clean suggesting that he die instead of him in the comments section. You see what he’s about to do and you take Sticky’s sword and slap him in the face. You then set your Ultimate Weapon to stun and blast Sticky with it so that he wouldn’t cause any trouble ’till Clean woke up. (To be continued)
(One minute…I never had a sword!)
(Well, you apparently got one out of your backpack. Ugh, fashonistas. They don’t know anything….)
(And I’ll also kill Hopper and Fearless along with you.
(Hopper will kill you. He killed JJ! But then you saved him with a magic wand. Anyways, Hopper would kill you. He has an army of robots that he reprogrammed. Boom.)
(I’ll use the wand on me before I die and use it to destroy his robots.)
(What if I write that it’s broken in the edition I’m writing right now?)
(Then I can write that I make it unbroken again. Now let’s change the subject. What’s your favourite part?)
(I honestly like the one I’m writing right now. You’ll be able to see it once I’m done, if it doesn’t have to be in moderation all day.)
(Whose is it continued from?And also, remember to leave a few gaps after 5 lines or something.)
(Young Flame. She continued my edition ’cause she liked it better.)
(Cont. from Clean)
Red Rock just laughs and says, “You are a weird bunch. Do you need me to stay or can I get out of here alive without Clowney here killing me?”
Sticky glared at her and tries to raise her sword, but the shock is still too much. You get a spray bottle and spray Sticky.
“Bad Sticky, bad Sticky!” you say sternly trying not to laugh.
“Stay. We could use your fighting skills in future fight. We have much more to fight now,” Young Flame says to her sister. You notice that she has a knife on her belt, a bow, and a backpack with arrows and probably a lot of other weapons. You agree that you could use her.
(To be cont.)
(Red Rock’s line is hilarious!)
(No,Red,I won’t kill you.However,Clean…)
(That’s long past. >:-( Let it go.)
(Why should I?You’ve introduced an evil me,trying to wreck down my reputation with that,and instead,I merely continue it.)
(._. Fashonista.)
(Yep.Typical.)
(http://www.poptropica.com/avatarstudio/avatar.html?a=baEhCemdVVFdGa1pYVndNVGs0
Red Rock. Just in case you wanted to see it.)
(Continued from Young Flame) When Clean woke up, he saw you right in front of Sticky, pushing him back from trying to kill Clean. While Clean was looking around to catch up, he saw Red Rock. He couldn’t stop staring at her. “Clean? Clean?” you said when you finally calmed Sticky down. You look where Clean is looking and you say, “Oh, brother…” But you can’t help that you have a crush on Young Flame. You decide to tell Red Rock to stick along, for these reasons: One, she could be real helpful, the larger the team, the better, and two, so that Clean doesn’t try to kill you for sending her away. “Okay! She said. When Clean noticed that she turned to look at him, he looked at Sticky, who was glaring at him, so that it looked like he was just looking around. He looked back at Red Rock, “I gotta talk to her! It’s not everyday you see an adventurous girl like that!” Clean thought to himself. (To be Continued)
(Cont. from Clean)
Clean goes to talk to Red Rock.
“Hey, those weapons are pretty impressive. Can you use all of them?” he asks.
Red Rock similes at then intrest then frowns and says, “No I carry them around for fun. Of course I can use them! Any one have a dummy I can use?”
“I prefer the word mannequin. And I always carry a collapsable one. Just don’t destroy it!” Sticky Clown says, still glaring at Clean.
“Fashonista,” mutters Clean causing Red Rock to laugh and Sticky to glare at him harder.
Red Rock draws an arrow and pierces the dummy’s heart, ducks a branch, rolls, lands on a knee and pierces the heart again. She draws her knife, rolls, and slashes a big RR before you can blink.
“Wow. Just wow,” Clean says, thinking that he’s more in love with her than ever.
“My turn! Red Rock is just as skilled making bow as she is shooting them. She made my bow,” Young Flame says, pulling out her silver bow and arrows. “Just as a warning, I’m not as good as my sister.”
You stare longingly at Flame as she draws and arrow and splits Rock’s She climbs a tree, not unlike a squirrel. She shoots am arrow through the heart from a dangerously branch at ease. You think she’s better the Red Rock.
Clean leans over and whispers, “Red Rock is WAY better.”
You are about to protest, but decide otherwise, not wanting to pick a fight with him. You ask Flame to teach you how to shoot. You turn a little pink when she touches your hands. You are thinking about asking her to be on Reality TV with you while she is explaining about aim. You shoot and hit the dummy’s chest. Young Flame high-fives you, but doesn’t let go. Now you really turn red, but turn to see how clean is doing. You see a golden arrow in the base and on the tree beside the dummy. He doesn’t look too happy about your skills and handholding. Young Flame goes to help Clean while Red Rock makes you a bow and arrows out of the nylon from Cryptics Island and wood from the ash tree right next to you. She snaps her fingers and they all turn a sunset orange, your favorite color. Clean asks one that is bright red, figures. You try to shoot your new bow. Just as you arrow hits target, the earth starts to shake. You grab your arrows and throw all your friends theirs. You load your bow and look around.
(To Be Cont.)
(Funny, my favorite color is red!)
(Wow.)
(Why does everyone hate me? I mean,I wouldn’t actually kill your character.but your hate posts towards me aren’t helping!)
(BTW This is Young Flame, JJ’s crush
http://www.poptropica.com/avatarstudio/avatar.htmla=bbWpNZG1hVUhWd2NIbHNiM1psY2pVd05ERTI%3D )
(I can’t see her. In fact, it loads up as Page Not Found)
(Let’s try again.
http://www.poptropica.com/avatarstudio/avatar.html?a=bMzlhQXZHVUhWd2NIbHNiM1psY2pVd05ERTI%3D
Does that work?)
(Yes. It does. JJ and Clean definitely would have a serious argument if given the chance.)
(IKR! That would be bad. JJ would KILL Clean!!)
(No, Clean would kill JJ!)
(You wanna bet on that? I can MAKE JJ kill Clean in my next posting! And you can’t kill JJ! He’s only 10 and he’s been killed once for every year he’s been living! And my in my next post, Red Rock might be dead! ;))
(Be honest. Do I post too much?)
(Yes.)
(Continued from Young Flame) Everyone evacuates, except for Clean and Sticky. “Hey, fashonista, want to see my Ninja star skills?” Clean says. “Fine, just don’t destroy the manniquin!” Sticky replies. Clean shoots at the dummy’s neck, and the star chops the head off. “NO!” Sticky yells. Sticky and Clean start kicking and punching, Clean clonking Sticky in the head several times with his mike, and Sticky whipping Clean with the tape measure. Then, a large shadow appears above them, and they gasp in terror when they are picked up and see what it is. It’s Dr. Hare’s new Rabbot, and in it is a fully Flesh and Bone Dr. Hare, and he says, “Oh, how cute. You two have been best friends since you met, and now you’re trying to kill each other.” When Dr. Hare took them away, Clean dropped his glasses and Sticky lost his Measuring tape. “Rolecall!” you say. “Hip Hop.” “Here” “Goth Girl.” “Here” “Young Flame.” “Here” “Little Hopper.” “Here” “Friendly Turtle.” “Here” “Red Rock.” “Here.” “Clean Shark and Sticky Clown.” Silence. You look up and you see that Sticky and Clean aren’t there! “Come on, guys!” you shout. Once you get back to where you were earlier, you see the headless dummy, Sticky’s measuring tape and Clean’s glasses. “Oh, no.” you say. You are wide eyed when you see the giant, robotic Rabbit tracks. “Come on, we need to follow the tracks! Oh, but they lead so far away!” you say. “I have a blimp!” Turtle says. All of you jump in and follow the tracks. It leads to an arena. “This is not good.” you say, looking at the tape measure and glasses. (To be continued)
(Continued from Young) Suddenly,something strikes your mind. “Guys,wasn’t Sticky back there thinking when we came here?” “Yes?” “Then what’s he doing here?” Suddenly,another Sticky comes out of nowhere and asks,”Have any of you seen my bag and collapsible mannequin?” Now everyone stares at the fake Sticky .He suddenly explodes into…
“Bionic Hopper?!” “Yes,Jumpy! Thought you all got rid of me,yes?Well,I’m only stronger and can take more damage now! Suddenly,you remember the Manticore miniboss sometime ago… “And you,Jumpy Jumper! I challenge you to a fight against me! His boxing glove punches the ground. Part of the ground opens to…lava?! “Yes,Jumpy,there is an added benefit to me. But you think…could you force him somehow in the lava?
“Now come and face me!” You do. You enter your first boss fight.
(Actually, I made another edition hours ago. It just has to wait for moderation. Serves me right Fishy was probably in bed when I posted. Go figure.)
(Sorry, Sticky! I like Clean’s better. Cont. from Clean Shark!)
You lower the blimp and see the arena. In the ring are no other than……
“STICKY AND CLEAN!” shouts Red Rock.
It’s abvious that Clean doesn’t know what’s going on because he’s throwing punches at the crowd. The area where his nose WOILD be is bleeding bad. His nose would be broken if he had one. Sticky has a devilish grin on his face, but his head is oddly scratched, but it looks old.
“I’ve gotta save them!” shouts Young Flame.
“NOOOOO!” you shout, but it’s too late. She’s already jumped.
“OK. I’m not fomd of Sticky since he tried to kill the dead, but I like Clean Shark, so I need to save him,” says Red Rock.
‘Great! Now we’re going to lose the twins! This is just GREAT!’ you think.
You close your eyes.
You hear Clean shout, “RED ROCK! GET OUT OF HERE! YOU MIGHT GET HURT!”
You hear the thud of a fist against human skin and don’t want to look. You don’t realize it, but you’ve started crying. Next thing you know, you are feeling someone tap on your shoulder. It’s…..
(To be Cont. BTW I have an idea if you need help!)
(BTW, it’s ‘I’m not FOND of Sticky…’)
(And ‘It’s OBVIOUS that Clean doesn’t know what’s going on….’ )
(And ‘The area where is nose WOULD be is bleeding.’ )
(SO MANY MISTAKES!!!! Sorry!)
(It’s okay.)
(I know how you feel.)
(Okay,everyone please wait.I’m going to start the next part.)
(Continued from Young Flame) It’s Bionic Hopper! “But I thought you died!” “Oh,I only pretended to.I barely survived. Then I spotted your Sticky friend,muttering something about renaming himself or something. I managed to knock him out,and take his stuff. I tried to kill Clean with a random excuse,but you stopped me.”
You’re shocked. “And you were just dueling Clean now?” “Yes,and I defeated him.Now,should I kill-” “You won’t kill anybody without facing me first!” “Oh,okay Jumper.But you’ll regret it.” He suddenly becomes 10 feet tall,and boxing gloves appear on his spring-hands,and there’s a health meter on his chest. Suddenly the words ‘BOSS BATTLE’ appear in the sky. You realize what is going to happen. You say,”Let’s duel,Bionic.”
(THIS IS THE SAME YOUNG FLAME! MY ICON KEEPS CHANGING!!)
You take out the Ultimate weapon and set it to destroy. You blast him and he dies.
“That was easy,” Sticky says.
Your head whips around and your body slowly follows.
“I thought YOU were dead! Why is everyone dying and coming back alive!” you scream. Then you remember about the rest of your friends. You look down and see that they are….
(To be Cont. PS. I still have an idea if anyone is stuck.)
They are happy! “Great job,JJ!” But Sticky looks worried. “What is it?” “I have so many customers to attend to! I’ll be right back!” And he vanishes. “Guys,look!”,shouts Silver Wolf. Bionic’s boxing gloves suddenly reform himself! “Good luck with destroying me,Jumper!” And he knocks the weapon over to the undead Hare. “Yes,Bionic! I’ll give my mistress this!” And he zooms off.
“Well,all I have to do is to kill you.” Suddenly the edges of the arena open to lava! “Now no one can help,and if you fly over it…’ Suddenly a magma ball shoots up and explodes. “That will happen.Now,I’ll show you what a real boss fight is like,Jumper. And if you make it till here,my mistress will kill you.” You gulp.
(Why are you so obsessed with bringing back Bionic Hopper?)
(Continued from Young Flame) Sticky and Clean frown at each other, then Sticky says, “Sorry for trying to kill you, Clean.” “Hey, sorry for wishing it was your head that blew off instead of mine.” Clean said. “Now, um, who’s that over there? Can’t see who.” “It’s Red Rock.” Sticky replied. “Say we get out of this rope?” Clean asked. “I dunno, I guess so, if you’re strong enough.” Sticky replied. “Hey, if I won the Poptropolis Games several times, I think I can break a little rope.” Clean said. They broke out of the rope, and Clean grabbed his Spud Gun out of his backpack, and said into his microphone, “I’m armed, but beware, I can’t see!” Clean said, he then knocked out a Bully Bot and Captain Crawfish. Red Rock came and shouted, “Come on, guys! Get in front of me, NOW! Get back to the blimp, I’m right behind y-” “Huh”? Clean and Sticky said, they turned around to find an arrow in Red Rock’s back. “NO!” Clean shouted. Young Flame caught up with them and Sticky and Clean carried Red Rock back to the blimp. Young Flame took the arrow out of Red Rocks back and cleaned it. Once they got back to the main area of Monster Carnival, they continued to Early Poptropica, Poptropica Towers, where Clean and Sneaky Cheetah lived. “You’ve come to the right place, I know about medical stuff. And I’m supposing this is your girlfriend, Clean?” Sneaky said. “What? No.” Clean said, wanting to end the conversation. “She sure is!” you say mockingly. Clean whacks you in the head. “Well, your girlfriend is Young Flame, isn’t it?” Clean mocks, with a grin on his face. “Oh, it’s ON!” you say. Clean hits you and you fall down because you were not balanced. “Weakling.” Clean says. You feel a rivalry coming on, but it won’t go far if Red Rock dies. “Okay, your turn, Hopper.” Sneaky said. Hopper used his remote and Red Rock was alive and well. “Okay, we’re going to rest here for a few nights, and then we’re going back to Monster Carnival. Okay?” you say. “Okay.” everyone says. But you feel kind of bad for Clean and Sneaky, ’cause they will have to find enough places for everyone to sleep, and they only have so much food. (To be Continued…)
(Sorry, I thought of this before the last two posts were posted.)
You suddenly feel something coming on. You remember part of your training.
You blast the words ມື່ອໃດທີ່ທ່ານຈະໄດ້ຮັບໃນ, ຫວັງວ່າສໍາລັບການທີ່ດີທີ່ສຸດ.. The lava freezes. You run out, unfreeze the lava and put up a shield bubble. It’s an airtight shield bubble.
ຫວັງວ່າສໍາລັບການທີ່ດີທີ່ສຸດ. That spell makes Sticky Robot breathe air, and die if no air is available. You suck all the air out of the shield bubble. Sticky Robot explodes and the pieces disappear. Then Sticky Clown appears. You realize that you haven’t seen him and Sticky Robot at the same time since Sticky “died”. You realize that Sticky CLOWN and Sticky ROBOT are the same! But Sticky regenerates into SC (Sticky Clown) when SR (Sticky Robot) dies.
“I know your dirty little secret, Sticky Robot!” Everyone gasps at what you say. “Now tell me. Who is this mistress? You have to tell me or else Sticky might be no more.”
“Well, I know YOUR fatal secret,” SC says. He grabs Young Flame and puts a knife to her heart. “Come any closer or attack me and Young Flame gets it.”
What will you do?!?!?!?!?
(To Be Cont. BTW NO IDEA!!!!!)
(I like Clean’s better. Cont. From Clean Shark)
You return the beach. You turn on Clean and say, “Payback!!” You take out the Ultimate Weapon and set it to Harm+Knock Out. I would kill you, but your poor girlfriend almost died. You shoot Clean and he is knocked out. ມື່ອໃດທີ່ທ່ານຈະໄດ້ຮັບໃນ. That wipes everyone else’s memory. You knock them out too. When they wake up, you are holding the Ultimate Weapon (now set to destroy) and you have scratches and blood all over your face. Clean does too.
“What happened?” Young Flame shrieks.
“Bionic Hopper came. (you don’t tell her you summoned him) He knocked you all out. He was about to do the same to us. Clean and I tried to fight him, but Clean got knocked out. Finally I git a good shot at Hopper with the Weapon. He blew up.” You motion to the debris.
Red Rock tries to heal him but since the Ultimate Weapon is unhealable by her medicine, he didn’t wake up. You somehow knew he would wake up in about a day. Everyone eats and falls asleep. When you wake up, the campsite is destroyed. Young Flame and Red Rock are up by the water. They are laying unconscious. They aren’t moving. Incredible Bubbles tells you that they trie to fight a mysterious force.
“Red Rock ran out first. Young Flame stayed behind to explain that this was a force that killed the rest of their family and wanted them next. She said to hide or else the force would flee. They wanted the battle done once and for all. Then they ran off. We heard two screams and weird, messed up laughter. We all ran out of the tent and the twins were like this and there was a strange black shadow. It saw us and disappeared. You guys weren’t destroyed because Young Flame carried you here to safety since you guys were’t waking up,” Incredible Bubbles said.
Clean woke up with no memory of what happened. He looked around saw Red Rock.
“What?!?!?! NOOOOOOOOOO!” he shouts and runs to Red Rock’s body.
(To Be Cont.)
(Wow. That took me almost 30 min to write! And I’m a REALLY fast typer!!!!)
(That seemed real weird, what was with this Force and whatnot? It just seemed too rushed. I know it took you a while but I can’t understand it.)
(Wait, now I get it. Sorry. I’m going to continue.)
(Continued from Young Flame) “What happened?” Clean asked. “There was this Force, it killed Young and Red.” Incredible Bubbles said. Suddenly, the shadow appeared, and then it turned into… HADES! “H- Hades? I thought you were good!” Clean said. “What, oh, no. You got that wrong, bud. I’m doing this because you stole my crown. “That’s a stupid reason. Plus, you GAVE me your crown!” Clean replied. “I let you USE it, now I want it back, or else your friends right there won’t ever see the light of day again. Just the darkness of the Underworld.” Hades replied. “But, I want to have Poseidon’s trident, too. Or else none of you will live another day!” Clean didn’t want anybody to die, not even you, because he realized that he went too far with the insults and mocking, and you realized it too. You threatened to kill Clean. When before, you would do anything to get him back. He killed the Queen Cobra to save you and the others. Gave Hopper the Ultimate medallion when he was evil to save you. He trained you. And now you two were rivals, just because of your crushes. You went so far to threaten to kill him. And now your realizing all that you have went through with your friends. You realized that Clean realized you two’s foolishness. Clean gave Hades the items and Hades kept his promise. “See, now was that so hard? I may not be exactly good, but I’m a man of my word. Now, good bye. And with that, Young Flame went and kissed you on the cheek, and you were real surprised, then you fainted. Clean laughed because of your reaction, but then Red Rock came and did the same as Young Flame, and Clean fainted, too. Once you and Clean woke up, you apologized to each other, and you and Clean were not rivals, but buddies again. But you knew that all the villains were revived, and that the battle wasn’t even finished. (To Be Continued)
(However,there are still certain rivalries to be made up…)
(Clean and Strange, I just started a new blog. Do you want to be authors? I need help!
Thanks! Young Flame!)
(BTW the web address is youngflamespopblog.wordpress.com )
(It still hasn’t come in my E-Mail, can you resend it?)
(How about now? BTW I’m going to up you to editor. I forgot the definitions.)
(Yeah!)
(what’s ur username so i can add you?)
(cleanshark)
(k. done. feel free to add anyone.)
(did you see it yet?)
(Nice. That sounded like a happy ending. Enfaces on ending )
You look at Young Flame. She is smiling at you. Red Rock is smiling at Clean Shark.
At the same time, they said, “Will you go out with me?”
You and Clean look at each other. Then you look at the girls. You nod and hug them. All your friends say “Awwww!” and “Those twins are mighty popular.” Some of them are even crying. You move out to the beach to set up picnics that your friends made. They leave to give you privacy. About 10 minutes into the date, the earth starts shaking.
“Again!?!?!?!” you all say at the same time. You look behind you and see…
(To Be Cont. BTW Slanted Fish, can I put an ongoing story in my blog?)
(Continued from…Young Flame.BTW,I may have to leave the story if romance comes) Suddenly,another Sticky comes and attacks Sticky Clown! “Enough of the Stickies!”,you shout. “But….he knocked me out with Bionic Hopper! And I’m not Sticky,I’m Strange Cat,Weirdo!” “Alright,first,who is the other Sticky who was threatening me?And two,I think the ‘Strange Cat’ thing’s gone loopy into your mind.” “He’s Sticky ROBOT in disguise pretending to be both me and him! And I’m Strange Cat,Weirdo!”
Everyone stares. “Fine,Strange,I’ll destroy him.” And you do,in a second.” “If only Cyborg Shark was here.”,says Hopper. Suddenly Cyborg comes out of nowhere. “Ye-yes,mas-aster?Comm-mmand?”
(What if romance comes to you?)
(Then I’ll probably only blast the girl into oblivion .)
(You really ARE a weirdo. Okay, bachelor.)
(did you reply yo my last one or the last one in your story sequence?)
*to
(continued from strange cat)
“wait before we do anything i need to ask super something” you say.
you look but super was not with the group.
“guys whare’s super?” you ask.
“cybrog shark find super” clean said.
(to be continued anyone can take it)
(Where have you been, Super?)
(395 Comments! BTW I am going on Vacation so i won’t be posting for a couple days.)
(sorry i’ve been on vacation continue from me please)
You wiat and finlly see Cyborg Shark coming back. Super Grape in on it’s back, but she looks like she hasn’t eaten in days. She has cuts and scratches all over her and she looks like she really wants a glass of water.
“Super, what happened?” you ask
“Well…
(To be Cont.)
(Sorry about mine, I started it before I saw this post. Don’t you hate when that happens?)
(Do not worry!The comment crusher is here!Let’s pretend that your part is Super explaining what happened to her,stopping at Cyborg beating the villains up.)
(Continued from Super Grape) “Okay, I think the last time we saw Super was during the feast. Cyborg, go search there.” you say. Meanwhile, Super was tied up in the chair, being interrogated by Black Widow and Binary Bard. “So, where is the Chosen One, and what’s his weakness!?” Binary Bard scolded. “I DON’T know where he is, because you kept me here! And two, I don’t know what it is, how should I know, and even if I did, why should I tell you?” Super Grape said. “Widow, finish her off.” Binary Bard said. “Not so fast!” Cyborg Shark said. (To be Continued)
(Yes, I hate it. But you’re forgiven.)
You stare at Super. Then you look at Cyborg Shark.
“Go beat them up,” you say.
Cyorg Shark goes off. You al eat lunch and seee Cyborg Shark come back. You see he’s in really bad condition now.
“What happened to you ?!?!?!” shrieked Super Grape.
(To Be Cont.)
(i’m goona go with what strange cat said. continued from clean)
“and thats what happened” super said.
“so what’s with the cuts and scratchs?” you say.
“the black widow is a feisty one” super said.
super trys to walk but falls on the ground.
“super you alright?” you ask.
“i’m fine” super said.
“we need a docter is anyone hare a docter?” you ask.
(to be continued)
(Continued from Super Grape) “I’m a doctor…” a voice said sinisterly. Everyone turned around and saw Dr. Hare! “Now, I’m just going to put this Grape out of her misery… Dr. Hare grabbed some Bunny Drone ears. He wasn’t going to put them on Super, he had them upside down. You lurch towards Dr. Hare, and knock him out. (To be Continued)
(continued from clean)
“that was close” super said.
“we need to get you to a safe place” you say.
“we cloud take her to my shop” sticky said.
so you and the group go to sticky’s shop clean carries super.
clean places super on a bed.
“stay hare well be right back were just gonna patrol the woods to see if there are any more villains there” you say.
so you and the group go back to the woods to do patroling.
meanwhile super lays in bed.
“is there a doctor in the house?” super said.
“did someone say doctor?” Dr.hare said.
“what do you want?” super said.
“well perhaps you cloud be useful” dr.hare said.
dr.hare gets out drone ears and puts them on super.
super’s eyes turn into green swirly eyes.
“now super find the chosen one and destory him!” dr.hare said.
“yes dr.hare i will not fail” super said.
super gets out her sword and gos out.
(to be continued)
(Continued from Super) Meanwhile you patrol the woods. You finally come to the conclusion that there’s no one in the woods. “Alright,I think we should go back to Sticky-I mean Strange’s- shop and-” “Speaking of my shops,the one in Zomberry has a customer! Says he wants a handheld camera and a member’s only item. I’ll be right back!” But just before he does his vanishing trick,everyone holds on to him,only to disappear with him.
Now you’re alone in the woods. You take a step forward. Suddenly a branch falls next to you! “Uh…hello?” You see someone near the tree,but he/she disappears immediately. You get scared. (To be continued! Now,let’s have a commercial break!
Come to the Strange Sticky Shop! Costumes of all sizes and shapes!)
(thats a very nice story)
(Continued from Strange Cat, Weirdo)
Then you wake up in a room. Then you see someone, and, cautiously, you asked, ” Who are you?”. The poptropican says, ” I am Gentle Jyanne Toes,”. You ask, trying get up, ” Where am I?”. Since you are weak from the punch, you dropped down. “You are in a room in the Coconut Cafe,” said an unfamiliar voice close to Gentle’s . As light flooded the room you saw two poptropicans. One with pigtails and one with curly hair that was untied. “Oops, I forgot to introduce my twin sister, Calm Gianne Toes,” said Gentle. “We heard that you were stuck in Island X.” Calm recalled. ” Don’t ask me how we know but JJ, your life’s in trouble.” Calm paused in a worried tone. “Why?” gripping all your strength to say that word. But before Calm or Gentle could answer, you blacked out. Few minutes later, Calm and Gentle managed to revive you and Gentle answered his question,” turns out the Bionic Hopper as he punched you, placed a tracker on you, and this tracker is indelible*. What makes the trouble is that Dr. Hare managed to repair the Hopper,” Calm shoves a newspaper to your hands. “And let the Hopper terrorize other islands, except Shark Tooth Island, Dr, Hare is terrifyingly scared of sharks so avoids the area.” Gentle finished. “But everyone faces their fears. We’ve talked to the owner of the Cafe about our safety and closed down the cafe and let us have the room.” Calm added. Before anyone could say anything else, your group heard a helicopter sound and the twins figured that is was Dr. Hare. But before you could scream and scram, the twins motioned to their devices and let you touch it. As your skin came contact with the machinery, you and the twins teleported.
Turns out you teleported to 24 Carrot Island. ”Oops, we teleported to the wrong island,” Gentle said. Again, the twins let you touch the machine1
(sorry but I have to repost my part of the story…)
(Continued from Strange Cat, Weirdo)
Then you wake up in a room. Then you see someone, and, cautiously, you asked, ” Who are you?”. The poptropican says, ” I am Gentle Jyanne Toes,”. You ask, trying get up, ” Where am I?”. Since you are weak from the punch, you dropped down. “You are in a room in the Coconut Cafe,” said an unfamiliar voice close to Gentle’s . As light flooded the room you saw two poptropicans. One with pigtails and one with curly hair that was untied. “Oops, I forgot to introduce my twin sister, Calm Gianne Toes,” said Gentle. “We heard that you were stuck in Island X.” Calm recalled. ” Don’t ask me how we know but JJ, your life’s in trouble.” Calm paused in a worried tone. “Why?” gripping all your strength to say that word. But before Calm or Gentle could answer, you blacked out. Few minutes later, Calm and Gentle managed to revive you and Gentle answered his question,” turns out the Bionic Hopper as he punched you, placed a tracker on you, and this tracker is indelible*. What makes the trouble is that Dr. Hare managed to repair the Hopper,” Calm shoves a newspaper to your hands. “And let the Hopper terrorize other islands, except Shark Tooth Island, Dr, Hare is terrifyingly scared of sharks so avoids the area.” Gentle finished. “But everyone faces their fears. We’ve talked to the owner of the Cafe about our safety and closed down the cafe and let us have the room.” Calm added. Before anyone could say anything else, your group heard a helicopter sound and the twins figured that is was Dr. Hare. But before you could scream and scram, the twins motioned to their devices and let you touch it. As your skin came contact with the machinery, you and the twins teleported.
Turns out you teleported to 24 Carrot Island. ”Oops, we teleported to the wrong island,” Gentle said. Again, the twins let you touch the machine and teleported to another island.
This time you went to an island which is very secluded*. No Dr. Hare. No Enemies. Rest in Peace. “Uh oh,” Calm said. “It says in the machine Dr. Hare is right-” Poof. There it was. The Bionic Hopper and its master. “JJ, get back.” The twins say. “Ho Ho Ho! Two little fighter girls fighting about their boyfriend. Too bad, this bunny will break the fight,” Dr. Hare with a menacing* grin. “Too bad your ‘Ho Ho Ho’ will not last!” Gentle said as she transforms into a nice purple heart fighter girl. “Yeah!” Calm joined in as she transformed into a white heart fighter girl. They fight. ( sorry to get the beginning and middle out but creative juices are pumping and I wanna get to the end.) At the end, Calm got off* and Gentle and Dr. Hare are still fighting and Dr. Hare is starting to lose but Dr. Hare called, “Bionic Hopper! Finish this girl off!” Seeing the furrowed brow of Gentle, JJ started to lose hope. BAM! The Hopper finally ended the battle. Dr. Hare and his servant left the place right away. JJ was crying over the twins’ bodies. The spirit of Gentle turned up and said “ JJ, take care of yourself. Find friends along the way to aid you. Be safe. Be strong. And remember Calm and I died as heroes,”. The spirit vanished. That’s it.
( Calm and Gentle deserves a good honorary funeral.:p)
(indelible*:can’t be removed secluded*:empty menacing*:evil grin off*:dead.)
(continued from loyalty)
you teleport back to monster carnival.
you decide to go see if your friends have returned.
but just then you hear something.
“hello?” you say.
just then Super Grape came out along with Dr.hare.
you see that Super is wearing drone ears and has green swirly eyes.
“what did you do to her?” you ask.
“just put her under mind control now prepare to meet your doom” Dr.hare said.
“Super attack!” Dr.hare said.
(to be continued)
(Don’t worry. I know how you feel.)
Then you remember how you revived the other twins. You find a source of electricity and shock them. They open their eyes. You scream with joy.
“Touch the machine,” you say with a firmness in your tone that surprises yourself.
You all touch the machine and you teleport back to Island X. You see your friends. Everyone but Clean and the other twins see you and start to advance. You are happy to see them at first but then hear the swords and see the bunny drone hats. You realize you lost most of your friends. You, Gentle, and Calm draw your swords and join in the fight.
“What happened?” you ask.
Clean explains that Super came up to them and started forcing the hats on your friends. Clean and the twins fought their way out. They managed to get back to Island X. You continue to fight when you see Dr. Hare himself coming from the sky in your old blimp. He transforms into a giant, 50 ft. bionic bunny.
(To Be Cont.)
“HOPPER!GRAPE!”,he shouts. Suddenly,both Bionic and Super Grape (or Drone) appear. “Do your job!” Bionic Hopper punches you,then Super Drone takes your weapon. “I…will…not fail you…this time…doctor.” She puts the weapon to annihilate,and is about to fire. “3…2…1…(TO BE CONTINUED! Fooled you,didn’t I? :P)
“ZE-” Suddenly,Clean hits the button on the drone hat,making Super go to normal,and the weapon points to Dr.Hare. “Wha-NO!”,he shouts as he gets finally destroyed. “You will suffer,all of you!” BAM! He breaks the healing machine,and manages to kill Red Rock,the twins,Clean and Super Grape.
“No! Why ,Bionic,why?!”,you scream. “I warned you,” jeers Bionic. “Cyborg!”,shouts Hopper. Cyborg comes. “Defeat this robot!” You just sit there,watching the two robots battle.Who will win? (To be continued (For sure :P))
(Cont. from Strange)
You shake your friends. you try to electrify them, but it doesn’t work. The doctor, Red Rock is dead. Young Flame sits next to her twin with tears running down her face. You don’t know what to do.
(To Be Cont.)
Meanwhile,Hopper is loosing the battle. “Beep- booop- should I,Master?” “You might as well.” Cyborg takes out his mike. “Cover your ears.” And you do. You can’t exactly hear him singing,but you can see Hopper fall to him. Finally,he explodes. “Be-eeee-ep….master,,,Hopper..” and Cyborg falls unconscious.
“NO!”,shouts Hopper. “Argh,the battery’s run low. Got anything,you two?”,he asks. Young Flame shakes her head,still in tears. You’re about to do the same when you feel a piece of paper.
“Hey..what’s this?” It reads,
‘HOVEROTRONAX!
USING THESE PIECES AND THIS BOARD, YOU WILL FLY!
1:Light bulb
2:Wire.
3:Blowtorch.
Stick them in place(indicated on the board.), and lift off!
Made By E.VILLE inc, Printed by INK INC!’
“Guys…we should use this.But we have to get the materials. “Well…Sorry,but I don’t have a blowtorch. “Me neither.’,says Young Flame. “A blowtorch?”,someone else asks. You look around and see Big Bubbles. “I saw that somewhere…come on,you three,we’ve got to get that.”
(Where is the blowtorch?To be continued!)
You follow Big all to way to a small hut near a swamp. You enter it.You see the blowtorch. “Oh,you want that ,dear?”,says an old lady coming out of nowhere. “Well,all you have to do is to trade me something for it.” What will you pay?