In celebration of this Poptropica Help Blog recently reaching 8 million hits (thanks everyone!), we’re going to do something fun! In the comments section, ANYONE is welcome to join in as we weave an ongoing story, a Poptropica fan-fiction of sorts, told in second-person narrative. It begins here…
“Um, hello. I’m here to register for something called, uh, ‘Poptropica’?” Amidst the realm of blue vines in front of you, a crate, small and wooden, bounces out, shaking blue dust and spitting out a question of your gender. You stare incredulously before you finally manage to respond. “I’m a boy,” you tell the little box, and then it erupts a circle of numbers in individual bubbles as it asks you the next question. This is a very strange sign-up process, you think to yourself, as you decide to tell the box etched with a curious question mark that you are 9 years old.
“Your name is Jumpy Jumper. When you are ready, hop into the blimp and travel to any island.” You ponder the map for a while, but decide none of the islands suit you. “There’s got to be something better…” you mutter to yourself. Just then, you see it. Out of the corner of your eye, there’s another island, shrouded in mystery by layers of smog and unidentifiable smells. Island X.
“But no one’s ever been there before,” the voice warns, the voice of the box that had guided your creation earlier. “Jumpy Jumper, JJ, you can’t… how did that even get on the map anyway? It’s not safe… please no… JJ!!” But it’s too late. You’re gone.
What happens next? Will JJ survive the unknown dangers of the mysterious Island X? What is the island’s secret, its true name, the people, the villain(s), the setting? You and your fellow PHB readers get to decide what items he collects and uses, other places he visits, and the adventures that await…
RULES: Make sure it follows what others have written before you, makes sense, and if you wish to add a comment that is not part of the story itself, use parentheses, for example: (I think we should…) Your comment can be as long or short as you like and you are definitely welcome to contribute as many times as you like. Be creative!
Where will these words take us? Continue the story in the comments!
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(Oh boy!I’ll try and start it: )
You look around once you land on island X. It was abandoned,literally,it was a huge jungle,more abandoned than Steamworks itself.You go a little to the west.”Wait!”,you think to yourself,”The ground looks weak in this spot.Better avoid it.”
But then something-or someone hits you from behind,and you fall down on the weak spot.Suddenly,the ground collapses. You fall into it as a mysterious laughter comes from above.Who could it be?
(Anyone is welcome to continue. 😉 )
(Oops,forgot the 2nd person thing.Could you edit it a bit? 😳 )
(Slanted Fish: Thanks for the 1st comment! No problem, I helped you fix it up. :P)
(Thanks. 😆
🙂 )
The laughter comes from a secret hideout, where you discover all villains meet.
“so no wonder there is no people some villlans hide there” you say.
“who are you?” they ask in a cautious tone and start to introduce themselves.
“I’m Captain crawfish, the leader.”
“i’m count bram, the vampire vice leader.”
“i’m black widow, the girl leader.”
“i’m Gretchen gremlock, the girl vice leader.”
“i’m director D, the vice vice leader.”
“i’m binary bard or Mordred. most people call me binary bard.”
Looking around what appears to be a wishing well, you ask, “who would go down a wishing well?”
“we wanna take over the world,” Captain Crawfish said.
“yes, well, why do people put you down here? You’re evil people. So what islands are you from?”
“I’m from Spy island,” said Director D.
“i’m from astro knights,” Mordred or binary bard said.
“i’m from counterfeit,” Black widow said. she told them “i feel like steeling artwork.”
“i’m Captain Crawfish,” he said. “i’m from skulduggery, im – wait wait, i know all your names, just tell me the island.”
“i’m Gretchen Grimlock from Cryptids.”
“Cryptids sounds intresting – Bigfoot, Jersey Devil, Loch ness monster…”
Zach, a young villager from steamworks nobody even knew about, is there with his robot pet named Sprocket. Sprocket gives you a list of all the islands and what they’re about. You hop into the blimp and try to get to Poptropolis, but it’s not there. You decide to head back to Island X, where your blimp crashes and you fall into a gaping hole.
(Continued from Sticky Clown: )
You wake up to find yourself in a bottomless pit. You see a ladder and try to climb it, but it breaks when you get on. Just then, a vine from above falls down and you hear a voice saying, “Grab on, I’ll pull you out.” You grab on, and you get pulled out. Once on solid ground, you hear your stomach grumble. You’re Hungry! You look around and see a pile of popnuts (POPtropican DoughNUTS). You run to the food but out of the blue, a giant robot comes and takes you to his lair. Once at his lair, he gives you a precious statue and tells you to run away with it. You just leave his lair when you hear a grunt. You turn around to see………………
Policemen! “DROP THE STATUE AND NO ONE GETS HURT!” the cop shouts. Your are in terror at what just happened that you start running away, screaming. You eventually out run the cops, but when you look around, you find yourself in Downtown Poptropica. There are TV’s everywhere saying that a burglar is on the loose. And that burglar, is YOU! Everyone sees the TV’s and see’s you. They frantically chase after you. You outrun them, but end up at your house. You go inside and hear the telephone ringing. You pick it up and say hello. “I have finally caught you, my pretty,” the voice cackles on the other side. “Come outside,” the voice says…
(TO BE CONTINUED…………… ANYONE CAN CONTINUE THIS)
You go outside to see a huge cake and balloons and people. HAPPY BIRTHDAY tthey shout. Just then, you remember that it’s your birthday! You rejoice, be merry, and have some fun.
wow, that’s just…
I don’t know what to say XDDD But.. it’s great XD
(Strange, it’s funny how you mention Steamworks and then say The Ground looks weak in this spot, which is a line IN Steamworks! LOL
you look up and see the of a bunny named dr. hare he laughs and says you fell in my trap
(I think you should give all of us cookies,personally.)
(How can that happen?)
(That happened for every milestone a long time ago.)
( I WANT COOKIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)
(I’ll go next!)
You look around and see a dirt wall that seems weak enough to be broken.You push with all your might,and the wall breaks revealing what appears to be the entrance to a bunker.You need a code to get in.
You search the hole for anything that might help you.You find a shovel.You use the shovel to dig a tunnel under the door.When you reach the bunker,you see something amazing…(to be continued)
I gulp as I look around. OK… This is island is sadder than 24 carrot. As I wonder why they chose me to go and defeat the new villain, Cathy Crier, who can easily make everyone too sad to think about all the crimes she was doing, I see a bridge. It was pretty rickety,and then….
💜💜To be cont.💜💜
I (quick fang) gulp as I look around. OK… This is island is sadder than 24 carrot. As I wonder why they chose me to go and defeat the new villain, Cathy Crier, who can easily make everyone too sad to think about all the crimes she was doing, I see a bridge. It was pretty rickety,and then I saw someone on the other side, who called himself JJ. Um. OK.As I walked to him, he took out a sword, believing that although I was dressed as Athena, goddess of wisdom, I could be Zeus in disguise. “Oh please. I may be dressed as Athena, but that never meant I was her! I customised it!! Come on.” I say as I drag him to see where Cathy Crier was hiding. I explained everything to JJ, and he seemed to understand. “Aren’t you the random poptropican who asks for help? ” “maybe…” Suddenly, the bridge under us broke!!!!….
💜💜To be cont.💜💜
(Sorry to burst your bubble, but this story is ONGOING, and as such, continues from the latest entry, not the beginning.)
(Anyone could countinue mine)
You see an army of robots of all different kinds each has a mysteriours “E” on it, and then you see someone who must be the leader of the army, with a metal helmet and a space to see through. He starts directing the robots. “My fellow mechanical minions”, he says “after that fool destroyed my first wave of robots, I have finally rebuilt more, and now we are on planet Poptropica! Progress!” The robots start marching forward, towards you! (To be continued)
Just then,you notice something stuck in the ground. You look closer.It’s a sword.A golden sword.You try and pull it out.Suddenly,one of the robots notice you! “Beep Boop Bop! Master E.Vile,there’s an intruder!” “Then attack him!”,shouts the leader,who’s apparently named E.Vile. “Did you,”,you say, to him,”push me here?”
‘No,’ another voice said,’it was I.” You look around.You suddenly see a man with green hair,in a criminal suit,holding a bag of money and having a few stubbles. “Speeding Spike,one of the prisoners from Super Power.I’m glad I escaped.I can’t run as fast since that meddling super hero handcuffed me.,They took out my power!”
“Wait,’,E.Vile says,”Who was the hero who handcuffed-” The man takes out a photo.E.Vile looks at it.He gasps. “That was the meddling fool who destroyed my first wave of robots!Argh!Where is he now?!” One of the robots says,”According to my sensors,he is in Mythology Island,on a palace on a Mountain,wielding a crown and trident,riding on pink clouds,and trying to defeat a bearded man in grey with a lightning bolt.” “Excellent,robots,go apprehend him.”
Then you notice that super villain-speeding something-had dropped a photo.You bend over and pick it up.Then Speedy guy shouts,”Hey,you can’t have that!” “Oh,no,he won’t.Robots,get him!”
Then the battle of your life begins…
To be continued…
The guy in the picture turns out to be your best friend. In Poptropica, they call him Brave Bubbles, or BB. You can’t let the E.Vile villains get to him. Mythology Island was his last island he had to complete too. But to save him you have to save yourself first. The robots charged at you from all directions. You get hit a bunch of times, not being use to the controls, but manged to knock out most of the robots.
After a while you’re winning and easily dodging there attacks by jumping up, with a smile. Finally the attacks have stopped and there’s scrap metal all around you, but no sign of the 2 major villains. Time to get back to your blimp. You go back though the tunnel you dug under the door, but the way you fell in is too high to get back up. Time to look around.The only thing you can find is Extra Sticky Super Glue, but that’s enough for your mind to get creative.
So you gather up some of that scrap metal and start gluing all of it into the shape of a ladder. After you wait for everything to dry you are able to climb out of the hole, no problem. The bad thing is that you see yellow cloth everywhere, along with a basket and some rope. Someone cut a hole in your blimp. Then a sudden gust of wind came through and you could only see a gimps of a leg, of a man, walking into a dark alley near by.
(To be continued…)
The Guy is The coal man you meet on mystery train with the robber on night watch holding a Sack of money. you talk to him. he tells you he is Santa. you look at his birth surtificet. it says ” Sliperey eye.”
“Jewish, your Jewish, JJ” said supposed Santa Claus. the police come to arrest him and put him up the vent in night watch island using a blow torch. Easily the Bad Thief can grab the blowtorch. he sees somebody in a Multi player room with a torch from a Alvan and the chipmunks ad his presses it the fire goes in his eye ”Oucccccccccchchchchhchchchcchhchchc” and he runs away burning himself, but the coal man shovels burning coal.
police coming saying “lets take him” one police said. another said “if we use a boat, he cannot fall,” showing a picture of a flood + a fire of corse everybody knows a flood will win but ones water vs one is fire (cold vs hot ) he is on the tip of a jet ski were he gets robers and thiefs to help police are using a boat they get away robers are running all over poptropica (To Be countinued)
(When will the story telling end?)
(Slanted Fish: It’s ongoing, so there’s no set time for it to end!)
(slanted fish, mind cleaning up some of these comments? Ican’t follow this story, and it seems to be a little wordy)
(Ok, I’ve tried to clean some up. Everyone, especially jpf0904, please make sure your stories make grammatical and logical sense so that it will be easy for others to follow. We appreciate having you join in but it does need to be readable. Punctuation helps a lot.)
(And use 2nd person!)
(Hi Slanted Fish! It’s Watermelon Twist again! I just want to ask you can I write my story starting from the beginning and not add on to others?
Thanks, Twisty)
(Slanted Fish: Sorry, no, it would be too confusing for other readers. Please continue from where it’s left off.)
(Can there be more characters?Like,other main characters.I am asking you guys because I am horrible at third person stuff and boy point of view.I’m a girl.I can’t do boys.)
(Slanted Fish: Sure, go ahead! 🙂 )
(Slanted Fish’s note: This comment is not supposed to be at the bottom, but I can’t fix it. Just pretend it’s placed where it should be according to the timestamp.)
Just then, a roar shook the ground. The villains gasped with terror and looked up.
“The beast approaches! We need to get out of here, take the prisoners to the clown tent to show the Master!” cries Captain Crawfish
The roar echoes again, louder, and you see a giant creature with red wings and 6 snake heads land a on top of a boulder and crush it. A girl jumps off its back with a bow drawn, arrow ready and tip pointing at Captain Crawfish. Her bright blue hair is pulled back in a pony tail and her eyes are a steely gray, glaring at the old captain.
“Let them go, or I’m letting this arrow fly and my hydra gets a tasty snack.”
Black Widow yells and grabs the other prisoner Poptropican. She runs before the girl can aim at her. The other villains rush toward the mysterioous girl and her hydra ready to fight…
short feather appears with a 2nd ultimate weapon we attack now
ignore that
(I don’t understand what jpf0904 writes)
(He’s weird.)
(Don’t be rude now.)
(I think people should make up their own bad guys and not use the actual websites)
(I don’t understand how that would work. This is more like the Villains’ Revenge.)
(clean shark, yeah i agree with you about villains revenge. it should be either e.vile or the 4 escaped villains from super villain island: binary bard, captain crawfish, black widow, and dr.hare. go dr.hare!)
(I’ll go next!)
You decide to stop the robbers yourself, so you come up to the robbers and chase them down!.You are able to catch them. The cops take the robbers to jail, then you fix up your blimp. But just as you are about to leave, a guy in a bunny suit grabs you .”Who are you?!” you asked. “I’m Dr.hare!” he said. He then knocks you unconscious.
(to be continued anyone can take it from here)
Shaggy: (Fixed up your spelling errors to make it easier to read. 😉 )
(jpf0904…good start, but it’s not making sense…clean it up a bit so it’s less confusing, please?)
(Thanks, Slanted Fish!)
When you wake up, you are in a big circus tent, surrounded by monsters!
quickly running outside, you notice a sign: MONSTER CARNIVAL ISLAND!
A.K.A Island X.
You realize that you have found the legendary lost island!
Running over to the abandoned side, you notice a small message lying on the ground:
“Hey All villains.
Go steal your islands medallion, and then bring them to me. Then, work in teams to get all the other medallions.
-Captain crawfish.”
You don’t know what to do.Suddenly,you notice a phone.You ring it,and then call 911 and tell the police about them.2 hours and 45 tamed monsters later,they arrive with the villains arrested,including crawfish.You then ask,”Where’s E.Vile?” Suddenly,a Poptropican,just like the one in the photo comes out and says,”E.Vile?!He’s returned?!” “Yes,fools,and he always will!”,another voice shouts. “E.Vile?!”,the 2 of you shout.He climbs up onto a huge 10 feet robot that can fly,and powers it up. (Anyone can continue)
E.Ville charges the huge robot and it’s engines roar as it makes a piercing noise. Huge flames crawl out like insects crawling on rotten fruit. It lunges into the air; into distant space.
“What have we got against a 10 foot iron machine?!”
“I don’t know,but we’ll need something bigger and stronger to defeat him AND the robot”.
“Something like us?” Said a mysterious yet feminine voice. Two Poptropicans who seemed to be wearing black jumpsuits with weapons at their disposal. One of them had fiery red hair and the other was wearing glasses and looked more shy than the other.
“Who are you?” I asked.
“We work for S.H.I.E.L.D-My name is Natasha Romanoff”.
(Continue please! NOTE: S.H.I.E.L.D and the character Natasha Romanoff is a part of Marvel-used it based off The Avengers 😛 )
E. Ville IS a robot
(Continued from Sticky Clown,Poptropical Explorer)
The robot comes to life notices you. “I suppose I can’t have anyone trying to defeat me,” he says. “I’ll have to destroy you!” In a panic you run. You end up coming to a box marked ‘open me!’. You do what it says and open it. Inside is a sword. You pick it up and just by touching it you can feel its power. As E. Vile/the robot comes closer, you turn and face him, the sword ready to strike.
(Anyone can continue)
You swing the sword, and it snaps in half. You reach for that glue in your bag but you just can’t find it! (I know it’s kind of short. to be continued…)
Suddenly, you can feel the familiar feeling of the long, slender tube in your hands. You work quickly, hoping with all your might that the glue dried fast enough to hold. But the robot is coming closer, so you swing the sword. Zap! He is defeated. You decide to run away… better safe than sorry. As you dash away, you bump into someone. You get your flashlight out, to make sure it isn’t a robot. When you look up, you see a girl…
(Please continue on!)
it’s black widow!.,and dr.hare is with her.,”your comeing with us” says black widow.,you’re taken back to the circus tent.,then the other villions come back.,
‘what shold we do with him?” says black widow.,
“i say we put him under mind control” says dr.hare.,
“is that your answer for everything rabbit men?” says captain crawfish.,
“i’m an evil scientist what did you exspect?” says dr.hare.,
“naver mind that well deal with him after we destroy this fool!” says black widow.,
the villions from super power island bring in the poptropican that looked like the one from the photo.
“how did y’all escape from the cops?” you say.
black widow points to dr.hare.
“for once puting pepole under mind control payed off” says dr.hare.
you have to stop them but how?
(to be contiued anyone can take it from here)
Suddenly,you notice a rope.With a karate chop,you cut it,and an anvil falls on the villains. “Well done,hero,but no one can defeat me!” “Why not,E.Vile?!” “Because I am unbeatable!” Suddenly,a huge sword forms in his hand. “Now,come,face me,fools!” Suddenly,the other Poptropican comes to you and says,”I’ll take care of him.You defeat the robots with him.”
But… E.Ville suddenly presses a button on a small remote…
AND SUMMONS EVERY OTHER VILLIAN (Exept the defeayed ones.).
Then, Binary Bard grabs the remote, Presses a button, and a speceship comes down that they all jump into and fly away!
As they leave, a small piece of metal drops off the ship.
Attached to it is a note:
HOVEROTRONAX!
USING THESE PIESCES AND THIS BOARD, YOU WILL FLY!
1:Light bulb1
2:Wire.
3:Blowtorch.
Stick them in place(indicated on the board.), and lift off!
Made By E.VILLE inc, Printed by INK INC!
Location: Reality TV Island
One day, all the people in the island loved eating fruit. But one night, Bucky Lucas and Goth Guy were having a conversation until they heard moaning and groaning.These two people looked behind them and saw zomberries. Before they could do anything, there was a flash of red. It was Hip Hop, one of the Reality TV contestants from the show. He looked drowsy and scared, and his jacket was even more dirty than it was in the show. He saw the two men, than ran out of the building right away before the zomberries would catch him. He ran through the street until he couldn’t run anymore. He looked around, but there was no hiding place. He had no map, either. Before Hip could go anywhere, there were zomberries surrounding him. One of the zomberries knocked him over, and them the rest of them held him extremely hard when Hip heard a helecopter hovering. Lights came on, and the zomberries stopped holding Hip and walked away.
To be continued…
(continued from previous comment)
After the zomberries walked away, Hip went to a hiding place. He felt tired and hungry, too. When he heard more groaning, it was a zomberry who looked like Hippie Harry. Hip wanted to run away from him, but there was another zomberry who looked like Rickie Rock. Then the lights came on and a helecopter hovered above Hip’s head. The helecopter landed near the zomberries, making them walk away and getting Hip inside.
To be continued…
(Someone continue my story. I don’t know what else to add.)
(Someone please continue my story.)
(You’re not supposed to make an entire story of your own here. Read the other comments,and continue from the latest one (from June 2nd/3rd.).)
You got to say my name first before posting this comment. Can you repeat the comment with the “Cuddly Knuckle,” first?
(Cuddly Knuckle,you’re not supposed to make an entire story of your own here. Please read the other comments,and continue from the latest one (from June 2nd/3rd.).)
That’s better. Thanks.
But if someone didn’t finish their story, someone else is completing it!
That’s the rules. You can’t make part of the entire story yourself.
He IS following the rules. PS: Don’t delete this comment. This is the final part, but it goes on and on.
When the helecopter landed, Hip felt dizzy. He knew he has missed home and his friends. Suddenly, he heard groaning behind him.He started to get up and run away. After one hour of running, he heard his stomach growl. Hip sat down, hungry. He was lost! While he missed home, a zombie who looked like the Big Blue sneaked out of a crate. Hip turned around and gasped. He tried to run away, but the zombie took Hip by the shoulders and went back to the crate.
Meanwhile, Bucky Lucas and Goth Guy were walking around the street. Suddenly, they saw a large pile of crates. They even heard groaning! When they entered the crate, the fat zombie took them both by the shoulders into the crate. While they were in the crate, they saw another flash of red. It was Hip, sleeping sadly. When he woke up, he saw those two men. Then he followed them out of the crate. When they got out, there were SO many zombies outside! One of the zombies grabbed Hip’s jacket and left. Bucky and Goth tried to catch that zombie, but all the zombies already left. They walked out of the crate, looking for the zombies. Suddenly, someone offered two guns to shoot the zombies back to normal. Then the two men went looking for the zombies until they found them. They shot them all until all were back to normal. Then they found Hip- but they found that it wasn’t real because Hip had now turned into a zombie too, so they shot him until he looked normal. After that, Hip saw all his friends and the contestants, and then one of the contestants told him that it was time to go home.
The End-Or is it?
Add me I’m hesnothappy
*facepalm* You can’t make your own story. You have to complete THE ONGOING STORY…
(Continued from Massive Hammer)
The Hydra swings its heads and takes out all of the villains at once. most of them are on the ground, but Dr. Hare and Binary Bard are thrown into space yelling “Not again!!!” Then you remember you haven’t beaten the robots. You take out your sword. You look at the girl and you both nod. Together you fight the robots. Finally, after a while, they’re all defeated. You turn to the girl “Hey, I don’t think I ever heard your name.” She hesitates at first. “It’s… Brave Owl.” You think for a moment then say “Do you want to travel with me? It’s been fairly lonely.” “Alright,” she says. “I came here to find out what else was on this island. Me and my Hydra, that is.” You shrug. “I suppose that’s what we’ll do then.” Suddenly, you hear a boom outside. You climb up what remains of the rope (well, the hydra used its heads…) and run down the street. You feel it’s not E. Vile, but something worse…
As Captain Crawfish rushes forward, one of the hydra’s many heads reaches out and grabs him. It flings him so far away you can’t even see him. The other villains, rushing forward in confusion, are slung as far as Captain Crawfish by the heads of the hydra. “Thanks for the save!” you say in relief to the mysterious girl. “You’re welcome, she says, smiling. Both of you walk away. “So, what’s your name?” you ask. “I’m Silver Wolf. I don’t really have a nickname. What’s yours?” “Jumpy Jumper, JJ for short.” By now, the two of you have walked about a mile. You come to a sign that says: “THE TRAVELING MONSTER CARNIVAL IS HERE! COME TO CIRCUSVILLE FOR MORE INFO! NEXT LEFT” Soon, you come to a crossroads. You take the path that goes to the…
(Please continue!)
Sorry! supposed to go under the one below! 😳
You turn right and see e.vile in a 8 0 story robot. Illcrush you he says You grab a bomb and throw it at him. It misses. He stomps you and you’re dead.
silver wolf gives u a magic potion. u r alive! yay!
you start to follow the sign to the left when Silver Wolf stops you. “That way is another villain hideout, not a good idea to go there.”
“Oh, yeah, probably not good.” you say.
Instead you both go to the right into deeper jungle. After a couple hours of walking, you come to a clearing where there is…
Crash! Pow! The battle is epic. You try to help Silver Wolf ,but then Black Widow grabs you and takes you to the clown tent.
“Let me go!” you shouted!
“Be quiet” said Black Widow.
“Help!. anyone?” you yelled.
“Be quiet! She’ll hear you” she hissed.
“That’s kina what I’m hoping for,” you said.
Black Widow erupts into anger.
“That’s IT! I can’t take it anymore! There’s only one way to keep you quiet!” she yelled.
Black Widow left and came back a few seconds later with Dr.hare.
“Put them under mind control” said Black Widow
Dr.hare got out his mind control ray and points it at you.
You better think of something and quick or else you’ll become a mind slave!
(to be continued anyone can take it from here)
(Shaggy: Make sure to use 2nd POV and revise your entry for grammar and spelling errors. 😉 )
(Cool! Are you going to post this on FF net? I’ll Follow it if you do.)
(Slanted Fish: Probably not, since it would have to keep updating, but thanks for the input!)
(Also, the story looks pretty jumbled to me. :P)
(It’s a wordpress glitch or something. I can’t even help clean it, and my NAME is Clean! LOL But really, it’s even out of Fishy’s control. It had to happen on one of the best things that happened for the PHB.)
BOOM!
A loud explosion fills the area.
You look and see a large crater. Out of it comes a man in red robes.
Its Zeus! yells Silver Wolf.
Yes, it is I, the great Zeus! yells Zeus.
I must rule all of Poptropica!
Suddenly a large flash of light fills the area. You fall down and drift off to sleep…..________________________________________________________________
Wake up! says Silver Wolf.
Where are we? you asked.
You are at the pop-squad base. says a voice.
You look and see the blue harried girl.
The who? you ask.
The pop squad. she says.
It consists of five poptropicans. Wild Monster (a knight with a skull for a head), Clean Shadow (a secret agent), Smart Gamer (A lightning knight), Cuddly Flame (a nija/samuri.), and me, Comical Bird .
Uhh…ok. you say
Come. she says. You must meet the pop squad.
(Hey poptropicaomz, could you please stop killing JJ? He’s only 9, what’s he done to you?)
(Um…the comments are a little jumbled.)
(My goodness, are you ever thinking of straightening out these story paths, Slanted Fish? Or ever ending this?)
(Slanted Fish: I’ve tried fixing the comments. Also, it’s ongoing, so there’s no end unless no one keeps posting.)
Suddenly, a huge, evil laugh echoes everywhere. “What is that?” you yell. Suddenly you sees a pair of green, glowing eyes getting closer. ” HAAHH! HAAH HA HA HA!!!! ” ?????? suddenly grabs you, but then you hear someone come closer. In the dark sky and deep fog,, all you can see very vaguely is a blue fish. ”Ow! ” the villain yells. ”Take that, Bunny Boy! ” yells a voice, and suddenly, you see the figure, and it’s Shark Boy! And that the villain was wearing a torn up, pink suit, with the green eyes actually goggles. ”Thank you! ” you say. ”No problem! ” replies Shark Boy. ”You must get out of this Island, it’s not safe.” ”No. I can’t leave. There’s a mystery in this place, and I’m gonna solve it.” you say confidently.
(Come on! Use my storyline. Actually, I’ll just continue.)
(I see what you did here, Juyo. The memories of NEST are flowing back. Except the grammar really wasn’t this bad and we wrote in the 3rd person. Not even Sanz had grammar this horrendous.)
(Since some of the comments appear jumbled, which unfortunately is out of my control, here’s a summary of what’s happened thus far and my continuation.)
(Previously on Island X…)
You (the hero, JJ) landed on the seemingly-desolate Island X and fell into a hole. You discovered the secret hideout of the Poptropica villains and climbed out of the hole from a vine. As you hungrily reached for some Popnuts, a robot thrusted a statue at you and you ran away with it, chased by policemen who called you a thief. You outran them and were led to a surprise birthday party in your honor.
You went back to the hole and discovered a bunker, where E. Vile’s robot army went after you. You escaped past villains and were knocked unconscious by Dr. Hare, then awoke in a circus tent and discovered the beginning of the island’s secret – it’s the long-lost Monster Carnival Island!
After you alerted the police about E. Vile’s return, you fought the robots with a sword and got captured by Black Widow and Dr. Hare. A mysterious girl named Silver Wolf rescued you from more dangers, then brought you to the Pop Squad base, consisting of Wild Monster (a knight with a skull for a head), Clean Shadow (a secret agent), Smart Gamer (a lightning knight), Cuddly Flame (a ninja), and Comical Bird. After another villain attack, you’re determined to find out more about this island’s mystery.
(And now…)
You shake your head, confused at everything that’s been going on. “Could you please tell us what’s going on?” your new friend Silver Wolf asks the blue-haired Pop Squad leader, Comical Bird.
“It’s very dangerous here on this island,” she says. “How did you even get here? It’s not supposed to be on the map. I mean, it was, but it got so bad here that’s why we had to put 24 Carrot Island in its place.”
“So THAT’S what happened!” you screech excitedly. “But I still don’t have the full story here. What are all these villains doing here? Like Dr. Hare? I thought he was in space, or in some carrot factory, or dream chamber, or some Legos, or Utah, or something… that guy is just EVERYWHERE. So this is the unknown Monster Carnival Island? I’ve met more than my fair share of monsters here, but where’s the carnival? And I saw a note about Captain Crawfish trying to steal all the other islands’ medallions so he could take over Poptropica? How does that even work? Oh yeah, and to answer your question, I DID get here from the map – it was called Island X…”
“Whoaaa there, calm down,” Comical Bird looks at you like you’re crazy, then breaks out into a huge grin. “So you’re the chosen one!” her eyes glow cheerfully.
“Huh?” you ask, perplexed yet again. Silver Wolf looks at you, then at Comical Bird, and says, “Well, Comical Bird here sent me to rescue you… so, is it true then? You are the chosen one?”
Comical Bird clears her throat. “Legend has it that one day, a hero will emerge from beyond and save this island from ruin. It’s said that the Curious Sign-up Box will send someone through the map by giving the choice of an island usually unavailable to others, while warning against it to encourage you to go because it told you NOT to go. It’s a bit of reverse psychology there. That’s why you saw the Island X that no one else has! The chosen one is YOU!”
“Do you know what this means?” she squeals enthusiastically. “We’ll finally be rid of these villains… finally be able to live in peace… and finally, finally get to rid ourselves of the Curse placed upon us and open the carnival…”
(How will the story unfold from here? What is the Curse behind all the monsters and no carnivals – how did it originate and how will it be stopped? What happens next to JJ and his new friends and enemies? Continue the story below!)
then you notice something in the coner it was pink and had green goggles.,”so your the chosen one well welcome this is your frist time on the island and it’s also going to be your last!” said Dr.hare.,
“how did you find our base?” said clean shadow.,
“i followed you and now that i know about this meddening kid hare i’m going to destory him!” said Dr.hare.,
sliver wolf looks at you.,
“don’t just stand thare run kid!” said sliver wolf.,
“what about you guys?” you said.,
“well be fine we can handle ourselfs now run” said wild monster.,
you run from the base.,
you wonder if the pop squad would be okay.,
you deside to investigate somemore.
(to be contuined anyone can take it from hare)
(Yay! Silver Wolf!)
(I have no idea how that coincidence ended up here.)
(story continued from massive hammer)
you charge forward before the villains pulverize the girl.but she is too quick. she jumps up and starts amazing kung fu while whirling her sword,her ponytail in rythm with her glinting weapon.you are still on the ground mesmerized. and then you are like, WHOA! i have to fight! you rush forward with a battle cry to help the pop squad base who have started fighting.you unsheath your sword and jump right into the action.but as soon as you jump in the action jumps out and away.the villians and the monster army they have gathered run away screaming things like –
“its Mr chosen”
“get outta here”
“call doctor hare.he is here”
“resort to plan b”
and soon the battlefield is deserted.you say”oh!wow,i scared them away”
comical bird says “no,you did not drive them away they just realized that their worst fear ,their doom THE CHOSEN ONE has come true.they will return with a ingenious plan and be more dangerous than ever.”
you turn towards the mysterious girl with her monstrous pet.”how did ya get such a cool pet?and anyway who are you ?
“i am here to train the chosen one. i was to stay hidden till you came .but now you are here.and my pet is named Emira .she is a noble steed .now she is yours.my name is white panther.i am silver wolf’s half sister.”
“okay so what do i need to know?how do i train?” you ask
“you already know everything.comical bird has informed you well.and youfight well so half your training is done .lets continue with the next part”
soon your training is finished .you are completely ready to rid the curse on the island .
“yes! iam ready ro defeat any monster,any villain now.” you say.
as if on cue e.vils’ voice is heard.”ha,ha,ha!so you think little hero.come sword fight me one to one.”he is somehow become stronger .you get nervous ,but enter the fight. before starting white panther and silver wolf give you a gift.they give you a i-phone which allows you to communicate with them any place anytime and they also make your sword unbreakable.the fight begins……….
(anyone can continue)
.OOPS!!!! sorry, this actually comes after the next post by massive hammer. read that first if you have not already read this.
you srike e.vile with the sword.,
you win the fight.,
you get out your communcatier.,
“jj can you hear me?” said wild monster.,
“yeah what’s up?” you said.,
“help!.,Dr.hare has captured us and he’s holding us hostage” said wild monster.,
“give me that!.,hello jj is it?” said Dr.hare.,
“Dr.hare!” you said.,
“yes it is i the evil Dr.hare” said Dr.hare.,
“what do you want?.,i’ll do anything you want me to do just let my friends go” you said.,
“i’m glad you asked now lision i want you to rebulid my rabbot but make it stronger as in indestructible you will find the parts you need in a box hiddien in the cricus tent and you have 24 hours” said Dr.hare.,
you head for the circus tent.
(to be continued anyone can take it from hare)
”Train the Chosen One? I’m not-” you say. ”No, you’re NOT going to be burned up and have to wear a black suit and throw some guy in a hood down a trash chute. Don’t be rediculous.” She says. ”Good. I’m glad about that. In fact, how did you even get here? I mean, like, your not the Chosen One like I am! ” you say. ”Not really sure.” She says. ”But there IS smeone else here to train you.” ”Who is he? ” you say. ”He’s a news reporter, a wise Poptropican, he completed every Island, no real biggie. Right now, he’s going undercover and going by Little Hopper. ” she says. ”What’s his real name? Who is he? ” you say. ”Clean Shark. The legendary Clean Shark. Captain Crawfish has been after him for quite some time now. He DOES have every medallion. That’s what Captain Crawfish has been after, has he not, JJ? Well, no time for talk. Your training begins.
“But first,you must find someone who can give you…a disguise.” “Fine,but who?” “The costume master,Sticky Clown. He is located 2 km west of here. We will take you to him.” Some time,you reach him. “Just,remember,JJ,he is very into…fashion.”
Just then,a guy with a tailor’s clothes and a measuring tape on his shoulder comes out of nowhere! “Welcome to my costume shop! Who or what would you like to look like? A monkey? Zeus? A ninja? Or how about an African warrior? A robot?Or maybe you would like a-” “This is no time for fashion,Sticky. This is the Chosen one,Jumpy Jumper! He needs a disguise!”
“The chosen one? Well,oh great one,what kind of disguise do you like?” You think about it for a while. Then you answer,”A ninja.” “What kind of ninja?The red midnight ninja? The classic midnight ninja? The limited time light ninja? The ninja costume from Red Dragon?” “The last one.” “Oh really? What colour?”” “Black.” “Oh,good.” Immediately,he takes a black ninja costume from nowhere. “Here you go.”
You stare at it for a while.Then you thank him. “You’re welcome. I would recommend Clean Shark as your trainer. He’s learned from the legendary ninja master himself!” “Okay,thanks,Sticky,I knew you’d help.” Then Silver Wolf says,”Come.We must go.”
But as you walk,Sticky Clown suddenly says,”Oh,and one more thing.” “Yes?”,everyone asks. “Last week a huge group of people came to me. They asked me for costumes of every Poptropica villains. I gave them the costumes. Gretchen Grimlock was the hardest.”
“Wait,does this mean-” “Yes,it is now a very strong possibility. The ‘villains’ could just be good-turned-bad Poptropicans in disguises.”,says Comical Bird. “Very interesting information we have there.Very interesting.”,Clean Shadow says.
“Thank you for the information,Sticky.We must go now.”,you say. “Yes,you’re welcome.Wait,what’s that?!”,shouts Sticky. Silver Wolf alone looks around. “Oh no,it’s…William the Chimpanzee!” “What?!”,everyone shouts. Silver Wolf just laughs. “Oh,I was just meddling with your minds.It’s just-” Bonk! ,you and everyone else suddenly hear.
You all look around.You can’t see her. Sticky immediately faints in his shop. Now everyone knows that it will be a long journey back…
To be continued- Mwhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!
(Now what dangers will JJ and his friends face as they try to journey back? Where is Silver Wolf? Has Sticky Clown told them all he knows? Will they meet Clean Shark? How will they start their training? Is it true that the villains aren’t themselves (literally)? If so,then who exactly are they? Who is the master of the villains? A real villain? Is there even more to the mystery of Monster Carnival? Is this comment longer than it seems? Oh wait,oops. 😳
I’ll stop right here. 😆 )
(Fashonista)
(Hehe.)
Meanwhile, Clean was interviewing someone in a Common Room for no reason at all, and then he went back on his search for Monster Carnival, which he had been seeing when he was six years old, and he’s been on the search for years. But he knew that a wise Poptropican would keep their identity to themselves, which he learned on Red Dragon Island. He was riding his blimp trying to find MC, then, he hears a pop. He finds out his blimp was sabotauged! ”Ahhhh!!!!!! ” he screamed. Then he landed close to 24 Carrot, but he couldn’t head there because the water didn’t look green anymore. He saw some land, and thought it was 24 Carrot, but when he got there, he noticed claw marks and the words: KEEP OUT! Monster Carnival Island. I’ve heard about the Chosen One arriving here. I must find him.
(Oops. I forgot to add quotation marks at the ending dialouge. Pretend it’s there. 🙂 )
“Sigh. Now that Silver Wolf is missing, what’re we gonna do?” asked JJ. “Ugh. I was hoping Clean would be here by now! But you know him. I thought that he would’ve already found this place after all his life here on Poptropica.” said an annoyed Clean Shadow. Clean Shark noticed them, and put on his disguise as Little Hopper, his cousin. He trudged along, pretending to be weak. “Ohhh…. Have you seen- >Cough! Cough!< -my cousin, Clean Shark?" said Hopper. "Hmmm… What's your name?" asked Jumpy Jumper suspiciously. "Little Hopper! Haven't you heard of me?"(JJ and Shadow look at him like he's a weirdo) "Sigh. My cousin gets all the glory." said Hopper. "What do you mean, "Cousin?" You're already Clean Shark! Silver already told me that!" JJ said, confronting Clean, supposedly Hopper. "Hmmm… Great job. You passed my test. But you still have a lot of training to do. I also know that you need to see Sticky Clown, or Mall Manager Clown, or Zombie Leader Clown, WHATEVER his name is, you need to see him again. He only told you half the information you needed. You'll have a surprise when you get back." said Clean.
(So, what is Sticky going to tell JJ and Clean Shadow? What is the surprise Clean has for JJ? Find out soon by me, or tell it your way!)
(I got kind lost after a while. This doesn’t make sense anymore. 😦 )
(Yeah. What happened to the comments? Shouldn’t they go in order from when they were made? Like, newer comments at the bottom? Maybe it’s just us. And Fishy. And everyone else. Come to think of it, it’s not just us.)
(The comments should be in order with the most recent at the bottom, but for some reason, there seems to be a WordPress glitch that is causing some to appear out of place. Try your best to follow the story based on the time stamps on each comment, or see my comment where I tried to summarize what happened before and continued the story. Also, try not to “reply” to comments when continuing the story; instead, write a new comment.)
“Hello, jj? says a voice.
you pull out your communicator and say, “yeah?”
“its clean shadow! i got the communicator! the villans are planning to steal the island meadallions to get the island x medallion! you gotta get them!”
You hang up and turn to your ally.
“We need to go. now.”
You run of to your blimp, only to discover that it is burnt to ashes….
DUMDUMDUM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(this goes after the post by massive hammer.)
(scratch that.)
(Hey Slanted Fish, could you do another summary thing? That last one was really helpful 😀 !)
(countinued from Clean Sharks latest post.) You walk back over to Sticky Clowns Shop.
“Hey!” he says. “What can I do for ya?”
“Clean Shark said you have something to tell us.” says Shadow.
“That I do!” says Clown. “So, anyway,….”
Suddenly, the door of the shop bursts open.
All the supervillans show up at the front of the shop!
“Good job, Zeus.” says Black Widow.
“Zeus?!” you exclaim
You look around and notice another Sticky Clown tied up in the corner!
The other Clown pulls of his mask to reveal the face of Zeus!
Suddenly, you are clonked in the head, and pass out………………
MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.
Continued from Wild Monster:
You wake up. You find yourself tied up with your friends and Sticky Clown. You are the only one conscious. Suddenly you hear Gretchen Grimlock talking to Zeus. You put your ear close and hear…
(Continued from Sticky Clown)
Through the thin walls JJ hears Zues, or is it fake Zues?, giving orders to the others.
“We have to kill them, there are NO exceptions!” He yells.
You hear Binary Bard clear his throat.
“But what about Silver Wolf? I think I’ve almost gotten though to her. Maybe one more brain washing session to get her on our side?”
“Fine!” snaps Zues, “Meeting ajourned. They shall die tomarrow at noon!”
JJ gasps and elbows the person closest to him, Sticky Clown.
“Wh- what?” Sticky Clown gasps, “Zues! Kidnapped! Medallions stolen!” he struggles against the bonds.
“Calm down! You’re rubbing the rope against my skin!” JJ yelps. Sticky Clown calms down and listens to what JJ heard.
“Ok, well for sure we need to save Silver Wolf, and ourselves, before tomarrow. Unfortunatley the only other thing in here is some old sack. Let me see if we got lucky and somebody forgot something in there we can use.”
(i’ll go next)
“everything is according to plan” said Gretchen.,
“yes as soon as we destroy the chosen one no one will stop us” said Zeus.,
then a girl wareing a blue super hero outfit comes up to you.,
“who are you?” you said.,
“i’m Super Grape but you can call me sg and i’m geting you out of hare” said Super grape.,
then Gretchen sees Super grape.,
“let tham go it’s me you want i have all 33 medallions” said Super grape.,
“Dr.hare come hare and count her medallons” said Gretchen.,
Dr.hare counts Super grape’s medallons.,
“31.,32.,33 yep all 33” said Dr.hare.,
a smile came on Gretchen’s face.,
“let theam go but Super grape stays hare” said Gretchen.,
the villians let you and your friends go you wach Dr.hare take Super grape’s medallions.,
and you wach the villians take Super grape away.,
“hey kid do me a faver brack the curse it’s the only way to rid this island of thease villians” said Super grape.,
(to be continued anyone can take it from hare)
(Continued from Massive Hammer’s latest post) Now you and everyone else run out of the Headquarters. “Now wait a minute!”,shouts Big Bubbles,the same Poptropican in that photo,”what was Sticky supposed to tell us?!” “Well,”says Sticky,”Come to my shop.” He leads you there and then comes to a closed door. He puts his fingerprint on it and it opens. “Come in.We have a lot of things to discuss.”
(I think you should sticky this post.)
(Continued from Sticky) Sticky explained him and Clean Shark’s plan to release Island X, which Clean had been trying to do his whole life. “Ok, so… We unite every Poptropican that’s completed every Island?” JJ asked, being unsure. “Actually, we need you to complete every Island.” Sticky said. “WHAT?!” JJ screamed. “How am I supposed to do that?!” “Don’t worry.” Sticky said. He then tossed JJ a book. “Um, this is a guide?” JJ asked. “Yup.” Sticky said. “The last Island to complete is Wimpy Wonderland, and then the book’s done. Once that happens, call me so that me and Clean can come and help you. Also, since your blimp was burnt to ashes, use mine.” “Ok.” JJ said, jumping into Sticky’s blimp.
(continued from clean shark)
you arrive on the island and wonder what shold you do?.,
you deside to explore the island.,
so you explore the island.,
then you realize that you left your back pack in the blimp you go to the blimp to get it.,
whan you get to the blimp you get your back pack then you notice something pick it’s Dr.hare he must have seenked in the blimp before you left island x.,
he grabs you.,
“help!” you yell.,
“i’m takeing you to my lair you will make a good drone” said Dr.hare.,
he than koncks you unconscious.
(to be continued any one can take it from hare)
(Continued from Super Grape)”Hah! You’re hopeless, JJ! I kidnapped all your friends: Stinky Clown, Non-Super Grape, Rusty Wolf, and Dirty Shadow!” said Dr.Hare. “How dare you call my friends those names!?” said JJ. “You forgot a friend…” echoed a voice. “Clean Shark!” shouted all the heroes in joy. “Ah, Clean Shark…. Looks like we’ve got my old nemesis. You were the one who defeated me, and if it weren’t for Binary Bard, I would’ve perished!” Dr.Hare said angrily. “So THAT’S how he got back here!” said the heroes. “I guess it’s on.” Clean said. “Hah. I’ve got backup. Oh, booyyss!!” Dr.Hare then shouted. Suddenly, all the villains, and all the abandoned monsters of the Island in ruins, appeared before them. “Hah! That’s nothing. I’ve got thousands more backup.” Clean said. Then every Poptropican born in Poptropica, every inhabitant from every Island appeared armed, and the villains gasped in terror. Suddenly, the hydra appeared, the same monster that battled the villains before, came, unleashed because her owner was trapped, and helped the heroes. (Anyone take on the battle now)
Suddenly,E.Vile summons his even bigger army of robots. Immediately the hydra strikes and eats them (most of them). Suddenly the biggest one appears:1000000000000 feet tall and big enough to destroy an island by just sitting on it! All the citizens and prisoners attack at once. An hour later,he’s only ticked. Too tickled. He’s tickled so much that he falls into the ocean and self destructs. Everyone rejoices. But then E.Vile makes the villains disappear,and removes his helmet. No one can believe it. He is none other than…
(WellAnyoneCanContinueThisBye! *runs offstage to avoid complaints* )
(I’m still insulted at Stinky Clown!)
Tell that to the cy-bunny that called you that.
(Oh,do remind me to.)
(stinky? really? LOL)
(Continued from myself) Clean’s friend, Thirsty Lightning, went and freed the trapped heroes. She then knocked the villains unconscious with her Spud Gun, but then, everything turned to darkness. Suddenly, an eerie light appears. It’s the ghost of E.Vile! He then strikes JJ with his ghostly yet solid sword. JJ falls to his knees. “Hah hah hah!” The Spirit of E.Vile laughed. “JJ! Sticky, take care of JJ.” Clean says. “Oh, I know a different method.” Sticky replied. He then grabbed a magic wand out of nowhere, and then a big box appeared above JJ. It said, “Defeated! Would you like to try again?” Sticky presses the yes button. JJ rises up, completely healthy and wound-free. “Wow. That’s a bit specific.” Clean says. Then, Super Grape grabs a vacuum from her backpack, and sucks up E.Vile’s ghost. “Okay, I really need to get the fun back into stuff. This is going way too fast and easy.” “I might HAVE had to wear a black suit for the rest of my life!” JJ said. “But where would a guy in a hood come in?” Silver Wolf and Clean Shadow said.
(Continued from Sticky) “Wha, WHAT!?” the Poptropicans screamed. “Yes, it is I, the REAL Little Hopper! Oh, cousin Shark, looks like you’ve been going undercover as a villain the whole time!” Little Hopper’s Ghost said. “Hopper. I can’t believe it, you’re E.Vile!? What happened!!??” Clean screamed in bewilderment. “You happened, Clean. YOU happened.” Hopper’s ghost said. “You- YOU’RE the master of the Villains?! How could you!?” Clean said. “I was famous once, but then you completed every Island, and won the Ultimate Medallion, because EVERYONE thought you were the Chosen One! I couldn’t take it. You managed to get to one of the planets I invaded, and you ruined my chance for fame!” Hopper said. “But now that I’m a ghost, I’m more powerful than ever. And that means I can destroy everyone, including the Chosen One! But, if you give me every one of you’re Medallions, INCLUDING the Ultimate Medallion, I will not destroy your Friends or Poptropica, but you will have to pay the price. So, is it a deal?” Hopper said. “NO Clean!” JJ screamed. “I’m not letting you die, JJ. Hopper, It’s a deal.” Clean said, sacrificing his medallions and himself. “Excellent.” Hopper said, and he suddenly came back to life. “NO!!!” JJ screamed. (To be continued)
I’m addicted to this story :-)! Continue please.
You look at the unconscious Clean Shark. He seems almost dead.You,not caring rush to Hopper,even though Sticky,Wolfy,and Shadowy try to stop you. Hopper almost puts the Monster Carnival medallion on his neck. “Soon,I will have power over all of Poptropica! Mwhahahahaha!” Suddenly,you headbutt him,like one of his Chargebots. Hopper tripped and fell. You take the medal. “This was meant for me”,you say. You put it on your neck immediately. Suddenly,you hear a voice,the same voice of the box which had guided your creation earlier.
Oh, Great Chosen One,you have worn the medal of the great Monster Carnival. You shall now see it’s past,why it was never released,what happened to it,and so on.
Suddenly,you appear in front of a lovely garden. Carnival tents are everywhere,and strange creatures are located in them. You immediately realized that this was Monster Carnival just a day before the creators announced it and it’s release date. A really happy man,probably the monster trainer was bouncing about in joy. “Oh boy! An official announcement!” Suddenly,an old man with a curly beard in a doctor suit appears. Immediately the trainer shivers. “Dr.Jupiter,what are you-” “Hmph!”,says the doctor,”you have to pay me for buying you this island.’ ‘But-‘ “You cannot pay?Very well,then,I shall utter the words.” “not those words!Please!” “Z-3-U-S-T-H-3-G-R-3-4-T!” Suddenly,the entire island disappears. “You have paid.”,says Dr.Jupiter,vanishing in thin air,leaving the trainer sobbing.
Fortunately,they bought it again in 2010,just before Mythology was released.
Then you transport into another flashback…
(Anyone can continue.)
(Continued from Sticky) “You’ll won’t get away with this! I’ll have my revenge!!! ” Hopper said, and suddenly he quickly grabbed something from his old backpack, and he disappeared as quickly as Clean Shark fainted when he gave up his medallions. JJ then ran over to Clean Shark. “Clean! Are you okay!? Clean? Clean!” JJ yelled sadly, then sobbing. Suddenly, he saw a huge light come right on top of Clean’s body. ”Jumpy Jumper, you have completed the most fatal test in the history of Poptropica, and so, with compassion and mercy for everyone around you, I will grant you one wish of any of your desires. What will it be? ” said the mystical voice of the box. ”I want Clean Shark back.” Answered JJ. Suddenly, Clean suddenly opened his eyes like he was waking up from a good night’s sleep. ”Clean! You’re alive! ” JJ shouted in joy and in tears. ”I feel like I woke up from the longest night in history.” Clean said. ”But, there’s still something you need. I present you with the Ultimate Medallion. Every time you complete an Island, you see the numbers emblazon to another one.” Said Clean. ”But, your quest isn’t over. Hopper’s on the loose, and he said he would get his revenge.” Said Clean, worried that Hopper would be aware of everything going on.
Hey,your flashback,remember?
“Oh,right.”,you say.
<Now,anyways,they managed to bring it back just after Reality TV instead of Mythology.
And then,you continue into the flashback.
It is a beautiful garden again,but something felt wrong. Suddenly,you see the same trainer running in a hurry. “I’ve got to escape him! He’s everywhere!” “Oh no you don’t!”,another voice booms. You look up. You see a figure floated in the air,but you can’t see who he is. “Monster Carnival will not be going away again!” “Oh Yes it will!” Then the figure chants something! “Pah! I never trusted you from the start,’Dr.Jupiter’!” “Ah yes,you should have known earlier,right?NO!” “Well,this time,you’re not getting away with this!” The trainer blows a whistle. Suddenly all kinds of monsters come in and attack ‘Dr.Jupiter’! “AHHHHH!” “He immediately falls to the ground. He bleeds,but the blood is golden for some reason. You walk closer and see his face.
You almost faint. It is Zeus himself! “You won’t take over-AHH!Get off me,foolish monster!You won’t take over-ouch!-my island!” He then swears in an ancient language,probably ancient Greek language. “But how can you stop it now,Jupie?” “I’ll show you how! I hereby curse this island to be in ruins! The carnival shall disappear,but the monsters shall remain! This island will never be released unless 5 years later,a hero will see this island and dwelve here to struggle against every possible villain which will be there,including me! And this prophecy will tell him what he shall do!” A scroll appears out of mist suddenly,and the island falls into what it is now immediately! The trainer sobs and runs into the deep,deep forest. “And as for you,’says Zeus,”you shall be lost in the forest for years,until you fall for the dark side,Little Hopper!” “LITTLE HOPPER?!”,you think. Then Zeus disappears with the scroll.
And now you see,oh Chosen One,Little Hopper didn’t become evil-or E.Vile because of Clean Shark,it was the curse of Zeus who made him what he is now. And as for Monster Carnival-*sigh* you can see why in the flashback about that.
“But what was the prophecy?”
You shall see in a minute.
You suddenly wake up.
“JJ!It’s me,Big Bubbles!” “Huh?”,you say. “I found this scroll. It fell from the skies. It’s called the great prophecy of the chosen one or something-” “Lemme see that!”,you say.
You read the prophecy.It says-To be continued.
(continued from Sticky Clown)
“The Chosen One, someday, at the time of danger will have the fate of all of Poptropica resting squarely on them. Then they will make a decision that determines what happens to all of the Poptropica universe.”
You are about to react to the prophecy when suddenly you feel a strong blast of wind.
A man dressed in a suit and sunglasses steps forward.
“My name is Shaky Bee.” he says.
“I shall not tell you why I have come.”
You stop for a moment.
“Get in my plane. Now.” he says strictly.
You eventually get on the plane.
The plane takes off and suddenly you are flying above Poptropica.
“Do not question me when I show you where I am taking you.” he says.
He points to where he is taking you on the map.
Oh no!
You realize he is taking you to…
(to be continued by anyone)
(Continued from Shaky Bee) Super Villain Island! ”You must go to that destroyed prison and confront Hopper and possibly redeem him. Clean went undercover as Little Hopper because it was his only relative besides his sister, Fearless Shark. ” Said Shaky Bee. ”I can’t believe it, but why did Hopper accuse Clean of being the reason why he’s E.Vile? ” asked JJ. ”I don’t know. Maybe Zeus did that to cover his tracks or mind controlled Hopper to think that.” Shaky Bee replied. ”Okay, I’ll go.” JJ said, then jumping down into the fortress. ”Ah, we meet again, Jumpy Jumper, looks like I might have a new ally! But I bet you’ve come here for different reasons. Let the battle begin! ” Hopper shouted with an evil grin on his face. ”Clean wasn’t the reason you became evil! Zeus was! ” shouted JJ. “Oh, really? You have no proof.” Hopper said. ”Lo sah, meh wha! ” JJ shouted, apparently knowing the sacred language of the Chosen One. Suddenly, JJ and Hopper were transported to the flashback of the fall of Monster Carnival. ”This place, seems familiar.” Hopper said. He then heard Zeus say the curse and heard Zeus shouting to him that he will fall to the dark side. ”I, I can’t believe it! I’ve been under a curse this whole time!? ” Little Hopper shouted. ”I’m afraid so…” JJ said sadly. (To be Continued)
(This isn’t on the front page anymore. We need to keep this Ongoing. We aren’t finished yet!
(Oops. Forgot to add the parenthasee. Pretend it’s there.)
(From Clean Shark)You land on Super Villan Island. The entire island is in ruin. You see a path of destruction leading to the great jail. You see no signs of life. Suddenly, you hear crying. You run and see a little boy sitting on the ground. There is Something very strange about him. He is missing an arm! You run over to him. “What happened?” asked Bee. “A ship full of bad people came and erased everything! I saw an unconscious knight and other people on the ship. I’m the only survivor!” “We will help after we get rid of the bad people.” you say. You run up to the jail and climb to the top. Once you are there, you see something truly terriffiying. All the Poptropicans that have completed all the islands are connected to wires. They are fighting the pain. The wires are absorbing the medallions powers. Suddenly you see E.vil. “Welcome, Jumpy Jumper!” he says. Suddenly something tackles you. You look up and see a robotic version of you!
What will happen next??? Who is the ‘Metal Jumper’? What is happening to the Ace Poptropicans? Where is the Pop squad??? Are they alive???? Is this the longest post I’ve ever done????? Probably! Stay tuned to find out the anwsers to these questions, and more!!!!!!
(Continued from Wild Monster) “Wait, I- I was just WITH you, Hopper!” JJ said, astonished. “Hah, hah! You REALLY thought Hopper was the REAL E.Vile!? Zeus planned for Hopper to just be evil, but I mind-controlled him to think he was the true E.Vile and that Clean Shark had caused him to become Evil! Look over there, Jumpy Jumper!” The Real E.Vile said. JJ turned around, and he saw Clean, his sister, and Little Hopper tied up in the wires, and then Clean shouted, “Catch, JJ! Ugh, oooh…” He threw JJ a sword, but it wasn’t that old, golden one that broke when JJ first started his adventures, it was a shiny, silver sword and he saw that it was as sharp as lightning. “I-I call I-it, the B-Bolt.” Clean said in pain. JJ cut the Poptropicans free, including Little Hopper, who spun around and around until he was wearing robotic costume with a ninja belt, and Clean’s signature red hat, turned backwards, of course. “You’ve done good, kid. I’m proud that you’ve been completely selfless and courageous this whole entire time.” Little Hopper said. “But wait, you’ve never completed all the Islands!” JJ said to Hopper. “E.Vile doesn’t care. He wants those medallions powers no matter what.” Hopper said. Suddenly, every Poptropican took out swords, from the Poptropica Store and out, and edged closer to E.Vile. “Let the battle begin. Mwa, hah, hah, hah, hah, hah, hah!!!!” E.Vile shouted. (To be continued)
(Fishy, it seems the number of people visiting this has really died down, and now it seems only me, Sticky, Super Grape and Wild Monster are the only ones who seem to comment, oh, and Shaky Bee. You guys need to sticky this post, maybe we’ll get more comments. Because with only a small amount of commenters, the story can’t go on for much longer. Also, how am I able to upload stuff into comments? Because I want to show people how I see JJ, and it could kinda make a visualization for whoever can’t exactly picture it.
(P.S. I’ve seen videos in comments, so I’m sure it works.)
(Continued from Clean Shark) “Now just wait a minute!”,shouts another voice. You immediately look back and you see Binary Bard himself. “You think we four just swam away?!” The Black Widow,Dr.Hare,and Captain Crawfish suddenly appear from nowhere. “Now,Mister Grumpy Lightning,may I?” He immediately removes the real E.Vile’s mask and-its Zeus! “Let’s get him,guys!” They all fight with Zeus. “JJ,’comes a voice from behind,”I know what they are fighting over,besides what Zeus did to them.” “Sticky?” “Yes,its me.They need 3 great sources of power to make the ultimate weapon of all Poptropica!” “What are they?” “The monster carnival medallion,which will redeem it’s full power after you complete all the islands,that needs to be powered up to be used.Next is the Scepter of the King of Arthurus,I heard that that binary bastard stole it.Finally,there is Zeus’s Master Bolt,which is what they are fighting over.” (To Be Continued)
(Yay,100th comment!)
(Actually,I meant fight AGAINST Zeus,not with him.)
(Still, you’re a fashonista! Hee hee.)
(You know the old saying ,Clean,once a Fashionista,always a fashionista.)
An explosion shakes the island as the battle behind JJ and Sticky becomes more and more intense. A rock from the choas hits Sticky and he falls on the ground.
“Sticky! Are you ok?” JJ cries in shock
“Yeah, I’ll be fine, but you need to get moving. We all we keep the villians busy, but you must go and find at least one of the items I told you about. If any one villian is holding all three items, the result will be disastorous! Hurry, you need to work while these idiots are distracted!”
“Ok,” says JJ, a little but nervous, “I guess I will first try to get the…”
(You guys decide which object JJ trys to get first!)
(continued from sticky clown)
the villians take down zeus.,
they get his bolt.,
“poptropica will be ours” said Dr.hare.,
“not if i can help it” said super grape.,
“jj you take the black widow., b.bard and crawfish i’ll take care of long ears hare” said super grape.,
“who are you calling long ears?” said Dr.hare.,
“you rabbit men” said super grape.
(to be continued anyone can take it from hare)
(Continued from Massive Hammer and Super Grape) “Uh…the medal?” “I said that the power-” “Oh Yeah.That reminds me-who’s looking after your costume shop?” “Well-uh-Oh no!My poor costumes!I’d better go,JJ,I’ll have to check them!” “Wait,but-” Immediately he disappears,in a cloud of smoke. “I shouldn’t have told him that”,you grumble. “Jumpy!”There is a cry of help!
You look behind and see Super Grape. She is being attacked by carrot missiles. “Face the bunny power,foolish child!”,shouts Dr.Hare. You can’t bear looking at her.She has a lot of scars on her face. You feel an ancient Chosen One language thingy coming up. “Ek solaf,mojai kya alla dooka poonch rahetai pootry!”,you shout. Suddenly the carrot missiles go back to Dr.Hare. Boom! He falls off the island cliff.
A few remaining missiles go and hit the others,making them fall off too. Black Widow and Binary Bard drop something.You go and get them.They are the scepter and the bolt.You put,the two,along with the medal,but it won’t work,because of what Sticky warned you. “Give them to me,foolish child”,says Zeus. “You’ll have to fight me first!”,comes another voice.
You turn and see Comical Bird. “I’m the leader of the Pop Squad,it is my job,Master Jumper.” She smiles,and takes a sword out of pure water-wait,what?! “I’ll take on uncle,JJ,now go and complete the islands to redeem the medal’s full power!” “Wait,but-” “GO!”The blimp comes out of nowhere,and you jump into it,and start exploring the islands.
3 weeks later,you have completed all the islands,and now know more about Poptropica than ever.You go back on the island.Zeus and Bird are still fighting,and what’s worse,Metal Jumper has joined the fight!You must fight Zeus and the Metal Jumper,and ask Bird a few questions.
To be continued.
(Okay,I’ll give you a hint about what may or may not come in the next part.Her uncle:her blue hair,the sword from the water–Comical Bird has a lot to explain to JJ.)
(Continued from myself:)
“Alright,Zeus,”you say,’give up. The medal has been fully powered.” “Not yet,foolish one. Remaining robots,get him.RJ and I will take care of my little niece here.” But before the robots can take action,you immediately combine the 3 objects together.
Suddenly,the entire thing turns into a massive object of destruction,with the bolt as the handle,the scepter on it,and there is a small hole on top of it—with the medal on it. “Cooka meno klasi!”,you shout. Suddenly,bright light fills the area. Several things are happening at once.
Sticky suddenly reappears,the robots actually turn into ordinary Poptropicans,Silver Wolf’s hydra rises from the water,Zeus,RJ (Robo Jumper?) and the villains at the bottom (you don’t know how you know it,yet you know that they do it) disappear,Clean,his sister and Hopper smile and a shield of water surrounds Comical Bird.
You suddenly realize what massive power this could cause and will try to keep it away from the villains.
(Continued from Sticky Clown) “Guys, I- uh… I’ve gotta go!” Clean shouts to Hopper and Fearless Shark. “Where are you going? ” JJ asks, wondering about Clean. Clean Shark runs off with no hesitation, replying to no questions. ”What’s up with Clean? He’s never acted like that before- well, as far as I know.” Hopper questioned. Meanwhile, Dr.Hare was rescued by a guy with a white ninja costume on, with no explanation of who he is. Before that, Sticky said that Clean had went to his costume shop, and left in a hurry. After rescuing Dr. Hare, the Poptropican unveiled himself and it was none other than Clean Shark! He requested that Dr. Hare ake a robotic version of himself, Sticky, and Hopper, and then veiled himself again and went back to battle the villains, or at least pretend to. (To be Continued)
(Continued from Clean) While the robots fight,you go back to the other side of the island. Other Poptropicans are there. “Jumpy Jumper!”,you hear Comical Bird shout. “Come here! We have a lot to tell you!” You look behind and see with her the Poptropicans which were robots,Sticky,Fearless Shark,Hopper,Silver Wolf and her hydra,someone in a hood,and a pet robot which looks familiar.
You try to keep the questions you want to ask them in your mind.
To Sticky:
Are your costumes safe? How did you get them anyway?
To Comical Bird:
How did you do all those water attack thingies,and why did you call Zeus your uncle?
To Hopper:
Feeling better?
To Silver Wolf:
How’s your hydra? What’s his name?
To the poptropicans:
How did Zeus transform you? What is that RJ doing with him? Did Zeus mind control you to take those villains costumes from Sticky and made you think you were the real villains?Did you bonk Silver Wolf on the head back at Sticky’s the first time we went there?
To the cloaked guy and his floating pet robot:
Who are you two?
That’s a lot to keep in mind! “Guys,’you say,”let’s start questioning.”
(Please ask the questions shown above and answer them in the next part!)
(continued form sticky clown)
” are your costumes safe?, how did you get them any way?” you say to sticky.,
“yes and got them from the store” said sticky.,
“how did you do those water attack thingies and why did you call zeus your uncle?” you say to comical brid.,
“with my triton and i’m posiden’s daughter” said comical brid.,
“feeling better?” you say to hopper.,
“yes” said hopper.,
“how’s you hydera,what’s his name?” you say to sliver wolf.,
“good and it’s pluto” said sliver wolf.,
“how did zeus transform you?,what is that rj doing with him?,did zeus mind control you to take tose villians costumes from sticky and made you think you were the real villians?,did you bonk sliver wolf on the head back at sticky’s the frist time we went thare?” you say to the poptropicans.,
“by useing his powers.,he works for him.,yes and yes” said the poptropicans.,
“who are you two?” you say to the clocked fiqure and his floating pet robot.,
“i’m quick flame and this is spike” said the clocked fiqure.,
“wait a minute whare’s super grape?” you say.,
“we don’t know she could be anywhare on the island” said sliver wolf.,
“lets look for her” you say.,
meanwhile super grape was spying on Dr.hare.,but Dr.hare spotted her.,”you!” said Dr.hare.,
super grape ran.,
but Dr.hare bloked the door.,
“i know everything i know that it was clean shark who rescued you and he whants you to make robot versions of himself.,stinky and hopper just wait whan jj hears this” said super grape.,
“but he’ll naver find out” said Dr.hare.,
Dr.hare knocks super grape unconscious.
(to be continued anyone can take it from hare)
You can’t believe such answers. Suddenly you hear,”HELP! JJ! HELP! You immediately take the ultimate weapon and fire it at the door. It bursts open,you’ll have to save Super Grape without loosing your weapon to Dr.Hare…
(Cont. from me) You run to the prison top.”Ha! JJ! Give that to me,or your friend here will suffer,”says Dr.Hare. “But first I’ll get you with my weapon here.” “But it’ll also hit her at the same time,fool!” You realize that he’s right. Suddenly Big Bubbles, Comical Bird,Silver Wolf and Sticky Clown run up. “Stop right there!” “JJ,’says Super Grape,’you see-‘ “Quiet! You shall not reveal this,grape! You realize that Dr.Hare is forcing Grape to keep something from you. “Hey,Fuzzball,you’re not a super villain,you’re a super weirdo! I mean,who wears a pink bunny suit!” “Why you little-‘ Suddenly Sticky throws some grapes into the window Dr.Hare was blocking. Suddenly,Pluto comes and eats them. “Go get the pink one,Pluto!”,shouts Silver Wolf. “Wha-‘ Comical Bird immediately uses her water powers on Dr.Hare,releasing Super Grape from his grip. Now,immediately,you use the weapon,and Dr.Hare is frozen in ice. “Now,Super,what did you want to tell us?”,you ask Super Grape. (To Be Continued.)
(continued from sticky clown)
“thank you and you know clean shark?” said Super Grape.,
“yes what about him?” you said.,
“you know how he acted strange?” said Super Grape.,
“yes what about it?” you said.,
“sticky did’t he buy a white ninja outfit from you?” said Super Grape.,
“yes what about it?” said sticky clown.,
“well clean shark is a traitor!” said Super Grape.,
“what do you mean?” you said.,
“i saw clean shark rescue Dr.Hare and he wants Dr.Hare to make robot versions of himself sticky and hopper” said Super Grape,
“what! i don’t believe it i thought he was our friend” said sticky clown.,
“well let’s go back to sticky’s shop” you said.,
(Continued from Super Grape) Suddenly, out of nowhere, Clean Shark comes and attacks Super Grape and JJ. He then uses his Laser Pen from Spy Island to free Dr.Hare. “CLEAN! What are you doing!?” JJ screamed, sobbing at the same time. “That’s classified business. Robots, ATTACK!!!!” Then suddenly Cyborg Shark, Sticky Robot, and Bionic Hopper attack, and he and Dr.Hare escape. “Good. I’ve done your dirty work, Bunny Boy, now where’s MY end of the bargain?” Clean asks Dr. Hare angrily. “Fine. Here’s your best friend, Sneaky Cheetah.” said Dr.Hare. “That’s Skater Kid to you!” Sneaky Cheetah snarled at Dr.Hare, then whacking him with his skateboard. “Thank you, Clean! I owe you one!” Sneaky said to Clean in joy. “Your welcome, man. But I’m not sure I should’ve rescued you the way I did. Now I’m in hot water with all of Poptropica, it seems. My friends are probably spreading the news right now, and calling me Dirty Shark, the betrayer of Poptropica.” Clean said sorrowfully. (To be continued)
(Continued from Clean Shark:) With one blast from your weapon,you destroy all the robots. Suddenly,RJ appears! “Beep bop beep! Zeus sent me. Surrender,Jumper,or I will apprehend you and your weapon. I am armed too.” “Uh oh. JJ,I think I know what he has.”,says Sticky,’the ultimate shield,just like the ultimate weapon,but it defenses instead of attacking. 3 items are used to form it too,but I can’t remember.” “Your friend is right,Jumper.”,says RJ. “Now give up. You’ll have to hit me nine times with your weapon,that is how strong I am.” “That means that you’ll have to distract him,then hit him!”,shouts Big Bubbles. “Enough! Prepare to meet your doom!”,shouts RJ.
You look around your surroundings.There’s a laser button you can activate. If only you could reach it. Immediately you have a brainwave. But it will take some time. RJ shoots lasers at you continuously,so there’s no time to stop. After some time ,he stops,exhausted. You immediately use the weapon,but he blocks it shield,yet another but,it hits the button,activating the laser.Yet he blocks it with his shield again. But while he’s distracted,you used the weapon on him. He suddenly winces,taking away his shield. Suddenly the laser hits him,or hits a button,and he explodes.
Suddenly,the ground under him opens,and a women and child appear. The women smiles. “Hello,Sticky.” “Red Lizard?! Bendy Pear?! What would my wife and child be doing here?!” “Clean Shark told us to come.” “Yeah,dad,he said something about needing help!” “Bah,the traitor! Anyway,brace yourselves…because this is the Chosen One ,Jumpy Jumper!” Red and Bendy gasp. They immediately bow before you. “It is a great pleasure to meet you,JJ!”,they both say. Suddenly,the wall explodes,and Clean and a boy come out.
(Just so you know,Sticky said,“Red Lizard?! Bendy Pear?! What would my wife and child be doing here?!”. They are my other accounts of mine,actually.)
(Continued from Sticky) Clean Shark trudges toward his former friends, and then, he says, “I did what I could to save my best friend. I rescued Dr.Hare because if he died, my friend here would be trapped forever.” Nobody believes Clean Shark. “And the robots? What were those for? And why did you attack us? ” Sticky said. ”I mind controlled him. That’s boop- beep- what-t-t-t I d-d-d-did.” Said Dr.Hare. His suit was torn up, and you could see that under his skin was bionic parts! ”After Clean Shark defeated me and destroyed my rabbot in space, a U.F.O came by with Binary Bard. Since my lungs were damaged and I was close to passing, he replaced my damaged body parts with my bionics. Now I’m a cy-bunny! So Clean Shark’s clean. H-h-he’s har-r-rmless.” ”Y-you were telling the truth? ” Sticky asked Clean. ”I was, Sticky.” Clean said quietly. (To be Continued)
(Cont. from Clean) “But why did you call Red and Bendy here?”,Sticky asks. “Well,you see-‘ “Hey,mom,dad,guys,look!”,Bendy Pear suddenly shouts. The remains of RJ are reforming along with the other robots. “But…how…???” You immediately look back at Dr.Hare. He smiles,wielding a remote. “Fools! I’m not going to leave you so soon.” He laughs. Suddenly Red Lizard tackles him. “I’ll take care of him,JJ. You take care of the 4 robots.”
(Continued from myself) You will now have to think of a way to defeat the robots,as Dr.Hare has made the robots invulnerable for even the ultimate weapong,except for one spot. You first look at RJ. He still holds his,and shoots lasers,with a larger one at the end. Cyborg Shark has a microphone in which he speaks too loud and hits you with. But he has a vulnerability,without his mike he gets slightly damaged.
Sticky Robot spins around with mannequins to hit you. He doesn’t stop,but he has a note on his back which says ‘Kick Me Here.’ And Bionic Hopper hops continuously,hoping to land on you. But he is vulnerable to spiked,burnt and wet platforms. Suddenly you know how to stop them. You immediately run towards them.
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(continued from sticky)
then as you run at the robots rj grabs you.,
super grape kicks sticky robot on the back the robot expoldes.,
then super grape toke the mike from cyborg shark super grape gets out her sword and dystroys the robot with it.,
then super grape gets out a bucket of water and pours the water on boinic hopper and the robot expoldes.,
then super grape got the big laser from rj.,
rj lets you go.,
super grape fires the laser at rj and the robot expoldes.,
“thanks” you say.,
Dr.hare gets out his remote.,
but super grape takes it from him.,
“give that back” said Dr.hare.,
super grape throws the remote on the ground the remote smashes into a million pieces.,
“you brat you ruined everything” said Dr.hare.,
“yeah bunny boy and what are you gonna do about it?” said super grape.
(to be continued anyone can take it)
(Continued from Super Grape) “You forgot, Jumpy Jumper, I’m a Cy-Bunny, and now you can’t get me!” Dr.Hare laughs, then using his ankle rockets to escape. Suddenly, a cannonball shoots right in front of you. “Arr!!! Hah, hah, hah, hah!!!” laughs a voice in the distance. You look up to see… Captain Crawfish! “Dr. Hare did his share of our plan, now it’s me own turn! I will get the Treasure of Poptropica! Prepare to meet ye doom, mateys.” Captain Crawfish snarls. (To be continued)
(Continued from Clean) “Ah,my arch nemesis,Captain Crawfish.”,says Sticky. “Argh,ye aren’t no match fer me,Sticky! Ar har har har!” Suddenly Sticky transforms into a pirate with a golden tooth,a beard,a suit,a sword and all. “A pirate will defeat a pirate. Yo ho ho,and a bottle’o’rum,Captain Crawfish,prepare to meet your doom!” He turns to everyone else and says,”Try not to join the fight,or you could be severely injured.” “Ay,ay,captain!” He immediately runs towards the captain. “I’m the pirate king,Crawfish! I defeated you and sunk yer ship into the sea!” “Ye ravenous cabin boy,yer ship was nothing but a slimy octopus!”
30 minutes of fighting and pirate insults later
Sticky Clown is heavily bruised and bleeding,and so is Captain Crawfish. Crawfish suddenly brings him down. “Ar,after I kill ye,I’ll go and wreck yer costume shop.” “WHAT?! NO ONE WRECKS MY MANNEQUINS!” Suddenly,he forms into himself again,all his injuries disappears and he grows bigger. “I WILL NOW DESTROY YOU,STUPID PIRATE.THIS IS WHAT YOU GET FOR WRECKING MY MANNEQUINS.” He hits Crawfish with his giant measuring tape and he falls into the water. Immediately he transforms back into himself. “Wha..’ he faints. “Wow,all that energy was sure tiring!”,says Red Lizard. ‘Come on,we’d better take him to the dispensary,along with the others,’,says Fearless Cheetah.
(Don’t you mean Sneaky Cheetah?)
Oop,yeah. 😳
(Continued from Sticky Clown) Although Captain Crawfish looked defeated, he was able to use an ancient pirate saying to turn him into a monsterous, gigantic Seacrab! “Yo ho ho, see muh nah whutta, grr grr grr, for me treasure awaits!” Captain Crawfish yelled. “Oh, great. First a Cy-Bunny, and now a Sea Crab. What else? A random News Reporter out of the blue?” Sticky groans. “Ahem.” Clean growls at Sticky. “Oh, right, you’re a news reporter. Sorry.” Sticky says nervously. “Funny story, mateys, but now, let me show you that I be the TRUE Pirate King! Arr, hah, hah, hah, hah, hah!” Captain Crawfish yells. (To be Continued)
(Continued from Clean) Suddenly Sticky turns back into a pirate,and whistles. Immediately his Phoenix Warbird breaks into the prison! “Come aboard,Cap’n!”,shouts the Cannoneer. “Ar,I’ll also wreck ye like the prison,Sticky Pirate!”,shouts Crawfish. He dives into the water and starts swimming. “Catch up with me first and then catch me!Ar har har he he he!” “Ye heard him!Let’s start to sail!”,shouts Red Lizard. “But first-Comical Bird,yer the navigator.Extra navigator,that is. Clean will be the extra cook. Skater here will be the second Cabin Boy.” He continues on until he says,”And ye,Jumper—ye will swab the poop deck. That’s all.”
(from Stickey Clown.)
After days, perhaps weeks, of sailing, you finally spot Captain Crawfish. He has swam into a mysterious island with eight flags surronding it. All have diffrent designs. After you sail on a river into the island, it becomes foggy. Suddenly, you hear a loud, “Fire!”
A cannonball strikes your ship.
(continued from wild monster),”ship ahoy” said super grape who was the look out.,”I have to get on that ship and find crawfish” said sticky.,”can I come with you?” you ask.,”can I come too I want to help” said super.,”sure but be careful” said sticky.,so you,super grape and sticky go on captain crawfish’s ship.,(to be continued any one can take it)
Then you blinked.
( continued from epcot22)
then you blinked again.
(Yadda yadda yadda JJ blinked. Of course he’s gonna blink. But I’m laughing as I comment this. Continued from fearlessnoodle) Then after you blinked, you decided to say something. “Hey! Why can’t I come with you? I’m the Chosen One!” You say. “Welcome to the club. Also, we’re having burnt spaghetti for supper. I don’t know how to cook. Sticky thinks he knows what our talents are. Also, why do they call it a poop deck if there’s no toilet?” Clean said. “You know what? Let’s go and fight that stingy Sea Crab!” you say. You know what? I’ve got a pirate captain costume in my backpack that I bought from Sticky, so why don’t you wear it? It comes with a pirate sword!” Clean told you. “Cool!” you say. “I’ll take the ultra awesome Skull Pirate costume. Got a code after reading a book sample online.” Clean says. “Aw, come on!” you say. Then you and Clean run towards Captain Crawfish. (To be Continued)
(continued from Clean) You get the Skull Pirate costume and dash into CC’s ship. You look around. Suddenly,the platform breaks.You fall into the ship’s secret chamber.
(From Sticky)
You fall into a sort of arena. Inside, there are many villans cheering. You see a jumbotron with a picture of yourself, one of E.vil’s robots, three mystery warriors, and Captain Crawfish. Black widow is announcing something, when suddenly she yells, “Round One! Jumpy Jumper V.S. E.vil robot #5739! A robot appears and charges at you. You pull out THE BOLT!!! and swing it at the robot. Its head falls off. “That was easy.” you say. “Round Two!” yells Black Widow. “Jumpy Jumper V.S. Wild Monster, Clean Shadow, and Cuddly Flame!” Suddenly you hear a voice. You look up and see a Sky Hawk Warrior being pushed by a robot and yelling, “No! I refuse to fight!” The robots push him and a DJ AND a Wildfire Warrior. “JJ!” says Shadow. (The DJ) “We found you! After the trouble at SuperJail, we thought you were gone!” “Yeah!” says Wild. (the Sky Hawk)
“We’ve been searching everywhere!” “So this is the chosen one.” says The Wildfire Warrior. He narrows his eyes. “Are you sure this is him?” he asks. “Yes, Cuddly.” says Shadow. Suddenly the Giant Crab breaks through th ship. “Alright guys!” says Wild. “Lets do this thing!”
To be countinued…
Part 1
When JJ landed on the mysterious Island X, he realized he was trapped in quicksand! JJ called for help as many times as he could. He was unable to free himself but suddenly, a cloaked figure appeared out of no where and pulled JJ out with his/her cane. “I owe you my life!” JJ exclaimed. The cloaked figure did not pull over the cloak covering his/her identity. “Come with me stranger” the cloaked figure said to JJ. JJ did as he was asked. JJ followed the unknown figure through an old and dusty chamber underground. It was hidden like the unknown figure was trying to hide from someone or something. But what is? Or who was it? Both of them didn’t speak at all until they finally came upon a large room. JJ had so many questions. The unknown figure finally pulled the cloak revealing her identity. “I am Maroon Crab. Call me MC. I knew you were coming so I rushed out of the chamber to find you.” “Wait.. how did you know I was coming” JJ had a quizzical expression on his face. “Don’t you know?” she asked “You are the chosen one.” “Huh?” “The reason no one else has been to this peculiar island is because they don’t even know it exists. You are the only one that can see it because you Jumpy Jumper, are the chosen one” MC explained. “Now… I have some things to show you.”
(Ummm….is this supposed to be the beggining?)
(It probably is. Watermelon Twist, you can’t restart the story. It has to follow what other people have written)
(It needs a lot of fixing up! Please don’t be mean! How would you feel if I said that to you?!)
(I wanted to start it over and create something new and fresh! I worked really hard on it!)
(No offense,Watermelon Twist,but I think you’re slightly overreacting.What Clean said wasn’t mean,he was just stating the rules.It’s true,actually.If you said that to me,I would just shrug and say okay,and then continue from someone else.I know that it needs a lot of fixing,but minor mistakes in a story which can be continued by ANYONE,mistakes are inevitable.For example,take Wild Monster’s post above:
Black widow is announcing something, when suddenly she yells, “Round One! Jumpy Jumper V.S. E.vil robot #5739! A robot appears and charges at you. You pull out THE BOLT!!! and swing it at the robot. Its head falls off. “That was easy.” you say.
Now,Wild forgot to capitalize Widow,slightly misspelled E.Vile,put exclamation marks in the middle of the sentence,and put its instead of it’s. No offense,Wild Monster.
And I’m not trying to be rude either,but you also made some small grammatical mistakes (yeah,I know,I’m a geek 😛 ) and forgot to write in second person.And please try to stop overreacting to small things,and I’m not being mean.You could say the alphabet backwards in your mind,or count 1 to 100.And if you’re about to go to school and your mother is calling you,don’t reply yet.Go to school first.By the time you come home your anger would probably be gone. 😛
Please note that I’m not trying to be offensive in anyway,and my apologies if I am.And yes,I know I’m kinda late here.)
(Don’t start to hate on us. We just didn’t know that you had a reason. But the original is getting pretty good. At the beginning, it was all weird and twisted up, but now, I really enjoy it. Also, sorry if I sounded mean. {That’s just sarcasim. Since when can you hear a comment? LOL} Well, my advice is to read some of the more recent comments, I’ll suggest starting at the one that says April something at the top of the comment. 🙂 You can either continue our story, create yours, or do both.)
(Thanks so much for understanding! it was just a little to hard for me to add on to everybody else’s stories. And it’s also really hard for me to write in second person! I guess it’s also hard for me to understand sarcasim when I can’t hear it for real. Friend me on Poptropica! I’m spencer81403. And in real life my name is spencer and i’m a girl in real life!)
(I bet you could start doing it in third person, and then, maybe try to do it in second person. But the other characters you can do in third person the whole time, just JJ that needs to be in second person.)
(continued from wild monster)
useing your ultimate weapon you defeat crawfish.,
and crawfish turns back to normal he trys to say the ancient pirate language thing but before crawfish can finish saying it.,
super grape knocks crawfish out.,
“thanks sg that was close” you said.,
“but how did you sneek on bored?” said wild.,
“i have a pirate costume too got it from the store,i was wondering if you guys were okay,i’m glad your alright but whare’s sticky?” said super grape.,
“you mean you don’t know whare he is” said clean.,
“no but i’m sure he’s around hare somewhare i just hope he hasn’t run into you know who” said super grape.,
“well let’s look for him” you said.,
but before you go looking for sticky crawfish grabs super grape.,
“hey let me go you scurvy pirate” said super grape.,
“i’m not done with you yet” said captain crawfish.
(to be continued anyone can take it)
(continued from Super Grape) Suddenly,through the arena loudspeaker,Sticky shouts,”JJ! Come immediately. My navigator has found something which looks important!” “And ye won’t get there,’smiles Crawfish. You try and aim the weapon at him,but it instead hits Super,who is frozen. You gasp! Crawfish smiles. He raises his sword and murmurs something else. He turns into a giant lobster and little Crawfish come from him. They take the frozen Grapesicle and put her on a conveyor belt. “That goes right outside into the sinking seas!”,shouts Clean. “I’d better stop the conveyor belt and defeat Crawfish,then I’ll go to Sticky’s ship.” (To be Cont.)
(Continued from me) Then you breathe.
(Continued from Sticky) Clean finds the switch that stops the conveyor belt, but then Crawfish rushes over and breaks the switch. “Aha!” Clean says. He looks in his backpack and finds what he needed. “This will be the first time this will do some good!” Clean says. He then shrinks the conveyor belt with the Shrink Ray, and Super Grapesicile falls off and the ice breaks, then she flies over and knocks out Crawfish. “Hit it, JJ!” she says. You use the Ultimate Weapon on Crawfish and you freeze him. Clean Shark then grows the conveyor belt and then Frozen Crawfish sinks to the bottom of the sea. “Well, no more blogging for him!” Clean says, making everyone laugh. Suddenly, a mechanical cackle rises louder and louder. “Is that-” you say. “It is-” Sticky says. “BINARY BARD!!” Everyone shouts in fright. (To be continued)
(continued from Clean)
‘Ha! There you are,fools! Robots,apprehend them!’ Suddenly robots jump from nowhere and grab everyone except you. ‘Now give up or they die!’ ‘Never!’,you shout. “Well then-‘ He starts speaking in Binary,then everyone disappears . You look around. “This is bad.”,says Sticky.,”say,you might notice other loudspeakers across the place. Switch them on and I’ll give you some tips to break out of here,such as enemies you find,how to use your weapon,and so on.” “That sounds a lot like a video game.” “This IS a video game. Anyway,here’s you mission-break out of the arena and go deeper into the ship. I’ve heard El Mustachio is deep in the storage room. Find him there,but don’t ask why.”
(LOL. Referring to Poptropica itself. You are a clever one, Sticky, you fashonista!)
(Tell me about it! 😀 )
(continued from sticky)
you brake out of the arena.,
and go deeper into the ship.,
you reach the storage room.,
you find el mustachio.,
“what are you doing hare?” said el mustachio.,
“whare did he take tham?” you said.
“what are talking about?” said el mustachio.,
“the binary brad took my friends maybe you know whare he took theam” you said.,
“maybe i do and maybe i don’t” said el mustachio.
(to be continued anyone can take it)
(From super grape) “Hey! Stop daydreaming!”,you suddenly hear. “Oops,sorry,I’ll try to obey you this time.”
(Continued from Massive Hammer)
You forget that you’re still there and forget entirely that you’re in Poptropica. You are at home, and this is an action movie. You suddenly come back to reality and think out loud “Man! Either this a boss battle on a video game, or this actually IS an action movie, and I’m the hero!” Just then, the girl suddenly turns her attention to you. While fighting off the captain and the other villains, she speaks to you. “Hi, I’m Incredible Bubbles, I’m the master of all the islands except Island X. I’ve come to conquer this Island, but it’s proving more of a challenge than I thought it would. You see, I’ve sliced all the beginning islands like a weak cake, but since Spy Island, it’s been a bit complicated. Well, Big Nate and Nabooti were a piece of cake but then the REAL action started. So, I’ve completed all the islands except this. How many have you completed?” You are drooling. You begin to think out loud, but you stop yourself. You are in awe of her beauty and you think “OMG! I think I may be in love” Incredible Bubbles’ voice interrupts your thoughts. “Hey? Are you gonna answer me or what?” “Oh! Yeah, yeah!” You say, “Uhhh…. I’m a newcomer. But apparently I seem to be the chosen one. I got to see the real Monster Carnival Island….. My friend Clean Shark got knocked unconscious and I put on his Monster Carnival Medallion, and yeah. But, I don’t think I’ve completed any islands. This was basically the first island I went to.” “OK. Well, what’s ya name then kid?” Incredible Bubbles asks. “Jumpy Jumper.” You reply. “Feel free to give me a nickname.” You add. “OK then, Jumpist, call me Incredibles.”
(Clean Shark never obtained the Monster Carnival Medallion. Clean gave JJ his Ultimate Medallion, and JJ earned the Monster Carnival Medallion. But, if you just meant to say that ’cause JJ’s mind was blurry from Incredible’s beauty, then that makes sense. First time there has been a real love brewing in Poptropica!)
(Also,Massive Hammer’s post at the bottom was a glitch,I mean,just look at the dates!)
(continued from me) You go on and turn on the other loudspeaker. “Okay,here’s the basics. To attack enemies,break ice and push buttons next to you,press Spacebar. Try it on the button there!” You go and hit the button. Suddenly a set of stairs appear. “Okay,JJ,the stairs there will only last for a few seconds or minutes,climb them before times runs out,or you fall back down. In this case,it’s 1:00. Now hurry!” You climb the stairs before they fall. You see another loudspeaker. You turn it on. “Now be careful. There’s a pirate there. They can cause damage to you. To destroy them,hit them with your weapon twice.” You use it twice on the pirate and he disappears.
“And now,there’s a block of ice there which is blocking the gateway. To destroy it,press A to shoot fire at it!” You do what he says. “Great!” You exit the arena and get on the main chamber. A loudspeaker suddenly shouts,the storage room is that way. You’ll need to push those two buttons,the one on the floor,and the one in the air. To reach buttons or enemies or ice directly above you,push C and you’ll fire your weapon above or below you.” You do what he says and the doors open.You go inside.
You see a button right next to you. You push it.A bridge of stairs form,with 0:25 seconds to reach the end. “Argh! How will I cross this?!” “That’s easy.Press D and you’ll use your weapon to zoom in the opposite direction.” You do what he says. It’s actually quite fun. “Ah….who’s there?”,asks someone.
(2 b cont.)
(Cont. from me) You turn behind. “EL Mustachio! What are you-” “Argh,I’ve been kidnapped here by that no-good varmint Crawfish,along with some civilians who’ve been forced into cannons by a guy who painted part’o his face gray and has a red eye.Why,they’re right there!”
You turn around. It’s Clean and friends. “We need to get to Sticky’s ship. Please aim us there,JJ.”,says Comical Bird. “Oh,there you are,JJ.”,a familiar voice suddenly says,coming from the dark. “I’m glad you learnt the basics,but this is where it ends.” “Sticky? What do you mean,’it all ends’? Why did you lead me to El Mustachio?” “Oh,I’m glad you asked.Mustachio,get him!” “Wait,wha-” But then a potato hits you on the head. You fall unconscious.
When you wake up,you are tied up strongly,so you can’t escape. The ultimate weapon is on the floor. “Sticky Clown,what are you doing?!” As El Mustachio takes the weapon and throws it to Sticky,he says,”Oh,Sticky CLOWN? Oh,I’m sorry,I think you got the wrong person.”
He steps out of the dark for the first time. He looks like Sticky,but looks more mechanical and menacing looking ,and has scissors and a measuring tape for hands.In the measuring tape hand,he holds the weapon.Everyone shouts,”Sticky Robot!”
(continued from sticky)
“sticky robot?.,but how?.,i thought super destoryed Dr.hare’s remote” said clean.,
“i did at lest i think i did i guess it’s possible that binary bard rebulit him” said super grape.,
“silance” said sticky robot.,
“so wait you whare instructing me the whole time?” you said.,
“yes thats correct” said sticky robot.,
“but why?” you said.,
“i think i know he was leading you into a trap.,so he could get the ultimate weapon and now he’s goona use it on you” said super grape.,
“your friend is right” said sticky robot.,
“sticky help” you said
(to be continued anyone can take it)
(Continued from Super Grape) “Mwhahahahaha! None of your friends can help this time,JJ!” Suddenly,every Poptropica villain appears. “Give it to the master!” “Master? Ha,never!” He uses the weapon on them,and suddenly look younger….as if they looked like that before they turned bad. “More foes to the good side,ha!” Suddenly,Good Mordred runs into him! “Okay,JJ.”,says Super Grape,’let’s watch good take over evil. And we don’t have to move at all,ha!” Suddenly,Good Crawfish shoots them back to Sticky (Clown)’s ship. “Why,you-“says Sticky Robot. “That’s it,it’s time for my weapon to get a little-upgrade.”
(Wow. I came up with my idea before I saw your comment, so that’s why it says continued from Super Grape. 🙂 )
(Continued from Super Grape) “ATTACK!!” someone says, then Cyborg Shark comes and attacks Sticky Robot. “D-d-DESTROY STICKY ROBOT!!” he says, then using his mike and yelling at the top of his bionic lungs, and Sticky Robot, stunned, gets kicked in the back and explodes. “What the- Why did CYBORG Shark help us?” you say. “What’s family for?” then Fearless Shark, Clean’s sister, and Little Hopper come out with a remote control. “Hey, if you’re gonna be stuck on an abandoned Island and become evil, you gotta learn how to reprogram things.” Hopper says, referring to his life before you redeemed him. “But, where’s Sticky?” Clean asks. “I know where that varmint is, but that robo boy went and made that Sticky boy dis’pear. I could help ya though.” Mustachio said. “Well, I remember you as a no good bad guy.” Clean says, the only one who recalled battled him in Wild West. “Well, bein’ locked up with a midget, a gal with pink hair an’ a scar, and other weirdoes gets t’ yer head.” Mustachio said. (To be continued)
(continued from Clean) But,you went on his ship and-” “He wasn’t there either.” Suddenly,you hear a phone ringing. You go and pick it up. “Hello?” “JJ! It’s me! Sticky Clown! I’ve just called to tell you that I’m only busy in my costume shop in Time Tangled. Sorry I’m not here,but I just called you let you know. Bye!” You explain it to everyone else. Suddenly,Sticky Robot and Bionic Hopper appear from nowhere and start attacking Cyborg Shark. “What the-” “JJ,those are being reproduced by that spawner thing up there!”,shouts Super,pointing to a machine which reads,”E.Viletotron 1000-E.Vile Robot Producer”,and below it,=reads,’Warning,if hit too hard,it will go out with big boom.’ .”Yeah,we probably should do it from a distance.” Suddenly,the platform it’s on raises up. “We can’t hit it that high!”,you shout. “Well,then we’ve got a lot of robots to keep reprogramming.”,sighs Hopper.
(continued from sticky)
“you can’t but maybe i can” said super grape.,
super reachs for her jet back and puts it on.,
“jj hand the weapon to me” said super grape.,
you give super the weapon.,
“be careful” you said.,
super flys to the platform.,
“one hit outta do it” said super grape.,
then you see something fly behide super.,
“super watch out” you said.,
super looks to see binary bard.,
“hand that over grape” said binary bard.,
“never and you can’t make me” said super grape.
(to be continued anyone can take it)
(cont. from super) “Ha! You think,Super!” With his red eye,he zaps her. “Now-” He starts uttering in Binary,and the E.Vilototron now has a force shield. “Now,the only way to remove it’s force field is when you keep destroying it’s robots. Then platforms will appear,and you can use them,to permanently destroy it. But,if a robot is reproduced out of it,the platforms will disappear again.” He then disappears with the weapon. “Uh…what will we destroy him with now?”
(Continued from Sticky) “Hopper!” Clean shouts. “I’m kinda busy reprogramming these guys, Clean! What is it?” Hopper said while aiming at robots and blasting them with his reprogrammer remote. “Won’t it be easier if you have some, or should I say, A LOT, of mechanics?” Clean said. Suddenly, the wall burst open with every single resident of Steamworks Island, along with the Spies of Spy Island, the Pewter Moon aliens from Astro-Knights Island, and they all helped Hopper reprogram the robots. “Okay, we have enough robots reprogrammed. Now time for the big guns!” Clean says enthusiastically, then whistling into his mike, and then every good Poptropican came and then the Robot Spawner malfunctioned. Clean Shark hurled his microphone at the machine. Super Grape flew 1 nanosecond fast and then, you say, “One blast with my Ultimate Weapon and that will do it!” you then fired it, but when the machine was about to go boom, Binary Bard went and threw you into it. “Mwa, hah, hah, hah!” he cackles. Then the thing explodes and then you say, “I am so glad I don’t have ears…” Your body lands on the ground, and then Hopper says, “Hey, where’s his head?” “Ahem. You’re blocking my head from going with my body!” you say to Hopper, and then Binary Bard appears. You fire the Ultimate Weapon at him, and then there’s a big explosion. Once things clear up, Binary Bard’s robotic arm falls to the ground and electricity cycles through it and disappears. “Well, that’s the last of Binary Bastard.” Clean says. Suddenly, you hear another cackle, then you see a Spider Web shoot into the ceiling. “Oh, great. Here we go again…” Clean says. (To be continued)