In celebration of this Poptropica Help Blog recently reaching 8 million hits (thanks everyone!), we’re going to do something fun! In the comments section, ANYONE is welcome to join in as we weave an ongoing story, a Poptropica fan-fiction of sorts, told in second-person narrative. It begins here…
“Um, hello. I’m here to register for something called, uh, ‘Poptropica’?” Amidst the realm of blue vines in front of you, a crate, small and wooden, bounces out, shaking blue dust and spitting out a question of your gender. You stare incredulously before you finally manage to respond. “I’m a boy,” you tell the little box, and then it erupts a circle of numbers in individual bubbles as it asks you the next question. This is a very strange sign-up process, you think to yourself, as you decide to tell the box etched with a curious question mark that you are 9 years old.
“Your name is Jumpy Jumper. When you are ready, hop into the blimp and travel to any island.” You ponder the map for a while, but decide none of the islands suit you. “There’s got to be something better…” you mutter to yourself. Just then, you see it. Out of the corner of your eye, there’s another island, shrouded in mystery by layers of smog and unidentifiable smells. Island X.
“But no one’s ever been there before,” the voice warns, the voice of the box that had guided your creation earlier. “Jumpy Jumper, JJ, you can’t… how did that even get on the map anyway? It’s not safe… please no… JJ!!” But it’s too late. You’re gone.
What happens next? Will JJ survive the unknown dangers of the mysterious Island X? What is the island’s secret, its true name, the people, the villain(s), the setting? You and your fellow PHB readers get to decide what items he collects and uses, other places he visits, and the adventures that await…
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Where will these words take us? Continue the story in the comments!
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“WHAT?!” “We’re getting attacked.” Then Hopper,Fearless and Strange come and switch off Popular in his bat form,Bionic,turn you and Super good,and knocks E.Vile out.”JJ!”,shouts Strange. “I found something in my costume shop!” He holds out the ultimate weapon and shield.”They were near a mannequin with a Hawaiian shirt.”
Suddenly,the conch that Athena gave you vibrates. You take it and put it to your ear. “A CNC is on it’s way,beware.”
“What’s the CNC?”,Super asks. “Never mind that,now that E.Vile is defeated,we must try to solve the mystery of Island X!”,you say. “Okay,”,says Fearless,leaning on Popular.But she switches him on! He flies of in the air and shouts,”You won’t catch me,Jumper!”,and flies into the skies.”Well,that’s one obstacle.”,you mutter.
You jump in the blimp and go to Island X. Here you land near an abandoned mineshaft. “I remember this!”,gasps Hopper. “I never found out how it was abandoned. Look,there’s some mine carts!Guys,grab a helmet,a pickaxe and a cart for yourself,and try to find something important here.We’ll come back after finding something or finishing looking.”
So you grab a helmet,an iron pickaxe,and jump into the mine cart and steer deep down.
(continued from strange)
You ride in the cart looking around.
You and your friends had walkie talkies.
“Hey Hopper found anything?” You say.
“no not yet” Hopper said.
“How about you Super?” You say.
“No but I’ll keep looking” Super said.
“How about you fearless?” You say.
“Nothing yet” Fearless said.
So you continue looking.
Meanwhile
Super looked around.
Then she found a door!
There was strange hieroglyphics on the door.
“Hey JJ I think I found something” Super said.
“Yeah what?” You say.
“I found a door and it has strange hieroglyphics” Super said.
“Okay just stay where you are” You say.
(to be continued)
You take the mine cart in Super’s direction. You see that Hopper and Fearless are also there.You get up and see the hieroglyphics.They are symbols of the Chosen One. You press are few symbols (translation:gold) and the door opens.Inside,you see…gold?! You all take out your pickaxes and mine it. ”
With some luck,we’ll manage to trade this for something.”,Super says.”Why was everyone afraid of this place,anyway?”,you ask. Before anyone can ponder on this,you hear Friendly Turtle’s voice echo- “HELP,ANYONE!” “Friendly?”,gapes Hopper.”We’ve gotta find him!” You all go back to your mine carts and travel in the direction of his voice.
You finally reach a dungeon,with Friendly in it. “What happened to you?”,asks Super. “Well,get me out of this place and then I’ll tell you my story.It’s too risky. The keys are hidden somewhere here.Hurry,before he finds you!”
Red, Quiet, Shiny, and Justin suddenly appear. Poor Friendly hadn’t seen them before and let out a fearsome shriek before fainting. You cheer, “Justin! You’re just what we need!” “Huh?” asked Hopper. “Oh yeah, he’ll break through the wall!” Fearless grinned. “But that might hurt him!” wails Red. So you all try to think of another plan. But it’s hard, especially since Fearless is chanting, “Through the wall! Through the wall!” He’s trying to get everyone to say it, too. Suddenly, Red Ice smiles. She whispers something to him. He sniffs and sniffs and sniffs until he finds the keys! “Wait to go, Justin!” you cheer, but someone hollers, “WHAT ARE YOU DOING!!! I THOUGHT YOU WERE EVIL!!! WHAT ARE YOU DOING?!?!” Uh oh, you think.
(You don’t have to reply,you know.)
You look around and see him,the red raccoon. “What do you want?!”,you shout. “Oh,nothing,just wanted to inform that you’re now wanted,Jumper.” He holds out a wanted poster with you on it! “I’m calling the officials that you’re on the lost legendary island.They’ll be so surprised.” And he takes out a pickaxe. Suddenly,there is a cave-in!
RR runs from sight,and you black out.When you wake up,you see Super,Fearless and Hopper along with an unconscious Friendly. You take the keys,free him. Where are Red,Quiet,Justin and Shiny?,you wonder. Then you see the sad look on your friend’s faces,and realize,sadly,as you shed a tear,that they perished in the cave-in.
Now,now’s not the time,you think.I’ll remember them later,but duties come first.That was their motto.You wake Friendly up. “What happened?”,you ask. “Well…I was exploring here. There were so many ores. Suddenly,a shadow crept behind me-” “Knocked you out and took you to this dungeon.”,you complete. “Yes,that,”,says Friendly.
Then you hear…Police sirens?! “Come on out here,Jumper!We know you’re E.Vile’s son! We have your partner,Ratman,too! You’d better come out or it’s death for you.” You think of using the weapon to escape,but Fearless sees the look on your face.”No,JJ,you’re already too wanted,this will only make things worse.” So you go up to the Police.
You go to the police. “Hopper,eh?Ringmaster of the island? You’ll stay here since you’re vital to this place,so I’ll leave you off with a warning.”,the chief says when you reach a nearby police station at 24 Carrot.”And Super Grape-his sibling?She might be dangerous,but we’ll have a trial tomorrow which will judge that.”
“Fearless Shark,sister of Clean Shark,famous news reporter?My goodness,Fearless,I thought you knew better than that.Just don’t do that again.And the last one,Friendly Turtle-” “I was imprisoned in there by someone sir!I have a few marks to prove it!”,he shows a scarred hand. “Hmm…so you’re completely innocent.So you can go free,then.”
So you are sent to a jail in an abandoned island,while Super and Fearless are held back at Super Power,awaiting their trials.
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(continued from strange)
Super and Fearless were at the super power prison awaiting trail.
“This is all Popular’s fault!” Super said.
“I know that and you know that but the cops don’t know that” Fearless said.
“If only there was some way we cloud prove that my brother is innocent” Super said.
then Super remembered something and smacked herself.
“I can’t believe I forgot I got this” Super said.
Super get’s the island x book out.
“hey I got a plan” Super said.
“I’m listening” Fearless said.
“Okay so during my trial I will show the judge the book proving that my brother is innocent” Super said.
“Hey that cloud work” Fearless said.
“Never fear Super Grape is hare to save the day!” Super said.
(To be continued)
You go to trial. Super shows them the book.
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“Nope. How do we know that you didn’t type that yourself? We still don’t doubt that JJ is guilty. Super has shown evidence of continuously going to the evil lair, so she is guilty also. We give the death sentence,” the foreperson of the jury says.
“I go with what the jury says. I declare the defendants, Jumpy Jumper and Super Grape, guilty!” that judge says. She lowers her gavel. Just as it’s about to touch the pad, the door bursts open.
“You honor, wait!” someone says. there’s a lot of dust for some reason.
“Order in the court! What is the meaning of this!” the judge says.
“I have some proof that the defendants are not guilty!”
The dust clears and you see…..
(Helpful hint, usually when someone comes in last minute with evidence, the judge needs extra convincing to believe that you didn’t make this up. (I took a class about court in school last year. And I’m smart.
(Oops,sorry,I didn’t see yours. 😳 Since Clean is going to continue from you anyway,I’ll continue from you.)
(It’s fine. It was in moderation.)
So both Fearless and Super were freed because of the book,and Hopper was sent to give the news to your prison and free you.He jumped on his blimp and started flying over to the prison.”Hmmm….uh-oh,seems as if that storm over there’s heading right for me!”
(From Young) You see Slanted Fish! She takes out her laptop and types something in it,and shows it to the judge.He looks and sees.”So Strange Cat and Young Flame did this?” “Not on purpose,right,fellows?” “Right!”,you hear Strange and Young say. “so…I declare Super Grape,Fearless Shark AND Jumpy Jumper Innocent!”
A huge cheer erupts from the court. You go the blimp. “Well…”,Super says. “I guess we’ll continue solving the mystery of Island X.” When you reach Island X,you get down and get a fright. You see Clean Shark unconscious.And standing by him is….none other than Popular PEnguin himself,assisted by Sticky Robot and Bionic Hopper!
Popular smirks. “Well,hello,Jumper.” “What have you done to Clean?!” “That’s what I want to know,Jumper.What happened to Shark here?!” “You don’t know either?!” “Why else would I be here,anyway,Jumper?Ugh,you don’t know,eh?Well,then,Strange (Robot) ,Bionic,let’s leave.” And they disappear.
You try to wake Clean up.His heart is beating normally,but it seems like…he’s in some sort of trance…so you take him to Hopper’s cabin,and leave him there with Hopper and Fearless to take care of him,whiled you,Friendly and Super look around for anything interesting.
“I’m just disappointed that we haven’t found anything which could help us about the Red Raccoon,JJ.”,says Super. “Look!”,shouts Friendly.”Who’s that guy?!” To your surprise,it is none other than Shaky Bee,along with the poor boy from Super Villain. “Come with us.I think we have an interesting find to investigate,right,Jumper?”,he growls.So you follow them.
(continued from strange)
You fellow them to the circus tent.
The chest you found earlier was still there.
“Look a key” Super said.
Super picks the key up.
“Open it Grape!” Shaky said.
Super opens the chest.
Super takes a book out of the chest.
“Give it to me” Shaky said.
“No!” Super said.
“Why not?” Shaky said.
“It’s for me” Super said.
you look at the cover of the book it had words on it the words read:
Super Grape for your eyes only!
“Hey that’s my mom’s handwriting!” You say.
(to be continued)
Super is reading the book until dust from the book falls off and you all cough and sneeze. Suddenly, two figures emerge from the dust. Why, it’s none other than Red Ice and Justin! “Hi, Red.” you say. But she is shaking. She nervously tells you, ” Slanted Fish is-is- is gone!”
“Gone? What do you mean by gone?!?!?!” you shout.
“I don’t know. I just found this note. I can’t understand it. Something about she’s leaving and something about a big hero,” Red Ice says.
“A big hero? JJ’s a big hero,” Friendly says.
“N-N-No. Big Hero is my mom,” you say, dumbfounded by the second reference of her within five minutes.
“Read the book, Super,” you say.
“It’s her diary. I really don’t know why she didn’t want you to see it. I mean, we are twins. Oh! Found it.
‘June 24, 1998,
Dear Super Grape,
I’m sorry, but I had to do this. I faked the virus. I got my secret twin (I know. That’s done to death and boring, but I can’t think of anything else) to find and eat the virus. She played me and died. She did it willingly, but I feel terrible. I am surrounded in grief. I am off on a journey that might change Poptropica. Only one person knows, your aunt, Slanted Fish. I told her that if any of my children died, and/or my husband was defeated, to come try and find me. I hope she finds be. I hope she came for the second reason.
Your mother,
Big Hero’.”
“So, Mom might still be alive?” Super asks.
“June 24, 1998? That’s a few days after she died. Slanted Fish, my aunt. She must have not gone because she was in so much grief. When Little Jumper was defeated, she must’ve gotten the courage to face Mom. I’m going to help her,” a voice says.
You jump and see Young Flame.
“We are going to help, also!” two other voices say. You see Red Rock and Mighty Tornado appear.
“I’m gonna help!” you say and go over to where you siblings are standing.
“Me too!” Super says and joins you.
“I don’t want anyone else to come. This is a job for the siblings,” you say and put all you friends under oath that they won’t come unless called and that they will leave after they have helped.
You set off. Young, Red, and Mighty use their powers to turn themselves human and living, but only until they find your Mom.
“Because it isn’t right. I died fair and square,” Young Flame said while you set up camp. Now Super and Mighty are sleeping and you insist on staying up with Red and Young. Even though you are older than them in real life, they joined Poptropica before you, so you are 10 and they are 16. You feel tiny next to them.
“Young, about what you said earlier, it’s not right. You didn’t die fair and square. You were killed because Dad bewitched you,” you say.
“No, my sister is right. We have a secret to tell you,” Red Rock says.
“What is it?” you ask.
(To Be Cont. (What is the secret? How does it justify Young and Red’s deaths? What about Mighty? What justifies her death? (Please don’t make anything happen to the group, like someone dies again. And please keep everything how it is until after the secret is told. Thanks! Young Flame (BTW Does everyone have a copy of that island book?))))
“Quiet Shell and Shiny Wolf survived the cave-in,JJ,well,so did Red Ice and Justin,but they came on the surface,but-“,sobs Young.”-it was our fault they died.”,sniffs Red Rock. “How?!”,you ask.”You see…”
“they aren’t! They just ran out when the volcano erupted.” “What volcano? asked Young. “Let me tell you. Long story short.” you say. Volcano erupts, Justin alerts Red, she shrieks and everyone gets on Justin. They ride out just in time.” “Oh,” says Young. Suddenly, Red, Quiet, Shiny, and Justin arrive! You are so relieved, but Dr. Hare’s loud voice is shouting. So you listen…
(Continued from phineaslzzy)
“Ah at last I found you now you will be destroyed along with your sister!” Dr.hare said.
“Wait I thought you where dead!” Super said.
“Correction I was but the briny brad rebuilt me Now do you remember those Dr.hare ears I gave out?” Dr.hare said.
“Yeah those were funny looking hats” You say.
“Well they are really mind control helmets in disguise!” Dr.hare said.
You see that Red, Justin, Quiet and Shiny are wearing Dr.hare ears and they have green swirly eyes.
“Now prepare to meet your doom! Minions attack!” Dr.hare said.
(to be continued)
“Hey, what’s that?” you yell at Red, Justin, Quiet, and Shiny. Then you press the “off” button on each one. Red blinks. “I think, since we’ve been through so much, we’re invincible now,” she says with a wink.
(Continued from phineaslzzy)
“you guys go find your mom meanwhile well take care of rabbit men over hare” Red said.
So you continue to look for your mom.
Finally you find your mom.
She hugs You and Super.
“Mom why did you fake your own death?” Super said.
“Your father kept coming after me I had to fake it” Big said.
Then your phone rings.
“hello?” you say.
“JJ we need you to come right away it’s an emergency” Hopper said.
“Super cloud you go see what’s going on?” You say.
“Sure I guess” Super said.
Super leaves.
Meanwhile at Hopper’s cabin.
Hopper and fearless were being attacked by popular!.
Then Super comes in she was wearing the necklace.
“What’s going on?” Super said.
“Were under attack!” Hopper said.
“Ah Super where’s jj?” Popular said.
Super get’s her sword out.
“let’s go you and me right now!” Super said.
(to be continued)
Super dueled and udeld with Popular,until it seemed as if he was loosing. “Minions!”,he called out.Meanwhile,you were asking Big Hero a million questions about your past.
(continued from strange)
“Wow slow down your part is to defeat your father and save island X” Big said.
“But how?” You say.
“You will know when the time comes” Big said.
“Now I know about the necklace I have heard about it” Big said.
“So what’s special about it?” You say.
“It’s magic basically it will protect the wearer from getting hurt” Big said.
“Well that’s cool” you say.
“Yes but I’m afraid the wearer can use it’s magic to enslave people if they want to” Big said.
“That explains why every villain wants to get it and my sister has it!” you say.
“You better go help her” Big said.
“Okay but stay hare I’ll be right back” You say.
meanwhile at Hooper’s cabin.
suddenly Cyborg, strange robot and bionic come to Popular’s side.
“Great these guys again” Super said.
“Seize her!” Popular said.
they start going towards Super.
then You burst through the door.
“Hey metalheads leave her alone!” you shout.
(to be continued)
All of a sudden, Young appears. “Help,” she pants. “Why?” you ask. “Shiny was injured in battle,” she sighs. “Only you can save her.”
(continued from phineaslzzy)
“Alright Super I’ll be right back” You say.
You leave to go find shiny.
You find her and save her.
“Now I should go help Super” You say.
You go back to hopper’s cabin.
“Hey sis looks like you cloud use some help” You say.
You get your weapon out and blast the robots.
Popular turns into his bat from and fly’s away.
“Hey sis you alright?” You say.
“yeah I think so” Super said.
“Just stay hare I’ll be right back” You say.
“Okay” Super said.
You go back to your mom.
(to be continued)
“Yes,honey?”,she asks.”Well,mom,I want to ask you something.Why did you let your twin die?” She sniffs.”I tried to persuade her,but she refused.I wish you met Purple Hero.” “How touching,Big,”,a voice sniffs.You look back and see Slanted Fish.She hugs Big first,then you.Suddenly,Strange appears.”Clean is-“
“-sick,” Strange says. Then you remember Shiny is in danger, too. You groan. Mom asks, “What’s wrong?” So you tell her about the sick people. She nods. “I know. It sounds like your friends have the mysterious new disease from the new island, Virus Hunter Island. We must wait until it comes out. Don’t worry, your friends will last that long. Now, go on and continue your adventures.” She hands you a walkie-talkie. “When the island comes out, I’ll call you, and we’ll take a ride on your friend Red Ice’s dog, Justin, to get there.” “Thanks, mom. You’re the best,” You say, giving her a big hug. Then you leave.
Justin transports you to the Virus Hunter clinic. “I’m here to see Clean Shark and Shiny Wolf.”,you say to the receptionist. “Third Corridor to the Left,and 2nd Corridor to the Right,respectively.”,he says. You go to Clean’s chamber first. You see a woman with red hair operating on him.
She looks at you. “Jumpy Jumper,I have awaited you. Clean Shark has somehow been poisoned.Do you know who could have done it to him?” “Uh,no.”,you say,remembering that Popular and his minions didn’t know either. “Very well,then I shall work on making a cure,and until I succeed,my name is not Dr.Lange Drinknoodles!”
“Drinknoodles?!” “Yes,yes,I supposed you met Justin (aka Think) and all. He gives you his apologies for imprisoning you by mistake.Now you may go.” You go to Shiny Wolf’s chamber. Red Ice and Quiet Shell are looking at her worriedly.And then you see a remade good Cyborg analyzing her. “Miss,h-her condition i-is not g-good.”,he says to Red Ice.
“But she has to get cured!” “T-there is only o-one cure for this,miss,which is m-made of three ingredients-V-vampire Blood,w-which is extremely hard to obtain,obsidian dust,which is just as hard to find,and f-finally,a piece of measuring tape,w-which has already been g-given from Strange Cat,quite w-willingly.”
She looks at you worryingly. “JJ,can you please find the last 2 ingredients?We need it for her to survive.”
(continued from strange)
“okay” you say.
you go to shifty’s chamber next.
“Ah jj just so you know she’s doing fine” the doctor said.
You teleport back to island x.
You go to hopper’s cabin.
However you notice that it’s quiet too quiet.
You find Super tied up in a chair and a cloth covered her mouth.
“Mm mmmm mmm!” Super said.
You cloud she was trying to tell you something.
You move her cloth down.
“I’m sorry I didn’t catch that” You say.
“I said JJ look out! Super said.
then you get hit with something hard.
You fell into unconscious.
(to be continued)
When you wake up,you see Hopper untying you.”What happened?”,he asks. You tell him everything. “Gosh,now we have to look for Vampire’s blood and obsidian dust? Well,then,let’s look for the obsidian dust first.It’s going to be easier to get it,as it doesn’t involve vampires.”
So you try and look for it,asking doctors on the way. Finally a scientist has it. “I’ll give it for you if you could do me a favour.” “What?”,you ask.
(continued from strange)
“You get me the necklace you see my wife’s birthday is coming up and I thought a necklace would be the perfect gift deal?” the scientist said.
The scientist sticks his hand out.
You think for a minute.
“Deal” You say.
You shake hands.
You remembered that Super had it.
Speaking of which where is Super? You think.
Then you remember the last time you saw her you found her tied up!
Then Hopper shows up with something in his hand.
“JJ Super has been kidnapped!” Hopper said.
“How do you know?” You say.
“Because I found this note I think the kidnapper wrote it” Hopper said.
You look at the note it read: I have your sister if you ever want to see her again meet me at the docks -Popular.
(to be continued)
“Uh…I’ll give it to you tomorrow,okay?”,you tell the scientist. “Of course,of course! Take all the time you need till then!” So you take the blimp to Spy and land at the docks.Suddenly a B.A.D agent comes out! “I’ve been given orders to take you to Director D.”,he says. He sneaks to the east most of the island.
There you see Director D,with 2 B.A.D agents,one of them who is holding Super,and Popular. “Well,well,look who’s here.Jumpy Jumper.”,Popular smirks. “That’s enough,Popular.”,says Director D.”Anyway,you must have received Popular’s letter to see your sister again.Well,here she is.”
“Let me go,you goons!”,Super shouts.”So you saw her. That’s all.Now we’ll have to kill you.Goodbye,J-” “Boss!”,shouts a B.A.D agent. “There’s someone in the bushes!” Immediately,Shaky Bee jumps out of the blimp,along with Hopper! Director D snarls at his agents. “Let’s get out of here.”
He jumps into the water along with one of his agents and swims away.The other agent,however,is immediately captured by Shaky and Hopper,and Super punch Popular and knock him out.”Jumper,that was a foolish thing for you to do.”,Shaky growls.”Anyways,Hopper found a necklace nearby,and managed to sell it.””To whom?”
“A random scientist,who gave us some obsidian dust.We’re using it to get Shiny Wolf better right now.” He grunts. “Anyway,Hopper here and I are going to take these crooks to a special prison-The Pop Squad Prison,designed by Comical Bird.See you,Jumper.” And he,Hopper,the agent and Popular disappear.
“Well,I guess we should go now…” You say. Suddenly Justin appears. He seems to be especially nervous,pushing you somewhere. You follow him to a place you never, ever, ever, ever,ever,ever,ever,ever,ever,ever,ever,wanted to see again,also known as none other than…
The top of the Bald Avenue skyscraper. It makes you sky-sick. So you and Super teleport to Vampire’s Curse. There you look around and find a castle.You and Super enter it.The bats seem to be hissing at you for some reason. But you two ignore them.And you enter the bedroom of the vampire bedroom.
There you realize that you’re supposed to get Vampire’s blood. There are two tombs. One is labelled ‘Bathilda B Batfang’,whom you assume is the real vampire’s wife,and the other one,which contains the real vampire,’Bruce.B.Batfang’. “Oh my goodness,JJ,I just remembered! The Batfang family were well known for their-”
“Hospitality to bats?Yes,dear,completely true.” You look around and see that Bathilda Batfang has risen. “Actually,me and Bruce were brothers,but history messed that up.Now,why are you here? I’m not that thirsty for your blood,you know.” “Uh…Miss Batfang,actually,we’re here for…uh,your blood.”
She sighs.”Vampire’s blood has healing properties,true,but that doesn’t apply for us Vampire Countesses,you know.It’s Bruce you want.And mind you,he can be a little tough sometimes,so obtaining his blood is not that easy.Now,good night,dearies!” And she snaps her coffin shut.
So you knock on Bruce’s coffin. He immediately rises. “Who are you,and what do you want,mortals?”,he asks snappishly. You explain all about needing his blood. “My blood? I’m tired of giving that,idiots! True,maybe I’ve got a few bottles of them around the courtyard,but I DO NOT GIVE FREE SAMPLES!Now,get out before I drink your blood.”
(continued from strange)
“JJ I have an idea you distract him and I’ll get one of the bottles” Super whispered to you.
“Hey batty look what I can I do!” You say.
You get some balls and start to juggle.
Super goes into the courtyard.
Super gets one of the bottles.
“I got it!” Super said.
“Great now let’s get out of hare before he starts chasing us” You say.
You and Super teleport back to the clinic.
You go to the doctor.
“We got the vampire blood” You say.
“Great now I can make the cure I’ll be back” The doctor said.
(to be continued)
He enters a door.You wait for 10 minutes. Then he comes out. “The cure is ready!” And he walks over to Shiny’s chamber. “First I’ll give Shiny this,then I’ll work on Clean Shark and how to cure him.” After he enters her chamber Dr.Lange comes out of Clean’s.”I have virtually analyzed Clean Shark and it seems to be that there is only one cure.”
“What?” “You need to get…”
“…into his mind.His totem of goodness does not seem to be right. We have a sleeping machine from Erewhon Prison. Go into his mind,extract the totem and we will easily cure it.Then you will go back in and put it in it’s place.” “Uh…Dr.Lange?”,you ask. “What?” “What is his totem?” “Oh,that?”She waves her hand around as if that’s nothing. “It’s only a news mike.”
(Continued from strange)
“Wait how will he get out?” Super said.
Dr.lange gives you a button.
“When you find it press that button and it will teleport you out” Dr.lange said.
“JJ be careful I got a bad feeling about this” Super said.
You step into the machine and you get teleported into clean’s mind.
You start to look for the totem.
(To be continued)
But then you stop and observe the dream. There are huge floating statues of Clean,his family,friends,boss,colleagues and so on. Then you see the totem. It is in the hand of the biggest statue. Acid is pouring on it,which is the cause of Clean’s illness. You must somehow stop the acid from pouring and get the totem to Dr.Lange.
“OK,” you think, “what will ‘undo’ an acid?” Then you finally remember science class. A base will neutralize an acid. You scramble around in the dream world trying to find a base. Not finding anything, you look in your backpack. “Wow! There’s a bar of soap!” [Well, everybody needs to be hygienic, right? 😉 ] So, you toss the bar of soap into the acid stream, and then you hear a huge explosion, like a bunch of bubbles popping at once while there is an electricity spark at the same time.
When you wake up, you’re relieved to see that there is no acid stream, but you wonder why you’re above all the big statues. Then you realize it; you’re floating in a huge bubble! 😮
(Sorry to ask, but why is going on right now?! The comments are a bit jumbled and I have no patience whatsoever to read all comments! I managed to read a tiny part of the story from the beginning…)
(Basically JJ has gotten Clean Shark’s totem to safety. I need help with inspiration for my Story. The link is http://youngflamespopblog.wordpress.com/our-all-things-poptropica-staff/our-staff-stories/the-story-of-young-flame/ . And don’t forget to add onto the Ongoing Story on my blog! OK, I’m done now!)
(Actually,it’s more complicated than that. So,I’m afraid,Brave Sky,that you may have to read it from where you were. Every minor detail is important in this story. Sorry,but it was a little less complicated before…what I call…the Young Flame Ages.)
(Hey! I added a little sparkle. I got bored easily before I joined in. (I don’t mean to be rude, but it’s true.) And it’s not like I can write a bad story. It’s not in my blood! (OK, I’m done))
(I know,it’s just because,since you came,comments here are…overflowing.)
(Yeah, that’s true.)
(But I helped us get 800 comments!)
You walk up. You take something from your inventory. One of the balls. You put it in the acid hole and shut the acid from coming out. You grab the totem and take it to a case. it’s gold and rock solid. It says ‘Only the friend of Clean with the heart of true grit may open this case and see what’s in it.’
You open it, put the totem in it, and something rises. It’s your reward! You see a……
It’s an Oscar like thingy,with Clean on it. You press the button and get out of Clean’s mind. Something tells you that you may need to do similar things later,but you brush the thought away. You give the totem to Dr.Lange. “Good,”,she says. “This will only take a few minutes to cure.Then you will put it back where it was.”
So you follow her to another room. When she cures it,you take it and come back. Then you see something that makes you shriek. “Dr.Lange!Clean has gone from his sleeping chamber!” She,some doctors and Super immediately rushed in. “This is bad.”,one of the doctors say,shaking his head. “Why?”,Super asks.
“Because,”,another doctor answers,”without his totem of goodness-” “Clean is on anything-which-is-evil’s side.”,Dr.Lange completes. There is a long silence. “Well,”,you say,”I guess we got to find him,put him in the sleeping chamber,and put the totem of goodness in him,right?”,you say,unhappily. Everyone nods,even more unhappily.
(Continued from strange)
“I got an idea let’s split up and look for him” Super said.
You nod and give your friends walkie talkies.
Then you split up.
You look around.
“Hey JJ I found him but oh no!” Super said.
“What’s wrong?” You say.
“You might wanna come and see for yourself” Super said.
You go and find Super hiding in a bush.
“Get down!” Super said.
You get down.
You look and see that Clean is talking to E.vile.
“He kind of showed up out of nowhere and I had to hide” Super said.
“You want to join me? But I thought you were good” E.vile said.
“Not anymore I want to help you take over poptropica” Clean said.
“Come on let’s tell the others and then think of a plan” You say.
You try to get up without being noticed but you step on a branch.
E.vile sees you and Super.
“Get them!” E.vile said.
“Run!” You say.
You and Super start running.
(to be continued)
(800th Comment!) You run and run and run,but Clean is faster. Suddenly Super trips him and he falls. E.Vile stands enraged and disappears. “Look!One of Strange’s shops is there! We should take some rest there and take care of Clean,then we’ll bring him back to Lange,okay?” “Okay.”
(continued from strange)
So you and Super go in the shop with Clean who was struggling to get free.
“JJ you hare to buy something?” Strange said.
“No but you can you make sure Clean does not escape well were resting?” You say.
“Sure” Strange said.
So you fell asleep and have a dream you see what looks like a vision of the pest your mom was wearing a clock and she was putting her journal in the chest you found earlier and she was holding what looked like a crystal.
Then you see a vision of the present you see E.vile in his lair frustrated. Then Popular comes in. “Sir I have entrusting news” Popular said. “Yeah what?” E.vile said. “It appears your wife is alive” Popular said. E.vile was silent for a minute then an evil grin came on his face. “Find Big Hero and bring her to me” E.vile said. “Yes, Master” Popular said. Popular leaves.
Then you see a vision of the future You see that You and Super were in popular’s fortress. “I see you got my message” E.vile said. “Where’s mom?” You say. Then your mom comes next to E.vile she had an evil grin on her face. “Hello kids I just love being evil” Big said. Super gasps. “You brainwashed her!” Super said. “Yes and the same thing will happen to you!” E.vile said. E.vile pulls a switch and brainwashing helmets fell on you and Super. E.vile gets a remote out. “When I press this button you two will be under my total control!” E.vile said.
Then Super wakes you up. “Come on we need to get Clean to dr.Lange” Super said.
(to be continued)
(continued from myself)
So you and Super go back to Dr.lange.
You put Clean in his sleeping chamber.
You go in clean’s mind again and you put his goodness totem back.
Once you teleported out Clean got out of the chamber.
“Man what like happened? for 15 minutes I fleet so evil” Clean said.
“It’s a long story” You say.
You explain what happed to Clean.
“Oh by the way I had a dream you guys” You say.
You tell them about the dreams.
Super’s eyes widened.
Suddenly Popular flies in!
“What do you want Popular?” You say.
“Master E.vile wanted me to give you this message” Popular said.
Then a hologram of E.vile projected from Popular’s red eye.
“Ah son I just wanted to let you know that I have your mother if you ever want to see her again meet me at Popular’s fortress oh and bring your sister with you” E.vile hologram said.
Popular fly’s away.
“Come on we got to save mom” You say.
Meanwhile at Popular’s fortress……
Popular fly’s in.
“Did you give them the message?” E.vile said.
“Yes,Master they are on their way” Popular said.
“Excellent” E.vile said.
Big was chained to the wall.
“Honey how have you been?” E.vile said.
“Don’t call me honey!” Big said.
E.vile gets a brainwashing helmet.
“What are you doing? Get away from-” Big said.
E.vile puts the helmet on Big.
E.vile gets a microphone.
“Now listen Big you are evil, You love me and You love it when I call you honey” E.vile said.
“Honey how do you feel?” E.vile said.
“I feel ……Evil and I just love it when you call me honey and I love you” Big said.
“Yes it works!” E.vile said.
(to be continued)
(I love how JJ sees a vision of the future where they get hypnotized, but naively follows Popular to E. Vile’s base anyway…-_-)
You and Super go to E. Vile’s lair.
“I see you got my message” E.vile said.
“Where’s mom?” You say. Then your mom comes next to E.vile she had an evil grin on her face.
“Hello kids I just love being evil” Big said. Super gasps. “
You brainwashed her!” Super said. “
Yes and the same thing will happen to you!” E.vile said. E.vile pulls a switch and brainwashing helmets fell on you and Super. E.vile gets a remote out.
“When I press this button you two will be under my total control!” E.vile said.
“NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!” A voice shouts. Red Rock dives in front of Super’s laser and Young Flame jumps in front of yours.
“NO YOUNG FLAME!” you shout.
Your mom just looks at them in shock.
“Little! What have you done! You have turned innocent children evil. Even worse, those innocent children are mine! You should be ashamed of yourself!” she says.
“Master, what can we do?” Red Rock says.
“You may come with me. Now let’s go!” Big Hero says and stalks off with Young and Red following them.
(No offense,Young,but there are so many things wrong with this.One,JJ never asked Clean what he dreamed about.Two,Young Flame and Red Rock seem to be alive again,and three,you don’t specify who has turned good,who has been prevented from mind control,etc.)
(Uh,never mind no.3.But,the way Big talks,it seems that she is good,but you don’t say that she turns good.)
(They never turned back into spirits after everyone else took JJ and Super away from the quest. I thought JJ had the dream; that was confusing.)
“How did Popular escape?I thought he was at-” “We know him by now,JJ. He always can escape anything. But I think it’s a little too risky now,JJ. Remember what happened at the docks? You heard what Shaky said,JJ. I know our mother is in danger,JJ,but-” Super’s voice trails off. “How else are we going to rescue her,Super? We’ve got to go.And Clean-”
“Yes?” “You might want to tell about that dream of yours.”
“Well….you see,I had a dream that…E.Vile is trying to trick you to go to Popular’s fortress. You shouldn’t go there,JJ!” “But I have to,and nothing is going to stop me!”,you growl. You take the blimp to Popular’s fortress. Popular is in his human form,standing and grinning. “Come on in,kids.”,he says. He turns into a bat. You follow him to E.Vile.
“I see you got my message” E.Vile says. “Where’s mom?” You say. Then your mom comes next to E.Vile she has an evil grin on her face. “Hello kids I just love being evil” Big says. Super gasps. “You brainwashed her!” Super says. “Yes and the same thing will happen to you!” E.Vile says. E.Vile pulls a switch and brainwashing helmets fall on you and Super.
He gets a remote out.“When I press this button you’ll will be under my control!”E.Vile says.
(Typical JJ…)
(continued from strange)
E.vile presses the button.
You begin to feel dizzy.
“What is your command master?” You and Super say falling under his spell.
“Go fix my robots and get ready for the invasion” E.vile said.
“We hear and obey” You and Super say at the same time.
So You and Super fix his robots.
“Is there anything else we can do Master?” You say.
E.vile smiled evilly.
“Actually yes I want you to….”
(to be continued)
“Make a commotion among the tribes. I want you to start an argument among the tribes. While they waste their time fighting,I will take over and rule the world!” “Yes,father.”,you say. You go to the island near Poptropolis,where all the tribes usually are. You enter the nanobots room. “Strange?”,you ask.”Yes?What is it,my Jump bot?”,Strange says anxiously.
“You have had some arguments with Gentle Spinner,no?” “Yes,of course.” “Well,I heard that he called your tribe ‘Nano-boobs.’ now ,sir.” “WHAT?!” “And he also called Wildfire…” After you tell him all the ‘insults’ he called the tribes,Strange storms out to the meeting hall.” “What is it now,Strange?”,asks the leader of Seraphim,Tough Icicle.
“Oh,I’ll tell you what,Sam! It’s that Gentle Spinner!” “Me?”,asks Spinner. “What did I do?” “Oh,don’t act so innocent,you path-loser! I know you called our tribe ‘Nano boobs!” “Pathloser?! Nanoboobs?! Look,Cat,I don’t understand-” “Oh,you very well do,that too calling the other tribes-” “Other tribes?!”,shouts Tough. “What did he call Seraphim?!”
“I think he called it ‘Devils in Disguise’ tribe. He also calls Black Flags ‘Definite White Flags’,Flying Squids ‘Drowning Fools’,Yellowjackets ‘Bee-vomit Tribe’…” When he is done,there is a short silence. “We must all go against Spinner now,even though I agree with some of those names-” “Hey!”,shouts the Black Flags leader,Brave Tomato.
“Well,it’s true that you’re Pirate-” “Whatever,Nano boob,”,the Yellowjacket leader,Strange Clown coldly says. In no time,there is a huge fight in the room,some people throwing stuff at each other. “We’ll be at war now,you’ll see!”,shouts Clean Shark. “Tomorrow,at 7 AM,we meet and fight in our weapons and minions!”,shouts Fearless Pelican.
Only Slanted Fish doesn’t do anything. She stays there,staring at you as if she feels as if something is wrong. But you and Super run to the blimp and go to E.Vile’s lair. “Did you do it well,children?”,he asks. “Of course we did,”,you say.”Good,now,we must stay till war is between all Poptropicans. Blood will be shed. Then,when everything is in ruins,we come.”
(continued from strange)
Meanwhile at slanted fish’s house.
Slanted fish kept getting the feeling that something was wrong with you.
There was something about that look in his eyes Slanted fish thought.
I better check the ongoing story creation Slanted fish thought.
Slanted fish got on her laptop and checked the ongoing story.
Her eyes widened.
So that’s it! E.vile brainwashed him! This is not good! I got to stop this war before it’s too late! But how? Think fishy think! Slanted fish thought.
She thought and thought.
I got it! before they start fighting I’ll show them the story and explain what’s going on Slanted fish thought.
So the next day at 7am.
All of the tribes gather at the arena on island x.
“Your going down pathloser!” Strange said.
“Not if I take you down first nanoboob!” Gentle said.
“On the count of three we all charge ready?” Clean said.
All of the tribe leaders nod.
“Okay then one…” Clean said.
They get their weapons out.
“Two” Clean said.
They get ready to run.
“Thr..” Clean said.
But before Clean can say three Slanted fish runs in the arena with her laptop.
“Everyone stop what your doing and listen for a minute!” Slanted said.
“Now what?” Clean said.
“This better be good!” Strange said.
(To be continued)
SF showed the Ongoing Story Creation laptop to the leaders of the tribes. They look at each other, then the leader of the Pathfinders says, “Why do we believe you? You could have written this last night.
(SF rolls eyes.) Leaders of the tribes, say anything, and it will be written on the laptop without me typing a stroke.
“Fire!” “Water.” “Snow.” “Shadows.” “Think about noodles.” Random people shout the preceding words . As if by magic, those words appeared on the laptop screen.
“WOW!! :O ” everybody screams. “You ARE right! What was written was true. We must learn to settle our differences and unite to defeat E.vile once and for all. With all the tribes, you must be able to defeat him, right?!?
The strategy chosen was….
(Why does that sound like a reference to Club Penguin and Thinknnoodles…?)
“Yeah,I think all nanoboobs,pathlosers,-” “Hey!”,someone shouts.”Who said that?” “Us.” They look around and see you and Super. “Preparing for peace,tribes? We beg to differ.” And you put a mind-control helmet on Fishy and she turns evil. “Ha-ha-ha-all of you are losers. Strange Cat,your tribe is so lame that they play with batteries!”
“Deprived Children,”Gentle Spinner sighs. “And you,Seraphims,you aren’t Devils in Disguise -you’re (she says something that makes everyone gasp) in disguise.” “Oh yeah!”,shouts Strange Clown. “Don’t think of that,Fishy-boo!We have the power of BUTTER!” And in no time,Clean shouts”Three!” And all the tribes start to battle.
E.Vile looks down.”While these fools are preoccupied,I will rule the world,thanks to you children! I could give you half my kingdom for that!” You go back to Popular’s fortress.
(continued from strange)
You go up to E.vile.
“You have done well children well the tribes are fighting we will invade and take over and by the time the tribes realize what’s going on it will be too late! now go tell the robots it’s time to invade!” E.vile said.
“Yes, father” You say.
You go tell the robots.
The robots go out and start destroying things.
“Is there anything we can do master?” Super said.
“Yes destroy all of strange’s shops I despise that fashionista and his sense of fashion now go and do not fail me” E.vile said.
“Yes, father” You say.
(to be continued)
You go to one of Strange’s shops and see a folder named “Other shops of ours”,and you see these shops are almost everywhere except Popular’s fortress! You set fire to one of them,teleport to the next one,set fire to it again,and so on till the last shop. There,feeling a little naughty,you hit a mannequin.Suddenly,an alarm sounds on.
It seems to be reaching whole planets! Suddenly,Strange’s voice booms through the air,”Stranger,whomever you may be,you have burned down so many costume shops of mine and you have also applied salt on that wound by hitting my mannequin.Thus,you shall feel my wrath.Mannequins,attack!Let not the intruder get away.”
Suddenly,the mannequins move and before you can do anything,they hold you with invisible hands,and one dressed in a cowboy suit takes a rope from it’s belt and ties you up. “Now,intruding stranger,feel my wrath-fully.”,the fashionista’s voice booms. Suddenly,you are thrown into the air,and in no time….
…you exit Planet Poptropica’s gravity,with no oxygen,you are about to die,when you see one of your father’s spaceships!Evil joy fills you but leaves you with a lot of fear as you realize that the ship doesn’t belong to E.Vile or his minions,but none other than the oh-so-very feared spaceship of the infamous,good,hero known as….
(Guys….uh…hmm….how do I put it this way?Oh,yeah…right.I…uh…kinda…have….a crush on *voice falters*….hehehehe….Strange Robot.)
(…=_= Is SR a he…? How do you even crush on a robot???)
(he’s everything ive ever wanted 2 b!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1111 so kawaii desu~)
So you’d like to be a robot that doesn’t have much in the “CPU department,” has a roll of measuring tape and scissors for hands, and is detonated in one hit from JJ?
Stranger than Strange.
(CPU? You’re confusing robots with computers. Of course,robotics isn’t my strong suit..
Those ‘hands’ of his aren’t for hugging. They’re for strangling and cutting. That’s the point of him. To kill people.
Also he got one-shotted by JJ because he had the Ultimate Weapon ™ . That wasn’t even fair for him.)
Robots are basically computers that can do physical things.
So you find something made for mass destruction…highly attractive?
(Uh,yes. I live with Strange,so…
check ur privilege lel)
(continued from strange)
Bendy Hero!
Then a tractor beam comes from the ship and pulls you inside the ship.
You look around the spaceship was pretty big.
You are confused though why would Bendy Hero want to help you?
Then Bendy comes in.
“Ah Jumpy Jumper I’ve been looking forward to meeting you” Bendy said.
“How do you know my name?” You say.
Bendy laughs.
“I know a lot more then you think follow me and you’ll see what I mean” Bendy said.
You want to get out of there but you decide to wait until Bendy wasn’t looking to escape.
So you follow Bendy into a room.
(to be continued)
(Who’s Bendy Hero?)
(Never mind,I’ll pretend that he’s a hero that JJ heard about somewhere.I hope it isn’t Bendy Pear.)
You follow him to a room,where a teleporter is. You both come into it and teleport to E.Vile’s lair. Popular is there,along with Super. “Hello,Young Master,”,he says. “Uh…Popular?I thought that Bendy-” “Hero is his last name,Young Master.” “He’s my uncle?!He’s Big Hero’s brother?!” “Eldest,Young Master,Eldest.”
“Whatever.” “Anyway,he wanted your mother to marry your father in the first place.He was a traitor to your mother’s side,all in one.You see,he and your father,Young Master,were childhood friends.Anyway,he helped us get an engineer to help us build the robot,the founder of CNC!” You remember the voice from Athena’s conch shell-
“A CNC is on it’s way,beware.”
“What does it stand for,Popular?” “It stands for….strange,I can’t remember! Anyway,the thing is,he’s a multimillionaire right now,under the nickname of Joe Bucko,posing as a ‘Hero of Poptropica’-ha,he was a good villain if I ever saw one!” “That’s enough for my young little evil nephew to know,Penguin.”,’Joe Bucko’ says.
You suddenly realize that he is wearing a tuxedo,with a pocket gun in his belt. You seem to think of this. Bendy….hmm….the engineer he recommended must have been real secret,because Popular’s done a bad job of pretending not to know what it is. Suddenly,the wall breaks to reveal the tribe leaders,Hopper,and Shaky!
“So…let me get this straight”,Clean says.”JJ got brainwashes by E.Vile to start a fight among us to distract us so E.Vile could rule us all?” “Yes,”Fishy says. Suddenly she looks at ‘Bucko’ and gasps. “Bendy Hero! My cousins told me about you so much,and I didn’t even think of that!” Joe smiles. “I know,I know,cousin Fish.”
“Who was the engineer you -” “Oh,you’ll never find out,” He says. “the secret was kept by me-and will die with me.” He takes out his pistol,but the tribe leaders are faster. Gentle hold Bucko by the leg,,while Strange (Clown) jumps on him. He manages to shoot. It hits a chandelier right below where Hopper,Popular and Brave Tomato are wrestling.
Brave manages to get away,and Hopper wrestles Popular. Suddenly the chandelier falls down on them. There is a huge crash and a long silence. Then everyone runs towards it. Brave seems to be fine,only scraping minor injuries,Hopper gets a major scrape on an arm,and Popular is no where to be found.
Shaky removes the mind control helmets from you,making you good again,along with Super. Then you hear a hiss.You look and see Popular,holding his leg. “This is going to affect me in both forms.I can never be the same with this.” A few leaders hold him,but he manages to escape,but he hits the ceiling a couple of times.
Then you look on Bendy. His eyes are closed,and he isn’t moving.A piece of glass seems to be in his chest. “He’s dead!”,everyone shouts. “And the secret of the engineer who made the robots is gone with him.”Shaky says wistfully.
(continued from strange)
“Hey at lest were okay” You say.
“Yeah but E.vile still has our mom” Super said.
“Don’t worry well get her back somehow” you say.
“Well I say we all go back to island X and hang out at my shop” Strange said.
A memory hits you.
“Yeah uh about that don’t kill me when I tell you this but when I was under mind control E.vile kind of had me destroy your shops” You say.
“What!” Strange said.
“And he said he despised you and your sense of fashion” You say.
(to be continued)
“Does that mean you were the intruder?” “Uh,yes?” “Uh-huh.” He snaps his fingers,and visions appears of his shops turning back to normal. “There,that’s over with.Now,come back to my shop.” You teleport there. You see a map nearby,depicting places everywhere. “Look,there’s a temple there!” Hopper winces. “What’s wrong?”,Super asks.
“When I was ringmaster,I heard rumours of this place. There have been treasures there,and those who go in,never come back.” “I think you may need my strongest armour for this obstacle,JJ.”,Strange says. “Yeah,but I wonder,could there be some unknown secrets hidden there?And what’s more,Strange,how did-”
“We tribes got to get together again?Well,JJ,we knocked the mind control helmet out of Fishy during the war,and she stopped it.Now,do you want to buy my strongest one?It’s 500 Credits,really expensive.” You take out your wallet and pay for it. Good,it’s over th-“Strange’s voice falters.You look at a place where the armour used to be.It’s stolen!
(Continued from strange)
“What! It’s gone? Who cloud have taken it?” Strange said.
“Look there’s a note” You say.
You pick the note up it read: I stole I mean browed your suit for my evil plan meet me on 24 carrot island inside the carrot factory if you want it back -Dr.hare.
“This cloud be another trap but I really need that suit of armor so to 24 carrot island!” You say.
So you and your friends go to 24 carrot island.
Yell go inside inside the carrot factory.
“You’ve fallen right into my trap” Dr.hare said.
Dr.hare pulls a lever and a trap door opens under your friends they fell down it and the trap door closes.
“oh and I have teamed up with two villains that you might know” Dr.hare said.
Suddenly Director D and The Briny brad step out from the shadows.
“Alright enough talk get him!” Dr.hare said.
(To be continued)
“Now,first,the fashionista.I presume you have been waiting?” Strange nods. “Yes,Doctor,I have.” Then he unlocks the door and lets him come out. He sneaks something to Strange and lets him come back in. “What did I give you?” “JJ,I know you won’t believe this,but I have just got the Light and Shadow outfits!” He snaps his fingers.
“Copies are now available. Very expensive,though.” Then Dr.Hare clears his throat.”Jumpy Jumper,I am going to erase your memory.You know too much.You must even know that The Red Raccoon made these robots of E.Vile!” “He did?!” “Ugh,that was worthless.At least you don’t know his true identity.!No,come out!”
And he takes you out of the cage. He takes out his memory forgetting gun (MFG) and is about to shoot it at you,when Super pushes him into a wall!He goes unconscious. “Director,”The Binary Bard gulps,”I think we should get out of here.” And the other two villains jump into the sewer waters and swim away.
Then Hopper shouts,”They dropped the armour!”
(continued from strange)
You get the armor. You and your friends go back to island x. “Alright now let’s go to that temple” You say. So you and your friends go to the temple. “I wonder why no one has ever come out” You say. “Well there’s this rumor that I’ve heard about but I think it’s silly” Hopper said.
“Why what’s the rumor?” You say. “Well the rumor is that a mummy lives in the temple and that either he hypnotizes anyone who trespass’s and makes them his slaves or throws them in quicksand” Hopper said. “What a mummy? that’s ridiculous but then again I guess anything is possible” Strange said.
“Well there’s only one way to find out” You say. So you and your friends enter the temple. Then a few minutes later you notice that strange is missing. “Um guys where’s strange?” You say. Then you hear a scream. You follow the sound. “Oh my gosh!” Hopper said. Strange was shaking because a mummy was standing in front of him.
“I don’t believe it there really is a mummy!” Hopper said. “You are now my slave” The Mummy said. Strange becomes hypnotized. “Command, master?” Strange said. “Go portal the temple if you see any intruders throw them in quicksand” the Mummy said. “Yes, master” Strange said. Strange leaves. “Let’s follow him” You say.
So yell follow the mummy.
(To be continued)
So you take the armour and put it on. You go back to Island X and travel to the ancient temple. Vines cover it all over.The door to the temple is clogged by fallen boulders. “Hmm….”,Hopper notices. “I’ve heard legends of a secret tunnel to here.Thieves tried to raid it…but they never came back.” “Who did they worship here anyway?”
“The God of Monsters- Flankumas.There were legends telling that every monster is his descendant.He used them mostly for good deeds.Everyone who dared to raid his temple…” He stops talking. “So…uh…Hopper,”you say.”Where’s this secret tunnel?” I’ve heard that it was hidden deep in the jungle,westwards,I think,Jumpy.”
So you,Hopper and Super (Strange has his own work) go deep west into the jungle. Suddenly you see an unusual tree.It seems that you can jump onto it’s branches without falling.When you reach the top,you see strange hieroglyphics on some tiles on the floor.You are about to call Super and Hopper when the branches disappear!
Just like trapdoors,too.Well,you guess,I think I’m going to do this-on my own. You touch the tiles in a particular manner,spelling ‘Open’ in the Chosen One’s language,and the branch you are on disappears,and you fall deep into the secret tunnel.You start walking into the tunnel till you run into a door,guarded by a king cobra.
“Who…daresssss to come?”,it asks in the Chosen One’s language (Brikaltari,that’s the name of the language) “It is I…”,you reply in Brikaltari,”The Chosen One.” “Well….I have been waiting for you to come,Chosssssssen One,to Lord Flankumasssssss’ssssss temple…I am the guardian of this place…my name issssssss Iratlakirban….”
“What role do you have?” “I ussssssed to be the Lord’ssss Assssisssstant…I helped him with the creation of monssssters…and now,I guard his former temple.You will have to prove yoursssself to pass…not just speaking Brikaltari,you know…now…what you sssshall have to do to pass my tessssst,is to do what the Lord has done.” “What,exactly?” “You mussst….
Fire suddenly starts. “You musssst ssssurvive here in thisssss room for one minute. Either that,or you will die a nassssssty death,human.” And Iratlakirban disappears. The fire starts to spread.You jump on a place which is burning,and just before it starts,you jump onto another one.Finally,one minute is over and Iratlakirban reappears.”That wassss good enough,sssssince you sssurvived sssoooo long.Now you may enter the temple of my Lord Flankumas. Hisss loyal guardianssss and friendssss will guard their own gatesssss.Now proceed,young one.” So you go up the tunnel to the temple.A monster is guarding a door deeper into the temple. “Who are you?” In Brikaltari,it says,”I am Fluffy.I was his favourite pet.I guard the door into treasures.For that,enter the maze.You will have to find your way there on your own.Your armour may help there.And at the end of the maze,you will find…the final guardian.Now enter,human.”So you enter the maze.
(Continued from strange)
As You go through the maze you encounter many twits and turns.
Then before you reach the end you see words on the maze wall.
They read: The crystal guardians were hare.
What are crystal guardians? You think.
Then you run into the last guardian.
“Ah you made it no one has ever made it this far my name is flora I was his servant to pass you must answer a series of questions get them right and you may pass but if you answer incorrectly you will perish” Flora said.
“Okay ask away” You say.
(to be continued)
A mist of words appear in the air.
“Who is the guardian of the maze?” you read.
“Iratlakirban!” you say.
“Good.” Flora says. “Next question”
Another question appears.
Who is the Lord?
“Wow, this is easy. Flankumas.”
The last question appears.
Who are the crystal guardians?
“Ummm.. Uhh…” you start thinking.
“Think fast, or you will perish.” she says
You see that the gate which Flora is guarding is crystal.
“The guardians of the crystal gate..?” you say.
“You have amazing skills. You may pass.” Flora disappears and the gate opens.
You go in.
(to be continued)
The questions appear on the wall behind you. You answer them correctly, and Flora lets you pass. You enter.
“Oh no.” you mutter. You see a hypnotized Strange coming for you.
“Run!” you say to yourself. You keep running here and there, until you see some thing on Strange’s forehead. you wait for him to get close, and then you whip of the sticker and throw it in the quicksand.
You see a button.You press it and Strange gets unhypnotized. He blinks. “Wow,thanks,JJ.I was hypnotized by the mummy of Lord Flankumas’s bride!” “His bride?!” “Yes,quite.It’s a long story,but…” You don’t listen to him,instead you continue on.There you see the treasures.So many jewels.There’s a scroll in midair.Bad news:Lord Flankumas’s bride is guarding it.
Uh-oh,you think. “Er…Mrs.Flankumas’s bride?” “DO not call me that!” The mummy seems to talk in a rash series of hisses. “I am Edirba Samuknalph! I was the lord’s wife!He always neglected me so much!But now he looks up to me.He sends me to check for intruders.I found three others today.I hypnotized one.He found the others and threw them in quicksand.”
“Is…it…too…late?” “Oh,I don’t know,only the servant does. “Well,Miss Samuknalph,we’ve got a surprise!”,a familiar voice booms.You look around and see Super and Hopper! “Fortunately,your so called ‘servant’ came to his senses,”Hopper says.”And freed us.Then he teleported away.Now,whatcha gonna do?” Edirba snorts.
“You fools may have escaped the quicksand,but you will have to suffer the ultimate punishment-the gaze of Samuknalph..Look into my eyes.”You,Super and Hopper look away.”Or I’ll make you see me…”You know that the scroll is important,but the mummy must be defeated.You suddenly move the mummy thread thingies and pull it off.
Suddenly there is a huge glow.You see a beautiful woman for a second,then she disappears. “Was that-” “The Bride of Flankumas,”you say,”In her true and full glory.” So you take the treasure and put it in 3 sacks for each of you. Hopper takes out the scroll,opens it and gasps.”JJ,come here!” You come and see the scroll.It says…
“On August 25th,2013,A Friendship that has lasted for over ten years will finally be broken.Their tribes will fight against one other.The friend who was turned against everyone else by the other friend will win the war. There is a very good reason for why this has happened,for the friend has gone too far with trying to make the other one evil. ”
“What’s that supposed to mean?”,you ask. “I don’t know,”Hopper says,”But we’d better leave.” So you leave the temple and stop at Strange’s shop.Then you feel that everything is silent.Too silent.You feel an urge to go somewhere.Suddenly you all teleport to the Council of Tribes.Suddenly you see a calendar.
“Guys,”you say,”Today is August 25th,2013.” Hopper and Super gasp.Suddenly Fishy says,”The meeting of the Council may begin now.” Strange immediately stands up.You remember what happened with him and Clean recently….a friendship for over ten years…”I have something important to tell,everyone.”There is a long silence.
“As of today,August 25th,2013-a truce held for many years with Wildfire,will be broken.” There are loud sounds and gasps everywhere.Wildfires are looking nervous because they aren’t ready for war. “Clean Shark,”Fishy calls out calmly,”as you are the leader of Wildfire,what do you have to say?”
Clean looks more nervous than you have ever seen him before. “I want to say….why Strange,why?!” “Same reason with Hopper,long back when you re-met him on that island,thinking he was E.Vile.Because,”,he says coldly,which is unusual of Strange.
Suddenly you realize why he is so angry.What happened with him being so angry…
he first hadn’t been that angry long ago.He had a reason to be angry. “Because,”,Strange continues,”of you Clean.I was only a little insulted when you thought I could be killed off,but no,that’s always nice and unclean of you to put salt on the injuries.You tried to make me take a sword and kill you.
You turned Young Flame and Jumpy Jumper,both under my loyal command,against me.You made me an annoying nuisance.That too when I was back near the villains’ lair,thinking about what you suggested about Strange Cat,the last good suggestion you ever gave.” “But,Strange-”
“No buts!You’ve made my oh-so-evil self,and now I’m going to use it-not with the villains of course,never would I do that-but against you!” “But I thought we apologized!” “Oh,yes,that’s a very interesting thing,too,to notice.We seemed to apologized as if we had no other choice.But if we actually apologize,let’s hope it’ll be dramatic!”
There is a long silence. “So,we will begin war soon.Goodbye forever Clean.” You feel as if you don’t know how to support.Sure,Strange was a big fat idiot…but still,some of the things he said were true.He had been given an evil self,and that was because of Clean.But you stop thinking of it,as your brain hurts too much.So you leave.
(To Be Continued.Oh,and by the way,Clean,no real hard feelings! (Okay,maybe just a little :p) And ,everybody,if you think that this part is stupid and I’m some sort of jerk or something,please feel free to tell me so!I always accept honest criticism,you know.And…uh…I guess that’s goodbye!Wow,that’s one long part,huh?)
(I like it. It gives the story a little bit of a twist. I mean, there are lots of friend feuds, but this one is different. Unlike all the E.Viles and battles and villains rising and stuff)
(Thanks! 😀 Frankly,I wasn’t expecting such a good review so early.)
(Good grief… You took the drama out of the comments and into the story. Why did you have to go that far?
I’m starting to think you’ve become a little salty, Strange/Sticky/Miner.)
(This was a year ago. Deal with it.)
You suddenly teleport to the Nanobot common room.Strange’s voice can be heard through a loudspeaker. “All nanobots must stay here till war arrives,as we don’t want anyone to get hurt by Wildfires!Everyone,please move to your own room.Nanobotical newbies will report to me for training against Wildfire!” So you and a few newbies go to Strange.
“Ah,newbies.”,he says.He teleports you to a nanobot training area.He trains all of you. He checks on all of you.You seemed to be very good at this,being the third best at this. “Very good,JJ,”Strange says. “You may now go to your room and have some rest.”You teleport to your room.You take a nearby book and start reading.It is about the tribe’s history.
Meanwhile…deep in E.Vile’s lair…
(continued from strange)
E.vile was trying to think of a new evil plan then a plan came into his mind.
E.vile gets a clock on.
E.vile go’s to the nanobot common room.
Meanwhile your still relaxing.
Then a few minutes later Super runs into your room.
“Super what are you doing hare?” You say.
” someone in a clock wanted me to give you this note” Super said.
You take the note.
It read: Meet me at super power and come there alone-Anonymous.
(to be continued)
You go to Super Power Island and see Little.
“Ah, son. I’m glad to see you’ve finally come to your DOOM!” your dad says. Then he looks behind you. “I told you to come alone!”
“I did!” you say and turn to look. You see Super and Big Hero. Together you defeat E. Vile. The Curious Sign-Up Box comes down from the heavens.
“Thank-you, JJ, Super, and Big Hero, for defeating the biggest nuisance in Poptropica. He will not stay dead forever, but for now, he is gone. In return, I grant you each one wish,” it says.
You think of Young Flame, your first girlfriend-who-turned-out-to-be-your-step-sister.
“I wish Young Flame came back alive,” you say.
“I wish Red Rock would come back alive,” Super says.
“I wish Mighty Tornado would come back alive,” says Big Hero.
“Very well,” the Box says and disappears in a puff of smoke. When the smoke dissipates, Young, Red, and Mighty are in it’s place.
“Young! Red! Mighty!” all three of you say in unison.
“Mom! JJ! Super!” they say in unison of you! You all run to each other and hug it out.
(I was tired of being dead. BTW, why am I the only one who stayed dead?!?!?!?!)
(Continued from Young) Meanwhile, the leader of Black Flags starts a count down to the battle between Clean and Strange. “Three! Two! O-” he says. “WAIT!!!” Clean shouts. “Nanobots was my second choice, Sticky.” Strange gasps. He thought the Wildfire didn’t have any real connection to Nanobots,plus Strange was reminded of his true self, Sticky Clown. “I’m sorry, Sticky, I didn’t mean for it to go this far. I was just wanting to add some juice to the story. I didn’t mean for a full out battle. I didn’t mean for an antagonistic relationship between us. I’m sorry, I truly am. Truce?” Clean said. Strange, er, Sticky thought for a minute. You thought Strange should call it a truce. It wasn’t really meant for a bad reputation for Strange, just to add some flavor to the story. Strange makes his decision. (To be Continued)
(Hooray for Sticky Clown! Finally,I’m back in the spotlight.But I didn’t like all that ‘true self,Sticky Clown’ part that much.Me and Strange found it too mushy and untrue.And here are a few words from Strange:
Meh,it’s okay,since the apology was dramatic enough.Pity the antagonistic relationship didn’t last that long.Drama,people,drama!And,next time,do tell us when you’re adding your so-called ‘juice’ (more like spinach milkshakes -_- ) to the story.
That’s all he has to say.And I completely agree with you saying that Strange is a weirdo.Wait,what’s that?Oh,Strange also has another silly message of his for you.What was that message of yours,Strange?Oh,right-
Am not (a weirdo)!
*sigh*
Sticky Clown,the original,out!)
“Truce. Sort of. Let’s have a friendly battle. You know, just for fun. No hard feelings. We each get three other representatives from our tribes. We start from Early Poptropica Island and work our way to Virus Hunter Island (Let’s just pretend that it’s out). Winner gets, um, 2,000 credits and one costume from my shop. Deal?” he says and reaches his oddly circular hand out.
“Deal,” says Clean, shaking Strange’s hand with his oddly circular hand.
Each team gets ready. You are on Pathfinders, so you are merely a spectator.
“ON YOU MARKS! GET SET! GO!!!” You say and the blimps are off.
(BTW Nameless is DESPERATE for segemts and views on her news report for Poptropica. The link is http://poptropicanewsroom.wordpress.com/2013/08/25/poptropica-news-10-episode-1/ . I am Dr. Flame 😀 )
(Isn’t JJ a nanobot?)
(I meant Strange to say it.
(Continued from Young Flame) Clean and Strange pump the air in their blimps super fast, and Clean and Strange are matched up with each other. They zoom past Time Tangled Island, and they’re already at Great Pumpkin Island. Clean edges forward barely, and Strange’s blimp suddenly stops. Clean notices, and immediately turns around. Strange heard a rumbling sound coming from his blimp, and then he hears a terrible sound. POP! Strange screams and cries for help, and when it looks like he’ll wind up as an ancient relic for Poptropolis, Clean reaches out his hand, leaning forward, and grabs Strange’s hand. Clean seems to be having trouble. Then you realize what’s going on. Clean still has the virus. You realize that he’s been looking rather pale lately, and he’s had a serious case of the sniffles, including a few sneezes. Luckily, you were told to follow Strange and Clean in case something happened, and then you took action. But then, something really bad happened… (To be Continued)
Just before you reach Clean and Strange, something rises from the waters. It’s your dad! He pulls Clean and Strange into the water. You see them struggling to keep their heads above water, but it’s hard. You try to go down and save them, but your blimp won’t move. Then it happens.
(guys we should turn this into the dream island contest. we could help JJ through the island and beat the villains.
(You can. I have the winning idea so…… 😉 )
( I am entering a different and it is the winning idea) (ok…)
(perhaps you will beat me. but I have a huge chance at wining. oh it is so hard not to tell anybody I love it the poptropica creators at least have to let me in the top ten.
(i guess it would be an honor to be top ten.)
The Red Raccoon (The very engineer of E.Vile’s robots,guys!) jumps out from nowhere,snatches Clean,and throws Strange on the shore. “I don’t need the fashionista,but Shark here is important.” And he jumps off and runs away,along with E.Vile.
(Continued from Sticky Cat) You stand there in shock, but then you realize the good thing about Clean still having the virus, the Red Raccoon has been contaminated. “ACHOO!” Clean sneezes. “Ugh, why are you sneezing so mu- Uh oh….” Red Raccoon says. “What’s wrong?” E. Vile asks. “HE HAS THE VIRUS!!! RUN FOR YOUR LIFE!!” RR screams. He accidentally hit E. Vile, contaminating him. “AGHHH!!” E. Vile screams. (To be Continued)
(continued from clean)
“You achoo! fool now look what you’ve done!” E.vile said.
“Hey maybe we can get JJ to help us” Red raccoon said.
“Wait that’s Achoo! a good idea” E.vile said.
“It Achoo! is?” Red raccoon said.
“Yes it Achoo! is” E.vile said.
E.vile comes up to you.
“Hello son Achoo!” E.vile said.
E.vile touches you.
“Oh no now I have the virus!” You say.
“Yes you will help us find the cure or Achoo! else!” E.vile said.
Then a Red Forcefield surrounds E.Vile and his mysterious engineer,and they are cured.It is still forcing out the virus that Clean gives to them and they teleport away. You see this hidden in a bush.
(From Super) You go to Virus Hunter Island and steal the cure.You bring it back to E.Vile.He cures himself and Red Raccoon. Then Popular comes and holds you,although he still has that injury in his leg. “Wait-achoo!-what about curing-ACHOO!-me?”,you ask. “Oh,that.In a minute.” He mind controls you again and cures you.
“Now,son,me and my engineer will be at my lair.Popular will also come.And-” You suddenly have protective masks and Strange’s armour around you-“Kill Clean Shark.”
E.Vile,Red Raccoon and Popular disappear.You take out your weapon and point it at Clean.10…9….8…7…6…5…4…3…2…1…(TO BE CONTINUED!)
(Umm, if you’re a writer, then you could enter an original Poptropica story in a Writer’s Contest HERE: http://poptropicanawesomeness.wordpress.com/2013/07/24/writers-contest/ …. The winners get their stories featured on PAw or HOP forever, and 1st place gets to be an Editor.
~~Nameless)
(continued from strange)
“Noooo!” Super said.
Super jumps in front of clean and the weapon hits her.
Super falls to the ground.
Strange comes in and takes your mind controlling helmet off.
“What’s going on?” You say.
You see that Super is on the ground.
Clean stood in shock.
“She saved my life!” Clean said.
“Super? no! what have I done!” You say.
Strange goes over to super and checks her pulse.
“She’s not dead just wounded” Strange said.
“Come on we need to get her to the hospital” You say.
(to be continued)
Red runs up and looks at Super.
“She’s going to be fine. She’s just in shock. She needs to go to a peaceful place and rest,” she said.
You take Super to an old hideout.
“This is Red Lizard’s hut. She helped us when we were first starting out. We left to run from our biggest enemy. That force, Icy Comet, that we were fighting before we died the second time, you know, when I first came to psychotic Clowney. That was her. We need to be careful. We still ran into her afterward. I don’t know where Young Flame is and Mighty Tornado has joined Mew’s Reporters. It seems that death aged her. She’s only 10, but she acts our age. Anyway, we ran away in the middle of the night, so expect Red Lizard to be sore to me,” Red explained. Even though you see a dim light inside, the place looks run down and abanoned.
“Ler’s do this,” Red says and you walk inside.
(Psycho,me?That was Bionic Hopper in disguise!)
Suddenly,Strange says,”That was my old hut!Me,Bendy,and my wife,Red lived there!We were poor at the time.” “What?!Oh,yeah,Red Lizard’s your wife.” “And as far as I know,she’s still lives at my Time Tangled residence.Which reminds me.Clean,I thought you were in a race with me?” And he zooms off and comes with a pumped blimp,then descends into the air.Clean gasps.He takes his blimp and also starts flying.
(Sticky is back!!)
(Did ya miss me?Strange certainly didn’t.)
(I did. At first, I really DID think it was a hacker. Well played, Strange Cat,Meanie.)
(Strange says thanks.)
(Lol)
(ongoing story time lets find out what happens to jj)
(Continued from strange)
You watch as Strange and Clean race.
They were neck and neck.
At first it looked like Clean was going to win.
However you are so busy watching the race that you don’t notice that E.vile was dragging Super away.
Anyway then Strange took the lead.
It was going to be close.
And of course Strange wins.
“Ha! I beat you” Strange said.
Strange starts doing a victory dance.
“Alright you beat me you don’t have to rub it in” Clean said.
“That was a good race” You say.
meanwhile at Popular’s fortress.
“Red raccoon I have a brilliant plan” E.vile said.
He puts Super on a table and straps her down.
“Were going to turn her into a cyborg that will obey my every command!” E.vile said.
“That is brilliant poptropica will be in ruins!” Red raccoon said.
“Exactly!” E.vile said.
So Red raccoon gets to work on turning Super into an evil cyborg.
They took Super into a room where there was one other girl. Her clothes were torn and her hair was wild. It was dark, so Super couldn’t quite see her face. She looked thin and hungry.
“Dad captured you too, huh?” she asked, but Super still couldn’t place that voice. Then the girl walked out. It was Young Flame. Her cheeks were hollow and her lips were cracked. It looked like she had just enough to survive. No more and no less.
“He took me almost right after I came back alive. He is torturing me. I did something in the past. Something he didn’t really like and he wants me to fess up. I sent Mighty to Mews because I knew he would protect her. I just hope Red will stay safe,” Young said with a sad, far-away look in her eyes.
“Protecting? Why would she need protecting?” Super asked.
“Dad wants them all. We all played a part in this. I recorded it all in my diary, but I hid it. Dad wants me to tell him where it is. As far as I know, he’ll torture me until he kills me. I;ll do whatever it takes to protect my sisters, though. After Mom withdrew herself from the world and faked her death, I was the main caretaker of the family. I vowed I would do anything to protect them. Pay any cost. Even if that cost was death,” Young said and retreated into the shadows. The girls waited for hours when something happened. Two men came in to get Young. They brought Super along to show her what happened when someone disobeyed E. Vile. They strapped Young in a chair and shot her with volts of electricity. She screamed in pain, but you could tell she was trying. They did many other terrible things, too terrible to describe here.
“Wait!” Super said.
Young Flame looked over as to say ‘What are you doing?’.
“What can I do so that you will leave them alone? All of them. Mighty, Red, Young, and JJ. What can I do?” she asked.
(continued from young)
“Nothing continue torturing her” E.vile said.
“No! please I’ll do anything!” Super said.
“Anything?” E.vile said.
“Anything just let them go!” Super said.
“Okay tell you what you get the weapon and give it to me I’ll let young go” E.vile said.
“What never!” Super said.
“Fine then I guess you can watch your sister get hurt” E.vile said.
“No! I’ll do it” Super said.
“Perfect!” E.vile said.
So Super goes off to find you.
(to be continued)
“First,you will need this.”,E.Vile says,and puts a mind control helmet on Super.”Now get him and the weapon,Super!” “Yes,father.” Super goes to find you.Meanwhile,you notice that Super is missing.You see some footprints.You follow them,leaving the weapon behind.Then you see a paper on the ground.You take it.It says,
“To defeat the villain of Island X thou must drop this note and hold thy hands behind your back.Then close thy eyes.A friend will lead you to the place.
-S.”
You have no idea what this is all about,but do it anyway.But when you fold your hands and close your eyes,you feel as if a rope suddenly has appeared in your hands,tying you.Then a handkerchief seems to cover your mouth,gagging you.You suddenly realize that you’ve been trapped by a fake note!And you left the weapon back on the shore!
Then,Super’s voice says,”Come with me,brother,to our father’s fortress.”You realize that you’ve been set up!You open your eyes and start to run,but Super fires the weapon at you,giving you a black eye and a broken tooth.She ties up your legs and carries you to Popular’s fortress.You feel a little embarrassed.
You are at the fortress. You see Young Flame being led to a cell. She is all beaten, battered, and bloody.
“Super. Lead JJ to Young Flame’s cell,” you say in your best imitation of Little’s voice.
Super leads you to her cell and slams the door shut.
“Young, what happened to you!” you yelp.
She explains what happened and you realize that Super was willing to die to save her sister’s life. You look around and see an intercom.
“Super Grape, please report to Cell 29C and bring the prisoners to the Torture Chamber,” you say in your best E. Vile impression again. You hope your dad will be curious and see what is going on. Super comes and leads you to the chamber and sure enough, E. Vile is there!!!
“Dad. I want to know. Are you torturing my siblings to get to me? Because my life has been one big loop. Monsters, villains, and you. The exact same thing. Keep me here alone and do whatever you want to me. I just ask of one thing. Leave Poptropica, Minecraft, Club Penguin, Wizard 101, and every other game you are thinking of alone. Including Mom, Young, Super, and everyone else,” you say and look in his eyes.
The mind control seemed to have lost all power over Super as her eyes widened.
“JJ! What are you doing!!!!!” your sisters say in unison. They both realize that’s what Super did, but different.
“Very well. Guards, take the girls away. Lock JJ in Cell 105T. The lockdown cell,” E. Vile says. You are taken down to the cell.
Suddenly Red Raccoon comes and whispers something to E.Vile. “Tell, you what,I’m going to let you go,JJ,and continue what I am doing.Everyone shall kneel before me or die.I don’t need you anyway.Guards,throw him out!” And you get thrown out.You barely have anything with you,you’re injured,and you can’t call for help.You also can’t teleport.
(Continued from strange)
Meanwhile in the fortress.
“You tricked me!” Super said.
E.vile puts Super under mind control again.
Super gives the weapon to E.vile.
“With this I will take over poptropica!” E.vile said.
meanwhile you are recused by a fortune teller.
“You must be JJ” The fortune teller says.
“How do you know who I am?” You say.
“I’m a fortune teller I know all” The fortune teller says.
“Oh well in that case can you tell me what will happen in the future?” You say.
(To be continued)
So you go to the Fortune Teller’s place.She takes out a crystal ball and looks into it. “I see…horrible things.A minor villain is there.He is tired of being minor.So he does many bad things and puts blame on others. There is a commotion between certain tribes. And…and…AHH!” She suddenly faints!
You wake her up.”I can see no more,child.”,she says.So you leave to the Tribe Council. There you see a few leaders looking worried.It seems that Nanobots is not involved this time.”Order to the Council.”,Fishy says. “Let the argument between Black Flags and Flying Squids begin.You realize why she is so worried.Her tribe is in danger!
But since you aren’t in it ,you only continue sitting.
(continued from strange)
You wonder what the fortune teller saw before she fainted.
“Order” Fishy said.
“What is this even about?” Clean said.
“Ask slanted fish she started it!” Strange said.
“What? what did I do?” Fishy said.
“Oh don’t act so innocent you left a note in our room telling us that flying squids stink!” One of the members say.
“I did no such thing!” Fishy said.
Strange gets out a note.
It read: Flying squids stink! -S.
“That S can only stand for one person and that’s you!” Strange said.
“That’s not even my handwriting!” Fishy said.
“Enough talk let’s fight!” Clean said.
They start fighting.
You notice that there’s a person in a clock in the coner
“Oh she didn’t write it I did” The clocked figure said.
Everyone stops.
“Who are you?” Clean said.
The figure removes their clock to reveal Super!
Everyone gasps!
Super cackles.
Super gets out a knock out gas bomb.
“Sweet dreams!” Super said.
Super throws the bomb on the ground and knock out gas fills the room.
You black out.
(to be continued)
(Continued from myself)
You wake up to see that everyone is gone!
You look around to see if you can find any clues as to where Super cloud have taken them.
Meanwhile at popular’s fortress.
Super comes up to E.vile with Clean and the other tribe leaders tied up.
E.vile smiles evilly.
“Lock them up!” E.vile said,
“Yes, father” Super said.
Super locks Clean and the other tribe leaders in a cell.
“Super, why?” Clean said.
Super go’s back to E.vile.
“Good now I have an important assignment for you” E.vile said.
E.vile gives her a knife.
“Find jumper and kill him!” E.vile said.
“Yes, father” Super said.
(To be continued)
You walk out and walk to a tree. Suddenly you see a person with a knife running at you. It’s Super! You get an idea. You wait there, waiting for the right moment to grab the knife.
Super runs and is about to kill you, but you smack her hand and grab the knife. You start running. She hits you, and you fall onto the ground, letting the knife out of your hand.She picks it up, and is about to put it in your neck. You close your eyes, hoping someone helps you. A moment later, you open your eyes. Super isn’t there. The knife is on the ground. You get up. “what?” you think to yourself.
You look around.Suddenly you realize that you are in an island in the sky! You wonder what happened.The knife suddenly disappears.Then a few things appear on the island:an apple tree a small pond,a ram (a male sheep with horns (I guess you could call it a bighorn sheep with wool)) and a crate.You look around.
The ram seems to be peacefully grazing,the tree is swaying to the wind,and the pond stays still But you can’t open the crate.but you’re sure that you have to open it. You will somehow have to use everything on the island to open the crate.You wonder how to do it.
(And remember,you must use EVERYTHING on the island,and must explain in detail how JJ opens the crate.)
You see that the crate’s upside down. You use the water from the pond to magically grow the tree and the roots loosen the crate. You still can’t flip it. You use an apple from the tree and use it to make the ram butt the crate to it falls on it’s side. You feed it the apple and open the crate. you gasp at what’s inside.
(You have to tell what’s inside.)
It’s a letter.You read it.
JJ,
Poppus Tropicana the Box here.I saved you from Super for a reason.Conditions are too harsh back on Poptropica,and no one can reach you here. The tribe leaders are captured,and all of them are important people.E.Vile has officially taken over.
You must survive on your own here.This is all I can send you.For 10 Years,you should survive on this sky island until the time is ripe.I know you are impatient,but trust me,when you come back after ten years,you will see what I mean.
The ram on this island is important.When you need it most,it will come to you with a special upgrade.It’s fleece will be golden.It can heavily headbutt people with a disorienting stun,and can regenerate itself.It’s name is zlato,by the way.
Take care,and survive.
Poppus Tropicana.
P.S.You might want to see the crate a little bit more.
(*Zlato)