PHB Specials

A PHB Special: the Ongoing Story Creation

8mil ongoing story creation
In celebration of this Poptropica Help Blog recently reaching 8 million hits (thanks everyone!), we’re going to do something fun! In the comments section, ANYONE is welcome to join in as we weave an ongoing story, a Poptropica fan-fiction of sorts, told in second-person narrative. It begins here…

“Um, hello. I’m here to register for something called, uh, ‘Poptropica’?” Amidst the realm of blue vines in front of you, a crate, small and wooden, bounces out, shaking blue dust and spitting out a question of your gender. You stare incredulously before you finally manage to respond. “I’m a boy,” you tell the little box, and then it erupts a circle of numbers in individual bubbles as it asks you the next question. This is a very strange sign-up process, you think to yourself, as you decide to tell the box etched with a curious question mark that you are 9 years old.

“Your name is Jumpy Jumper. When you are ready, hop into the blimp and travel to any island.” You ponder the map for a while, but decide none of the islands suit you. “There’s got to be something better…” you mutter to yourself. Just then, you see it. Out of the corner of your eye, there’s another island, shrouded in mystery by layers of smog and unidentifiable smells. Island X.

“But no one’s ever been there before,” the voice warns, the voice of the box that had guided your creation earlier. “Jumpy Jumper, JJ, you can’t… how did that even get on the map anyway? It’s not safe… please no… JJ!!” But it’s too late. You’re gone.

What happens next? Will JJ survive the unknown dangers of the mysterious Island X? What is the island’s secret, its true name, the people, the villain(s), the setting? You and your fellow PHB readers get to decide what items he collects and uses, other places he visits, and the adventures that await…

RULES: Make sure it follows what others have written before you, makes sense, and if you wish to add a comment that is not part of the story itself, use parentheses, for example: (I think we should…) Your comment can be as long or short as you like and you are definitely welcome to contribute as many times as you like. Be creative!

Where will these words take us? Continue the story in the comments!

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  1. Sticky Robot whips his measuring tape at you,Bionic punches you,Cyborg sings loudly,and RJ stamps on you. While being tortured,you see Strange,Red and Bendy staring at you with cold,empty dark eyes. After the robots leave and throw you in the dungeons,you tell your friends about your dreams.Clean seems amazed from the first one.

    “Think knew me? And I didn’t?Wow.The other dreams aren’t too important now. Both of those will not be useful. How’ll we escape now? E.Vile has the weapon and shield.” “And let’s not forget he has everyone else under his command. Pity too,I’m missing the PHB 9 million hits and 5th Birthday Party.”,says Super.

    Sticky Robot enter. “The master wishes to see you-ow!” Clean steps on Sticky’s foot,and Super manages to break from her chains. She frees everyone and is about to get Sticky when he says,”I have a challenge for you Jumper. You duel me,and I’ll let you out. Nobody helps.” He laughs maniacally as you accept the request and enter your second boss battle.

  2. You suddenly remember you possess no more the weapon, as Sticky Robot (let’s call him SR for now) fires his scissor missiles. You dodge them and pull his measuring tape hand. It seems infinitely extendable as you pull it, and you have a fabulous idea. You run around him about 10 times with his measuring tape, and you end up tying him up! You see a hook above and tie his hand to it, trapping him. Your friends cheer as you leave the dungeons, hearing the grumbling noises of the Robot in a very Sticky situation.

  3. Robot guards see you. They start to chase you.You run to a nearby blimp and climb on to it and escape. “Oh my gosh! JJ,this island is Super Power!”,says Clean. “So?”,asks Hopper. “We can go to the PHB HQ!” So you sail a little to the east,and there you see the HQ. It seems to be in shatters. It’s windows are breaking,it’s bloggers are fleeing,and so on.

    You jump off the blimp and quickly run in. The long hallway seems to be crumbling by every step. The receptionist’s desk is empty,so you run to Slanted Fish’s office. But the door is fully covered in junk,which you cannot make your way through. And yet you know that she has to be the only one not a slave to E.Vile.What will you do?

  4. Your friends try to push the junk away,and yet it’s worthless. Suddenly,Big Bubbles says”JJ! You’ve gotta see who’s this!” You run off in the other side and up the stairs,and there is Silver Wolf’s hydra,Pluto,right underneath Slanted Fish’s office! “I saw a trapdoor there,JJ,but Pluto’s sleeping on it,and he’ll take hours to get him to wake up!”

    “We don’t want to hurt him either.Silver,what does your hydra like to eat?” “Any type of meat,and green grapes.” “The dining hall is that way!” You run to the dining hall. “The meat must be in the kitchen quarters.”,says Clean Shadow.

    But when you try to enter it,a digital sign and a keyboard come,saying,’Password?’ “Only the staff know this!”,says Hopper.You think to yourself. What could be the password? There are a lot of choices,but it will disappear after you guess the third time. What will you type?

  5. “Uh…meatball?” WRONG!,the sign says. “How about…uh…cookie?” WRONG! “Ugh….this is my last guess….Fishy.” CORRECT! KITCHEN QUARTERS OPENED! You enter the KQ. “JJ!There isn’t a piece of meat here!” “But there’s a green grape there!”,shouts Big,pointing to the top of the highest shelf.

    “We can’t reach that! I lost my jet-pack!”You rummage for something in your inventory.You feel something in your pocket. It’s the super sticky glue! You see small pieces of wood. You stick them together to form a mini ladder,and use it to reach the third highest shelf. From there you go to the second highest shelf.

    But there’s not enough space to stand on the highest shelf.So you jump and try to grab the grape.You only manage to shake the shelf. “Forget it,I’m leaving- ” “Jumpy! The grape is about to fall down-and it does-right on Comical Bird’s hair.

    To avoid laughs,Silver plucks it off Comical’s head and goes outside. A minute later she comes back. “Pluto’s heads are quarreling over the grape.” So you go into the trapdoor. You fall into Fishy’s office.It’s completely abandoned,but there are signs of a struggle. “Look! There’s a paper here,and it’s seems to have our names!You look into it.It says,

    “Dear Jumpy Jumper,Clean Shark,Little Hopper,Super Grape,Big Bubbles,the Pop Squad and everyone else,

    Please help us! After our party E.Vile tried to capture us! Most of us escaped,including ,me. The Sign-up Box,Poppus Tropicana (weird name,you think) asked me to tell you this.Thinknoodles knows something about the necklace and why every villain is trying to find it. And there’s something else about the PHB HQ I want to tell you. There is-”

    It ends there.

  6. (continued from strange)
    “there is what?” you say.
    “guys I need to tell you something” super said.
    “yeah what?” Clean said.
    super looks around to make sure no one else is with yell.
    “I have the necklace I found it when we were running from the robot guards one of them must have dropped it” Super said.
    “you do?” you say.
    “yes look let’s find this thinknoddles person and ask him about it” super said.
    (to be continued)

  7. “He lives in Poptropica towers,Super. There are robot guards all over. And to finish it up,Thinknoodles is a famous YouTuber! He wouldn’t just let us in,would he?” “Well,we’d better get to him somehow without attracting attention,JJ. That’s our easiest mission so far.”

  8. And thus,you leave through the trap-door.You sneak through the back entrance,and snatch a blimp,and fly off to Poptropica Towers. “Beep-boop-” “Popular?!” Indeed,it is the traitorous cousin of the mind-controlled Strange,in his robotic bat form. “Must-set-fire-to-blimp-” And he shoots a laser from his robotic eye,setting the blimp on fire! “You-will-not-escape-E.Vile-anywhere-” And he flies off.

    “Help,JJ,Help! I can’t swim!”,shouts Super suddenly,who is hanging on to the blimp’s rope.But,something incredible (in a bad way ) happens.Someone jumps out from the water,grabs Super’s necklace,and jumps back in. What’s even more,the person was Lieutenant Lobster! Suddenly,a tornado approaches! This scheme of E.Vile’s is unpredictable!What will you do now?!

    1. (from Strange Cat) “Who could have made a tornado? Who controls the weather?” you ask yourself. But then the answer flashes into your brain like a lightning bolt: Zeus. To defeat him, you know you must call on Athena.

      “Oh, Athena, please come to me. At least give me an olive!” Suddenly one drops from the sky. You hold it close to your heart and you hear a whisper.

      Go to the shore. That way. There’s safety. The whisper ends.

      You see no shore, but you go and you actually find a very small island. You somehow evade the tornado. When you wake up in the morning, you see a Golden Lab. Wait! Is that Kopi? The dog starts swimming and you decide to follow it to…

  9. To the back of Poptropica Towers! It enters there.You follow it inside.When you enter,it disappears.”Maybe Think is on the apartment owners board there.”,suggests Clean. “Look!’,Super shouts.”There’s a mysterious SC on room 3 here!” “That must be Strange!We’d better UN-hypnotize him!” You run to apartment 3,and ring the bell.

    When the door opens,it’s not Strange,but Think himself! “Hi.You want autographs?” “Uh….” Clean stutters. Everyone’s jaw is wide open. “Are you SC…?” “Oh,that,yeah.I’m Speedy Catfish,that’s my real name. Well,come in! Kopi here seems to know you,and my wife is away on Virus Hunter Island,and Graser is hiding from E.Vile somewhere else.”

    You enter. Think gives all of you autographs and serves you noodles.You hear Approaching Nirvana in the background,and pictures of Poptropica,Minecraft,and Club Penguin everywhere. “So,Think….do you know me?” asks Clean. “Yeah.Aren’t you the friend of that Skater Kid?” “Sneaky?Yeah,but-”

    “I love that dude! He delivers my papers and he does it in such a cool,stylish way,man,isn’t he good!”Clean’s jaw is wide open. “You’re lucky to have an exceptional friend,dude!” Think goes to the kitchen. Clean doesn’t talk at all till Think comes back. “Er…Think….what about the necklace?” Think’s smile turns into a frown. “Sorry,pal,I forgot. Ever since yesterday-”

    “You weren’t knocked out or anything?” “Nope,that’s surprising. It’s almost as if my memory was stolen or something.Anyway bye guys,I’ll see you guys soon,thanks for visiting,and of course,Noodle On!” You leave his apartment.

  10. (continued from strange)
    “I don’t believe it we came all this way for nothing” Clean said.
    Super was thinking about her necklace then she remembered something.
    “Thats it!” Super said.
    “what’s it?” you say.
    “i know whats special about the necklace i just remembered that earlier when i was fighting popular and rj a forcefeld appeared around me but i had no idea where it came from but now i know” super said.
    “what do you mean super?” Clean said.
    “the necklace it must be mag-” but before super can finish popular grabs her and runs off with her.
    “after him!” you say.
    (to be continued)

  11. You try to swim,but there are robot piranhas in the water. “There he is!” You look around and see robot guards. Suddenly they all explode. “JJ!” Shouts a familiar feminine voice. “Slanted Fish?!How did the robots explode?” She holds a gun. “Bought it from Fashionista Island.Since Strange is mind-controlled,the good co-owners,Spotted Dragon and Slippery Icicle let me buy it. Now,you might be wondering what happened to me.You see-“

  12. “The robot guards managed to find me when I was writing my note to you.But I *accidentally* make a whole junk avalanche and escaped through the trapdoor.Then I took a blimp and hide here for many days till I saw you.Then I made some good use of my gun.”

    “How…very…interesting…the master must be informed.”,comes a dark cold voice.“Strange?!” “Well,I’m glad I have the weapon now that the master lent it to me,but,never mind,you’re dead now,Jumper.” “Uh….Strange…?”asks Fishy,trying to make a distraction.”Do you…er…have any…gold?”

    He giggles.And then he bursts into laughter.”Of…of course I don’t,Fishy!He he he!Stop it! And even if I did,I wouldn’t-”Fishy takes the weapon and unhypnotizes Strange.”Uh…where am I?Oh,hi JJ,nice day,isn’t it?” Suddenly his phone rings.”Another client?!Oh,-” And he disappears. Fishy passes the weapon to you.”You’ll need it,JJ.” And she vanishes too.Suddenly….

    (What will happen?! To be continued)

  13. (continued from strange)
    sunddenly robtic jumper comes out of nowhere!
    “well jj looks like your about to meet your end” rj said.
    “where is she?” you say.
    “where’s who?” rj said.
    “you know super grape a few minutes ago your winged bat friend took her” you said.
    “oh yes super grape let’s just say E.vile has plans for her but enough talk let’s fight!” rj said.
    (to be continued)

  14. (Continued from Super) Suddenly, RJ turns 50 feet tall, and he releases a bunch of mini RJ’s. You know that this is a boss fight. A real one, for that matter. You remember RJ’s weakness, that he can only take so many blows. He starts trying to crush you with his fists, and you find those are his weaknesses. If the fists are destroyed, then he will malfunction and be destroyed. You shoot the Ultimate Weapon at his fists, and eventually, one fist is destroyed, and he slightly malfunctions, punching himself in the face with the other fist, and he starts trying to crush you again. Eventually, you destroy it, and he falls into the water, an he explodes. So do the mini RJs he released. Suddenly, Strange and Fishy come back, and you and everyone else go to confront E. Vile. (To be Continued)

  15. (Continued from Strange) The magistrate from Ghost Story Island! “What are you doing here?” you ask. “Yeah, shouldn’t you be at Ghost Story Island?” Clean said. “Haven’t you heard? It is in ruins! E. Vile has destroyed it, the old house, the Bakery, the Hotel, and the common room! All of the residents have gone into hiding! Also, I found this in the sea when I was traveling here. You may need it. He puts the hood back on, and runs off. “It’s the necklace!” Super says. “We should hide it, there are guards EVERYWHERE. Strange replied. You make it to the Log Cabin side of Early Poptropica, and you see E. Vile, the REAL one. Not Hopper, not Zeus, not Red or Young, not Zack, “We have met a lot of E. Viles” you think to yourself. You and your friends draw their swords, and E. Vile draws his, and calls his army of Bully Bots, and you know that this is ANOTHER boss fight. (To be Continued)

    1. (um but my charater got kidnapped by one of e.vile’s minons if you go up a few times you will see that)

  16. Young Flame.
    “JJ, I need to talk to you,” she whispers urgently.
    Everyone starts to follow you but Young says she needs to talk to you alone .
    “JJ, do you notice that all the villains you destroy are coming back to life?!?!”
    “Yeah, but-”
    “I found out why. It-”
    “Wait. Aren’t spirits supposed to know everything?”
    “No. Anyway, there is a machine that my master created. Not one of them can die until he is destroyed. You have to find and destroy him and the machine. Then, you have to save Monster Carnival Island. Hurry. You don’t have much time.”
    ‘What do you mean, I don’t have much time?”
    She opens her mouth to respond, but then someone runs up chanting. She turns solid.
    “JJ! Help! If I die, I disappear forever! Help!” she shouts.
    Then a cloaked figure runs up. He grabs her in a choke hold (It’s possible. Cover their mouth. Poptropicans have to breathe too!). Her eyes fill with terror. Her expression says Run! Save yourself.
    “No, JJ. Stay and watch her die. Her master has finally caught up to her. And she will pay for betraying me.”
    You try to run but your feet are glued to the ground.

    1. (from Strange Cat)

      You find that it isn’t the typical 8-bit Poptropican who called you in, but it is Athena from Mythology Island. You are so glad to get a wise person on your side now. “Can you please tell us what’s happening next?” you ask as nicely as you can.
      “You would not be prepared to hear what will happen to you. However, I have the utmost confidence that you will be able to do it.” She then gives you a conch shell. “Use this to ask me anything, and I’ll tell you what I know is best.” Athena then disappears behind a door.
      You walk out the same door and end up not at Early Poptropica but at…

  17. (Continued from Young) When you wake up. You aren’t in a cage anymore, but you are in Game Show Island! But it isn’t what you remember. It’s flooded with Bully Bots, and you see Clean hopping into a Sewer hole. On the Jumbotron you see Strange, Super, and Sneaky being tortured, and you see three bodies lying beside them, and they are Big Bubbles, Clean Lightning, and QUICK TORNADO! You look at her body in horror. You just collapse and sob, because Quick, Red and Young’s younger sister, who you promised to protect, is dead. Red Rock’s spirit comes down. “Don’t cry, Jumpy, it was out of your control, just know that she is still alive in spirit.” she says, and she ascends back into the sky. You decide to go and find Clean without being caught, and you see something in your backpack, the toy robot from Night Watch Island. You throw it, and it grabs the attention of the Bully Bots. You jump into the sewer hole and you go all the way down until you see Clean, the Inventor, and Holmes sitting there, talking about how to stop E. Vile. “Jumpy! You’re alive! Come here, we have a lot to discuss.” Clean says. (To be Continued)

  18. You voice is shaky and your eyes puffy from crying.
    “No. Mighty is dead, Red is dead, Young is dead, their mom is dead, and I had a dream that Quick Flame is dead. All the family is dead, well no one knows where their dad is. I can’t go on. Another family might die out. I came to tell you that I’m quitting. I’m not the chosen one. Remember the prophecy?
    ‘One must choose the path of the Chosen One
    Two must be cursed and pay the Ultimate Price
    Three will go on a special quest
    Four will not live to see the end.
    Five will work together in the end, and one will join.
    Six will pay the price if that one dies.’
    Mighty was the one. She died along with two others. They are torturing the other three to death. Everyone is dying because of me. I’m going to RJ to surrender. He will take my life, and I accept that. Good-bye, Clean Shark. It’s time to join the family of Young Flame,” you say and go to Memory Foam island.
    “I wish RJ was here!” you say and he appears.
    “Ah, JJ. Are you ready to surrender?” he says.
    “Yes. Yes I am.”
    “Good. Great!” RJ says and you see that he is a little surprised. You kneel and he raises a sword. He swings the sword down…..

  19. (Continued from Young) And it does nothing! “Huh?” you ask yourself. Then, you ask, “WAIT, didn’t I defeat you in that boss fight?” you ask. RJ bursts out laughing. “Hah! You thought that I would go down that easy? That wasn’t even me! That was Bionic Hopper, disguised as me to fool you! I’d never be the FIRST boss, if anything, I’d be a final boss!” He says. Suddenly, he blows up. “Guess who?” someone said. “Little Hopper! What are you doing here?” you ask. “Saving your life, that’s what!” he said. Suddenly, Clean ran over to you. “You ARE the Chosen One! The Mystical Box knows it, I know it, EVERYONE knows it!” Clean said. “NO! I’m not the Chosen One! Everything is going wrong! I’m quitting this disaster! Everything is going wrong! My friends are being tortured, they’re passing, I’m a curse on Poptropica!” you say. “Fine. Poptropica is doomed, and remember, you didn’t even try to set things right. You were our only hope. Me and Hopper are going to try and save Poptropica ourselves. Come on, Little. We’re leaving.” Clean said. They walked away, with Hopper looking back and shaking his head slowly. (To be Continued)

  20. (continued from young)
    “Noooo!” Super said.
    super charges at rj and he turns off.
    “Super your alive? but how?” you say.
    “well strange somehow was able to distract the robot that was hurting me and I grabbed the necklace and ran” super said.
    “you always save me why?” you say.
    “jj there’s something I’ve been keeping something from you I should have told you before but I was afraid” super said.
    “okay what?” you say.
    super shows you her arm on it there was a strange marking and you know what the mark was!
    (to be continued)

  21. It’s something you say on Young Flame. It was a time that you didn’t record in the Ongoing Story. You open the book and see that the person who is writing is Young Flame. You look up and see her face in the clouds. A lump forms in your throat. You look and see that your big giving up speech was recorded by her, but only after you remember saying it. She knows. you think. You wish Super would leave and not come back. You write a note explaining the mark and telling her what to do.
    ‘Dear Super,
    I’m doing what I know is right. Somone else has to die unless I die instead. I choose to do it. The mark in a matching birthmark that Young, Red, and Mighty share. The mark identifies their long lost sister. That girl has the power to rise the dead. She can do anything, but break the wishes on an island in the idea stage. You are that girl. Do what you want with that power, but please don’t bring me back to life. I’m going to join your sisters and mothers. Good-bye, Super Grape.
    -JJ

    You wish the note to JJ. You turn RJ on and have him raise his sword again. He strikes you and you die. You go up to the Heavens. You see Young Flame and the look on her face. She looks….

  22. (continued from young)
    she looks sad.
    “young are you alright?” you say.
    “yes just disappointed and happy at the same time” young said.

    meanwhile on poptropica super starts crying.
    “your next grape” rj said.
    super gets the weapon.
    “frist of all my name is super grape and you just messed with the wrong girl” super said.
    super shoots rj with the weapon and he explodes.
    then clean comes in.
    “what’s wrong?” clean said.
    super points to your dead body.
    super reads your letter.
    “Young flame is my sister?” super said.
    super faints.
    (to be continued)

  23. “Why are you so disappointed?” “I remembered…four will not live to see the end! JJ,I died,Red died,and Mighty died,but Big Bubbles,Quick Lightning (not Clean Lightning,Clean,can’t you remember your friend’s names?),Strange and Sneaky are still alive,JJ,and only YOU have the power to choose who will be the last person to die!”

    “I-I do?” “Yes,but only if you’re alive.” Suddenly you vanish.You start to open your eyes.You see Clean,Hopper,and a reviving Super. “OH,JJ,I’m so sorry,but someone has to go through the Chosen One’s path,right?” “Uh…yeah.Now,we’d have to choose something!
    ”You go back to Main Street.

    Before the Charge bots can attack,you shout,”Stop! I’ll choose who’ll die here!” And they all stop and willingly let you go on. You come to Strange first. You think that his handheld items will be useful as weapons,and he could give you info about Popular,so you remove his gagging kerchief .

    “Strange-” “BOTTLE UP THE BABBLING AND UNTIE ME BEFORE I GO BONKERS!” You immediately untie him,and he snatches a remote,and presses the buttons. “Those idiots were giving me a slideshow of the other tribes beating us up and putting on improper costumes!Why,one of those were-” You go on to the others,not bothering to listen.

  24. Back in the heavens….

    “Why are you disappointed?” you ask.
    “Well, I thought you would keep on fighting. I thought you would fight until E. Vile was gone. Until Island X was saved.”
    “Too many people were dying. Your whole family died, well except Super. I couldn’t let anyone else die. I wanted to be the sixth person to die. Not any of my friends.”
    “OK, JJ. But you really shouldn’t have. There are dangers both in the heavens and on earth that even I couldn’t begin to understand. Be careful JJ,” Young Flame says and she walks off, leaving you to think about what she said.

    Meanwhile, back on earth…..

  25. “Super,wake up!” She wakes up. “I really think I should bring JJ back to life.” She revives you. You say,”Thanks,Super.Wait a minute…only four won’t live to see the end,and even you won’t be able to revive them!And then…Super,only Young,Red and Mighty died! But …but-no one else died! Super,we’d better go and find out who’s the last one!”

    You all run to Main Street.All the guards are gone. “JJ!”,you hear Strange shout. You run to him. “Am I too late?”,you ask. “Yeah,”says Big Bubbles,popping behind him. “And,”Strange continues,”He saved our lives,too.Freed us and all.We’ll all miss him.” He silently sobs. “Who is it?” “The poor Poptropican was none other than Sneaky Cheetah.”,says Big Bubbles softly.

  26. “But wait. The final line is Six will pay the price if that one dies </i. Mighty was that one. Who are the six and how will they pay the price? What price?" you say.
    Just then, a shadowy figure appears. He takes Super, Sneaky, and Clean. You look up at the screen and see three other people you know. They are…..

  27. (Hey, Slanted Fish! Do you think some one could type this all into a book? I’m willing to do it. Just ask me.)

  28. (continued from young)
    Quick whale., strange and shifty shadow.
    this is bad you think.
    then you hear a loud boom!
    “what was that?” you say.
    you run to where the sound came from.
    you find the shadowy fiqure on the ground.
    Super was near him along with clean and sneaky.
    you see that super is wearing the necklace.
    “what happend?” you say.
    “I don’t know we were walking the fiqure started hurting me and then all of a sudden a big blast came from my necklace and he fall to the ground” Super said.
    (to be continued)

    1. (Just continue from the last few comments. Leave the more earlier stuff to others.)

  29. Then the necklace starts to flash. Super puts her hands to her neck like she’s chocking. Then she walks over to Strange. She puts her hands around his neck (Well, where it would be) and starts chocking him. His face turns red, then blue.
    “Help! I can’t control myself!” Super shouts.
    Strange turns an ugly shade of purple and then….

  30. (Continued from Young) And then he stops breathing. Strange is dead. Suddenly, Super starts choking herself. “H-Help! I-I c-can’t st-stop!” She turns purple, then she faints, and she’s not breathing, either. An evil laugh comes into hearing, and you suddenly see E. Vile, and he has Voodoo Dolls of Strange and Super in his hands! “Ah, so you found out my little secret, eh? Well, now you’ll see my plan… But first, let the battle…. begin… Then millions of Bully Bots march into presence, and they say, “Boss Fight, Boss Fight, You are surrounded.” Then they hold back your friends, and E. Vile draws his sword, and you draw your sword and the Ultimate Weapon. (To be Continued)

      1. (Hey! I didn’t do anything! E. Vile did! And I think it was obvious that you were gonna die, I think Young Flame was planning on you to die, but I bet you’ll be revived.)

      2. (Actually, I had no idea. I was thinking someone was going to come in and stop Super and take off her necklace, but I left it up to the next poster)

  31. E. Vile looks at you slyly. He takes out a miniature doll of you and has you give him all you weapons.
    ‘How many dollies does the so call “mighty” E. Vile have? He has more than a little girl,” you taunt.
    “Silence!” E. Vile says and ties you up. You black out. When you wake up, you are tied to a chair. You feel volts of electricity running through your body. It’s not enough to knock you out, but close. You grit your teeth as someone behind you plucks your hair out, one by one. Someone else, a shadowy figure, is holding your figurine and making wierd little things on your ball shaped hands. They are long, almost like toes. It hurts, again, almost enough to knock you out, as your hands transform. The figure changes them back. He keeps repeating the process, as the pain continues.
    “Ready to surrender?” E. Vile’s voice says. you try to look and see where he is, but every time you do, and more powerful volt of electricity runs through you.
    “No. Never,” you say, but in a rough, yet squeaky voice.
    “Fine. Have it your way.”
    Someone slashes your arms with a sword. The cuts heal, but the pain lasts. He does it again and again. The pain builds up. You feel like you can see your bones, and you look down, and see the they broke your legs. You see the bone peeking out. The pain you are feeling intensifies. You pass out, but somehow, still feel the pain.

  32. You zap the robots with the Ultimate Weapon.E.Vile runs off,but you use the voodoo dolls to bring Strange and Super to life by burning them. “Wha-” Strange takes out his laptop. “Wait a minute-Clean posted this? You’re going to get paid for this,you know.” And he vanishes. Suddenly an earthquake occurs. “What now?”

  33. Mannequins drop from the sky! “This is a Fashionista’s revenge?!” ,says Clean,making everyone laugh. “Nah,that was only a start. You look around to see Sticky Robot! “Well,I see you haven’t untied yourself!” “Ha,ha,very funny,Jumper.Lieutenant!” Suddenly Lieutenant Lobster comes,riding on…Black Widow?!

    “You won’t stand the Black Widow and me,fools.”,says Lieutenant. “The White Widow and me,the-oh,forget it,I have no time to waste.” “Lobster!”,hisses Widow. “Oh ,fine.”,he grumbles. 2 hours later… “And the Thief with a Thousand Names and me.Happy?” He glares at Black Widow.

    And he starts chasing after you on her,with Sticky Robot following. You run,not wanting to be made a Spider Minion. You run and run and run and run and run and run and run and run and run and run and run and run and run and run and run and run and run and run and run and run and run and run and run and run and run and run.

    20000 years later…or sort of 2 minutes…hehe…..

    You run into a dead end. Suddenly the Creepy Crawly Canvas Criminal hits a rock accidentally. And loads of rocks fall on them,one accidentally switching SR off. “Well,they’re done for,but you’ll have to face me,JJ.”,says a voice. You turn to see a guy in a Red Panda suit,eating macaroons,and he doesn’t look like a pirate…. The Red Raccoon.

  34. (Continued from Strange) Soon, you defeat him, and you and your friends ran back over to Strange. “SNAP OUT OF IT!!” Clean yelled, as he shook Strange until Strange was back to normal. “Heh, sorry…” Strange said. “You better be. What were you trying to do, take revenge on all of us? Clean just wrote the next part! He wasn’t trying to be mean! This is just a story! A Story Creation, at that!” you say. “I guess I forgot that.” Strange said. “Don’t worry, buddy. We all go a little crazy sometimes.” Clean said, as he patted Strange on the back. (To be Continued)

      1. (I did,but you could just say I’m a weirdo,not Crazy Cat. I’m not a cartoon,you know.It offends people to think of me as someone who gets blown up by dynamite and has anvils fall on him. Such adsolence,you know. My regrets,Sharky.)

      2. (One, I said ALL of us go a little crazy. And I never blew you up by dynamite or got you squashed by an anvil. P.S. Don’t call me Sharky.

      3. (Funny how we share the same initials, just backwards, and it’s also funny that even though you changed your name, it’s still SC and funny how Cyborg Shark is the same initials as Clean Shark. Weird stuff, huh?)

  35. Suddenly a group of Poptropicans come and put handcuffs on Super. “You are put in custody for trying to kill a fashionista.” “But-” “The trial for this will be next wednesday. If you try to escape,your posters will be put everywhere.” “But I was-E.Vile-”

    “Tell that to the judge,pal.And you,Clean Shark,Harold Mews has been looking for you everywhere.Do not try and run off to explore islands.And Strange Cat,Weirdo and Fashionista,you have a costume shop waiting for you.”

  36. When Strange comes home, his shops are in shambles. He has no credits, and no costume shops. The trial reads Super as Not Guilty, and Clean Shark got a promotion. And a raise. And permission to help you fix Island X. He also got permission to write a story about it. Strange got one of his shops rebuilt, but he has to stay there until E. Vile was defeated. And he has guards to make sure he doesn’t escape.
    Meanwhile, you are exhausted. You decide to rest for a couple days in an island in the idea stage with an E. Vile and evil proof force field surrounding it.
    “I’ve had enough drama for a few days,” you say and pass out.

      1. (It was in moderation.) Ah, you must’ve been writing it while I was writing it.)

  37. (Continued from Strange) When Clean got back to Harold Mews, there was a sad look on Mews’ face. “What were you doing?” Mews said. “I was just exploring in my freetime one day, and then my blimp was popped, and- this book will explain everything… “No time to read, I’ll look at it later, we have to get you ready for Super Grape’s trial. She DID try to destroy a fashonista. Clean sighed. He used to love this job, but now that he’s been trying to defeat E. Vile, he’s gone through so much, and now he has to report Super for doing something that E. Vile had done with a voodoo doll. “Hello everyone, this is Clean Shark, News Reporter and today is the trial of Super Grape, who has been accused of trying to destroy the fashonista, Strange Cat, formerly Sticky Clown.” Clean said during the broadcast of Super’s trial. “You have no proof, Grape, and so, I make my decision… You are-” the judge was about to say. “STOP!” Clean said. “I have proof that Super Grape is innocent. Look at this page in The Ongoing Story Creation, the book that makes all of these things happen.” The judge looked at the page. “Well, thanks to this News Reporter named Clean Shark, I change my decision. Super Grape is… Innocent!” the judge said. You and everyone else rejoice, but then, someone barges into the room, with two lines of Bully Bots on both sides of him. “So, you’ve made it this far, Jumper… Well, now is the time… And this time, it is just a traditional sword fight, between you and me. Let the battle… Begin….” (To be Continued… And don’t make E. Vile run away or use special stuff)

  38. (Cont. from Clean Shark)
    You draw a sword, one that Young Flame gave you, made out of solid gold. It has the power and skill of 10 sword fighters. You fight the first Bully Bot and defeat him. You defeat the rest. You fight E. Vile. You have him cornered. You put your sword to his heart and flip his helmet off. You know this is the real E. Vile. Well, the new real E. Vile. You also know that there is a more powerful force that mind controls these E. Viles. But you have defeated all these E. Viles, so you know that he/she will have to fight you him/her self. You open your eyes and find yourself looking into a face you know well. A face you trusted. You are looking at…..

  39. But suddenly something dark covers him. “Master!Hold on to me!” And before you do anything,Popular picks E.Vile up,and flies off. You run and try to chase him.Strange,Super,and Hopper only manage to grab him,and they all fly with him,deep into the skies.And you faint.

  40. (continued from strange)
    you wake up and think about where they were heading.
    they must be going to island x you think.
    so you go to island x.
    and start looking for E.vile and your friends.

    meanwhile at the arena.
    Super along with everyone else were put in separate cages.
    Super was still wearing her necklace.
    Super gets a pice of paper out and writes:
    Being held captive in arena.
    Please hurry.
    – Super Grape
    Super gets a bow out and ties the note to a arrow and shoots it.
    the Arrow flies out of the arena.
    hope jj finds that super thought.
    Popular opens super’s cage.
    “come with me the master wish’s to talk to you about that necklace” Popular said
    Super gulps.
    ( to be continued)

  41. Back at Island X, the purple arrow almost hits you in the chest, but it you swerve and it hits your shoulder. You pass out and when you wake up, it’s bandaged. You look around and your surroundings are different. You see a girl cooking by a stove. You are in a stone house.
    “Wh-who are you?” you stutter, starting to sit up.
    “No, no child. Lie down. You lost a lot of blood because of that arrow,” the girl says, even though she looks no older than 14.
    You lie down. “But, who are you?”
    “You don’t need to know,” she says.
    “H-how did you find me?”
    “My cousin sent me. Now eat this,” she says and hands you a bowl of chicken noodle soup. While you eat, she examines you wound. It doesn’t look too deep. She puts a prudent cream on it, and the aching pain starts morphs into a soothing sensation. You look at her, confused.
    “I am a trained medic. My cousins were sent away from home, and I sent them herbs and medicine recipes to help them. My parents died of a nasty virus, and I was at Shark Tooth Island training with the Medicine Man. He taught me well, and now I live here, helping those who wander to my door,” she says with a kind smile.

  42. Suddenly,an arrow shoots near you! Wait,is that a letter? You open and read it:

    Being held captive in arena.
    Please hurry.
    – Super Grape

    You run to the arena, “JJ!”,you hear Super shout. You run to her. “Well,it seems like you’re ruining things,Jumper.” You look behind and see Popular. He shoots lasers at you,while you duck and open the cage. Hopper and Strange run and hold Popular and tie him up. Strange disappears to Fashionista Island. “What happened Super?”

  43. ‘well you see jj popular took me strange and hopper and locked us here’ super said.”I see,”,you say. ‘and then his evile master wanted to question me about the necklace,but then I shot an arrow to you, with a message,and when he was taking me,you came.”,super said. “Well,Super,this necklace of yours is more wanted than my weapon!”,you shout.

    “Guys,we have other things to discuss.”,Hopper says.”The Red Raccoon is an art thief,in a red panda suit,he later noticed the resemblance it bore to a raccoon.He loved macaroons.”
    ” But why did Strange tell that Crawfish-” “He found that in this book.”,Hopper says,taking a book entitled False Things about a Pirates You can Use to Trick Everyone.

    You growl in frustration.”We didn’t get to talk to him when you dueled him there,JJ.He owns this necklace,and I bet he has an important role in all of this. Meet me at my cottage tomorrow,JJ,I think I have some books about him in the attic.” And he goes off.

  44. So,the rest of the day you spend hiding in Strange’s costume shop,but the latter isn’t there the whole day. That night,when you’re sleeping,you hear a small noise.You look and see…Cyborg! “Beep….boop…bop…yes….master…I…will destroy….Jumpy…Jumper-booooop!” The last part is because you reprogrammed him along with Super by pouncing on him. When he is reprogrammed,he says,”Co-command….m-master?”

  45. (Continued from Strange) “Go destroy the one who sent you to destroy us.” you say. Later, he comes back with E. Vile’s body! “Wha- How did you destroy him?” you ask. “He thought I was still on his side, he fixed me and my voice, and then, when his back was turned, I yelled in my microphone at the top of my robotic lungs. Then I blasted him.” Cyborg Shark replied. “Now, let’s see who E. Vile is…” you say. (To be Continued)

  46. You remove the mask and get shocked. There is no face! It is replaced by a mask of darkness. As you,Super and Cyborg stare at the unknown face in Strange’s shop,someone comes in.”Who is it?” “Psst,it’s me,Hopper.I saw what happened,especially E.Vile’s ‘face’.

    I’ve come to tell you,Clean now has a lot of work to do with Mews-” “So?” “He can’t assist you because of all that work.” “WHAT?!” “You hear me.Anyway,I think I’ve found something important about The Red Raccoon.Come on,I’ve gotta show you.”

  47. You all rush to Hopper’s cottage.Hopper puts on the light and becomes shocked.His house has been searched! His house is in shambles. “Not so fast!”,you hear a voice. The Red Raccoon jumps down,throws something in the fireplace,and runs into the darkness. “Cyborg,go get him.”,you say. Cyborg runs out. 3 minutes later,you get worried for him.

    You run out into the woods to look for him.When going halfway,you realize you left your weapon! Now you’re all alone in the dark,with a torch….suddenly you see a piece of cloth!You decide to go south. But then you hear a voice.”Master…”,comes a voice. “Cyborg?!” “I got him…he’s there.” You fix him and he becomes right.

    You run that way and see only some ropes. “He escaped,Cyborg! Could you take me back to Hopper’s cottage?” “Y-yes,master,follow me.” You follow him back to the cottage. You enter the cottage. “Uh…Super?Hopper?Anyone.” “Finally,you’re here,JJ.” You realize this is someone else’s voice. “W-who are you?Where’s Super and Hopper?”

    “Your friends are in the woods looking for you.” “Cyborg,get them.” Cyborg runs out again. “And as for who I am,Jumpy,I am…”

  48. “The evil of all of Poptropica. That’s who E. Vile is. I’m your girlfriend’s ‘master’. I am the product of all the evil bottled up. Those silly Poptropicans defeat me, time after time. The evil builds. I get more powerful. I will take over Poptropica, and evil will be the only thing left. No goody-two shoes. But Poptropica isn’t enough for me. I have sent a polar bear to an island call Club Penguin to destroy that so I can rule it too. He hasn’t been a huge success. He keeps losing to this one agent in the Elite Penguin Force, or as I like to call it, the Elite Penguin FAIL! And I plan to destroy that agent, Waterpurple (my account’s name. I know, it’s weird). And I’m going to destroy you,” the figure says and grows 50 feet tall. He points the Ultimate Weapon a you and…..

  49. (Continued from Young Flame) He shoots it, and it just knocks you to the wall. “Huh?” he says. He zaps it again, but it does nothing to you. You notice that it’s set to push back! You decide not to tell E. Vile. But you have a plan. You grab a mirror, and when E. Vile shoots at you, you reflect it with the mirror. It knocks him back and he drops the weapon. You grab it, but he grabs Little Hopper’s laser sword and cuts off your hand. “Ahh!!” you scream with pain. Everyone comes in, E. Vile gets up and says, “Jumpy, I am your father…” You look at E. Vile with terror. Your friends and Cyborg faint. “No. NOOOO!!!!!” you scream. (To be Continued)

  50. Then you think, wait, how can pure evil be my father? And I created myself, so how can anyone be my father? He must be trying to distract me.
    And that moment of distraction was long enough. E. Vile set the Ultimate Weapon to….. (and then he pressed start and……. (for after you fill in the blanks)

  51. (continued from young)
    and then cyborg comes in with super and hopper.
    just as the figure is about to shoot you with the weapon.
    “wait it’s me you want” Super said.
    “Super what are you doing?” you say.
    “trust me I know what I’m doing” super said.
    “explain Grape” the figure said.
    Super shows the figure her birthmark.
    the figure gasped.
    “vary well I will destroy you first I will make sure you pay for what your sister did” the figure said.
    the figure points the weapon at Super.
    (to be continued)

  52. sleep and he turned it on and he shot you. You fall asleep. You have a dream about a place. You are hiding behind a tree. You see Young Flame, Red Rock, and Mighty Tornado. It looks like a while ago. Red and Mighty are asleep and Young is keeping watch, writing in what looks like a diary. A girl comes up.
    “Um, hi,” Young says. “Who are you?”
    “Oh, I’m sorry. My name is Icy Comet. I stumbled on this island. I was just roaming, hoping to find someone. I’m just so lonely and I needed someone to be with. Can I join your little group?” the girl asks with an innocent smile.
    “Um. Well, we are having a hard time coping. We can’t find a lot of food and water,” Young Flame replies.
    “Oh, I’m great in the wild. I know all the little secrets!’’ Icy says.
    “Great! You’re in! These are my sisters, Red Rock and Mighty Tornado,” says Young, pointing to them. “I have first watch. You get some rest.”
    “Ok. Thanks!” she says.
    “That was a few years ago. After my mom died, we came to that deserted island. Icy Comet, that girl, is actually a villain. She put most of the bottled up evil into E. Vile. She is still wandering around today. I heard she is in three of the new ideas in the Island Creation Contest,” a voice says and you jump and see present, spirit, Young Flame. You look over and see that the flashback is proceeding as normal.
    “I-I-Island c-creation contest?” you stutter
    “Yes. The creators of Poptropica are holding one. This one girl has three ideas, and Icy Comet A.K.A the Brown Recluse, Black Widow’s twin, is the villain in all of them. It is time to wake up. Be wary of Icy and be careful, Young Flame says, rising into the sky.
    You wake up with a start. A girl who looks exactly like the one in your dream is untying you.
    “Shhhh. My name is Icy Comet. I am here to help you,” she whispers.
    You get a good look at her. She ha black hair and porcelain pale skin. She is wearing black clothes and her bangs are covering one eye. She looks like a emo-slash-goth-slash-vampire girl.
    “NOOOOOOOOO!” you shout.

  53. Suddenly,another girl jumps out and catches her.She ties her up.She is wearing a bike rider costume. “Who are you?” “I am another Icy Comet.I am part of the PHB staff.” “Wha-” “I’ve also heard of 2 girls with the name Sticky Clown. Weird,huh? (This is true) I read your ongoing story creation.We’d better escape.” You run out of the hideout.

    “I’ll go now.I’ve always wanted to be at Monster Carnival,so I’ll explore it.” And she runs off. You walk on a little further. Then you run into Cyborg! He seems to be switched off. You switch him on. “Cyborg,did you-” “Yes master,but then someone switched Cyborg off. Cyborg does not know their fate.I shall try and find them,master.Cyborg w-will.”

    And he runs off too. So you try and look for shelter.But you run into the main attraction-the carnival itself! There might be something there.But you still don’t have the weapon,and monsters of Hopper surround it everywhere-except a portable bathroom stand thingamajig.You run into it.You have an idea,though it is disgusting. Will it succeed?

  54. (continued from strange)
    you put your plan into action and it does succeed.
    all of the monsters drown.
    you look around and see a chest.
    then Super runs into you.
    “JJ I’m so glad to see you come on we need to get out of hare before that thing comes for me” Super said.
    “wow slow down what happened?” you say.
    “well……” Super begin.
    (to be continued)

  55. But she doesn’t get a chance to finish because E. Vile and 1,000 Bully Bots come after you.
    “You will play for the damage your sisters caused,” E. Vile shouts.
    “WHAT is he TALKING about!?!?!?!?!?” you shout.
    “I-I don’t know,” Super replies.
    “Oh. Well this isn’t going to be any fun unless you know, Super Grape. Here is what your sister did…..
    (To Be Cont. Which sister? What did she do?)

  56. “Were once me.” “Yeah,we know that.” “But,Might Tornado….before she died,she,under my control,put a bomb under this island.It will explode in….3….2…1….what?!” He looks at something. “The bomb’s defused,by Big Bubbles!” Suddenly Pluto and a few monsters come and attack the bully bots and E.Vile,and on them ride Hopper,along with Cyborg!

    You gape at them. The biggest monster looks as you as if you were his midday meal. “Now,now,Fluffy,these are friends,”says Hopper. “What happened to you and Super?!”

  57. (continued from strange)
    “well jj you see we were in the woods looking for you and that’s when cyborg found us and then this weird looking thing came out of nowhere and it turned him off and well it started trying to attack us and well me and super got separated” Hopper said.
    “wait what did this thing look like?” you say.
    Hooper was about to answer when all of you hear a growl.
    “what was that?” you say.
    “It’s the thing!” super said.

    what is this thing super and hopper are talking about? find out next time on island x.

    (to be continued)

  58. It seems to be…a pile of measuring tape? “Sticky Robot?” And finally the tape unravels. “Well,well JJ” “What….weren’t you switched off?” “My master-you know-ah,never mind,I’ll do what I do. And call me Strange Robot from now on,okay?” And he shoots 100 scissor missiles which cut down the carnival tents. “Oh,no!”,Hopper cries.”We’ve gotta save my carnival!”

  59. (Continued from Strange) Suddenly, E. Vile grabs you! He takes you to his fortress. You look at your arm, where your right hand used to be. “You aren’t my father! I created myself!” you say. “No, I am. Look at this picture.” E. Vile says. It’s a picture of you and your mom! Before you wound up in Poptropica! “Wh- I- that’s my mother!” you scream. “And where was your father?” E. Vile asks. “He- he left and never came back.” you say. He removes his helmet and you see your father’s face! “I am your father, Jumpy.” You can’t believe that your father, Little Jumper, was actually E. Vile! “Join me, and we can rule Poptropica together!” E. Vile says. You have a huge decision to make. Either most likely wind up in a tough situation with disappearing friends, or join your long lost father and rule Poptropica with him. (To be Continued)

  60. (continued from clean)

    you decide to think about it for a while.

    meanwhile Super notices your missing and has to make a decision of her own that cloud change poptropica history!.
    “I’m afraid were goona have to unite the tribes” Super said.
    “what! are you nuts?” Hopper said.
    “Hopper if we can get the tribes to work together we can rescue jj and defeat e.vile it’s the only way” Super said.
    “I guess your right I’ll call the tribes” Hopper said.
    so Hopper and Super call a tribe meeting.
    “Listen I know we have our differences but if we work together we can take e.vile down” Super said.
    “I guess Super is right” Strange said.
    “Alright then Pathfinders, nanobots and whoever else unite! Strange you go get us some outfits for battle and pop squad go get us some weapons let’s get ready for battle people” Super said.
    (to be continued)

  61. (Continued from Super) The tribes come in, but they are captured by a trap! They see E. Vile standing in front of you, and you make your decision, with I being the safest one. “I choose to rule Poptropica with you, father.” you say. The tribes have a look of horror on their faces. Then E. Vile replies, “Good. Now, I will give you one wish. What will it be?” “It- it will be for you to let my friends be free.” you say. “Ah, so you’re wishing for freedom for your friends? Well, guards, let those Poptropicans off the hook.” E. Vile says. You look at Hopper. “Dad?” “Yes, my son?” he says. “I would like to keep Hopper here. He’s able to reprogram robots and build cybernetic parts, and he can revive people.” you answer. “Very well, then. But this is part of your wish, and if he tries to escape or anything, my Bully Bots will let him have it.” E. Vile replies. Meanwhile, while E. Vile looks at the monitor for Club Penguin, he sees that the Polar Bear has finally defeated the Elite Penguin Force, Hopper constructs a cybernetic hand for you. You have your eyes closed, thinking about everything that has happened. You have one thought that you can’t get out. “How has E. V- I mean my dad, actually succeeded in taking over Poptropica AND Club Penguin? It’s all my fault.” When you open your eyes, you can move your right hand! You look and see that it is a cybernetic hand. Go figure. You look and see that E. Vile is now wearing a dark cape and is wearing his helmet again, but in black. “Dad, I need to talk to you about something…” (To be Continued)

  62. “What, son,” he says taking off his helmet.
    “I-I-I-” you see the look on his face and change your mind. “I want to know, what happened to Mom?”
    “Your mother? Ugh. The nerve of that woman. She was the one who tried to defeat me originally. We always argues, so we got a divorce. She got married and had three children. She recently died from some virus. She later moved to Club Penguin. She had the best disguise as a penguin and changed her name to Waterpurple,” he says.
    “What was her real name? It’s been too long.”
    “Big Hero.”
    You gasp, remembering that Young Flame’s mother’s name was Big Hero.
    “D-d-do you happen t-t-to know the name of her d-d-d-daughters?” you stutter.
    “Not really. Something like Old Flame, Blue Rock, and Weak Hurricane or something like that.”
    “Young Flame, Red Rock, and Mighty Tornado?!?”
    “Yes that’s it!”
    “That means…. I’m their long-lost brother. And Super Grape is my sister? I dated my sister! And Clean Shark dated my sister! Gross!”
    “What’s this about a shark and dating?”
    You explain everything that happened and show him the Ongoing Story book. You also notice that Young Flame is writing what is happening.
    “I love you, sister,” you whisper.
    Then, you notice that Hopper is trying to hide something.
    “What is that?”
    Hopper looks worriedly at you dad and at you.
    “Can I trust you? Are you really trying to take over Poptropica?”
    “No. I just said that. I wanted to catch up with Dad,” you say.
    Hopper pulls you to another room.
    He shows you…..

  63. (Continued from Young) “This, Jumpy, is the redeeming helmet.” Hopper said to you in another room. “It looks just like dad’s helmet, just brand new.” you say. “That’s the point! We present it to him, and he puts it on, and bam! He’s good! Either that, or he’s got a migraine. But he wakes up and he’s good even if the migraine happens.” Hopper replies. “D-dad? Are you busy?” you ask E. Vile. “No, just watching those puny penguins run around Club Penguin screaming. Hah, hah! Take that Elite Penguin Fail! I’m gonna have to give that polar bear a raise!” E. Vile answers. “Hopper invented a helmet that can monitor if Poptropicans and penguins are caught not slaving away. We programmed it to not report the ones that we let off the hook.” you say. “Why, this looks terrific! Thank you, son!” E. Vile says. He puts it on, and suddenly, something amazing (In a good way) happens. (To be Continued)

  64. Suddenly, the screens change. The penguins calm down, but Herbert looks upset and Klutzy (his sidekick crab) runs away. The poptropicans look happier and your dad’s outfit changes from black and a cape to jeans and a t-shirt.
    “Dad?”
    “Son? What have I done? I am so sorry! Let’s return to your friends,” he says.
    You return and you go straight to Super.
    “Well. It looks like we are step-siblings,” you say.
    “What do you mean?” Super asks.
    You explain.
    “Oh. My. God. I dated your step-sister?!!?” Clean exclaims.
    “Uh, yeah, I guess. But the grosser thing is that I dated my step-sister.”
    “I’m your step-sister?” Super asks.
    “No. Actually, you are his real sister. Your mother took you with her when she left. JJ never really got to know you,” your dad says.
    “Oh. Well, what do we do now? E. Vile is defeated,” Super Grape says.
    “We go back to the beginning. We need to solve the mystery of Island X. and try to save it,” Beefy Owl says.
    “To the blimp!” Friendly Turtle exclaims.
    You all pile into the blimp and take off. That’s when tragedy strikes.

  65. Popular comes zooming in the air,and seems shocked to see dad with you. He removes E.Vile’s good helmet. “P-popular?”sputters E.Vile,sounding like Cyborg. “Yes,master. Your loyal son has brought you his friends .” “What?!” ,shouts Hopper.”You did this on purpose?!” “No,I-” “Didn’t like you one bit,and never wanted to tell you he knew where Clean Shark is.”,E.Vile finishes.

    There is a short silence. “Put the blimp on turbo mode!”,shouts E.Vile/Little Jumper.And the blimp turns into an ultra-mega-monster rocket. It zooms to another planet…wait….why is it heading towards the sun? “This is all your fault,JJ!”,screams Super. “Ah,just like your late siblings,aren’t you?”,sneers LJ/E.Vile.

    “You lured us into a trap ! You never liked us. You wanted us to throw us into the sun!” “No,”E.Vile says. “My lair is in the sun.” “Whatever.What Super’s saying is,”,Hopper says,”That Jumpy Jumper,son of E.Vile and traitor to all Poptropikind, Fashionistas, engineers, news reporters, adventures likewise,CAN’T BE THE CHOSEN ONE!”

  66. Friendly Turtle,Super Grape,etc. nod. Suddenly there is a flash of light. “Here it is.”,E.Vile says quietly.”My evil E.Vile secret lair.Now,son,I’m going to be busy now,but don’t try to go anywhere without permission.My bots only obey me.And the exit is sealed.

    Only Popular and I know the password.Popular,go take the prisoners away.Summon my minions while you’re at it.Any questions?” “Dad?” “Yes?” “If I was created myself-” “I know what you’re asking. It’s very gruesome and yet not at all E.Vile.

    But you’ll know before you come of age only by asking that foolish box,Ms.Tropicana.Now enter my E.Vile lair!”And the door opens.Everyone gasps.This is it.E.Vile’s lair.With a few mannequins around,this is just like how Poptropica looked when he ruled it.

  67. (continued from strange)
    “Wait say what now?” Strange said.
    “Wait if I’m not the chosen one then who is?” you say.
    “Well if you ask me they would be someone who never gives up because a true hero never gives up” Super said.
    everyone looks at Super.
    “What why is everyone looking at me?” Super said.
    “I don’t believe it you were the chosen one this whole time” e.vile said.
    “What me? wait I just remembered something you let my sisters down jj well guess what? I’m not goona let them down” Super said.
    Super gets her sword out.
    “E.vile I challenge you to a sword fight I win you let us go if you win I’ll surrender and become your slave” Super said.
    “I accept well fight when we land on the sun” E.vile said.
    “This is exciting this will be just like Darth Vader against Luke Skywalker” Hopper said.
    (to be continued)

  68. You feel horrible for what you did to your friends. You didn’t mean to.
    “Hopper-” you begin.
    “I just can’t believe you would turn against us like that!”
    “But, Hopper! Listen to me!” you exclaim.
    “Why are you talking to him ?” Super asks.
    “You know, a real friend would listen and give some time to explain. When you were turned into E. Vile, I didn’t just start hating you! I LISTENED to what you had to say. I thought you would to,” you end softly. Your friends just humph and turn their backs. All except Hopper.
    “Hopper, please!” you plead.
    “Fine, but let’s go somewhere private.”
    You walk until you find a janitors closet. Wait, why is there a janitors closet in an evil E. Vile lair?
    “Hopper. I didn’t mean for any of this to happen!”
    “You really think I’ll believe that?” Hopper spats.
    “Hopper, please. Just listen to me. I listened to you even after you tried to kill you!”
    That seems to get Hopper listening.
    “I chose to go with Dad because I thought I could stop him. I knew he would finally wear us down if we stuck together. I wasn’t betraying you. I had no idea that he planned to capture you. I really thought he was good. I was hoping E. Vile was gone for good. I really did, promise! And I think I know a way outta here. While Super and Dad are preapring for their battle, we can sneak everyone else out. We can go to an island in their idea stage and wish Super was their. If we wanted to make Dad good, we could wish he was there in a cage, and he couldn’t see us. Then we could wish he was good and that he would never turned evil ever again. It would work! Then we could send him away just in case. Please, Hopper! Can we just try it!”
    “I like it and I believe you, but I don’t know about everyone else,” Hopper says.
    “Let’s try it.”
    You somehow get everyone to trust you, but just that one time.
    You go to a new island called Video Game Island. You wish Super was there. She appears. With a sword.

  69. (From Super) Then you land.Super and dad take out their swords and fight for what seems for like hours.Super seems to be winning,but dad knocks her sword. “You are now my slave,Grape.”,he says. And Super becomes hypnotized. “Command,master?” “Take these people to the dungeons,except Jumpy.” Super does her orders while the others glare at u.

  70. “YOU! I HATE YOU!” Super yells. She runs at you with the sword. You just stand there. She cuts off your bionic hand. She slashes you head and your chest. You just stand there. She slashes you in anyway imaginable. You just stand there.
    “I’M GOING TO KILL YOU!” Super shouts, getting more and more angry at your refusal to get angry. She runs back about a yard and runs. You just stand there. She is inches away, her sword pointed at your heart. You just stand there.
    “Do it. I deserve it,” you whisper.
    “Aren’t you going to fight? Aren’t you anxious to get back to Daddy?” Super asks, her voice shaky.
    “No. I want to get away from him. I want to get to my step sisters. The people who I love,” you say, your voice low, but steady. “Do it.”
    She stands there for a second, just pondering what you just said. Then she does it. You fall to the ground. Super drops her sword, her hands over her mouth.
    “I-I-I I can’t believe I did that!” she stammers.
    “Me neither!” Hopper says, stepping up. Your spirit rises, invisible, watching the fight.
    “Your his sister! He’s wrong. He didn’t deserve to die. You did. He tried to explain, but you shut him out!” Hopper shouts.
    “I did it because he betrayed us!” Super protests.
    “He didn’t! He was betrayed. I saw the whole thing! He listened to you whenever you betrayed him. He let you explain. You tried to kill him and he let you explain! You are not the Chosen One! The real chosen one listens. The real Chosen One doesn’t shut someone out just because it looks like he betrayed them. JJ has more guts than you. He at least tried to explain and he at least tried to do something that we didn’t have the guts to do. He tried to stop E. Vile.”
    “We have all tried to stop E. Vile!” Super exclaims.
    “Whenever E. Vile disappears, do we try to find out where he went? No. I know JJ did. They just didn’t record it in the Ongoing Story! When we found out who E. Vile really was, did we try to stop him! No. JJ did. He chose to be with him so he could defeat him from the inside. And who was the person who tried to free you once and for all when you got captured at E. Vile’s lair? JJ did, twice. Do you really think that he would try to capture you after he freed you? I don’t. I wish you would leave here and never return. I wish you would never find us ever again! I wish we never have to see you ever again! Bye, Not-So-Super Grape!”
    And Super vanishes. You rise up to the heavens. Young Flame is waiting for you.
    “What you did was heroic and brave. I’m proud to be your sister. I don’t care what Super Grape says. Not let’s go.”
    “One second.”
    You descend to the earth and go in front of Hopper.
    “Thank you Little Hopper. I want to award you with this,” you give him the Ultimate Weapon and the Ultimate Shield. “I cannot be revived, because I was killed by family. That’s something that can never be undone. I will also grant you one wish.”
    “I need time to think about it.”
    “Very well. Remember the plan. Goodbye, Hopper.”
    “Wait! JJ! I know what I want! I want….

  71. “Why,JJ,why?!”,shouts Friendly Turtle. “I’m bringing the police!”,shouts Strange.”How,fashionista?”,sneers E.Vile. “Like this!” And he does his oh-so famous vanishing tricks. He comes back in 10 seconds with armoured police.”Little Jumper? And this is your son,Jumpy?And the hypnotized slave,Super,along with your cousin,Popular?”

    “Yes,sir!”,shouts Strange.”Arrest them all,except-” You feel a wave of hope on you. “Super Grape.she was only hypnotized,and she is the real Chosen One.It’s a conspiracy,if I should say so!” And he vanishes,leaving the police to take care of ALMOST EVERYTHING. You sigh as they put handcuffs on you.

  72. (Continued from Young) Hopper thinks a minute. “I wish that JJ would come back. He is the Chosen One, the one who can save us all.” The mystical box came in front of Hopper. “Your wish is granted” she says. Suddenly, you descend, with a real hand and no wounds. “Oh, I should have told you that you could wish me to come back, just with the one I gave you. I’m so goofy sometimes.” you say. “Hey, where’s Super?” “Not here, and she’ll never find you or us again.” Hopper says. Meanwhile, Super is at her hometown, Super Power Island, looking depressed. She goes over to the prison, which has been repaired, and said, “Officers, arrest me. I’m a no good person. Arrest me now.” “W-why? Didn’t you save us once?” the officer said. Super just looked down. The officer slowly took her to her cell, and she was in the cell with Betty Jetty. “What the- what are YOU doing here? I thought you were a goody two shoes!” she said. “I did something unforgiveable.” Super said. (To be Continued)

  73. ( hey! you know if you do go with hers one of you better bring me back please because you do not want to see my bad side sorry if that sounds threating but I’m just saying)

  74. (okay ignore that sorry continued from clean)
    “What! what did you do?” you say.
    “why are you mad?” Hopper said.
    “Hopper Super was just trying to help and she’s my sister and do you have any idea what you just did?” You say.
    “I’m pretty sure I got rid of a not so super grape” Hopper said.
    “okay imagine that you were her and you got wished away how would you feel?” you say.
    “Well I would be vary oooh I see your point” Hopper said.
    “we need to fix this” you say.

    meanwhile at the prison Super was upset.
    then popular brakes into the prison.
    Popular brakes into super’s cell with the island x book.
    “What do you want?” Super said.
    “Just thought you might want to look at the last page” Popular said.
    Popular opens the book.
    “wait so my sister wrote that? and jj is alive?” Super said.
    “so it’s my sister’s fault that I got wished away?” Super said.
    something inside super snapped.
    “Tell you what join us Super and well make them pay” Popular said.
    “Fine I’ll join” Super said.
    “Excellent” Popular said.
    Super fells to the ground.
    “What’s happening to me?” Super said.
    “oh your just turning evil” Popular said.
    Super blacks out.
    (to be continued)

  75. (Continued from Super) “Wait, where in Poptropica is Clean?” Friendly Turtle asked. Suddenly, the Ongoing Story book comes out of the sky! Red Rock nods at you firmly in the clouds. “Thanks, Red!” you say. You see that Clean is writing the next part! “He should be safe, but of course, the kidnapper may only let Clean write a new addition. We have to find him!” you say. Meanwhile, Clean is held captive in Popular’s Fortress. “Ah, Clean Shark, how are you doing? Well, things are about to get worse, because look who’s on my side, now?” Popular said. Clean gasped in horror. Super Grape was by his side, with an evil grin on her face! Suddenly, a look of guilt flashed on her face, then an evil grin again. Clean starts to say, “JJ, if you are reading this, please help! Popular’s fortress is on Sku-

  76. Then you see that Young Flame is writing this. Clean Shark the book taken away and it was destroyed. Super kept him in chains and started thinking of ways to torture him. Clean is at the Pirate Outpost in Skullduggey Island.
    “Super Grape! No. THIS IS ALL YOUR FAULT!” you say to Hopper.
    “Mine? How so?”
    “You sent her away. If she was here, she wouldn’t be there and and and,” you are so mad that you are flustered.
    “JJ, she killed you!”
    “I don’t care. She’s my sister.”
    “JJ, I-”
    “I don’t care. I appreciate you standing up for me, but I want my sister back.”
    “I wish Super would be able to find us,” you say. Just then, Super comes.
    “Well, well, well. Look who’s here. Little Jumpy Jumper,” she says.
    Then Young Flame descends down.
    “Look who it is. Miss I Don’t Want My Sister Near My Brother So I Sent Her Away,” Super says in a sing song voice.
    “Um, that’s a little wordy and a little mean,” a voice says. And not a voice you’ve heard before.
    “Fearless? Is that you?”
    “Yes. I heard you dissed you little sis.”
    “No. I didn’t. I reported everything after it happened.”
    “You did?” Super asks, shocked.
    “Yes. You should blame Hopper here.”
    “No matter. I will destroy you anyway.”
    “Why?” Young Flame

  77. (continued from Strange)
    it was a crowbar Clean picks it up and opens his cell.
    Clean leaves and goes off to find you to warn you about super.

    Meanwhile Super grinned evilly at you.
    “Oh no you won’t friendly I wish you would leave” Super said.
    Friendly disappears.
    “I also wish that all of you wouldn’t be able to make any wish’s and that all of you were in a cage” Super said.
    Suddenly a cage falls on you and your friends.
    “What the heck!” you say.
    “I wish I had the ultimate weapon and shield” Super said.
    Super gets the ultimate weapon and shield.
    “I also wish that if clean wishes me to be good it will not work” Super said.
    “Super what are you doing?” you say.
    “Goodbye jumper muhahahahaha! I wish I was at Popular’s fortress” Super said.
    Super disappears.
    Clean arrives.
    “Guys I need to tell that Super has turned evil” Clean said.
    (to be continued)

  78. “Uh, a little too late,” you say.
    “Where is Friendly Turtle? And who is this girl? And what happened here?” Clean asks.
    You explain.
    “I wish all of Super’s wishes would become undone and that she will turn good,” says Clean Shark. “I wish Super was here now.”
    Super appears. Young Flame disappears.
    “Uh, hi everyone. Sorry for, uh trying to, uh, destroy you, I guess.”
    “Humph,” you say and turn around.
    “Aw, c’mon JJ,” Super Grape says.
    “Nah, I’m just kidding. Can’t I have a little fun?” you say.
    “Hey! Meanie!” Super says giving you a playful swat.
    Suddenly, there is a cloud. Big and dark. But it’s not a cloud. It keeps moving, shifting, and it’s advancing way too fast.
    Super pales. “Um, guys. There’s something I forgot to tell you,” she says.

  79. “That I’m still bad! Ha,I already wished if Clean wished me good,it wouldn’t work
    !Now,I wish that you would be in the same condition as the others.” Clean comes in your cage.Super disappears.

  80. Thinknoodles appears.
    “And… this is a new island in idea mode. I think there is something going on here,” he says and snaps his recorder off.
    “Um, what’s going on?”
    You explain.
    “I wish Super was good and I wish that everyone was free,” he says. “Hey, JJ. I remember what you needed. Plus this nice spirit girl came and told me a couple other things that would help. One, the helicopter game is Poptropica Adventures is NOT my friend. Those missles were coming faster and faster! Anyways, here is what I wanted to tell you…..

  81. “You’re wanted now.You’re E.Vile’s son,right?” “Righ-” “Come with me,then.” You hold on to him,and reappear at…Super Power Prison?! “Hey,everyone,it’s your friend Thinknoodles,and I have a new prisoner for ya! I’ll see you guys again soon,thanks to listening,and of course…noodle on!”

    And Think disappears. You feel as if now everyone is against you. The guards take you to Ratman’s cell. You see the filthiness of the cell,made by his rats and feel this is going to be a long day. “So,what did ya do to get in here,pal?” “I was E.Vile’s son.” “You’re what?! Hey,wanna speak villain to villain? I can give you a few tips,you know.” You sigh.

    Meanwhile,Strange was getting back to his old life.Super had just paid him a visit. She gave him a nice bottle of grape juice and vinegar. “Which one?”,she had asked,smirking for some reason. “I’ll have…grape juice!I’ll give the vinegar to someone else.” You seemed to scowl immediately.

    Her plan to make the foolish fashionista a spider minion had failed. She wanted him to drink the ‘vinegar’,aka the poison. After she had left,Strange sent the bottle to Clean. Clean recieved it,and even though he was busy elsewhere,he was thirsty.He drank all of them.Suddenly,he fainted.Soon he woke up.His eyes were purple and swirly…

  82. (continued from strange)
    After talking for a while you ask ratmen to help you escape he says yes.
    so you from a plan and together you escape form the prison.
    and then strange appears.
    “JJ you need to come with me so we can talk” Strange said.
    so you two teleport to strange’s shop.
    “So what’s up?” you say.
    “Something happened to clean I know because he’s acting weird and I think it might have something to do with that bottle Super gave me do you think she’s still bad?” Strange said.
    “Why would she still be bad she should be good but wait I just remembered that super disappeared earlier I think she might have disappeared to e.vile’s fortress so I think that when thinknoodles wished her to be good it did work but then E.vile must have hypnotized her” you say.

    Meanwhile at E.vile’s fortress Super comes up to E.vile.
    Super’s eyes were cold and dark.
    “I failed Master but Clean drank it” Super said.
    “Well your lucky that I’m in a good mood hare take this” E.vile said.
    E.vile gives Super a red bottle.
    “Have jj drank that when he drinks it he will turn evil and come to my side and this time don’t take no for a answer” E.vile said.
    “Yes, Master” Super said.
    Super goes off to find you.
    (to be continued)

  83. You leave his shop. Suddenly you see a figure come around. It’s Clean! He doesn’t seem to see you.You follow him to a forest. “What is it,you want,Supeer?” He says. You hear a glugging noise. Some time later,”Yes,Super?” “Go to the master Clean. He has plans for you.Eliminate Jumper if you see him.”

  84. When you wake up,you are in Popular’s fortress. You feel something different in you. you feel…evil. Then you hear Popular’s voice. “Jumper!Your father wants to see you!” He takes you to E.Vile. “Ah,there you are,son. Now I finally have my children working for me. I have a question:Should I try to invade Minecraft next?”

    You feel as if you want it to be destroyed. “Yes,father,it’s an excellent idea.” “Good.Now,Super will give you the list of important thing to do to invade Poptropica.Go and speak to her.” You go to her. “Hello,sister.Do you have something important for me to do?” She smirks. “Yes,I want you to…”

  85. (Guys,I want a review on 2 of the things I invented that were important to the story from you:Popular Penguin,and the Ultimate Weapon. Possibly Strange Cat and Strange Robot too,and Magic Onion’s now famous term which changed everything:Fashionista.)

      1. (Um, I picture it being like a long metal thingy with a pointy end, and it’s made up with different kinds of metal, and it looks really junky, and there’s a big red dial to change modes)

  86. (continued from strange)
    “To help me capture hopper I think if we had him on our side he cloud make father’s robots unstoppable don’t you agree brother?” Super said.
    you think it was true Hopper cloud add some parts to the robots.
    “Yes sister I agree” You say.
    “Good then let’s go get him” Super said.
    SO you and Super go to Hopper’s cabin.
    Hopper was reading a book.
    “Oh Hello guys I didn’t hear you come in” Hopper said.
    “Hello Hopper why don’t you come with us somewhere?” You say.
    “Hum..Thanks…but…I…have…to..go…somewhere” Hopper said.
    Hopper goes to the door.
    Super gets to it first and locks it.
    “Your not going anywhere” Super said.
    Hopper backs up against the wall.
    “Okay something is wrong with you two” Hopper said.
    Hopper calls strange.
    “Strange something is wrong with Super and Jumper I can tell because Super eyes are cold and dark and Jumper is acting evil look in the island X book and find out what’s wrong with them” Hopper said.
    Hopper hangs up.
    You knock hopper out.
    “Now Let’s get him to father” you say.
    (to be continued)

  87. Go give these potions to everyone in Poptropica. Then I want you to give on to Dad. But don’t tell him I said that. He has some unfair idea of having everyone work for him. Too easy. I want everyone to work for me. I did all the work,” she says. You feel like siblings saying their parents have unfair rules.
    You destroy the potions and tell the Poptropicans to pretend to work for your dad and try to stop him. Then you get an idea. You go to the lab and mix two potions.
    “Super! I have something for you!”
    Super comes. “What?”
    “This is a potion that will make you more evil. Drink it, and Dad will be in your shadow.”
    Super takes the bright pink liquid and downs it in one gulp.
    Then you go to your dad.
    “Dad, I have something that will make you more evil! Drink it, and even we will be in your shadow.”
    Your dad drinks it almost as fast as Super. Now you’re glad that the potion Clean gave you was a dud. You just turned Super and your Dad good. Super walks in.
    “Oh no! We have to free all those Poptropicans!” Super and E. Vile say in unison.
    “Don’t worry. I’ve got it covered,” you say and explain everything.
    Then…..

    1. (Continued from Young)
      …you hear an enormous rumble coming from the ground. Everyone stares in terror. The scaredy- cat bad guys run away. A slightly small girl suddenly walks over. “Hi!” she squeaks. “Aaaaah!” You’re so scared, you jump into Super’s arms! “Uh, hello?” the girl says, staring curiously at you. “Hey, who are you kid?” you ask, stepping out of Super’s arms. “Oh, me?” the girl says. She pulls a wallet out of her pocket. It has a shiny badge on it. “I’m Red Ice of the SSP, the Secret Services of Poptropica.” Suddenly, a dark blue boy and a hot pink girl drop down to you. “Over there, the hot pink girl is Shiny Wolf.” says Red. “The dark blue boy is Quiet Shell.” They salute to you, saying, “We salute you, as the agents of SSP!” they cry. “Well, then where did the rumbling come from? ” Dad asks, as a huge dog gets near Red. “Oh that was just Justin here,” Red smiles, stroking Justin’s fur. All of a sudden, someone yells, “We have you now, Jumper!”

  88. The Party Pooper Penguin arrives,turning everyone,including you,bad again! Now you truly feel evil. “Dad,let’s try to take over Wizard101 next.” He chuckles. “That’s my boy.”

  89. Meanwhile,far away,in an abandoned mineshaft at Island X,Friendly Turtle was looking around.There were plenty of ores,he thought. Why should this place be abandoned? Suddenly,he noticed a shadow…it seemed like there was no place to hide…he was trapped…

    You,Super and E.Vile are discussing what game to take over next. “Runescape?”you suggest. “No,how about Pottermore?”,says Super. “I think we should conquer the minor games first,children,”,says Popular.”We’ll have plenty of minions at our command.” “Good thinkinh,Popular,”,says E.Vile. Suddenly,Bionic Hopper comes in! “I have bad news,sir.”

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