In celebration of this Poptropica Help Blog recently reaching 8 million hits (thanks everyone!), we’re going to do something fun! In the comments section, ANYONE is welcome to join in as we weave an ongoing story, a Poptropica fan-fiction of sorts, told in second-person narrative. It begins here…
“Um, hello. I’m here to register for something called, uh, ‘Poptropica’?” Amidst the realm of blue vines in front of you, a crate, small and wooden, bounces out, shaking blue dust and spitting out a question of your gender. You stare incredulously before you finally manage to respond. “I’m a boy,” you tell the little box, and then it erupts a circle of numbers in individual bubbles as it asks you the next question. This is a very strange sign-up process, you think to yourself, as you decide to tell the box etched with a curious question mark that you are 9 years old.
“Your name is Jumpy Jumper. When you are ready, hop into the blimp and travel to any island.” You ponder the map for a while, but decide none of the islands suit you. “There’s got to be something better…” you mutter to yourself. Just then, you see it. Out of the corner of your eye, there’s another island, shrouded in mystery by layers of smog and unidentifiable smells. Island X.
“But no one’s ever been there before,” the voice warns, the voice of the box that had guided your creation earlier. “Jumpy Jumper, JJ, you can’t… how did that even get on the map anyway? It’s not safe… please no… JJ!!” But it’s too late. You’re gone.
What happens next? Will JJ survive the unknown dangers of the mysterious Island X? What is the island’s secret, its true name, the people, the villain(s), the setting? You and your fellow PHB readers get to decide what items he collects and uses, other places he visits, and the adventures that await…
RULES: Make sure it follows what others have written before you, makes sense, and if you wish to add a comment that is not part of the story itself, use parentheses, for example: (I think we should…) Your comment can be as long or short as you like and you are definitely welcome to contribute as many times as you like. Be creative!
Where will these words take us? Continue the story in the comments!
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(continued from young flame)
you try to electricty them again and it works.
“Super why do you save me all the time?” you say.
“yeah why? that gets annoying” strage said.
“hey!” super said.
“ok fine you wanna know why it’s becuse i don’t want anything to happen to him and i want to be a hero when i grow up” super said.
“oh” you say.
(to be continued)
(and stop makeing people die please)
(Who,me?)
(Continued from me) “I’ll pay you…uh….this nice,little string?” The lady gasps. “Oh,dear,you shouldn’t have! Here,you can have it.” “Why the string?”,Big Bubbles mutters. “Hold it right there,give that to me!” You see none other than E.Vile himself,surrounded by robots.
(Cont. from Strange)
You would be scared, but your grief of your friends turns into anger. You take out the Ultimate Weapon and blast E. Vile and his cronies to bits. You run to your friends. You set up the spaceship and pile all of your friends in it. You blast off and you realize there is a supernatural force in the air. Electricity! One by one, all of your friends come back to life. The electricity slowly leaves the room. The energy runs out. You cheer along with everyone else. Then, you notice that Young Flame isn’t cheering. She’s still crying. You see that Red Rock isn’t alive. Clean runs over and slaps her face. He starts crying too.
“NOOOOOO! RED ROCK!!!!!” he shouts.
Young Flame hugs him and cries into his shoulder. Clean does the same.
(To Be Cont.)
(Cont. from Young Flame.)
You wonder what to do, but then you hear a sound singing, “♫Aphrodite, Aphrodite, Aphrodite!♪” Then suddenly, she appears. “Oh, where did you come from?” you ask.
“I came from Mythology Island. There’s no time left!” She blows a kiss, and hearts float from the ceiling and swirl around Red Rock. “This is the circle of love Red Rock is receiving from Young Flame and Clean. You must give her your love to be able to give his life back,” she explains.
You, caring for your friend, go over and do your best to support a dead body as you can. More circles come and circle him. Then they start spinning really fast, and you think that you see his eyes blink….
(My inspiration comes from here: http://www.quietyoutube.com/watch?v=4ZxdDZMIir0 )
“RED ROCK!!!!!!” Clean and Young say in unison.
You smile and her her.
“Wait. I think something is about to happen. Something bad. I can feel it,” Gentle Toe says.
“What do you mean?” Friendly Turtle asks.
“It means we need to prepare for battle,” Calm Toe replies.
(To Be Cont.)
(continued fom young flame)
“battle what battle?” you say.
“look out!” super said.
super pushs you out of the way as a lighting bolt strikes the ground.
“i think we just found out” clean said.
“look it’s zeus” super said.
(to be continued)
You shoot him with your Ultimate Weapon set on Ultimate Destroy. He doesn’t budge. You see the pink clouds like in Mythology Island and realize you need a good old fashion Mythology Island fight. You get out the trident and crown from the other Big Three (I read Percy Jackson. Fun Fact- Hades’ item isn’t a crown it’s a mask, I forget what it’s called. It makes the wearer invisible.) You shoot Zeus with the bolts. He explodes.
“I have a feeling that was only the beginning. I think we need to defeat each Poptropica villain in the fashion we had to defeat them in their islands. The other ones, we need to battle hand-to-hand and sword-to-sword and bow-and-arrow-to-bow-and-arrow, and.. Well, you get the idea,” says Calm Toe.
“She’s right,” says a voice. You look up and see….
(To Be Cont.)
(The Helm of Darkness.)
You see Captain Crawfish! You try and use some cannonballs on him,and he falls too.Some time later,you defeat all the villains,and the hoverotronax lands on another island.”What’s this place?”,you ask.
“It looks like”,Calm says. “Time Tangled!”,another voice says. “Strange!How are you?”,Hopper asks. “I’m really sorry,I can’t chat right now…you know,fashionista work.” And he runs off. “Well,I guess we should do something now.” “Nah,let’s cool off for some while,let’s go to that book store over there.”,says Gentle.
You enter the store. There seems to be all kinds of books. “Hello!”,says the receptionist,Miss Incredible Storm. “We have plenty of books here,here’s a list of the most popular books you may like. Check it out! Have a nice day!”
Booktropica- Most Popular Books
1.The Complete set of Official Books by The Creators- 500 Credits.
2.Poptropica for Dummies by Doctor Magic Onion- 230 Credits.
3.The Guide to a Fashionista by Sticky Clown,Slippery Icicle & Spotted Dragon-635 Credits.
4.Poptropica Universe by Fearless Fox and Tough Spider-120 Credits.
5.The Chronicles of Sleepy Feather by Sleepy Feather-180 Credits.
6.The Adventures of Clean Shark by Clean Shark-950 Credits.
7.Island X-A PHB Ongoing Story Creation by the PHB-1000 Credits.
8.History of Villainy by Gentle Spinner-700 Credits.
9.Poptropolis- A History by The Early Poptropicans-960 Credits
10.A Tour of Poptropica by Doctor Pendulum.
You wonder what to buy,also noticing some familiar names on the way.
(The last one is 200 Credits.)
(Found the references,yet?)
(How does a set of books cost less than the ongoing story?)
(Coz everyone’s bored by them.)
(And yes. Creators, Magic Onion, Sticky, Clean, and yeah.)
(continued from strange)
you decide to buy the island x one.
“let me see that” Super said.
you give super the book.
Super opens it.
“no way!” Super said.
“what is it?” Clean said.
“were in the book!” Super said.
“what? but thats impossble” you say.
“hare see for yourself” super said.
(to be continued)
You get shocked. the first paragraph says:
“Um, hello. I’m here to register for something called, uh, ‘Poptropica’?” Amidst the realm of blue vines in front of you, a crate, small and wooden, bounces out, shaking blue dust and spitting out a question of your gender. You stare incredulously before you finally manage to respond. “I’m a boy,” you tell the little box, and then it erupts a circle of numbers in individual bubbles as it asks you the next question. This is a very strange sign-up process, you think to yourself, as you decide to tell the box etched with a curious question mark that you are 9 years old.
“Your name is Jumpy Jumper. When you are ready, hop into the blimp and travel to any island.” You ponder the map for a while, but decide none of the islands suit you. “There’s got to be something better…” you mutter to yourself. Just then, you see it. Out of the corner of your eye, there’s another island, shrouded in mystery by layers of smog and unidentifiable smells. Island X.
“But no one’s ever been there before,” the voice warns, the voice of the box that had guided your creation earlier. “Jumpy Jumper, JJ, you can’t… how did that even get on the map anyway? It’s not safe… please no… JJ!!” But it’s too late. You’re gone.
You read till:
you decide to buy the island x one.
“let me see that” Super said.
you give super the book.
Super opens it.
“no way!” Super said.
“what is it?” Clean said.
“were in the book!” Super said.
“what? but that’s impossible” you say.
“hare see for yourself” super said.
“Wha…I can see something being written right now! ” “And…it’s being written by the PHB!”,says Super. “We’ve got to go!JJ,the PHB headquarters are in Super Power.We’d better ask them a few questions.”
And thus,you travel to the HQ of the PHB.There’s are sign saying,’Pop Inside the PHB- We’re your Poptropica Key’. You enter the HQ. You immediately gasp.
It’s the most beautiful thing you’ve ever seen!
(To be Continued! And we’re now having a….
Commercial Break!
Pop Inside the PHB- We’re your Poptropica Key!
Wow….it might be just be the longest part yet!Er….see ya later,bloggers!You…know….TO BE CONTINUED!
Bai!
-SC-Kitty Kitty Kitty Kitty Cat!
Now,back to our regular show,Dancing with Director D!
*dun dun dun dun dun dun* )
( How did this get moderated so fast?)
The HQ is beautiful. There is a long hallway built of crystals. You can even feel the AC. You continue past the hallway to reach the main room. It is full of random bloggers. You even see Strange there,who seems to be ‘contributing’ to the Ongoing Story.
You see the receptionist. “Uh…hello,I’d like to meet…uh…Slanted Fish please?” She laughs. “Well,I suppose we could give it a try…your name?” “Jumpy Jumper.” She gasps. “Yes,oh great one. Just take a right turn and then go straight.”
You alone (since your friends were too busy chatting with bloggers or being awed at the building) go to Slanted Fish’s office. You knock.
“Come in!”says the same voice from the feast,but in a business-type voice. You enter. “JJ?!”,she screams. “Come in,come in,I wasn’t exactly expecting you.”
“Uh…I wanted to ask you a que-wait a minute,what happened to you in the feast?!” “Well,JJ,I managed to somehow escape,along with Thinknoodles and ‘Hippie Man’ ,as they call him, by the back door. Wonder how no one thought of that.”
“Yeah,anyways,I want to ask you about this.” You raise the book.
“yes that well you see jj were just doing this for fun” slanted fish said.
“oh” you say.
“what you think thats it?” slanted fish said.
“well yeah i defeted all the bad guys so whats thare to write about?” you said.
“oh jj i’m sorry to tell you this but thares one villain left and it’s one of your friends” slanted fish said.
you gasp.
“what who is the last villain?” you say.
“the last villain is….” slanted fish said.
(to be continued)
(Typo there just noticed the typo)
“None other than-Ah!”and she faints.”Who’s that?”You ask?”
“None other than you,” says a voice. You spin around and see Young Flame!!!
“How could you!” you exclaim, “I trusted you!”
Then you notice something different about her.
(To Be Cont.)
You see that she is wearing E.Vile’s helmet.” My master will be thoroughly pleased.You may have destroyed him,but he somehow lives.Now,prepare to meet your doom,E.Vile style.”
(Sorry. I didn’t see your comment. i was busy making mine! :oops:)
You fight until it looks like you’re about to win. Then Young Flame runs away and is replaced by Red Rock. You fight her until you’re about to win and she disappears.
“Fine. It looks like I’m going to have to fight you myself,” says a robotic voice.
Out from the shadows steps….
(To Be Cont.)
(BTW, I have an awesome idea for the island contest. It’s kinds like this you know an all villain fight. I’m gonna post more about it on my blog.)
“Hopper?!” “You thought I reformed Jumper? Me sending everyone after you,too?Cyborg,get him!”
But before you can attack Cyborg,he takes his mike and sings loudly,knocking you out.
When you wake up, you are in a rubber room in a straight jacket.
“Well, well, well. It looks like our little hero is stuck and helpless. Cyborg, get him for real!”
Cyborg kicks you and hits you,making you bleed terrifically .”Just one more hit,Cyborg.” “Y-yes…..m-master…..” and he faints. “Grr…I’ll have the final blow then!”
You see Hopper lave the watching room. Cyborg gets up and whispers-
“JJ, get out of here! Go back to Island X.”
He cuts you loose and replaces you with a robot of you. You teleport back to Island X.
(Another RJ?!)
But since you’re so bruised,you can barely move.Then you hear Hopper say something.”Now,now,my sweet monsters,your time will come.”
You look at the map. You see an island in the idea stage, though you don’t know why. Its called Dreamscape. You teleport there. You notice that it is off the map now. You look around. It looks like a normal neighborhood.
(BTW Dreamscape is my island idea in case you were wondering)
(From Young Flame)
You wonder, ‘Where is the pizza shop?” Then you see it materialize. You have an idea. “I want to go to the unicorn shop.” Behold; you’re in a shop where you can buy unicorns! You realize that since it is in the idea stage, then your ideas must be part of the island for a while. So, you wish for a force field around you that cannot be broken. Boom! There it is. “Let’s just hope some other person doesn’t wish this away,” you think.
You then wish that your friends could be there. They are. You then wish you can get there whenever you want.
“Guys, we need a plan,” you say.
(continued from young flame)
“i got an idea since what we wish for comes ture hare maybe we can use the stuff we wish for to defeat hopper” super said.
“super thats a super idea” you say.
“well thank you now what to wish for oh i know i wish we had super powers” super said.
and poof you and your friends get super powers.
“cool i can fly” you say.
“this is cool i wish hopper was hare so we cloud battle him” super said.
“what about me?” hopper said.
“Super!” everyone shouted.
“sorry at lest i didn’t say i wish he was a super villain” super said.
poof! hopper becomes a super villain.
“opps! sorry” super said.
(to be continued)
“Oh no,that’s okay.”,says Hopper. “I wish that you all wouldn’t be able to wish.And I also wish everything you have will be taken away.” For a second,you almost see a sympathetic look on him,but he immediately changes back to his cold look. “My master….awaits me. I must restore his soul. And I wish you’d get knocked out.”
And then you get knocked out. When you wake up,you realize that you’re in Island X,along with everyone else. Strange is too,asking everyone what happened. “What?! That’s the second cousin I’ve heard of who fell for E.Vile! You know,”,he says,looking at Clean,” him .”
“Oh,yeah. Him. ” “Who?”,asks Super,but then you see a cottage. “Look! We should enter that.” You enter it. You hear a noise that comes from the wardrobe. You open it to find the Pop Squad tied up!
When you untie them,they say,”Someone knocked us out and put us here.” Then you see a chest nearby.”This seems to need a key.”,you say. Then you see a plaque above it. ‘This is the property of Little Hopper,ringmaster of Monster Carnival.”
“Hmm,I don’t have a weapon anymore,but something tells me that the key is in the plaque,and there’s a hidden mechanism there to open it. We should look around the house for something out of place. I also think something that Hopper wants is in this chest,and we must get this at all costs.”
(Say,Fishy,you don’t have to make a summary,but can you contribute as well to the story as well?)
(continued from strange)
“okay after we do all of that we need someway to defeat hopper” super said.
so you and your friends look around.
then you find a lever and pull it.
the plaque opens.
“theres the key” you say.
you get the key.
“okay now let’s open this before we know who shows up” super said.
you open the chest inside you find…
(to be continued)
You find a whistle (probably for the monsters,not to be used),another key a package (glued too tightly to be opened) and a note. “What’s in the note?”,Wild Monster asks. “It says…’
My dear fellow villains,
This package will contain one thing we all desire. But we have to hide it near Bucktooth Island. No one will find it there. The only thing which will prevent us is that Sticky Clown and his navigator,always sailing the seas and trading,or just being a fashionista.
Let us hope this will not be lost.
Your colleague,
Little Hopper.
“Wait a minute,”Strange says,”I DID dock there that day. And the package-that’s what my navigator found!” You gasp. You try and open the package,but it’s glued too tight. “What’s the key for,anyway?”,asks Comical. “I don’t know,but we’ll have to take the note,package and key.They might be useful.”
Suddenly,you hear footsteps coming near the house. “Quick,let’s hide!”,says Clean Shadow.
(Oh,and JJ also took the whistle,and forgot to mention it. )
You manage to hide and take the objects just in time,before Cyborg comes. “M-master! Some one has been here!” Hopper arrives. “Wha-no!” Then you notice that he is wearing E.Vile’s helmet like Young Flame did.”Help me,master! Help me! And suddenly,a voice comes out of the helmet. “ They….are…here..come out,fools.”
You don’t come out. Finally they leave,Hopper locking the door on the outside. “Great,now we’re stuck here.”,you say. “JJ,’Super says,”I think it’s time to think about what we know,mysterious clues,and how they all fit to make sense.” “You’re right.” You all go to the living room. Clean takes out a notepad. “So,what are the clues we have?”
(continued from strange)
“well let’s think there’s the whistle., the box., and the key and then there’s the helmet” super said.
“wait a minute of course!” super said.
“wait what do you mean?” you say.
“think about it when young flame put that helmet on she became under some sort of trance” super said.
“wait are you saying what I think your saying?” clean said.
“I think hopper is under some sort of trance that helmet must have brainwashing powers” super said.
(to be continued)
“Good point,Super.” “Hear,hear!”,says Silver Wolf. “Now ,something else,who was Strange referring to when he said,”What?! That’s the second cousin I’ve heard of who fell for E.Vile! You know, him .” Strange sighs,”Now is not the time. When it has come,we will tell you of that.”
You try and think about something. The dreams…the Navigator shouting…Clean and Fearless talking about PEAS…Zack untying….wait a minute! “Guys,I didn’t want to tell you this,but I had a third dream.” You tell them about it. Super looks white the whole time. “Oh no! That can’t be!”,screams Beefy Owl. But before anyone can react,Cyborg Shark breaks open the door,and Hopper enters.
You knock the helmet off of Hopper and slap him. He goes out cold. You turn to Cyborg.
“No! No! I’ll do it myself!!” he says and turns himself off. You explain.
“We need to find Zachary E. Vile! ….
(when’s the next story part? ^-^)
Suddenly,Hopper gets up,puts on the helmet,and switches on Cyborg. But Clean jumps behind them and knocks them out and ties them up. When they wake up ,Hopper shouts,”I’ll give you 500 Credits if you free me! 750! 100!” “You’re not going to bribe us,Hopper! “I can give you back your weapon!”
There is a short silence. Are you sure you want to accept the offer?
“Weapon first. Then I’ll free you,” you say. Hopper hands you your weapon. You Set it to destroy and zap him.
“LIAAAAAAAAAR!!!!”
“Now what?”
“Zach,” says Friendly Turtle sadly.
“Wait!” You turn around to see the ghost of Hopper. “What do you want,Hopper?”,Super growls. “Well,First of,JJ,I want to hank you. By killing me,I got rid of that helmet.” He points to it on the floor. “I accidentally found that when you destroyed E.Vile. When I put it on…” He shudders. “You have no idea how much evil transported into me,and Young Flame and Red Rock. He made me do his evil chores.”
Everyone shudders. “However,part of my good self was still in me. The time I left the watching room,I commanded Cyborg through my mind to teleport to to my island.” “I…I don’t believe you.”,you say. “Oh,but didn’t you see a sympathetic look on my face a few times?” “Uh…yeah.”
“Exactly. Now,straight to the point.” He touches his chest,then yours. “There.You now have inherited some of my powers. You can control Cyborg and the monsters,etc. Oh,and also JJ,not everything is done. Something wrong happened to Sprocket on the day you arrived at Island X. He wouldn’t have done that. I know him. He’s the Nanobot’s mascot.”
You want to ask what Nanobots is,but you don’t say anything. “And also,you have to defeat minor villains,villains who barely get a nice role. For example,Mr.Silva,Director D,Gretchen Grimlock.And you also have to– to –avenge me. Bring back Monster Carnival to life,JJ. To it’s former fame and glory.Oh,and wile you’re at it,destroy that helmet.Now,all I’ve got to do is to bring myself back to life. Bye,Jumpy,Clean,everyone.”
And he vanishes. Everyone is silent,except Clean,who is sobbing. Suddenly,Cyborg awakens. He looks towards you. “Co-command- mast-ter?” “Destroy the helmet,Cyborg.” He shoots at it. It explodes,but some sparks fall,and suddenly,part of the house is on fire. And the fire-it resembles E.Vile! “I will finally have my revenge,Jumper.” The fiery E.Vile grins.
(*thank)
(*whie)
(This is just a repeat of everyone else’s part of the story. The same thing happens over and over again. No offense, I’m just stating my opinion.)
You wave Hopper’s body good bye. You think that it was overly dramatic and cheesy though.
“Let’s go find Sprocket,” You say and you go to Steamworks. You find and fix him.
“Where is Zach?!?!?” says Red Rock in a tone that scares you.
“I-I-I d-d-don’t kn-know. H-He asked me t-t-to j-join his a-army and I said n-n-no. He beat m-m-me up and left. I-I-I-I was too d-d-destroyed to k-k-keep going. I p-p-p-passd out,” Sprocket said.
“OK, OK. Don’t be scared. We need to find Zachary E. Vile. We want to destroy him and he needs you to help him but they need you to help him,” a fake high-pitched voice said, but at the end his voice lowered and became louder and scarier.
“ZACH!”
(I thought his name was Zack.
(Sorry, it is. A kid in my class is named Zach)
You take the weapon and set it on Aqua mode,and fire it at the fire E.Vile. He seems to be too fiery to be put out. What can you do? Friendly Turtle comes up with something. “Strange,do you have a fireman costume?” “30 Credits.” “What?!” “For each.” “But this is an emergency.” “Well,I could rent it to you for 5 credits each.” “Here,’,he says,giving something between 100 and 50 Credits.
“Okay,I’ll get it.”And he vanishes. He comes back with someone who looks familiar. “Thirsty Lightning?!”,asks Clean. “Who’s this?”,asks Turtle. “A friend of mine,Thirsty Lighting.” “I told her what was going on and she wanted to help. Anyway,here are your firemen costumes.” And he vanishes to who-knows-where.
“Say,haven’t I seen you before?”,you ask Thirsty.”I freed the trapped heroes that time when Hopper was thinking he was E.Vile,and knocked some robots with my Spud Gun.” “Oh,yeah.” You all put on the firemen costumes. The E.Vile of fire grins evilly.
Even with all the water,E.Vile doesn’t burn out. You have an idea. You take the weapon and put it on Multiply,and use it on the water to create a water ball,and throw it at E.Vile. He immediately extinguishes. Everyone sighs in relief. “Hey,JJ! Look at this!” ,says Clean,pointing to his laptop. It says,
” Hello,all you Poptropicans. Pirate encounters are too much tiring for me,argh! And the fools,they keep comin’ back t’ life! Well,now we’ve stopped this. No Poptropican will come back using any kind of retriever from now on. Ye don’t believe it? Then see fer yerself.
Captain Crawfish. ”
“That pirate’s thought of everything! Now we’re vulnerable to everything!” “Anyway,’says Thirsty,”now that you have the weapon,you can open the package.” “You’re right!” You set it to unlock and open the package. In it there is a safe with the keyhole. You put the same key from the chest into it,and it opens.
In it is a small socket. You open that and find a ring. “How’s that helpful?!” “Wait,the bead,(made of sapphire) is loose. You open THAT and find a small note. “You give it to Clean. He puts a magnifying glass on it. It says,
“When you see the blue,
and meet the hue,
you will see,love that is true,
and do remember,this is a very major clue.
P.S.Send this to the cutest of them all,and you will find the answer.”
“What’s this supposed to mean?!”,asks everyone except Clean. “I think there might be something in this house that could be useful.” “Cyborg,search for something like this!”,you say,showing the message. “I-it is in the at-tti-tic ,mas–aster. Bu-but I,C-cyborg—- can-ann-not ff–ffind it.” “What?Cyborg,I’ve gotta fix you. ” Sometime later,you fix his voice.
“It is in the attic,master,but I cannot find it.” “What?!Why not?” “I,Cyborg Shark,is not supposed to tell.” “But-” Suddenly,Cyborg breaks into a familiar voice,shouting,”Help! Help! I didn’t do it! I never!Oh,where’s my Horse? Where is it,you goons?” “That’s the voice which lead us to the woods!But why-”
“JJ,isn’t it obvious?Somehow E.Vile was influencing Hopper before he found the helmet,so he made Cyborg stage that voice,which Queen Cobra used for herself to lure you into the graveyard,but unfortunately,Hopper wanted to kill you by Cyborg,and he couldn’t take the blame,seeing as he was elsewhere!”
There is an awkward silence. “Yeah,I’ll go and look in the attic.”,Super says,rushing away. Suddenly,Red Lizard (Strange’s wife) and Bendy Pear (his son) come in. “Morning,Clean. Did you call us here?” “No,I didn’t. And I didn’t call you that time in Super Villain Island too.”
“But,then what did?!” “I did.”,comes a voice from the darkness,revealing a mind controlled Sprocket!
(continued from strange)
“sprocket what are you doing hare?” you say.
“I’m hare to destory you along with your friends” sprocket said.
“somethings wrong with him” Clean said.
then you notice that sprocket is wearing a mind controling helmet.
“Clean you distract him” you say.
“okay i hope you know what your doing” Clean said.
meanwhile in the attic super looks around.
“this place gives me the creeps” super said.
then something moves.
“who’s there?” super said.
but no one responded.
“i must be imagineing things” super said..
so super continued to look around but she geting the feeling that she wasn’t alone.
(to be continued)
(Typo got another typo)
“Hey,Nanobot! Wildfire is better!” Sprocket turns and growls. “Fool! Popularity does not matter. We won the most,yet we were second last place! Do you realiz what we have been through?! And-” You shoot the weapon at his mind controlling helmet,and he comes back to normal.
Meanwhile,in the attic,Super was looking through some notes and papers. “Some old archives from 2007,notes to pleading Zeus,archives from 2010,a small notebook,and- Aha,here it is! I’d better show JJ this.” So she walked towards the entrance to the attic,but it was locked! “Give me that,little Grape,or face your death.”,a voice growled.
“No! I am NOT in the mood!” Super shouts.
“Well, then, when you put it that way, um, I guess, I could, um, like, let you by,” the voice mumbles. Super grabs the notebook and note and flees the attic, only to find herself, alone may I add, with…
(With who? Where are her friends? Where’s Sprocket?)
The cloaked figure from the attic! Super tried to fight him/her,but it withstood her,and hid her in the wardrobe!
Meanwhile,after you freed Sprocket,he told that a villain mind-controlled him to steal the statue and accuse you of it. He also wanted to try and kill Red and Bendy by making False phone calls from Clean. “What is Poptropolis,anyway?” “You don’t know?Come,we must go!” And then you travel to a small are which seems as if something was there. “This,JJ,is Poptropolis.”
(continued from strange)
“what happend?” you say.
“it sank” Sprocket said.
“well wait where’s super? wait i remember she went in the attic back at that house” you say.
“she may be in trouble we need to go to that house and look for her” Clean said.
meanwhile at the house the cloaked fiqure took super out of the wardrope and ties her up.
“who are you?” super said.
“to you your worse nightmare” the fiqure said.
“you won’t get away with this” super said.
“oh i already have” the fiqure said.
“what do you want with me anyway?” super said.
(to be continued)
(MAN! I MADE SO MANY TYPOS!)
(Continued from Super) Everyone goes back to the house, and they go to the attic. “This, is you all.” The figure says, holding a bunch of LEGO Minifigures, and he pops the heads off. “Error, Poptropicans can’t get beheaded! The heads float, they spring back to the bodies. “Oh, my bad. I’ll just twist the heads around…” he then revealed that on the other side was X’s for their eyes, and their tongues sticking out. You charge for the figure and the hood comes off, and it’s Zack wearing E. Vile’s helmet! You shoot the Ultimate Weapon at the helmet and it’s destroyed. “Oh… What happened??” Zack said. “Zack? Zack!” Sprocket had a big smile on his face. “Sprocket! I don’t know what happened, I was happily modifiying the mech, and then, someone came from behind and splat that helmet on me! But thanks, I owe you one, buddy.” Zack said to you. Suddenly, Hopper comes in, and he says, “Guess who’s alive again?” Everyone, especially Clean, rejoices that he’s good and alive again. Suddenly, someone comes up and laughs evilly. (To be Continued)
It’s Robo Jumper! “RJ?!” “Guess who mind-controlled Sprocket? Guess who influenced E.Vile in Hopper? Guess who put the helmet on Zack? Me! This is a warning,Jumper. You have no idea who you’re up against.” “E.Vile!” “Who is the real E.Vile?! All the E.Viles were fake,from Hopper to Zeus to Zack. Who is the real E.Vile?! Anyway,surrender now Jumper. You will be facing misery of your worst dreams.” “No!”
“I warned you.” And he disappears.
(continued from strange)
“i wonder what he was warning us about oh well let’s get Super and get out of hare” Clean said.
“not so fast!” hissed a voice.
then Super comes out from the shadows.
super throws knock out gas bombs at you and your friends.
when you wake up you find yourself in a cage in a circus tent.
super is standing next to the cage.
“Super why are you doing this?” you say.
then you notice that she’s wearing e.vile’s helmet.
how many helmets does this guy have? you wonder.
cybrog is next to Super.
“i have reprogramed him he obeys me now and soon i will destroy you!” Super said.
“Muhahahaha!” Super laughed.
“Super snap out of it” you say.
“come on cybrog let’s go see how our other prisoners are doing” Super said.
“yes mistress” Cybrog said.
super leaves.
(to be continued)
You use your freaky Chosen One powers to free yourself. You make Super go back to normal and free your friends.
“Wait. Where’s Red Rock and Young Flame,”
“Here. You have given us no other choice. We are running out of helmets and victims. We are E. Vile. We are working together to take over Poptropica. No one would suspect us, since E. Vile is supposed to be a boy and only one person. And now, we will destroy you and your puny friends. We know your weaknesses, Jumper. I know what makes you tick and what makes you weak. I am your girlfriend and your worst nightmare,” Young Flame says.
“And Clean. Poor, poor Clean. You were willing to kill your friend for me. For E. Vile. You were about to kill you only chance of survival for who you thought I was. Big mistake,” Red Rock says and slashes at Clean with a 10 ft. glowing sword. (I forgot to mention they grew like 10 ft.).
“NOOOOO!” you say and jump in front of Clean. You get cut across the chest and fall. You black out.
(Continued from Young Flame) “Uh… T- that wasn’t smart of him, was it? Um, I’ll just be, uh, going now!” Clean said, an idea in his head, he grabbed Hopper, who grabbed Sticky, who grabbed JJ’s body. Clean grabbed the magic mirror from Mythology, and where he exactly went was concealed by the two E. Viles. They went to Mount Olympus’ gate which was right next to Clean’s extra blimp, and he went to an Island in the idea stage, called Journey to the Center of Poptropica Island. (My idea that I will enter in the Create Your Dream Island Contest) “This is my dream Island, we are able to hide in the cave.” When they get there, Queen Cobra is standing there. “Oh, yeah, I forgot that she’s going to be the Villain of it. I wish she was not alive unless the Island comes out” Clean said, and with that, she disappeared. “I wish there is a forcefield around us.” With that, there was a forcefield around them. “I wish JJ was alive again.” And with that, you came back to life. “Also, I wish that a villain can’t wish or undo our wishes.” Clean said. You and the others went through the hole leading to the center of Poptropica, and then you wish that if Red and Young find their way there, they can’t do any harm. Suddenly, a duet of evil laughs appears… (To Be Continued…)
(Nice. Name is a little wordy. I would change it. And you’re lucky I decided to create a different villain because I created Queen Cobra. Permission granted to use her. 😉 )
(BTW I made Queen Cobra, but I made a different villain for my island so permission granted for use. And, just my opinion, but I think the island name was a little wordy.)
(I couldn’t think of anything better. Got any better suggestions?)
(Uh, Trip to the Core? No. That doesn’t sound like a title Poptropica Core Island? I like that!)
You look and see Young and Red.
“Before you made all those silly wishes, we wished that you couldn’t make us powerless or anything against us. We also wished that we can make wishes, and any wishes. I wish all your wishes are undone,” Red Rock says. You fall to the ground. “I also wish Clean was dead. Bu bye, sweetheart . MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!”
“Oh no she didn’t!!! I wish-” The twins start in unison.
“Nope! I wish you can’t make any wishes. I also wish we can make wishes on any island. And that we always follow you wherever you go unless we say otherwise,” Young Flame says.
They worked together. They rose their swords and were about to kill everyone at once. They start to swing down and……
(Continued from Young Flame) Zack, Super Grape, and Clean Shark came up behind them, and attacked. You look over a Clean Shark’s body, the one of the dead one. You notice that there’s- STUFFING on him! “End of the line, Red!” Clean says, he pulls out his Ninja Stars, and then throws them at Red. She’s dead. “NO!” Young shouts, and before she could attack, he vanished. You saw something move around in the air, and you see the Bolt, but you have no idea what’s holding it, but you see that it stabs Young Flame through the back. (To be Continued…)
(P.S. Sorry for killing you, Young Flame, but something had to stop you and Red from ruling Poptropica!)
(Eh. It’s fine. I knew it was coming. Maybe I can make myself come alive again. *thinks about it*)
(No,sorry,the post CC made about reviving-well,it’s permanent. AND I just had to say this when Young,Red,Clean and JJ died.)
Another girl comes running into the place (BTW I guess JJ cmae alive in Clean’s post).
“How many more people do we need?!?!?” you ask.
“NO! RED! YOUNG! WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO THEM!?!?!?!?” the girl shouts.
“Um, we killed them. They were evil. They were E. Vile,” Beefy Owl says.
“Huh?”
“Evil, like the adjective, and E. like the letter and Vile. Not that complex. Anyway, they were trying to take over Poptropica, so..” she sliced her hand across her would-be throat.
“No. This can’t be. When did this start?” the girl asks.
“Um, well E. Vile popped up like a year ago, so… ya,” you say.
“No. I refuse to believe this,” the girl says.
As if on cue, the spirits of the twins rise.
“Our sister is right. We were never evil, the adjective. Someone bewitched us to wnt to destroy the world. When you killed us, you freed us. Thank you, JJ. And remember, I still love you,” Young Flame says. Her soul rises into the heavens.
“She is right, Jumpy. Her emotions were true. That is what saved your life. Our master forced us to show our true form and we had to obey, or our sister would pay the ultimate price. And Clean, I still love you,” Red Rock says and she follows her sister.
You collapse and start sobbing. You feel like you can die. Clean does the same. You wish you could follow Young Flame and you do.
‘”JJ! What are you doing here!” Young cries.
“I wanted to be with you,” you reply.
“No. It’s not safe here! You must leave!”
(Why is it unsafe? To Be Cont.)
Meanwhile, down on earth….
“So who are you again?” Super asks, stepping over JJ and Cleans sobbing bodies.
“I’m Mighty Tornado, their younger sister. They always protected me after our mother, Big Hero, died. I was heartbroken and they helped me get through it. They were my only friends and they kept me from the dangers of the world. Now they are gone, and my life is changed. They were my best friends, and you killed them,” Mighty Tornado said. She went over to a nearby log and started crying. Beefy Owl went to comfort her. Then Gentle Toe noticed something.
“Hey guys! JJ stopped crying. And he’s not moving,” she says in an urgent tone.
“My sister’s boyfriend! No! He can’t be dead too! Young Flame said so much about him. She said he would protect me if anything happened to her. NO!” Mighty Tornado said.
(To Be Cont.)
(One minute. When Clean was talking about JJ’s second dream,he said that your mother was Curious Flame. Then again,Big Hero could have been a step-mother,a good one.)
(Big Hero is another one of my accounts. Maybe Curious Flame was my stepmother.)
The spirit of Young Flame leaves. You realize this is where you were made. You see the Signup Box watching another Poptropican go to the skies. “Next arrival in…20 minutes. Ah,JJ. Come,come my boy.”
“What happened?” “Well…you died.” “But then I can’t get revived! But how did Hopper-” “He revived himself 2 minutes before they made the post.He was lucky.BUT I can revive you. I will also give you a choice.You will be allowed to take back one person with you. Who shall it be?”
You think and think. “Young-” But you see her spirit shake her head,so you say,”Clean.Clean Shark.” “Your choice is made.And to remember to read Super’s note.”
And you come back to life.
After a lot of grieving over Young and Red,and laughter over you and Clean,you finally ask Super for the note.She gives you it. It says…
(I never said Clean died.)
(Yeah, even when he DID die, it was just a dummy- I mean mannequin. Then Clean turned on the Phantom power, so that he could free Young and Red.)
“ Dear Hopper,
How are you? I’ve been to Steamworks recently,Sprocket must be the cutest of them all. Anyway,how’s your house?And your old monsters? Not much to say here
You Cousin,Clean. ”
“Guys,Sprocket is the cutest of them all! Of course!” “Did someone mention me?”,asks Sprocket. You give Sprocket the clue in the package. “Hmmm…..JJ,I can figure out most of it.
When you see the blue,
and meet the hue,
and you see,love that is true,
and do remember,this is a very major clue.
This means when you see the blue of Nightcrawlers,
and meet the hue of Flying Squid,
and see Seraphim’s true love,
you may meet your tribe!
Come,JJ,we must go to Poptropolis!”
(Guys,happy 500th Comment!)
And so,you leave the island and go to an island near Poptropolis. “We will sort you into your tribes here.” You see a few of your friends leave for some reason,through a guarded gateway.When you reach the waiting room,it’s already your turn.When you enter the sorting hall,a song begins,
“ Welcome to the Sorting Hall,
We’ll give you tests,bigger than a mall,
There are currently tribes of eight,
you could be a robot,squid or bait.
Will you end up in Flying Squid,yes,that’s their name,
their goal is to win the Poptropolis games,
these cephalopods cannot be dismantled,
nor can they be slaughtered or shuffled,
will you end up in their Tribe?”
After a long song of Tribes,you finally begin the sorting test. “Let us acknowledge the leaders of the Tribes,
First:The Flying Squid leader:Slanted Fish!Then,the Wildfire leader,Clean Shark!Then,the Yellowjackets leader,Strange Clown!Then,the Pathfinders leader,Gentle Spinner!And the leader of Black Flags,Brave Tomato!Then,the greatest bait of Nightcrawlers,Fearless Pelican!There’s the greatest Seraphim,Tough Icicle! And finally,the Nanobots leader,Stick-I mean,Strange Cat,Weirdo and Fashionista!”
And the guy passes out. Slanted Fish shouts,”Let the test of the Squids start!”
You test.
“Hmm. This is a hard one. He could be in either Nanobots or Pathfinders. I’d ask the co-leaders, but they have both died. Prehaps you knew them? Young Flame of Nanobots and Red Rock of Pathfinders,” says Slanted Fish. “I think you should choose one of those two. So, which will it be?”
“I will choose…
But before you reply,the empty space in the middle is filled with a ninth tribe! And the logo is of the statue Sprocket gave you! A name rises up,’Flowertire.” There is a short silence,interrupted by Gentle Spinner saying,”Here it is. The ninth tribe.”
(continued from strange)
“theres a ninth tribe? i did not see that comeing so whos the leader of that one?” you say.
“that would be me jumper” Super says as she steps out from behide the statue.
“super? but how did you get that statue?” you say.
“that i will tell later but right now you need to choose” Super said.
“right so i guess nanobots” you say.
(to be continued)
You step to the tribe. Young Flame’s spirit decends down.
“Good choice, Chosen One. I will guide you through your journey of the Nanobots. First you must make a choice. You must decide to save Island X or the island of Poptropolis. You must use all your power and might to save one,” she says. “There is a prophecy.
‘One must choose the path of the Chosen One
Two must be cursed and pay the Ultimate Price
Three will go on a special quest
Four will not live to see the end.'”
“That doesn’t make sense. Three will go but four will die?” you say.
“Yes, Chosen One. I cannot say the meaning, I can just say the words. Now, young one, you must choose your companions,” Young says.
“I choose…
Yay! Me!
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“Clean,Hopper,Friendly and…Super.” “So be it.” And she vanishes. You hear a major cheer from the Nanobots,especially from Strange. You go over to the Nanobots tribe. After leaving you ask Super how she got the statue. “Sprocket found it and gave it to me. And thanks for choosing me,Jumper.” “You’re welcome!”
Suddenly a Poptropican emerges. “Congrats,Jumpy Jumper! I am Carfis.W.Patchain,new co-leader of Nanobots! I welcome you to Nanobots!” You feel like you’ve heard him before,but you let him continue.
“Our lair is,”he reduces his voice to a whisper,”on top of Reality TV,above the TV shop.Speak into it,and say,”Stobonan.”,okay? If you need any help,ask me,or if it’s serious,ask our leader, Strange Cat. ”
He seemed to have a cold voice mentioning his leader for some reason. He continues on,telling you the history of Nanobots and so on. “So,anyway,congratulations on making it to the best tribe ever!” And he vanishes. As you go back,the spirit of Young Flame reappears. “I forgot to make you choose. Monster Carnival or Poptropolis?”
“Monster Carnival. Poptropolis will rise up in a few decades anyway.” And she vanishes,again.
You jump in your blimp and head to Island X. Super seems to be abnormal. You ask her what’s wrong. “Well,JJ,in case you didn’t know,you and E.Vile are…well,similar. He was looking for a way to restore Monster Carnival,but he got evil in the process. And..he was a Pathfinder. If you hadn’t chose to be a Nanobot…” she shudders.
You land on Island X. “Welcome to the Monster Carnival.This will be your last time here.”says a dark voice. You look around to see RJ,holding the ultimate shield. “It’s too late to surrender now,Jumper. Embrace your death.”,he jeers. You try to freeze him,but he holds the shield and it reflects back at you,freezing yourself!
RJ nearly hits Clean with his lasers,making him lean on you. But,you slide away! There is a cliff nearby. You see RJ disappear. You are so close to falling….and you fall.
You would have died,but the fall only makes the ice break.But you need to get back up. But,suddenly,the ocean seems to grab you. You try to fight back,but it’s useless. You get dragged into the sea.
When you wake up,you’re in a ship. But this is not Captain Crawfish’s ship,it’s belongs to Strange! “Help,Strange! Anyone!” “You won’t get help,Jumper.I fooled the captain into taking this,and the crew are locked in.” “Who are you?!”
“Oh,dear me,you don’t know me? I’m none other than an old friend of Captain Crawfish,also known as-wait,I’m not supposed to tell you that-anyway,my name is Lieutenant Lobster.” “What do you want?!” “I have what I want,don’t I,RJ?”
You suddenly realize RJ is here too! “Oh,yes,Lieutenant.” “Bring me Popular Penguin,RJ.” “The one who took the package the ship’s captain found?” “Yes, him .RJ comes back with a Poptropican. “Well,Popular,I think you owe our friend here an explanation.”
“Oh,yes,Lieutenant.” He turns to you. “You’re a Nanobot,Jumper?” How do you know that?!”,you ask,dumbfounded. “Oh,the Captain reported that.” “But how-“”Enough! This is what I’m here for Jumper.To explain,who I am. My fashionista cousin could never have recognized me as I rented this ship.” He grins evilly.
“You’re Strange’s cousin?! You’re him ?! The first cousin who fell for E.Vile?!” “YES,Jumper,yes! He knew there was something wrong with me that day,when I visited him. I was E.Vile’s personal assistant.”
And to add insult to injury he transforms into a small bat with a red eye,and back. “You were that bat?” “Yes,Jumper! Everyone thought I perished in that robot,but my master remade me! When he rules the world,I,I will be his chief torturer for the heroes!”
He looks at you carefully. “Cousin didn’t tell you how he resigned ? I made him like that. When he interrogated me,he was the only one who saw right through me. He sentenced me for 10 years in custody. everyone thought he loathed me because I was nice and polite,so he got -well, resigned .”
You are shocked. “Anyway Jumper,goodbye. You were an idiot!” And Lieutenant Lobster puts the weapon on annihilate,and fires at you.But,something incredible happens. The weapon backfires on Lobster,something that only the Ultimate Shield could do,blasting him into the water. Popular and RJ look at you in surprise. And then you faint.
(E. Vile died. They were freed, remember?)
(Not exactly, there were like, 11 different E. Viles.)
(Yeah, but they were fake, remember. Young and Red were influenced to make them evil E. Vile)
(But how do you know if you and Red were the Real E.Viles? They could’ve been influenced just as much as Hopper and Zack.)
(They made a real backstory. And look at my latest comment. And I made that part up. I want them to be E. Vile!!! *pouts*)
(Lol)
(continued from strange)
when you wake up you see super in front of you.
“jj are you alright?” super said.
“super? how did you” you say.
“well you see i followed rj on bored the ship i was careful not to get seen i found a sword and well you were out i gave those villains a taste of some girl power” super said.
you see popular unconscious and rj turned off.
then you see that super is wearing a necklace.
“i found this when i was in a wardrope and it had this note attached to it but i think it’s some werid language maybe you can make out what it says” super said.
super hands you the note it reads ….
(to be continued)
“Beware of the original wearer,
he is not any type of carer,
the owner is the Red Raccoon
he just loves macaroons.”
“What’s that supposed to mean?” “I know that as much as you do. Now,who is that guy over there?”,Super asks. “It’s….it’s him !”,Clean shouts. You tell Super and Hopper,along with Clean,about Popular Penguin. They’re shocked as much as you were.
“Wow,”Hopper says,leaning on RJ. Suddenly,he accidentally switches him on! RJ grabs the weapon AND the shield. “Great,” Super mutters,”Back to step 1.”
“Anyway,what should we do with Popular?” “ Him ? Well,we’ll sail him back to his cousin.Now let’s free the crew.” You go and unlock the room,but they’re all asleep. “While they’re sleeping,we must go and give Popular back to Strange.” So,you’re the captain,Super’s the navigator,Hopper’s the cannoneer,and once again,Clean’s the cook.
“Burnt toast with ketchup on it,”he says a few days later. The crew still hasn’t gained re-consciousness but you’ve almost reached land. Suddenly,Hopper shouts so loud that the crew wakes up,”WE’VE reached land!” “Wha?” “Where am I?” “Where’s the crook who locked us in here?”,the crew say.
You take Popular out on to land. Suddenly,the person you’ve wanted appears. “Hello,Nano-Jumpist,how are y- YOU !”,he suddenly shouts,noticing Popular. A large number of Poptropicans arrive. “It’s Popular?!” “What?He’s working for E.Vile?” “And I thought he was so polite!”
“Hi,cousin,”,Popular says casually. “You…how did you get on my ship?!” “I rented,cuz,from you!” Strange smashes his foot on Popular. “GET IT OUT! ADMIT IT! YOU’RE WORKING FOR E.VILE,AREN’T YOU?!”,he screams,sounding quite deranged.
” ‘Course I was,cuz.” A lot of murmurs come from the crowd. “Now get your foot off me,will ya?” A few news reporters are writing in their notepads,some taking pictures. “No,no,I will not.”,Strange says,more calm but still fierce. Popular shrugs. “Fine,cuz.I told ya so.” And he transforms back into a bat,and flies away/
“Hahaha,” RJ laughs in his robotic voice.
Suddenly, an arrow hits RJ. He explodes.
“Who did that?” you ask.
“JJ, you think I’ll just let you die? I’m your guardian angel,” a voice says. You look up and see Young descending down on you.
“I thought…but…you said..” you stutter.
“Hush little one. I was sent from the heavens in human form to protect you, but long before you were born. I was cursed by my old master and we couldn’t free ourselves. When you came along, we convinced him that you were a threat so I could watch over you. When you killed us, our master was mad, but we were free. Now, I can protect you. I will be here at the push of a button,” she says, gesturing to the necklace Super was wearing. It glowed and Super pressed the diamond.
“That will summon me. I will be here, JJ.”
And then you pass out.
(continued from young flame)
when you wake up you find yourself on land.
“we carried you out if you keep blacking out like that were goona have to take you to a hospital” Clean said.
“sorry” you say.
you see that super is still wearing the necklace.
“Super can you promise me something?” you say.
“yeah what?” Super said.
“promise me that you will never take that necklace off no matter what” you say.
“what! are you serious?” super said.
“yes i’m serious” you said.
“fine” super said.
Super raises her right hand.
“i Super Grape promise to never take this necklace off no matter what” super said.
(to be continued)
You look in the distance and see monsters.
Lots and lots of monsters. You fight them all. And win. Well, almost all of them are dead. You start to strike the last one but it growls and charges toward you. You see Young Flame, roll into hiding and pass out from exhaustion.
In your dreams, you see Young Flame.
“You will be protected. It’s too dangerous out there right now. You will wake up when it is safe,” she says.
(To Be Cont. What dangers do JJ’s friends face. And how to they overcome them? Or do they overcome them at all?)
“Good.” “Want flowers,Jumper?”,you go and see both RJ and Popular! “How-” “Oh,the Captain helped. And I must say Jumper,my cousin was exceptionally pleased to see me.Unfortunately,he trapped me and took photos and videos and all to prove that I was guilty.The Daily Pop’s printing them right now.Bye,Jumper!”And they vanish.
“Hi,Jumper. How’re ye?” You jump and see Carfis.W.Patchain,Young Flame’s replacement. “Oh,fine,Mr.Patchain.Where did you get your name?” “It’s an anagram of my real one.” Super gasps. “Then you’re C-” “Maybe we should settle this in private,Super.” He walks with her and comes back without her.
“Where is she?” “Elsewhere.” He closes the door and locks it. “Jumper,I’m going to tell ye somethin’. He writes down his name,and then touches it.
CARFIS W PATCHAIN
It turns into
CAPTAIN CRAWFISH
You remain silent. “Guess who reported ye to the Lieutenant,Jumper? Of course,I’m still Flying Squid forever,but,you know to much,and RJ has both the weapon and the shield,so,this is goodbye,Jumper.”
(I had one before. It was awaiting moderation.)
Suddenly,the door breaks open. “Eat dust,Crawfish!” And Patchain is swept by his feet. “Strange?” “I found Super in a locked room,and she told mke everything. What happened did *splutter* Popular come?” You explain everything to him. “Of course I should have known! The necklace you’re wearing Super,was on the Statue that Sprocket stole!”
“How so you know that?” “Because I borrowed the statue for making a costume,Jumpy! There’s something special
about that necklace!”
(Oh my GOD! This whole thing is SO COOL! I read almost all of it (some parts were super jumbled) and I really think that it should be compiled into a novel about the adventures of JJ and everyone else. It would be really cool if it was sold in book stores too- it would be the only book that was co-authored by so many different people. Don’t you think it’s a cool idea? Who’s with me!
(Sorry I forgot to put a parentheses at the end of the last post. I was so excited/distracted.)
(It would be kinda hard. For one thing, it’s ongoing, so they would have to make an ending, and two it would be hard to give credit where needed, but if they could do that, I would so buy it!)
(I have an idea! We should come up with a cliffhanger in the ongoing story. If everyone agrees, we can make a novel and end it there, with a promise that a sequel is already being written, which would be completely true. It would pick up from the cliffhanger. Wouldn’t that work? Yeah the credit for all the contributors will be tough. We could work it out, but that’s just my leap-at-all-opportunities mind talking.)
(I’d rather them just make up an ending. PLEASE CREATORS IF YOU ARE READING THIS!! PLEASE MAKE THIS A BOOK! OR AN ISLAND!)
(continued from strange)
“well that explans the note i found” super said.
“note? what note?” strange said.
“there was a note attached to the necklace” you say.
“really? what did it say?” strange said.
“beware of the original wearer,
he is not any type of carer,
the owner is the red raccoon,
he just loves macaroons,
do you what that is suppose to mean strange?” you say.
(to be continued)
“Um, no. Wait. I remember reading that if Crawfish eats too many macrons, he turns into a red raccoon. That’s his lesser known name. But why would he need a necklace?” Strange says.
“Arr. It’s called a treasure chest. Ye lads ever heard of a pirate? Anyways, I was sailing me ship after ye defeated me. I saw a chest and I picked it up. There was a necklace, and I decided to use it as a trap. And it worked! It was a little out there, I admit, but it worked! I poisoned it and now deadly venom if seeping through ye little mate’s veins. She has, like, 30 min before she meets her doom. Good luck lads not !” says Captain Crawfish. You jump and then feel lightheaded.
You close your eyes and see Young.
“I have sent help, the real replacement for the Co-Leader for Nanobots. She may be small, well five years younger than me, 9 to be exact, but she is fierce and she had more fire than Katniss and Cato combined! And there should be M&M’s in your pocket. They never run out, so they should help your low blood sugar. I will be watching you JJ!” she says and then you open your eyes. It looks like a tornado has gone through and all your friends and knocked out and bloody. You see Mighty Tornado again, she wasn’t with the group you chose. Captain Crawfish is gone. You see a phone sticking out of Tornado’s pocket. You open it. The last text message is from Young Flame. It says-
‘Hi sis! You are now the double Co-Leader of Pathfinders and Nanobots. You also need to help JJ on his quest. Use this phone if you need me. There is a part of the prophecy that I didn’t mention to JJ.
Five will work together in the end, and one will join.
Six will pay the price if that one dies.
Red Rock and I are a part of that 5. The six includes you, Mighty. Be careful. If you die, the mission fails. I am counting on you.
Your’s Truly
Young Flame, 14’
‘It’s a little wordy but it says everything,’ you think. Then you notice Mighty’s breathing has slowed too slow to be healthy. She looks pale, too pale. You are worried. You made a silent promise to keep Mighty Tornado alive, even before you read the text. You can’t let your girlfriend’s little sister die. You owe her that. But things don’t look too good. You can’t ask for help, but you can’t do it on your own. You also notice Super’s necklace is missing. What do you do?
(To Be Cont)
(BTW This is the whole prophecy
‘One must choose the path of the Chosen One
Two must be cursed and pay the Ultimate Price
Three will go on a special quest
Four will not live to see the end.
Five will work together in the end, and one will join.
Six will pay the price if that one dies.’
Just in case you were wondering)
(continued from young flame)
then you see super struggleing to get up.
“jj…do…not….give….up” super said.
you notice she can barely talk.
“don’t worry i won’t” you say.
“good” super said.
soon someone shows up.
“hi i’m quick whale young flame sent me” quick said.
“hi my friends are hurt” you say.
you hand her super and along with mighty.
“can you save them?” you say.
(to be continued)
(Continued from Super) “I need some help, I can’t do this by myself.” Quick said. Clean came back into conscienceness. “Sneaky!” Clean shouted at the top of his lungs. Sneaky Cheetah came. “I need you to help Quick Whale save Super and Mighty. Can you?” Clean asked. He knew that if Red Rock were still alive, she could definetley help. Sneaky looked at Quick Whale. For a moment, he felt like he and her were the only Poptropicans there, but he shook off that thought. She could’ve been possessed just as much as Red and Young were. Soon, Super and Mighty were healthy again, but they were pretty tired. Once everyone was awake, You and Clean decided to have a little “meeting” to see what has gone wrong. “Okay, one, look where falling in love led us to. We CANNOT risk this again.” Clean said. “Bad things ALWAYS happen when we’re split up. Take Super for example, Zack trapped her in that attic!” You say. “We NEED to find out how to win this battle, once and for all. We’ve gotten nowhere, this journey just doesn’t seem to stop!” You say. Friendly Turtle replied, “Um, remember when we bough the Ongoing Story book? It is planned to be ongoing, so unless someone finishes it, there will be no end.” “That’s the OTHER problem, with this being ongoing, all that is going to happen is tired feet and possessed Poptropicans. How will we ever release this place?” Clean said. “One thing. Lure the villains to a deserted Island, that way this place will be released, and it will be safe.” you answered. “Where are we going to find another Island?” Strange asked. “We got to think one up.” You reply. “How?” Sneaky asked. “Remember how we wound up in Dreamscape Island, the one in the idea stage, and then Journey to the Center of Poptropica? They were both ideas. We have to just think one up, and lure the villains there.” you finished. (To be Continued)
You think hard.
“I know! Memory Foam Island (my other island idea. read more about it on my blog (Island Creation))! The city is in shambles, so we can say they can build their base there!” you shout.
“Good. Now we just need to spread word and make them believe us,” says Clean.
“I know! We could forge a letter from Zeus. And for Zeus we can forge a letter from their ‘mistress’,” says a young, feminine voice that reminds you of Young Flame. You jump and a pang of grief shoots through you.
“Um, where did you come from. And how long have you been listening?!?!?” you say a little too quickly to Mighty Tornado.
“Long enough to know that you liked my sister!!!” she says in a sing-songy voice. “And that you think she would be so bad a protector so as to let me be cursed! You jerk!” she says muttering the last part to herself. You have to admit, she does look a little like Young in a better way, and she is more your age. And she is right. Young would never let her sister get cursed. You somehow know that you know that much, if that makes sense.
“No! JJ, you promised!!” Clean says after he looks at your face.
“Um, Mighty, go start the notes! And make the island,” you say while staring daggers at Clean.
She leaves.
“C’mon man! Cut me some slack! My girlfriend just died and her sister looks exactly like her! And she’s right! Young and Red would never let her be cursed. You trust your late girlfriend, don’t you!” you whisper-shout.
“I don’t know man. They didn’t do a very good job protecting themselves! And they’re dead ! It doesn’t matter anymore about that stuff!” Clean shouts.
“I thought you were better than this. That’s just cold. Red’s lucky that she’s not your GF anymore!” you shout and stomp off to help Mighty Tornado.
Cleans just looks at you with his jaw to the ground.
(I’m even more glad every girlfriend died.Well,perhaps Red Lizard, Strange’s wife didn’t die,but she likes romance as much as I do! So does Strange!And Bendy!No books of Romeo and Juliet in THIS house!)
(BTW This is Mighty Tornado. I have the torch effect on, sooooo.
http://www.poptropica.com/avatarstudio/avatar.html?a=bTU1LN3RKUW1Wc2JHRk1kV041TVRBeA%3D%3D )
(continued from clean)
“well i do have one idea” super said.
“yeah what?” clean said.
“well my island was goona be called dinosaur island.” Super said.
“that sounds cool” you say.
“let’s go” clean said.
so you and your friends teleport to dinosaur island.
then suddenly a t-rex starts runing towards you.
“opps! maybe i should have told you that it would have dinosaurs” super said.
“ya think?” Clean said.
“i wish the dinosaurs were gone untill this island opens” super said.
the t-rex disappers.
“good now are we gonna get the villains to come over hare?” strange said.
(to be continued)
(I told you I had another one in moderation!)
“Um…I wish the villains were trapped here and won’t be able to wish?” And the villains are there,trapped in a cage. “That’s it? Good,then. And Strange,can you please think of a reason why everyone was after the note in the necklace…Strange?” “Look,!”,shouts Clean. “There’s another island in the idea stage!” You look at it. It is ‘Fashionista Island’.
“Well,we don’t have to worry about him now.” Everyone laughs.”I wish we had a small nice house.” And one appears. You live in there for a few days. 2 weeks later,Clean is looking at his laptop. He suddenly shrieks,”Guys! Read this!”
” Which Fan-Made Island will be on Poptropica?
Today,we have selected 3 island ideas from the idea stage,and YOU are going to choose the island you want to be a reality! The ideas are: Fashionista Island,Dinosaur Island and International Internet Island (I.I.I.). We’ve made a poll on the right to decide to choice,so put your vote today!”
“Our island made it,and so did Strange’s! I’m voting for Dinosaur! Guys,vote!” But even after voting,these are the results:
Fashionista Island-153 Votes
Dinosaur Island-116 votes
I.I.I.-69 votes
“We’ll never catch up with Fashionista!”
(Oops,forgot to end the italics,and say that Shark Boy made the post.)
That night,you feel extra sleepy. You drift off into a great sleep…
You transport into a memory of the past…into a place which looks like Poptropica Towers…“Sneaky?Where are you?” This is,no doubt,the voice of Clean Shark. “Over here,Clean!” You see the same Skater Boy from Super Villain ride on a skateboard. “Watcha need ,Clean?” “A trip to the blimp parking lot,please,Skater.”
And Sneaky leaves space for Clean as he hops on his skateboard. Skater goes incredibly fast. But you see someone in the blur of the background…someone with an Einstein costume,glasses and a smile…
You get transported into the present happenings…into a cold,dark room in the middle of nowhere…“Now,RJ,Popular,I need your help.” This is the cold voice of E.Vile. “Y-yes,my l-lord?” “Fashionista Island is definitely going to win. I need you to put on disguises…which are,incidentally,over there…” “Yes,m-my lord.”
There is a short silence as RJ and Popular put on the disguises. “Then,when no one is looking,give my present to the owner of it.” “Yes,sir.” “The rest is up to me.” Everything starts vanishing….with E.Vile’s cold laugh…
You get transported into a vision of the future…into a dark world with pictures and posters of E.Vile everywhere…You see your friends being tortured,along with yourself…only Strange,his wife and son don’t seem to be there.”You should have listened to my warning,sent through RJ,Jumper.” E.Vile says. “Never…I’ll never surr-surrender!”
“Well,that means torture for you!Cyborg,bring the others.” Cyborg,reprogrammed by E.Vile goes and comes back with Sticky Robot,Bionic and RJ. While they horribly torture your friends,you see someone…3 people….they all have dark eyes as they watch,not wanting to help…Strange,Red,Bendy…
Thinknoodles knew Clean…E.Vile wants Strange…Poptropica will be in ruins…
“JJ!JJ!WAKE UP!Fashionista Island won!”
And then you watch as the screen changes. Now it says Memory Foam island or Dreamscape Island. The screen is locked, so it can’t change anymore.
“No! Don’t go! E. Vile’s master is going to try to take over the world through you! In he future, we are going to be tortured while you watch! If we go, you will be moved over to the dark side!!!!” you scream.
Strange’s eyes turn dark, empty, and cold.
“Who said I am still on your side, Jumper ” he says and raises a sword.
(Cont. form Strange)
Strange jumps on his blimp,and flies to Fashionista. When you see him there,he runs into his shop. You enter. You see he wields the weapon and shield. “Now,Strange,attack!”,E.Vile’s voice appears.”I will finally have my body again.” You realize that this is the 2nd miniboss- a hypnotized Strange.
(continued from young)
“oh no!” super said.
super draws a sword and starts fighting strange.
“jj run! i’ll fight him for as long as i can” super said.
“what about you?” you say.
“i’ll be fine now go” super said.
so you and your friends go back to island x.
“come on we gotta stop rj and popular” you say.
(to be continued)
But Strange defeats Super,and he fires the weapon at you. You fall unconscious.
(Continued from Strange Cat) Clean, Hopper, and Sneaky devise a plan to save you and Super, and defeat the NEXT E. Vile. “Say, I think I could put on my white ninja outfit, and then I can lurk in the shadows and sneak up on Strange from behind! And then, Hopper, you’ll electrocute him to knock him out, and Sneaky, you’ll knock out the two people that are with Strange, and then we’ll all defeat E. Vile, and Super and JJ will help us if they wake up, Okay?” Clean says. “Okay.” Sneaky and Hopper replied. (To be Continued)
But somehow Strange notices CleaN,and then freezes him,along with a running Hopper and sneaky.
(Why are you obsessed with Strange winning? BTW I’m writing a new one.)
Because that will lead to,the future.
(HEY!)
(XD Gotcha!)
Young Flame starts to come down, but turns invisible. She comes and turns visible and solid. She knocks Strange out and revives you. Strange wakes up and says, “Hey, what’s going on?”
“E. Vile, well the new one, has taken you over. My master must have brainwashed some other idiot,” Young says.
“Wait. I thought you were a spirit!” Strange says.
“Spirits have the power to turn themselves solid for short periods of time. But they can’t do it for too long or they will disappear forever,” Young says. She suddenly turns a sickly shade of white. Beads of swear form on her hairline and she falls.
“JJ. This is becoming too much for me. I don’t have enough strength to turn back. Red Rock will take care of you and she will help you. This is goodbye,” Young says. You see she is shivering and is breathing heavily, but shallowly. Her breaths are sharp and not enough. She turns into a spirit.
“Goodbye JJ.”
She disappears.
You collapse and just flat out cry.
(continued from strange)
meanwhile
you wake up in a room chained to the wall along with super.
“jj? where are we?” super said.
“i don’t know” you say.
you look around the room looked familiar to you.
“i saw this room in my dream!” you say.
“was i in it?” super said.
“yeah that is i think you were” you say.
“jj what are we goona do?” super said.
“don’t worry i’ll think of something” you say.
suddenly both you and super hear an evil laugh.
“who’s there? show yourself!” you say.
(to be continued)
Strange Cat.
He knocks you out so he can torture you.
Young Flame starts to come down, but turns invisible. She comes and turns visible and solid. She knocks Strange out and revives you. She unchains you and Super. Strange wakes up and says, “Hey, what’s going on?”
“E. Vile, well the new one, has taken you over. My master must have brainwashed some other idiot,” Young says.
“Wait. I thought you were a spirit!” Strange says.
“Spirits have the power to turn themselves solid for short periods of time. But they can’t do it for too long or they will disappear forever,” Young says. She suddenly turns a sickly shade of white. Beads of swear form on her hairline and she falls.
“JJ. This is becoming too much for me. I don’t have enough strength to turn back. Red Rock will take care of you and she will help you. This is goodbye,” Young says. You see she is shivering and is breathing heavily, but shallowly. Her breaths are sharp and not enough. She turns into a spirit.
“Goodbye JJ.”
She disappears.
You collapse and just flat out cry.
It’s E.Vile! “Well,hello JJ,welcome to my world.” “What?” Suddenly the room falls down and you see the new Planet Poptropica. There are E.Vile slaves everywhere,robotic guards around the city,statues posters and more of E.Vile everywhere,and you see Popular perching under a fortress.
“What have you done?!” “What has Strange done,you mean,Jumper.He made it with that cursed measuring tape I gave him,and the helmet was a decoy,(“Oh no!”,Super shouts)and he made it long enough for me to return. I freed the villains,remade the robots,and etc.You should have listened to my warning,sent through RJ,Jumper.” E.Vile says.
“Never…I’ll never surr-surrender!”“Well,that means torture for you!Cyborg,bring the others.” Cyborg,reprogrammed by E.Vile goes and comes back with Sticky Robot,Bionic and RJ. “But how did you come back?! The post the creators made-” “Do you think a simple thing like that would stop me? Torture them,robots.” And he leaves you chained to torture.